ED P 520

Dr. Rezaei

Research Article Critique

Wurf, G. (2012). High School Anti-Bullying Interventions: An Evaluation of Curriculum
Approaches and the Method of Shared Concern in Four Hong Kong International Schools.
Australian Journal Of Guidance And Counselling, 22(1), 139-149.
Article Summary
Introduction
Bullying is a world-wide epidemic that causes students all over the world to feel insecure
isolated, and in severe instances, commit suicide. Bullying is most common among adolescentaged students. This study looked at whole-school intervention programs versus grade-level
intervention programs versus no program. This study also looked at a combination of curriculum
and the Shared Concern intervention versus solely the use of the Shared Concern intervention.
Prior research has found whole-school anti-bullying programs as the best evidence-based
approaches to bullying intervention. The curriculum included the pre-test survey and the
discussion of its results, worksheets, class discussions, role-playing, cooperative learning
activities, and supplementary literature and videos. The Shared Concern method is a five-phase
model that involves teacher and counselor intervention, which is followed by monitoring. The
five phases include an initial talk with the students involved to solicit solutions. This is followed
by teacher support towards the bullied. The third phase involves a teacher-bully meeting where
the teacher ensures that the bully is no longer bullying. This is followed by a meeting with all
students involved where an agreement is made regarding the bullying. The final phase is a
follow-up meeting where the teacher makes certain that the bullying has stopped. The purpose

of this study was to analyze effective components of a whole-school versus a single grade-level
approach to anti-bullying interventions in four high schools in Hong Kong.
Assumption
The main assumption of the research article is that implementation of an anti-bullying
curriculum will reduce the instances of bullying in high school aged students. Anti-bullying
curriculums implemented school-wide are better than anti-bullying curriculums implemented at
one grade level, but either implementation is better than no implementation.
Participants
The participants for this study were 545 (pre-test) /549 (post-test) Year 7 (equivalent to
9th graders in the United States) students from twenty-one Year 7 classes located in four
international co-educational secondary schools in Hong Kong. All four schools had the same
administrative structures, localized British National Curriculum, and funding. Participants were
already organized in their Year 7 classes and completed the questionnaires and curriculum
interventions in said classes.
Measures
The study measured incidents of bullying using the secondary school, English version of
the Olweus (1991) self-report questionnaire. The questionnaire measured students frequency of
being left out or indirectly bullied, directly bullied, and taking part in the bullying of others.
Students completed the questionnaire twice throughout the year (once before the curriculum
implementation and once after the implementation). A checklist was created for teachers to
ensure and monitor their implementation of the interventions. The checklist asked teachers if
they had in fact implemented various components of the program, how instances of bullying
were reported, and for their personal opinion of the intervention curriculums.

Hypothesis
There were three hypotheses for this study. Gerald Wurf hypothesized that the use of a
whole-school approached intervention targeted at all students, in all high school grade levels,
would be more effective than interventions targeted at only one grade level (in this case Year 7).
The second hypothesis was that curriculum and mediation interventions (the Shared Concern
approach) targeted solely at Year 7 students would reduce bullying across the Year 7 cohort.
The final hypothesis was that bullying would be reduced across the Year 7 cohort with the use of
the Shared Concern method of mediation for reporting bullying.
Design
The study used a factorial, quasi-experimental design and incorporated a pre and posttest. The study created non-equivalent control groups because random assignment was not
available. The groups were created out of the already existing Year 7 classes. There were four
schools that participated in the study, and each school was randomly assigned to one of the
following four conditions: Condition (a) Whole-school curriculum? intervention for all years,
Condition (b) Curriculum and Shared Concern intervention at Year 7, Condition (c) Shared
Concern intervention only at Year 7, or Condition (d) Control school.
Procedure
Students completed the pre-test questionnaire at the end of the students first term in Year
7. Students completed the same questionnaire as the post-test at the end of the students final
term in Year 7. Both times, the questionnaires were completed anonymously and confidentially
during class with standardized instructions under test conditions. Students answered questions
regarding the number of times they had been indirectly and/or directly bullied and bullied other
people in the last two or three months.

Comment [A1]: What is the difference between

b and c?

First, students completed the pre-test questionnaire. Next, students gathered in an

assembly and received feedback about the results from the pre-test questionnaire. During the
assembly, students were encouraged to get involved in the anti-bullying curriculum and activities
that would come in the weeks to follow. Next, teachers presented three lessons, led by videos
and accompanied with class discussions, to raise awareness of bullying and school solutions. In
the next week, students worked to identify types of bullying and strategies to combat the various
types of bullying. In the third week, students completed response worksheets and role-played
their responses. This was the protocol for the school assigned to Condition (a) and Condition
(b). The difference was that the school assigned to Condition (a) implemented the curriculum
across all grade levels while the school assigned to Condition (b) only implemented the
curriculum & Shared Concern? to Year 7 students.
For the school assigned to Condition (c), a briefing and packet of readings describing the
Shared Concern mediation technique were given to the school. Next, the technique was roleplayed with the Year 7 coordinators. During the intervention period, two support meetings were
held for teachers to review the implementation of the Shared Concern Method.
Analysis
By providing students with an anti-bullying curriculum and an intervention methodology,
the instances of bullying in adolescent-aged students will decrease. The use of several schools
improves the validity of the results because the likelihood of a third variable explanation is
reduced. By assigning different schools to different conditions, it will show the strengths of
implementing the curriculum and intervention method to the entire school. The non-equivalent
control groups allow for the greatest control of extraneous variables. Even though random
assignment was not used, the students differences are less likely to be the reason for a change in

Comment [A2]: How did they compare the

whole school with year 7 only if they used a
combo method in year 7 and a curriculum
intervention only method for the whole school?

the instances of bullying because the groups were created somewhat randomly and without
regard to the purposes of this study.
Results
Based on several two-way repeated measures ANOVA tests, class composite bullying
levels were computed for each of the four conditions. The class composite bullying scores were
used as the dependent variable. Students at the school where the whole-school intervention was
implemented (Condition a) self-reported a major decline in the amount of bullying. The wholeschool intervention plan resulted in an overall 16% decline in bullying among Year 7 students.
Similarly, students at the school where curriculum and the Shared Concern intervention was
implemented in only Year 7 (Condition b) self-reported a significant decline (percent?)in the
amount of bullying in the post-test. Students with only Shared Concern intervention (Condition
c) and no intervention (Condition d) actually self-reported an increase in the instances of
bullying in the post-test. Four one-way ANOVAs were computed for each separate school, and
the findings confirmed these findings.
Discussion
The results supported the first and second hypotheses that school bullying can be reduced
with the use of multiple component interventions. The use of whole-school interventions were
more successful than the interventions in only Year 7, which can be attributed to the fact that a
lot of high school bullying occurs across grade levels. The third hypothesis was not supported
by the findings, and the instances of bullying actually increased when the use of the Shared
Concern meditation alone was implemented in only Year 7. The article explains that this might
be in part due to the fact that students failure to report bullying was not taken into consideration.
It is surprising that the reports from the teachers at the school where solely the Shared Concern

Comment [A3]: Why? Do they explain why?

meditation was implemented in only Year 7 were positive and encouraging about the
effectiveness of the program. Overall, the whole-school approach and the use of multiple
component programs used to intervene and reduce the instances of bullying were more effective.
Limitations
There were several limitations discussed in the article. The starting level of bullying at
each school was different, so that might have influenced the ending level of bullying regardless
of the condition assigned to the various schools. The anonymous surveys pose a possible
limitation because people might not have been completely truthful in their answers. Another
possible limitation is the fact that composite school and class levels of bullying were computed,
but these composite levels might be too general and broad to show the true effectiveness at the
individual level. The final limitation rests in the fact that the level of parent involvement was not
systematically investigated even though this has been proven to be a vital component in the
success of anti-bullying curriculums.
Conclusions
The more components a school includes in an anti-bullying program, the more successful
the program will be. The results support the use of a whole-school approach when implementing
an anti-bullying curriculum. The use of school conferences/assemblies to raise awareness of
bullying, anti-bullying videos, and disciplinary methods/sanctions for bullying will reduce the
instances of bullying. Bullying interventions are more successful when bullying is addressed
across all years/grades, teachers are provided with training, parents are involved, and students are
encouraged to participate in the program. Schools and teachers can also improve classroom
management/classroom rules and class supervision and monitoring to increase the effectiveness
of bullying intervention programs.

Article Evaluation
Importance of Problem Investigated
The authors state the problem as a recurring phenomenon among adolescent-aged
students who bully one another for a variety of reasons. The studys aim is to see how various

Comment [A4]: good

curriculums and interventions can reduce bullying, which can be analyzed with the collection of
pre and post-test surveys on bullying. The study does not make a clear connection between the
bullying and its effects on students educational successes and achievements. Clearly, one could
assume that bullying leads to a student withdrawing and falling behind in classes, but this point
seems to be missing in the article. What does bullying do to a student? How is a students
academic success and achievement affected by bullying? What is the educational significance of
bullying? These questions are not explicitly answered in the article. Additional background
information on the topic of bullying such as statistics broken down by age, sex, etc. would have
made the importance of the problem clearer and more explicit. The author does do a good job of
operationally defineing what the term bullying means.
Review of Literature
The review of literature is very comprehensive in that it covers all of the components
associated with the problem of bullying. The author first cites past findings about whole-school
approaches; stating that whole-school approaches are the best method for reducing the instances
of bullying. Then, the author moves into the actual definition and essential elements of student
bullying. The author identifies different forms and interpretations of bullying. The review
concludes with a brief summary of relevant literature and the reasoning for his study. He states
that the results are mixed, which is why he is conducting this research. All of the references are
relevant to the problem under investigation and help to inform the reader of the studys purpose.

Comment [A5]: good

The review of literature gives readers a glimpse into the world of educational bullying
research and makes it clear why additional research is needed. The mixed results from prior
research form a clear and theoretical rationale for the hypotheses that follow this section. The
study aims to look at varying levels of implementation and interventions. The author does an
excellent job of using this section to inform the reader and state the rationale for the study while
making connections between the various studies reviewed.
Hypotheses
The three hypotheses are clearly labeled and easy to find. The three hypotheses are
specific hypotheses to be tested and are clearly stated in a list of three items. Each hypothesis is
testable and states the expected relationship to the others. It is slightly confusing whether the
mediation intervention and the Shared Concern approach/method are the same. While the words
approach and method are synonyms, it would be clearer if the processes were labeled uniformly.
The first hypothesis looks at the whole-school versus only Year 7 while the second and third
both look at only Year 7 versus varying levels of interventions. The second hypothesis looks at a
combination of curriculum and mediation intervention (Shared Concern) while the thirds
hypothesis looks only at the use of mediation intervention (Shared Concern). The varying
conditions allow for the researcher to compare the levels of effectiveness. The term bullying is
operationally defined to make it clear what is meant for this studys purposes. The different
interventions are also operationally defined to show readers what is meant by each term.
Participants
While random assignment of participants to conditions was not possible, the selection of
the participants based on existing class assignments and arrangements minimized possible
reactive arrangement threats from students knowing they are being observed. The assignment of

Comment [A6]: Excellent that was my question

too.

the participants offers the greatest control for extraneous variables as possible without a random
assignment of participants. This method of sampling is likely to be representative of a Year 7
(9th grade) high school population because it is not contrived. The sample literally is the target
population. Instead of looking at only randomly selected students, it looks at the entire
population, which provides an unbiased sample for this study. The study looks at twenty-one
Year 7 classes across four international secondary schools in Hong Kong, which equates to
roughly 545/549 students. The study used a wide range of students from different schools and
different classes, which is a large enough population to allow the results to be generalized to high
school students in general. The fact that the finding, curriculum, and administrative structures
were the same at all four schools also helps to eliminate possible confounding variables.
The study does a good job of describing the samples size, characteristics, and selection
process, which give readers a good sense of who the sample as well as target population are. The
study connects the sample to the population by literally creating the sample out of the target
populations size and characteristics. The sample is not a contrived set of handpicked
participants. Instead, the sample consists of real students in real schools and class dealing with
real bullying. The sample is vital to the reliability and validity of the study as its findings
provide data that is representative of all adolescent-aged students.
The only critique with the sample is that Year 7 (9th grade) students are not the most
reliable sources when it comes to interpreting their feelings and experiences. This obviously
cannot be changed since the target population is high school aged students, but it is something to
take into consideration when analyzing and interpreting the data.
Instruments

The researcher does a good job of describing the survey and its scoring, but the actual
content of the content of the survey is left to ones imagination. We can guess the types of
questions that the survey would have, but it is not clearly described in the article. Similarly, the
teacher checklists contents are not explicitly stated, which creates gaps in the information. The
purpose of the checklist is clear. While there are weaknesses associated with surveys and
checklists, both of these instruments are appropriate for measuring the intended variables.
There is no rationale for the selection of the measures used in this study, which make it
impossible to know why the researcher chose the survey he used. He makes a quick reference
about its origins, but the rationale behind that particular survey is not clear. There also is no
evidence presented to indicate that this study is appropriate for the Year 7 students. The surveys
and checklists validity is not discussed in the article, which makes it impossible to tell how valid
either is in measuring its intended variables. Similarly, the reliability of the survey nor the
checklist is discussed in the article, which lessens the likelihood that the type and size of the
reliability coefficients were taken into consideration. While this is an area where the researcher
may have elaborated a little more, the survey has been used in prior research.
The fact that a survey and a checklist are the only pieces of data that the study is relying
on does pose issues to the reliability and validity of the study. How do we know if the survey
actually measures bullying? How do we know that the students took time to reflect and answer
accurately? How do we know that the teacher actually went through the checklist? Both the
survey and the checklist are subjective and subject to biases from the students and teachers.
Overall, the use of the surveys and checklist weaken the studys validity and reliability.
Procedure and Design

The researcher does a great job of describing the design and procedures in sufficient
detail to allow for readers to follow and potential future researchers to replicate the study. The
various levels of implementation and interventions are explicitly stated step by step. The content
of the intervention curriculums is even described to give readers a full picture of the studys
design and procedures. There is also a clear connection between the design/procedure and the
hypotheses. The hypotheses are all answered with by the structure and scaffolding of the grade
level implementation and combinations of interventions. The study has a fourth condition,
which serves as the control school where no interventions took place at any grade level.
The researcher comments that the studys design offers the greatest control of
extraneous variables when random assignment of subjects is not possible. The researcher
admits that there are other possible extraneous variables, but the design allows for the most
control possible given the sample and nature of the study. Another strength that the researcher
presents is that the design of the study minimizes possible threats from reactive arrangements
because the students class arrangements and teachers were preexisting. Both of these are
strengths of the study in that confounding variables and reactive arrangements are minimized,
which makes the findings more reliable as well as valid.
Analysis
By evaluating the effectiveness of the various levels and approaches to anti-bullying
curriculums, it was possible to see which of the conditions worked best in reducing the instances
of bullying. By using a pre and post-test, the study was able to compare the two and measure the
decline (or rise) in bullying. The use of surveys slightly reduces the validity of the study because
students tend to rush though surveys and not give completely accurate answers, but the surveys
allowed for numerous students across four schools to be used as the sample.

Results
The design allowed for all three of the hypotheses to be tested. The results of the study
are appropriately descriptive, but somewhat confusing. It might have been clearer if the
researcher presented the findings of each condition independently instead of switching back and
forth. Condition (a) resulted in a 16% decline in overall Year 7 bullying, but there were no
inferential statistics presented on the three other conditions. If the researcher had presented
additional inferential statistics, readers would have been presented with a clearer idea of which
condition worked best. Additionally, the probability level, tests of significance, and degrees of
freedom were not specified in the article. Adding these may have also made the results section
more thorough, clear, and understandable.
There is one chart in the article to show the mean pre and post-test scores by the type of
intervention, which was a good visual to see which interventions helped and which hindered the
instances of bullying, but the bullying composite score numbers are meaningless. The article
never states what a bullying composite score of 4.9 means. How is a 4.7 and a 5.9 different?
How different are they? It is still helpful to see the pre and post-test for each of the inventions on
one chart, but it could have been better if the bullying composite scores were discussed and
defined in the text.
Discussion (Conclusions and Recommendations)
The discussion section of the article begins with a clear connecting discussion between
the various hypotheses and the corresponding results. The researcher offers suggestions and
explanations as to why the results did not support the third hypothesis. Instances of bullying
actually raised at the school where only the Shared Concern intervention was used in Year 7, and
the researcher supposes that this is because there is a failure to address issues for students who

no not report bullying instances to teachers/administrators. The researcher continues by

connecting each of the results to results obtained by other researchers. The first two findings
were consistent with prior research, but the third set of data was not consistent with prior
research findings.
Overall, the major findings of this study, which are consistent with prior research
findings, are that whole-school and multifaceted components work best when trying to combat
bullying in a high school setting. These findings and generalizations are consistent with the
results. The theoretical and practical implications of the findings suggest that anti-bullying
curriculums need to include a number of components and use the whole-school approach in order
to be successful at managing and preventing instances of bullying in high schools. The author
does a good job of drawing practical and appropriate conclusions about what an anti-bullying
curriculums should consist of.
The recommendations for future action are not explicitly stated, but can be inferred based
on the authors statements of the studys limitations. Future research needs to account for the
varying levels of bullying at each school before the interventions commences and possibly
change the use of anonymous questionnaires as a more personalized approach might be more
telling. Future research also needs to include a component about parents involvement in
countering bullying. The suggestions for future action are based on practical significance and
statistical significance. The suggestions made would help clarify and expand upon the findings
of this study.