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25/07/2012 - 7:20 PM
Anonymous
I am really thankful of you for sending sample writing answer,It is marvelous and definitely its really helpful to me
28/11/2012 - 6:52 PM
BAbak
Thank u very much fr all IELTS materials hyou put here,
Best wishes
16/03/2013 - 5:20 AM
Farjana bari
i have a one question..
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16/03/2013 - 5:31 AM
Farjana bari
weiting task 2 (The Ameirican film industry has too much influence on the film industry around the world. Goverments have a duty to invest
money in their own film industries in order to protect and develop their culture.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
?) Please give this solution. my requerment is 6.5
02/04/2013 - 8:11 AM
Anonymous
the first body paragraph explained why university has become a popular choice for young people; but didnt give reasons why a university
education should be a universal right. That is not logical.
15/06/2013 - 7:50 PM
Anonymous
I have same confusion : what is the logic? Does ielts writing doesnt care about it ?
01/07/2013 - 1:42 PM
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Over recent years more and more students are enrolling to university schools. This may be due to the fact that university education is
essential for better job prospects. This has lead people thinking that there are already too many students enrolled in university, however,
others argue that this should be a right for all students.
Some critics think that the increasing number of students going to university may have negative effects to both the school and the learners.
There will be a significant increase in the number of pupils in class which may not provide a suitable environment for learning. Furthermore,
some of the students might be left behind in the teaching process as the teaching staff will have a hard time in catering all of the students
concern. Another, schools may resort to hiring incompetent staffs in an effort to reduce the teacher to student ratio. This will significantly
decrease the universitys credibility in teaching.
However, others feel that this should not be the case and that the right to university education should be the priority. They feel that every
student has the right to secure a better job in the future for them to achieve a reasonable standard of living. Another, limiting the number of
students going to university may seem unjust and immoral for some. Those who are not entitled with the education are restricted to pursue
their careers and this could have a detrimental effect to the student as a whole.
In conclusion, both perspectives have its own reason as to why a certain view should be the case. In my opinion, I agree that university
education should be a universal right; however, university schools should impose stricter educational standards. This will assure that
deserving students are entitled with the education and at the same time, maintain the number of students in a sustainable figure and the
credibility of the teaching staff in the university.(300words)
18/08/2013 - 9:08 PM
shell
I think your writing is better than the sample. CLEAR LOGIC!
19/09/2013 - 4:19 PM
prodeep
i also think similar to shells.
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24/10/2013 - 12:01 PM
June
Yes, in terms of task fulfilment I would say the sample is not a 9.
05/01/2014 - 12:21 PM
tung
i have one question. This is an argumentative essay . we only need to focus on protect our ideas and object completely to opponents
ideas .In this essay the author expresses the two edged side of the problem.In additon, this essay structure seems be ambigous. Help me
22/02/2014 - 3:58 AM
Anonymous
good grammatical structures used and a good style
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