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The Language of
Argument
inthelanguageofthestandards
ForEGHSTeachersandStudents
AcompilationofinformationalignedtotheCommonCoretohelpspuradiscussion
ontheteachingofreadingandwritingarguments
Works Consulted
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Written and compiled by Greg DeCubellis
DRAFT
UnpackingtheLanguageoftheStandards
Tryingtomakesenseofargumentativewritingterminologycanbeachallenge.Itturnsoutthatthereare
about20importantterms,but,becauseargumentationisapartofsomanydisciplines,many(about
threefourths)ofthesetermshavedifferentnames.Fortunately,severalaresynonymouswiththosewe
alreadyusetoteachpersuasivewriting.Others,however,willprobablybenewtoyou.
Inthetablebelow,youwillfindargumentwritingtermsusedintheCommonCorestandardsandotherterms
thatarecloseinmeaning.Knowingthesetermsisimperativetounderstandingthishandout.Also,itis
highlylikelythatthetermsintheleftcolumnwillbeusedonupcomingCommonCoreassessments,soitis
importantforstudentstoknowandunderstandthemaswell.
L.O.T.S
ISORRESEMBLES...
MEANING..
argument
athesiswithaprojectedorganization
Theassertionofaclaimbasedonlogicalreasons.
argumentative
writing
logos,positionpaper
Asdistinctfrompersuasivewriting,argumentative
writingreliesmostlyonsharp,ethicalreasoningover
pathos,dissembling,andtrickery.
bias
slant,spin
Afavorableorunfavorablepreferenceforonething
overanother.
claim
thesis,conclusion,logicalconclusion,
centralclaim,criticalstance,mainidea,
opinion,assertion,inference,judgment,
effect
Astatementassertedastruebyaspeakerorwriter.
counterclaim
counterargument,opposingviewpoint
Anopiniondirectlyoppositethewritersincludedto
setuparebuttalofthatopposingopinion.
delineate
standardform
Listingthepremisesinlogicalorderabovethe
conclusionwithahorizontallinedrawnbetweenthem.
evidence
oneormorereasonswhichsupporta
claim
Reason(s)thatprovetheclaim(butNOTthe
examplesusedforillustratingthereasons).
example
detail
Afactwhichillustratestheargumentssupporting
reasonorevidence.
fallacy
logicalfallacy,illogicalreasoning,
invalidreason
Anerrorinanargumentinwhichtheclaimdoesnot
logicallyfollowfromthethereasons.
persuasion
manipulativespeech,writing,or
imagery
Initsmostextremeform,itsgoalistoconvincean
audiencebyanymeansnecessary,includinginvalid
reasoninganduntruereasons.
premise
reason,proposition,majorpremise,
minorpremise,axiom,postulate,cause
Areasonusedtoassertaclaim.
reason
premise,proof,proposition,major
premise,minorpremise,cause,fact,
statistic
Seepremise
reasoning
logic
Theprocessofdrawingorformingaconclusionfrom
statedorimpliedpremises.
DRAFT
comeback,refutation,objectiontoan
objection
Ananswertoacounterclaimwhichpointsoutthe
opposingviewpointsflaws.Itisusedtodisarma
skepticalaudience.
rhetoric
literarylanguage,engagingwording,
diction,syntax
Thistermhasmanymeanings,butisusedinthe
standardstomeanthewaysinwhichthewritercrafts
wordsandphrasesartisticallytohelpmakethe
argumentinterestingandengaging.
structure
organization,organizationalstrategy,
sequenceofideas
Howthewriterordershisreasons,claim,examples,
subclaims,counterclaims,etc.
subclaims
grounds,statedassumption,
suppressedpremise,warrant,
enthymeme,clincher
Thewaysinwhichtheillustrativeexamplesconnect
totheargument.
syntax
wordorder,sentencestructure
Thewordorderwithinasentenceorclause.
logicalreasoning
Anargumentisvalidifitislogical.Inotherwords,an
argumentisvalidifthereisnopossiblewayitsclaim
canbefalsewhenitsreasonsaretrue.Illogical
argumentsareNOTvalid.
rebuttal
validity
DRAFT
TheLanguageofArgumentPARTI
Reading an Argument
CONTENTS
1)
ReadinganArgument
Delineateandevaluatethereasoningin...texts,including...the
premises,purposes,andarguments
910
2)
ArgumentandPersuasion
Determineanauthorspointofvieworpurposeinatext...analyzing
howstyleandcontentcontributetothepower,persuasiveness...
ofthetext.
1112
3)
ThePartsofanArgument
Analyzeindetailhowanauthorsideasorclaimsaredeveloped
andrefinedbyparticularsentences....
910
4)
StandardFormDelineation
Delineate...theargument.
5)
AnnotatingthePartsofAnArgument
Analyzeindetailhowanauthorsideasorclaimsaredeveloped
andrefinedbyparticularsentences....
910
6)
EvaluatingaClaimsStrength&
Effectiveness
Analyzeindetailhowanauthorsideasorclaimsaredeveloped
andrefinedbyparticularsentences....
910
7)
EvaluatingEvidenceinExamples
Delineateandevaluatetheargument...assessingwhetherthe...
theevidenceisrelevantandsufficient.
910
8)
AnnotatinganArgumentsStrength&
Effectiveness
Delineateandevaluatethereasoningin...texts,including...the
premises,purposes,andarguments.
Determineanauthorspointofvieworpurposeinatextinwhich
therhetoricisparticularlyeffective,analyzinghowstyleand
contentcontributetothepower,persuasivenessorbeautyofthe
text.
Determineanauthorspointofvieworpurposeinatextand
analyzehowanauthorusesrhetorictoadvancethatpointofview
orpurpose.
1112
9)
EvaluatinganArgumentsReasonableness
Delineateandevaluatetheargumentandspecificclaimsinatext,
assessingwhetherthereasoningisvalidandtheevidenceis
relevantandsufficient
910
10)
FallaciesinReasoning
[I]dentifyfalsestatementsandfallaciousreasoning...
910
11)
SomeRhetoricalDevicesandtheirEffects
[A]nalyzehowanauthorusesrhetoric...
[A]nalyzehowstyleandcontentcontributetothepower,
persuasiveness...ofthetext.
12)
UsefulQuestionsforClose,Careful
ArgumentEvaluation
Analyzeindetailhowanauthorsideasorclaimsaredeveloped
andrefinedbyparticularsentences,paragraphs,orlargerportions
ofatext.
Analyzeandevaluatetheeffectivenessofthestructureanauthor
usesinhisorherexpositionorargument,includingwhetherthe
structuremakespointsclear,convincing,andengaging.
910
13)
PuttingitallTogether
[Allstandardsrelatedtoargumentreadingareaddressed]
912
14)
BestPracticesforTeaching
BluetextindicatesINNEEDOFCOMPLETION
912
ALIGNMENTTOCCSS
Gr.
"English Language Arts Standards Reading: Informational Text Grade 11-12."Common Core State Standards Initiative. N.p., n.d. Web. 23 May 2013.
DRAFT
DRAFT
TheLanguageofArgumentPARTII
Writing an Argument
CONTENTS
1)
WritingShortArguments
Usewords,phrases,andclausesaswellasvariedsyntaxtolinkthe
majorsectionsofthetext,createcohesion,andclarifythe
relationshipsbetweenclaimsandreasons....
2)
UsefulTipsforFindingFallaciesinyour
ownWriting
Usewords,phrases,andclausesaswellasvariedsyntaxtolinkthe
majorsectionsofthetext,createcohesion,andclarifythe
relationshipsbetweenclaimsandreasons,betweenreasonsand
evidence,andbetweenclaimsandcounterclaims.
3)
StructuringanExtendedArgument
Developclaimsandcounterclaimsfairlyandthoroughly,supplyingthe
mostrelevantevidenceforeachwhilepointingoutthestrengthsand
limitationsofbothinamannerthatanticipatestheaudiences
knowledgelevel,concerns,values,andpossiblebiases.
4)
TwoArgumentStrategiesCompared
[Sameasabove]
5)
ExploringBothSides
Introduceprecise,knowledgeableclaims,establishthesignificance
oftheclaim,distinguishtheclaimfromalternateorcounterclaims...
6)
IllustratingyourReasons&Statingyour
Assumptions
Developclaimsandcounterclaimsfairlyandthoroughly,supplyingthe
mostrelevantevidenceforeachwhilepointingoutthestrengthsand
limitationsofbothinamannerthatanticipatestheaudiences
knowledgelevel,concerns,values,andpossiblebiases.
7)
ClassicalGraphicOrganizer
[C]reateanorganizationthatlogicallysequencesclaims,
counterclaims,reasons,andevidence.
8)
RogerianGraphicOrganizer
[C]reateanorganizationthatlogicallysequencesclaims,
counterclaims,reasons,andevidence.
9)
BestPracticesforTeachingArgument
Writing
Usewords,phrases,andclausesaswellasvariedsyntaxtolinkthe
majorsectionsofthetext,createcohesion,andclarifythe
relationshipsbetweenclaimsandreasons,betweenreasonsand
evidence,andbetweenclaimsandcounterclaims.
ALIGNMENTTOCCSS
Gr.
*
*Underlinedtextindicates1112standard.
"English Language Arts Standards Reading: Informational Text Grade 11-12."Common Core State Standards Initiative. N.p., n.d. Web. 23 May 2013.
DRAFT
TheLanguageofArgument
Reading an Argument
AnARGUMENTisaclaimaccompaniedbysupportingreasons.
Whenyoumakeaclaim,youaresaying,Iclaimthistobetrue.Inargumentwriting,youwantyourreader
toacceptyourclaimastruetoo.Youropinionusuallywillnotbeacceptedwithoutgoodreasonthough.So,
agoodargumentwriterclaimssomethingtobetrueandthensupportsitwithreasons(areasonisalso
calledapremise).Inagoodargument,thewritermakesacasetoconvinceanaudiencebasedonthe
meritandreasonablenessoftheclaims,reasons,andevidence.Inthisway,anargumentcanchangethe
readerspointofview,bringaboutanaction,oraskthereadertoacceptthewritersexplanationor
evaluationofaproblem.(CCSSELAAppendixA).
Anextendedargumentativeessayisalsoknownasapositionpaperbecausethewritertakesapositionon
atopicandusesclearreasoningtoattempttogetthereadertounderstandandagreewithhisorher
position.Noticethewordattemptintheprevioussentence.Whenyouwriteanargumentativeessay,you
mightnotentirelyconvincethereaderofyourposition.Youmayonlystrengthentheopinionofthosewho
alreadyagreewithyouorweakentheresolveofthosewhoopposeyouropinion.Theimportantthingisthat
youpresentyourargumentclearly,honestly,andlogically.
Note:Whenthewordargumentisusedinthiscontext,itdoesnotmeanadisagreement.Anargument
simplyisastatementthatattemptstoconnectsfactsorstatistics(evidence)insupportofaclaim.So...
anargumentisNOTameredisagreement.
1.ThisisNOTanargument:
Bob:
Steve:
Bob:
Willieisawhale.
No,hesagoat.
NO!Hesawhale!
2.ThisISanargument:
Willieisawhale.Allwhalesaremammals.Therefore,Willieisamammal.
DISCUSS:Here,thewriterdrawsaconclusionforusthatWillieisamammal.Hegivestwo
relatedfactualreasonstosupporthisconclusion.Whatarethey?Assumingyouagreewith
thefacts,doyouagreewithhisopinionthatWillieisamammal?Whyorwhynot?
DISCUSS:WhyisexampleoneaboveNOTanargument?Issimplycontradictingsomeone
thesameasmakinganargument?Whyisexampletwoaboveagoodargument?Hint:See
thedefinitionofargumentabovebeforeresponding.
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DRAFT
Persuasion
Advertisersoftenappeartoclaimthingstobetrueabouttheirproduct.
Whatisclaimedtobetruehere?
Usingourshampootwiceadaywillhelpkeepyoufromlosingyourhair.
a.Ourshampooreducesbaldness
b.Withoutusingourshampoo,youwillprobablygobald.
c.Ourshampoohasaspecialingredientthatwillhelpkeepyou
fromlosingyourhair.
d.Alloftheabove
e.Noneoftheabove
Whatdoweassumeistrueaboutthisproduct?Perhapsitcontainssomespecialanitbaldingingredients?
Inyourownwords,whatisthecompanyclaimingtobetrue?
Ifyousaidthatthecompanyisclaimingthattheirproduct
Usingourshampoocorrectlyrequiresmassagingitintothescalp.
Massagingthescalpincreasesbloodflowtothearea.
Increasedbloodflowtothescalpslowshairlossovertime.
Therefore,massagingthescalpslowshairlossovertime.
Therefore,ourusingshampoocorrectlyslowshairlossovertime.
DRAFT
ArgumentandPersuasion
Argumentspurposeinitspurestformistousereasoningtoseekthetruth.Thepurposeofpersuasioninits
mostextremeformistousewhateverstrategiesnecessary,includingdeception,togetanaudienceto
believewhatyouwantittobelieve(evenifyoudontbelieveinwhatyouaresayingyourself).Anargument
essayfallssomewhereonthelineintheshadedareabelow:
Argument
>
Persuasion
Exploratory
writing
examiningall
sidesofan
issue
Argumentas
inquiry,
askingthe
audienceto
thinkoutthe
issuewiththe
writer
Dialectic
argument,
seeking
common
groundwitha
resistant
audience
Classical
argument,
aimedata
neutralor
skeptical
audience
Onesided
argument,
aimedata
friendly
audience
Aggressive
onesided
arguments
Outright
propaganda
Literarytexts
Sermons
Ceremonial
speeches
Parliamentary
debate
Rogerian
argument
Legalreasoning
Classroom
lectures
Lettertoeditor
Fundraising
Callstoaction
Talkradio
Cablenews
commentary
Advertising
ThePartsofAnArgument
Tounderstandanargument,itishelpfultoidentifyitsparts.Anysimpleargumenthastwoparts:aclaim
andreasons.Youmustknowhowtodistinguishbetweenaclaim(alsoknownasanopinionora
conclusion)andreasons(alsoknownasprooforpremises).Thefollowingshouldhelpyouseethesein
action.
DISCUSS:Whichsentencemakesmoresense?
1.Youareshiveringbecauseitiscold.
a.b.
2.Itiscoldbecauseyouareshivering.
a.
a.
Argumentnumberoneusescauseandeffectlogically.Nowlookcloserattheargument.Isthea.
sectionthecauseortheeffect?Theb.section?Whichoneistheclaim?Whichisthereason?
Howdoyouknow?Whyisargumentnumbertwoinvalid?
DISCUSS:Compareandcontrastthestatementsbelowwiththoseabove.Isthea.sectiontheclaimor
thereasonintheexamplebelow?Whatisthedifferenceinmeaningbetweentheconnectingwords
thereforeandbecause?Howaretheybothuseddifferentlytoconnectthesameclaimandreason?
Comparethemeaningofthetwosentencesbelowwiththetwoabove.
1.Youareshiveringtherefore,itiscold.
a.b.
2.Itiscoldtherefore,youareshivering.
DRAFT
b.a.
StandardFormDelineation
Whatsthebottomline?Howwillyouknowifanargumentaddsup?Thebestwayistodelineatethe
argumentusingstandardform.Theworddelineatecontainsthewordline.Inthisway,itishelpfultolist
thereasonsanddrawhorizontallinetoseparatethemfromtheclaim.Doingsowillalsohelpyoudetermine
thebestordertopresentyourreasonsandwhetheryourreasonsaregoodones.Itwillalsohelpyouto
evaluatewhetherawriterhasgoodreasonsforsupportingherclaimandorderedthemlogically
Towriteanargumentinstandardform,youfirstmustidentifytheclaimandthenfindthesupportingreasons.
Considerthisargument:Imshiveringbecauseitswetandcoldouthereandthesameargumentstatedin
adifferentorder:Itswetandcoldoutheretherefore,Imshivering.
REASONSSTATED
AFTERTHECLAIM:
CLAIM
CONNECTOR
REASON
1
REASON
2
REASON
3
BECAUSE
itis
wet,
itis
cold,
and
Imoutside.
Argument>
Iam
shivering
REASONSSTATED
BEFORETHECLAIM:
REASON
1
REASON
2
SameArgumentbut
DifferentOrder>
Itis
cold,
REASON
3
CONNECTOR
CLAIM
itis
wet,
and
Im
outside
Iam
THEREFORE shivering
.
Agoodthinkerknowshowtowriteanyargumentinstandardformregardlessoftheorderinwhichthewriter
presentshisreasonsandclaims.
Howtowriteanyargumentinstandardform:
1.Alwaysstatetheclaimfirst.
2.Drawalineabovetheclaim.
2.Listeachreasonabovetheline.
Anargumentinstandardform:
Reason
Reason
Reason
DRAFT
_______
Claim
EXAMPLE:
Stepone:Statetheclaim.Intheexample,thespeakermakesaclaimthatheisshivering.Note
howthereaderwritestheclaimatthebottom,underneathahorizontallineleavingspaceabove.
_______________
_______________
Claim
>
Iamshivering
Steptwo:Identifythereasons.Notehowthereaderwriteseachreasonabovethehorizontalline.
Reason
>
Itiswetoutside
Reason
>
Itiscoldoutside
Reason
>
Iamoutside
_______________
_______________
Together,theentireargument,claimandreasons,willlooklikethisinstandardform:
Reason
Reason
Reason
_______________
Claim
>
>
>
>
Itiswetoutside
Itiscoldoutside
Iamoutside
_______________
Iamshivering
Althoughinargumentwriting,theargumentmaybestatedwiththereasonsbeforetheclaimorviceversa,
whenyoudelineateanargument,youmustalwayslistthereasonsabovetheclaim.Boilingdownand
orderinganargumentinthiswayhelpsyouevaluatetheargumentslogicandallowsyoutocomparethe
argumentwithotherargumentswritteninstandardform.
Standardformlookssimilartoanadditionprobleminmath.Writteninthisway,itseasytoseeifthe
argumentaddsupornot.
DRAFT
AnnotatingthePartsofanArgument
Thetypicalwordsandphrasesusedtomakeargumentsarecalledargumentmarkers.Inatext,theymay
appearbeforeorafteraclaimorreason.Recognizingandlabelingthesemarkersisthefirststepinbeing
abletoconductacloseandcarefulanalysisofargumentsandtoreconstructtheargumentinstandardform.
Onceyouareabletorecognizeargumentmarkers,youwillbeabletousethemyourselfconnectyourown
claimsandreasonstomakevalidarguments.Whenannotatingargumentativewriting,youcanusethe
abbreviationCtomarkwordsthatsignalanargumentsclaimandPtomarkitsreasons(i.e.,proof,
premises).
TERM&
ABBREVIATION
CLAIM
C
REASON
(proof)
MEANING
EXAMPLES
COMMONARGUMENT
CONNECTORS
(markers)
shivering.
thisshowsthat...
Areasonisafactthat
attemptstoprovea
claim.Itanswersthe
question,Why?Itis
alsoknownasa
premise.
Becauseitiscold,youare
shivering.
Note:Aconditionalcan
bephrasedasan
ifthenstatement.A
conditionalisnotan
argumentbyitself
becausenoreasonsare
givenandnoclaimsare
made.Itonlyexpresses
whatmightorcouldbe
true.Itdoesnotclaim
whatistrue.
Ifyouworkhard,thenyouwill
getfarinlife.
SinceBrianspeaksup,he
getswhatheneeds.
becausesinceforas
giventhat...
dueto..
onthegroundsthat...
thisfollowsfrom...
Iwillgoshoppingifyouloan
methecar.
"A Workbook for Arguments: A Complete Course in Critical Thinking [Paperback]." A Workbook for Arguments: A Complete Course in Critical Thinking: David Morrow, Anthony Weston:
9781603845496: Amazon.com: Books. N.p., n.d. Web. 23 May 2013.
Sinott-Armstrong, Walter, and Robert Fogelin. Understanding Arguments: An Introduction to Informal Logic. 8th ed. Australia: Wadsworth, 2010. Print.
DRAFT
EvaluatingaClaimsStrengthandEffectiveness
Onceyoulearntorecognizeanargumentsclaim,youshouldbeabletodeterminehowmuchorlittlethe
writerisclaiming.Aclaimcanbebroadornarrow,orsomewhereinbetween.Pleasenote,abroadclaimis
notnecessarilyagoodclaim,norisanarrowclaimnecessarilyabadone.Broadclaimsaremoreboldbut
arealsogeneralandthereforetypicallydifficulttoprove.Forexample,Teachersalwaysassignhomework
isasweepinggeneralizationandsoundslikeastrongclaim.However,itisdifficulttodefend.Why?One
needonlyfindasingleexampleofateacherwhoassignsnohomeworktodisprovetheclaimthatteachers
alwaysassignhomework.
Ontheotherhand,Teachersoftenassignhomeworkiseasiertodefendbecauseitclaimsless.Thewords
alwaysandusuallymakeallthedifferencehere.Alwaysmakestheclaimappearstronger.Usually
makestheclaimappearlessstrongandthereforeeasiertodefend.Goodwritersguardtheirclaimsby
beingcarefulnottogeneralizeormakeoverstatementsthatcanbeeasilydisproven.Goodwritersarealso
carefulnottomaketheirclaimstoonarrowforfearofnotsayinganythingsignificant.Strongclaimsare
usuallysobroadthattheycannotbedefended.Weakclaimsareusuallynotdebatableandthereforedonot
inviteadefense.
Inanycase,thebestclaimisanaccurateclaim.
Astrongandweakclaimcompared
CLAIMTOOSTRONG:
Alldogsaremean
CLAIMTOOWEAK:
Somedogsaremeansometimes.
IstooBroad
IstooNarrow
ClaimstooMuch
ClaimstooLittle
ImpossibletoDefend
NotWorthDebating
EasytoDefend
NotWorthDebating
PRACTICE:KnowYourStrength!Fillintheblankstomakeanaccurateandmeaningfulclaim.Be
suretousewordsthatguardagainstclaimingtoomuch:
__Few__teachersatEGHSassign__difficult__homework.
___________teachersatEGHSassign__easy__homework.
____________dogsare____________mean.
____________politicians___________lie.
___________babiesdonotsleepthroughthenight.
DRAFT
EvaluatingEvidenceinExamples
Withoutexamplessuchasfactsandfigurestoillustrateyourreasons,anargumenthaslittlecredibility.Oftenitisimportant
toexplainoutrighthowtheexampleshelpillustrateyourreasonsandthussupportyourclaim.Itisbestnottoassumeyour
readerwillmakethisconnectiononhisorherown.Youmayalreadybefamiliarwiththisconceptofstatingassumptionsas
aclincher.Itisalsoknownasgrounds,warrant,orsuppressedpremise,orsubclaim.
PRACTICE:Provideexamplesforeachoftheclaimsyoumadeabove.Ifyoucannotthinkofanyexamples,adjustthe
claimsstrengthuntilitisaccurateandyoucan.Reviewthetablebelow.
CLAIM
REASON
Someteachersassign ...becausetheyforget
toomuchhomework... thatstudentshavealife
outsideofschool.
EXAMPLE
STATEDASSUMPTIONS
Forexample,Mr.
Hammerheadrequires
studentstokeepawritten
logofeverymomentwe
recycleinandoutof
school.
Mostpeoplewouldagreethatteens
havearighttosociallifeoutsideof
school.Mostteenswouldalsofindit
embarrassingtocarryarounda
notebooktosocialevents.Since
teenswillnormallyoptforsocial
acceptanceoverembarrassment,it
isnotrealisticorrightforateacherto
expectstudentstodothiskindof
aroundtheclockhomework.
PRACTICE:Readtheclaim,reason,andexamplebelow.Intheblankbox,explainhowtheexampleindeedillustratesthe
reasonandprovestheclaim.Seeaboveforanexample.
CLAIM
REASON
EXAMPLE
STATEDASSUMPTIONS
Allwomenshouldbe
preventedfromjoining
combatunits
...becausewomen
typicallydonothavethe
strengthorendurance
forcombat.
Forexample,women
generallyhaveweaker
upperbodystrength,a
crucialrequirementfor
carryingawoundedsoldier
offofthebattlefield.
PRACTICE:Makeaclaimofyourown,andprovideagoodreasonsupportingitwithanexamplewhichillustratesyour
reason.Explaintheassumptionthatconnectsyourexampletoyourreasonandclaim.
CLAIM
Statesomethingyou
believeinstrongly.
REASON
Provideagood
reasonsupporting
yourclaim.
EXAMPLE
Stateanexamplewhich
illustratesthereason.
STATEDASSUMPTIONS
Explaintheassumptionthat
connectsyourexampletoyour
reasonandclaim.
DRAFT
DRAFT
AnnotatinganArgumentsStrengthandEffectiveness
Youcanusetheabbreviationsbelowtoindicatesignalwordsfordetermininganargumentsstrengthandeffectiveness.You
mightusetheacronymGRADESXtohelpyouremembertheassociatedterms.Note:Wordsmeaningsdependontheir
context.Thecommonindicatorwordslistedintherightcolumnabovearenotguaranteedsignals,sowhenindoubtusethe
contexttodecideonhowthewordworksinthewriting.
TERM&
ABBREVIATION
MEANING
GUARDING
Toguardistoprotecta
claimfrombeing
rejected.
EXAMPLES
Mostfreshmengradesimproveby
midyear.
Note:Guardedclaimsusuallyrequireless
evidencethanunguardedclaims.
somemanyfew
mightmaypossibly
likelyunlikelyalmost
nearlymay
couldbethereisa
goodchance...,etc.
irony,sarcasm,
hyperbole,andother
literarylanguage
Note:Thesemayserve
anypurposeandmay
havepositiveor
negativeconnotations.
Goingtothedentististheworstthingin
theworld!(hyperboleandE)
[varies]
Toassureisto
guaranteeaclaimis
truewithoutprovidinga
reason.
Everyoneknowsthatseniorsslackoff.
TrustmewhenItellyouthatyouare
wrong.
doctorsagree...recent
studieshaveshown
Iknowforafactthat...
itscommonsense...
theysaythat...
takeitfromme...
Todiscountistoreject
orrefuteafactor
opinion.
Hisclassringlooksnice,
butitisexpensive.
Hisclassringisexpensive
thoughitlooksnice.
althoughevenifbut
nevertheless
thoughwhile
howevernonetheless
eventhough...whereas
yetstilletc.
Toevaluateistojudge
afactoropinion
positivelyornegatively.
+or
Celiaistoosilly.E
Yourequationisidiotic.E
Coolidea!E+
beautifuldangerous
wastefulsneakysinful
sloppycutesmart,etc.
Toexplainhowthethe
examplesindeedillustrate
thereasonsandsupport
theclaim.
Toexemplifyisto
provideanexampleto
illustratethereasons.
Celiaistoosilly.Forexample,shelaughs
atfunerals.
Yourexplanationisidiotic:Clearly,two
plustwoequalsdonutisnotsoundmath!
forexample...
Sheprobablyquitherjob.
RHETORICAL
DEVICE
R+/
ASSURING
A
DISCOUNTING
D
EVALUATING
E+/
STATING
ASSUMPTIONS
S
EXEMPLIFYING
COMMONINDICATOR
WORDS
HerfaceusuallylooksprettyasSnow
Whites.(simile,allusion,andE+)
DRAFT
EvaluatinganArgumentsReasonableness
Aclaimissupportedwelliftherelationshipbetweenthereasonsmakessense.Inotherwords,thereasons
supportingyourclaimmustbelogicallyrelatedtoeachotherthereasonsmustaddup.Themorethe
readeracceptsthewritersargumentasfactuallyaccurateandvalid,thegreaterchancethereaderwillbe
convinced.
AvalidargumentcontainsNOillogicalreasoning.Inotherwords,ifyouconnectyourreasonstoyourclaim
inawaythattrulymakessense,youhavemadealogicalargument.AnargumentisvalidONLYifthereis
nowaythattheclaimcanbefalsewhenthesupportingreasonsaretrue.Nonetheless,areadermightfind
someargumentstobemorereasonablethanothersbasedonthenumber,type,specificity,andaccuracy
ofevidenceusedtosupporttheopinion.
ConsiderWillieagainforamoment:
Willieisawhale.Allwhalesaremammals.Therefore,Willieisamammal.
DISCUSS:Explainhowthesefactsarerelatedtoeachother:WillieisawhaleandAllwhalesare
mammals.HowarethesefactsrelatedtotheclaimthatWillieisamammal?Isthereanywaythat
WilliecouldNOTbeamammalifitstruethatheisindeedawhaleandthatallwhalesare
mammals?DoestheWillieargumentcontainanyillogicalreasoning?Isitavalidargument?
DISCUSS:Explainhowthesefactsarerelatedtoeachother:Penguinsareblackandwhiteand
SomeoldTVshowsareblackandwhite.IsthereanywaythatsomepenguinscanNOTbeoldTV
showsevenifitstruethatpenguinsareblackandwhiteandthatsomeoldTVshowsareblackand
white?WhatisthedifferenceinreasoningbetweentheWillieargumentandthepenguinargument?
Doesthepenguinargumentcontainanyillogicalreasoning?Isitavalidargument?
DRAFT
DRAFT
BreakinganArgument:FallaciesinReasoning
Remember,inavalidargument,thereasonsandtheclaimaddup.Afallacyinreasoningoccurswhenthe
writerhasconnectedtheclaimandreasonsinawaythatappearstomakesensebutreallydoesnotaddup.
AnargumentthatreliesonafallacyisNOTvalid.Keepinmind,however,ifthereaderdoesnotrecognize
theinvalidargument,heorshemaystillbepersuadedbytheargument.Beingabletorecognizethese
fallaciescanhelpyoutoprotectyourselfagainstbeingconvincedofsomethingforthewrongreasons.
BasicFallaciesfalsecause?overlookingalternatives?Appealtomotivewhereapremiseisdismissedby
callingintoquestionthemotivesofitsproposer
Someerrorsinlogicaeasytospotwithalittletraining.
FALLACY
ALSO
KNOWNAS
WHATITMEANS
orDOES
EXAMPLE
HOWTOFIXIT
ridiculingthe
claim
appealtoridicule
Makingfunoftheclaim
itselfratherthanofferinga
reasonfordisagreeingwith
it.
ThatisthestupidestideaIveever
heard!
(Thatmaybe,butthespeakerstill
needstosaywhy.)
Thespeakershouldgiveagood
reasonwhytheideaisbad.
attackingthe
person
adhominem
Criticizingtheperson
makingtheargument
insteadoftheargument
itself.
Thatkidskateboards,and
skateboardersaretroublemakers,
whichiswhyIdontbelieve
anythinghejustsaid.
Thespeakershouldrestatethe
boysclaimandreasonsandthen
explainwhytheboysreasons
makenosense.
bandwagon
adpopulem
Offeringthereasonthat
everyoneisdoing
somethinginplaceofa
logicalreasonfordoingit.
Everyoneisjumpingoffthebridge.
Thatsagoodenoughreasonfor
metojumpofftoo!
(Justbecauseothersaredoing
somethingisntagoodreasonfor
doingit.)
Thespeakermighthavesaid,
becausethebridgeisonfire,Iwill
jumpofftosavemylife.Thisis
clearlyagoodreason.
composition
Assumingthatwhatistrue
ofthepartofsomething
mustbetrueforitasa
whole.
loaded
language
Playingonwords
connotationsandemotions
insteadofactuallymaking
anargument.
thebulls
horns
falsedilemma
bifurcation
blackorwhite
Reducingallpossible
optionstojusttwo
opposingones.
Eitheryouarewiththeus,oryou
arewiththeterrorists.GeorgeW.
Bush,2001
Dontallowthespeakerto
oversimplifyyouroptions.Just
becausesomeonesaysthereare
onlytwooptionsdoesnt
necessarilymakeitso.For
example,Switzerland,aneutral
country,couldbeneitherfor
terrorismnorfortheU.S.
slipperyslope
thecamelsnose
Suggestingthatonestep
inadirectionwillinevitably
leadtoachainofevents
resultinginanundesirable
outcome.
appealtopity
admisericordiam
Usingpityreasonfor
specialtreatment
Theteachershouldgivemea
passinggradebecausemydog
diedlastnight.
DRAFT
IntermediateFallacies
loaded
question
complexquestion
Phrasingaquestiontotrap
thepersonintoagreeingto
aclaim.
Broseph,areyoustillbeing
meantopuppies?
(Answeringnowillstillimply
thatBrosephhasbeenmeanto
puppies,evenifhehasnt.)
Brosephshouldnotanswerthe
questiondirectly.Instead,heshould
calloutthespeakeranddismissher
questionbysaying,Youknowvery
wellthatIamneithermean,norhaveI
hurtpuppies.Stoptryingtomakeme
lookbad.Focusyourdisagreementon
myideasinstead.
appealto
ignorance
adignorantiam
Arguingaclaimistruejust
becauseithasnotbeen
showntobefalse
appealto
history
adantiquitam
Offeringthefactthat
somethinghasbeendone
inthepastasareasonfor
continuingtodoit.
Wedriveontherightsideof
theroadbecauseitsalways
beendonethatway.
Justbecausesomethinghasbeen
doneforalongtimeisnotagood
reasonfordoingit.Theremayvery
wellbelogicalreasonsfordrivingon
therightsideoftheroad,sothe
speakershouldstatethem.Shirley
JacksonsshortstoryTheLottery
exposesthisfallacy.
talkingin
circles
beggingthe
question
circularargument
Usingaclaimasareason.
HowdoIknowmymomis
usuallyright?Becauseshetells
meso!
Howdoesthespeakerreallyknowif
hismomisusuallyrightifherelies
onlyonheropinionasproof?Whatif
heropinioniswrong?Thenher
reasonmustalsobewrongtoo.He
shouldprovidemanyexamplesof
whenhismomwasrightasproof
instead.
slipperyword
equivocation
hedging
Changingmeaningsofan
importantwordinthe
middleoftheargument.
Womenandmenarephysically
andemotionallydifferent.SInce
wearenotreallyequal,thelaw
shouldnottreatthemequally.
Contrasttheslipperywordwiththe
wordofsimilarbutdifferentmeaning
whichwasleftoutoftheoriginal
argument.Heretheslipperywordis
equallywhichthespeakerwantsus
tobelievemeansexactlythesame
asopposedtoitslegalmeaning,
fairly.Rephrasedproperly,Since
wearenotreallyequal,thelawshould
nottreatusfairlysoundssuitably
ridiculous.Vonnegutssatiricalshort
storyHarrisonBergeronexposes
thisfallacy.
MoreDifficultFallacies
FALLACY
ALSOKNOWNAS WHATITMEANS
EXAMPLE
HOWTOFIXIT
qthereforep
affirmingtheconsequent
Ifmyphoneisdropped,
itsscreencracks.Its
screeniscracked,so
someonemusthave
droppedit!
Thespeakershouldhave
realizedthereweremany
otherwayshisscreen
couldhavecracked.
Maybesomeonesatonit.
notpthereforenotq
denyingtheantecedent
DRAFT
redherring
Introducingaseemingly
relatedissuetotakefocus
awayfromtherealissue.
falsecause
posthocergopropterhoc
(afterthisthereforethat),
orsimply,posthoc,
correlationvs.causation
Toquicklyassuming
somethingcaused
somethingelse.
falsecause
StrawManArguments:Whenyouputafalseargumentintothemouthofyouropponentandthenproceedto
knockitdown,youhaveonlycreateda"strawman"argument,
overlookingalternatives
FALLACIESTBD...
ALSOTBD...
Relevant,short,kidfriendlyargumentsforpracticeannotation.Seeworkbookexamples.Alsofor
belowseeorangebookshadedsheetforguidesheetforpeerrevision
SEETHEFALLACYDETECTIVECOMICS
DRAFT
SomeCommonRhetoricalDevicesandtheirEffects
Mostgoodwriterscanlearntomakelogicalarguments.Thebestwriters,though,enhancetheirargumentbybeing
thoughtfulaboutthewordsandsyntax(wordorder)theyuse.
Whatitis
Whatitdoes
Allusion
Areferenceoutsidethetexttoaspecificevent,person,place,
orobjectcommonlyknowntothereader.
Drawsonthereaderspriorknowledge
toillustrateanidea.
Createsasenseofconnectednessand
understandingwiththereader.
Fourscoreandsevenyearsagoourfathersbroughtforthon
thiscontinentanewnation...dedicatedtotheproposition
thatallmenarecreatedequal.Here,Lincolnalludestothe
DeclarationofIndependence.
Analogy
Afourwaycomparison:e.g.teachersthisschoolarelike
guardsinprisons.
Euphemism Usingalessthandirectwordorphrase.
Wehavecometodedicateaportionofthatfieldasafinal
restingplaceforthosewhoheregavetheirlives....
Helpsmakeabstractideasmorevivid
andunderstandablebyconnectinga
newconcepttosomethingthereader
alreadyknows.
Softensanotionorimageareader
mightfinddistractingortoodisturbing.
Clearly,themoredirectword,graveyard,wouldaddasense
ofmorbidityinconsistentwithLincolnssolemntone.
Hyperbole
Exaggerationoroverstatement
Theworld...canneverforgetwhattheydidhere.
Emphasizesapoint.Becareful:
hyperbolecaneasilybackfireasa
sweepinggeneralization.
Irony
Whenawritermeanstheoppositeofwhatshesays.
Establishestone.Mayengagethe
readerthroughhumor.
Parallelism
Usingthesamegrammaticalstructureincloseproximity.
Drawsthereadersattentiontothe
relationshipbetweentheitemsin
parallel.
...thatgovernmentofthepeople,bythepeople,forthe
people,shallnotperishfromtheearth.Heretherearethree
prepositionalphrasesusedtoshowtherelationshipamong
thepeoplesrelationshiptothegovernment:
Sensory
Imagery
Descriptionwhichappealstothewriterssenseofoftaste,
touch,sound,sight,smell,balance,heat/cold.
Vivifiesthemeaningbystimulatingthe
brainssensorycortex.
Simile&
Metaphor
Asimileisanindirectcomparisonusinglikeoras.A
metaphorisadirectcomparisonusingalinkingverb(suchas
is)orof(asinchainsofoppression).Example:
...thisnation,underGod,shallhaveanewbirthof
freedom.
Helpsmakeabstractideasmorevivid
andunderstandablebyconnectingthe
writersnewconcepttosomethingthe
readeralreadyknows.
Tone
Thewritersattitudeormoraloutlooktowardthesubjector
readers,e.g.,cynical,empathetic,critical,idealistic,ironic,
optimistic,realistic,suspicious,comic,sarcastic,supportive
Contributestothewritersmeaningby
complementinghismeaning.
Repetition
Canoccurwithletters(alliteration,assonance),words(epistrophe,
chiasmus,epizeuxis),andphrases(anaphora).
...thatgovernmentofthepeople,bythepeople,forthepeople,
shallnotperishfromtheearth.
Emphasizesanimportantpointor
detail.Createsahypnoticeffect
openingthereadersunconsciousmind
tosuggestion.
DRAFT
UsefulQuestionsforClose,CarefulAnalysisofArgumentWriting
Afterannotatingaworkofargumentativewriting,answeringthesequestionswillhelpyouevaluatehowwell
thewriterarguedhisorherpoint.Thesequestionswillalsodevelopyourownabilitytoargueeffectively.
I.IDENTIFYTHEARGUMENT
1.Whatclaimdoesthewritermake?
(C)
2.Whatarethereasons(premises)supportingtheclaim?
(P)
3.[Now,writetheargumentinstandardform:listthereasonsabovetheclaim.]
4.Whataretheexamplesusedtoillustratethereasons?
(X)
5.Wheredoesthewriterstatehisorherassumptionsabouthowtheexamples
supportthereasonsandtheclaim?
(S)
6.Wheredoestheauthoraddresstheopposingview(counterclaim)?
(CC)
II.EVALUATETHEARGUMENT
1.Istheclaimclear?Noticeanyguardingwords.Howstrongorweakistheclaim?
(G)
2.Arethereasonstrue?Arethereenoughreasons(premises)tosupporttheclaim? (P)
3.Whatreasonshavebeenleftout?Assumptionsmade?Why?
(A)
4.Arethereasonsgoodonesoristhewriterstretching?Aretheyvalid(logical)?
(P)
5.Whathasbeenjudgedordiscountedtohelpsupporttheclaim?Wasthisdonefairly?(DE)
6.Arethereasonsandfactsconnectedlogicallyordoestheargumentrelyonafallacy?
(F)
7.Dotheexamplesreallyillustratereasonsandclaim?Aretheyfactuallyaccurate? (X)(S)
8.Howeffectivelyarerhetoricaldevicesorliterarylanguageusedtoenhancethearguments
effectiveness?Howeffectiveisitindoingso?
(R)
9.Howfairlyandrespectfullydidthewriteraddresstheopposingview?Whatwasthewriterstonein
thecounterargument?
(E+)(E)(CC)
10.Howconvincingwasthewritersrebuttaloftheopposingview?Didthewriterconcede,orgivein
toanyopposingviews?
(E+)(E)(CC)
11.Whathasbeenoverlookedthatwouldhavehelpedmakeamoreconvincingargument?
DRAFT
PuttingitAllTogether
DIRECTIONS:ThepassagebelowisashortpiecearguinginsupportofaUS"junkfoodtax."Readthroughthepieceand
lookforthedifferentpartsofthewritersargument.ANNOTATEthearticlecarefullyinthemargins.Afterwards,answerthe
followingquestionsonyourown.Next,shareyourresponseswithasmallgroupandcomparewhatyouhearwithyour
responses.
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
Whichsentence(s)containtheauthorsclaim?
Herreasons?
Doestheauthoruseanyguardingwordstolimittheclaim?
Whatevidencedoessheprovidetosupportherreasons?Istheevidencetrue?Isitstrong?
Whatassumptionsconnecttheclaimtothereasons?
Doestheauthorpresentanycounterclaims?
Howwouldyoujudgethequalityoftheargumentoverall?Isthereasoningvalid?Arethereasonsordered
effectively?Whatisthemostbeautifullywrittensentenceinyouropinion?
DRAFT
ANSWERS
1.Whatistheauthorsclaim?
Theclaimisstatedintwoplacesatthebeginningofthepiece,whentheauthorstatesthatthetaxisapromising
strategyagainstobesity.Theclaimisrestatedattheend,whentheauthorwritesusingthecarrotofsubsidized
healthyfoodandnutritioneducationalongwiththestickofafoodtax,thetypicalAmericandietcan,andshould,be
changedforthebetter.Thesetwostatementscondensethemainpointwhichtheauthoristryingtoimpartthata
junkfoodtaxhasagoodchanceofbeingsuccessfulandshouldbeimplemented.
2.Doestheauthorlimittheclaimbyusinganyguardingwords?
Theauthorguardsherclaimbyaddressingtheissuesbroughtupbylackofaccesstohealthyoptionsinher
restatementoftheclaim.Specifically,thequalifierappearsasthestatementhowever,ifprecautionsaretakento
ensureequalaccesstohealthyfoodamongallcitizens,then....Theclaimisagainstatedasshecontinueswith
usingthecarrotofsubsidizedhealthyfoodandnutritioneducationalongwiththestickofafoodtax,thetypical
Americandietcanandshouldbechangedforthebetter.
3.Whereevidencedoestheauthorpresentinthisessay?
ThemainevidencetosupportherclaimisgivenintheformofstatisticsaboutfoodconsumptionintheUSto
highlighttheneedforaprogramencouraginghealthyfoodconsumption.Specifically,shestatesAmericanstoday
areconsumingalmost20percentmorecaloriesthantheydidintheearly1980s,andthosecaloriesarecomingfrom
increasinglylesshealthysources,mainlyhighfatandhighsugarprocessedfoods.Furthermore,processedfoods
anddrinksareincreasinglymoreaffordablethanthefruits,vegetables,andwholegrainsneededtoforahealthydiet.
4.Whatassumptions(alsoknownassuppressedpremises,enthymemes,orwarrants)connecttheevidencetotheclaim?
Becausetheauthorisarguingthatataxonunhealthyfoodwouldencouragehealthyfoodconsumption,the
assumptionlinkingevidenceofunhealthyeatingtotheuseofafoodtaxisthatcustomersmakepurchasing
decisionslargelyonthebasisofcost.Thisideaisexplicitlystatedwhentheauthorwritesmentionsthatwemight
assumecostisamorepertinentfactoroffoodchoicethanpersonaltaste.
5.Doestheauthorpresentanycounterclaims?
Yes,theauthoraddressestwopossiblecounterargumentsbybringingthemup,andthenrefutingthem.Shenotes
thatwithregardtothelegitimacyofcomparingsmokingtoeatinghabits,somemightarguethatsmokingismoreofa
lifestylechoicethaneating,itisratherthechoiceofwhatfoodstoeatwhichwillhopefullybeaffectedinthelongrun.
Shealsonotestheissueoffooddesertsbywritingadditionally,thistaxmighthurtthoseinareaswithlittleaccessto
freshproduceandwholegrains,suchasinlowincomeurbanareasthereforethejunkfoodtaxwouldonlyworkif
healthyfoodchoicesaremadenotonlyaffordablebuteasilyavailabletolowincomeconsumersthroughtheuseof
subsidies(Marsh).
6.Howwouldyoujudgetooverallqualityofthisargument?Isthereasoningvalid?
Thisanswerdependentsonyourownanalysisoftheargument.However,therearemanyissuesworthnoting.The
evidenceprovideddoesexplainthatthereisatrendinunhealthyeating,butdoesnotgiveevidenceforwhythis
trendisharmful,nordoesitprovideevidenceforwhythistrendexists.Theoverallclaimthatajunkfoodtaxshould
beimplementedwouldbestrongerifevidenceweregivenexplainingtheconsequencesofallowingthisunhealthy
trendtocontinuealso,theassumptionthatcostisaprimaryfactoroffoodpurchasingchoiceswouldbemorevalidif
DRAFT
evidencewasprovidedoutliningotherfactorsinthistypeofdecisionmaking.Additionally,therebuttalandqualifier
addressingthelackofaccessibilitytohealthyfoodinlowincomeareaswouldbestrongeriftheauthorhad
suggestedspecificmeasuresbywhichtheaccessibilityissuewouldberesolved.
"Writer'sWeb:ToulminModelExercise."Writer'sWeb:ToulminModelExercise.N.p.,n.d.Web.26May2013.
TheLanguageofArgument
Writing an Argument
ShortArguments
Beforewritinganextendedargumentessay,itisbesttobeginpracticingbywritingafewshort
arguments.Shortargumentsareonlyabouttwoparagraphslong.Usethefollowingrulestohelp
insureyourshortargumentislogicalandclear.Besuretoreviseyourworktoinsureyouhaveused
elaborationstrategiesfor
fulleffect.
SomeGeneralGuidelines
1.Identifyyourreasonsandclaims.
Askyourself,WhatamItryingtoprove?Thisis
yourclaim.Thinkofaclaimasaminithesis.
(Thereasonswhyyouareclaimingwhatyouare
claimingarealsoknownasprooforpremises
theywillbecomeyourprojectedorganization.)
2.Developyourideasinanaturalorder.
Putyourclaimfirst,followedbyyourreasonsOR
putyourreasonsfirstandyourclaimlast.
3.Startfromgood,reliablereasons.
Nomatterhowwellyouuselogicandword
choice,yourclaimwillappearsillyifyourreasons
arequestionable.
4.Beconcreteandconcisewhenyouuse
examplesfortoillustrateyourreasons.
Avoidgeneralities.Useclearexamplesto
illustrateandclarifyyourreasons.Dont
overelaborateoryouwillloseyouraudience.
5.Buildonsubstance,notovertone.
Offeractualreasonsdontjustrelyonpowerful
wordchoiceorgeneralizations.
WRITE:Tryit.Followingtheguidelinesabovewriteatwoparagraphlettertotheeditoratopicinthe
newsaboutwhichyouhaveanopinion.Next,rewriteyourargumentandchangetheorderyou
DRAFT
presentedyourreasonsandclaim.Whichversionismorenaturalandeffective?Why?
"AWorkbookforArguments:ACompleteCourseinCriticalThinking[Paperback]."AWorkbookforArguments:ACompleteCourseinCriticalThinking:David
Morrow,AnthonyWeston:9781603845496:Amazon.com:Books.N.p.,n.d.Web.23May2013.
UsefulTipsforFindingFallaciesinYourOwnWriting
Goodargumentwritingdependsonclear,logicalthinking.Fallaciesareillogical.Herearesomegeneral
tipstoimproveyourargumentbyfindingandeliminatingfallaciesinyourownarguments:
1)Pretendyoudisagreewiththeclaimyouaredefending.Whatpartsoftheargumentwould
nowseemfishytoyou?Whatpartswouldseemeasiesttoattack?Givespecialattentionto
strengtheningthoseparts.
2)Listyourmainpointsundereachone,listtheevidenceyouhaveforit.Seeingyourclaims
andevidencelaidoutthiswaymaymakeyourealizethatyouhavenogoodevidencefora
particularclaim,oritmayhelpyoulookmorecriticallyattheevidenceyoureusing.
3)Learnwhichtypesoffallaciesyouareespeciallyproneto,andbecarefultocheckforthem
inyourwork.Somewritersmakemanyofappealstoauthorityothersaremorelikelytorelyon
weakanalogiesorsetupstrawmen.Readoversomeofyouroldpaperstoseeiftheresa
particularkindoffallacyyouneedtowatchoutfor.
4)Beawarethatbroadclaimsneedmoreproofthannarrowones.Claimsthatusesweeping
wordslikeall,no,none,every,always,never,noone,andeveryonearesometimes
appropriatebuttheyrequiremuchmoreproofthanlesssweepingclaimsthatusewordslike
some,many,few,sometimes,usually,andsoforth.
5)Doublecheckyourcharacterizationsofothers,especiallyyouropponents,tobesuretheyare
accurateandfair.
DRAFT
"Fallacies."TheWritingCenter.UniversityofNorthCarolina,n.d.Web.09May2013.
DRAFT
StructuringanExtendedArgument
Anextendedargumentisalsoknownasapositionpaper.Whenawritertakesaposition,heorshemakes
aclaim.Therearemanystrategiesfororganizingyourideasbeforewritingyourextendedargument.Two
areexplainedbelow.Eachhasitsstrengthsandlimitations.Whichoneyouusedependsentirelyonyour
purposeformakingtheargumentandtheaudienceyouaretryingtopersuade.
TheClassicalApproach
Thefirstextendedargumentswerenotintendedtobereadtheywereintendedtobeheard.
AncientGreekandRomanoratorsworkedoutaconsistentformatthathelpedkeeptheirsometimes
longwindedspeechesfrombecomingtooconfusingtolistento.Eachextendedargumentconsisted
ofanexordium(attentiongrabber),narratio(explanationoftheissueandneededbackground
information),propositio(themainthesis),partitio(theprojectedorganization),confirmatio
(presentationofthewritersposition),confutatio(summaryofopposingviews,responsetoopposing
views),andperoratio(theconclusion).Thisformatisstillusedtodayinwriting.Theleftsideofthe
tablebelowpresentsthisclassicalstructureclearly.
RogerianOrganizationPlan
AdifferentapproachtoorganizinganextendedargumentistheRogerianmethod.Itwasnamed
afterCarlRogers,apsychologist,whorecognizedthattheclassicalapproachtoargumentationoften
putsanaudienceonthedefensive.TheRogerianmethod,ontheotherhand,attemptstofind
compromiseandagreement,therebyinvitingtheaudiencetoparticipateinthewritersargument.
Anotherkeydifferenceisthatthethesisstatementisnotrevealeduntiltheendoftheessay.The
rightsideofthetablebelowpresentsthismoremodernapproachtowritinganextendedargument.
DRAFT
TwoArgumentStrategiesCompared
Classical
Rogerian
1.
Introduction
Capturetheaudiencesattention.
Introducetheissueandcreate
exigenceforyourclaim.
Whyisthisanissue?Whydowe
needtopayattention?
Supplythecontextneededto
understandthecaseyoupresent.
Whatcircumstances,
occurrences,orconditionsdowe
needtobemadeawareof?
Stateyourposition(claim/thesis),
basedontheinformationyou
havepresented,andoutlinethe
majorpointsthatwillfollow.
Separatethebackground
informationfromthereasoning.
1.
Introduction
Statetheproblemyouhopeto
resolve.Bypresentingyourissue
asaproblemyouraisethe
possibilityofpositivechange.
Oftenopponentswillwanttosolve
thesameproblem.
2.
Summaryof
Opposing
Views
Asaccuratelyandneutrallyas
possible,statetheviewsofthe
peoplewithwhomyoudisagree.
Bydoingthisyoushowthatyou
arecapableoflisteningwithout
judgingandhavegivenafair
hearingtopeoplewhothink
differentlyfromyou.
3.
Statementof
Understanding
Presentyourreasons,subclaims,
andevidence.Clarify
connectionsbetweenclaimand
support.Provideadditional
evidencewherenecessary.
Explainandjustifyassumptions.
Anticipateandrefuteopposing
arguments.Inthissectionyou
demonstratethatyouhave
alreadyconsideredtheissue
thoroughlyandhavereachedthe
onlyreasonableconclusion.
4.
Statementof
YourPosition
5.
Statementof
Contexts
Summarizethemostimportant
points.Makeafinalappealto
values,motivations,andfeelings
thatarelikelytoencouragethe
audiencetoidentifywithyour
argument
6.
Statementof
Benefits
2.
Statementof
Background
3.
Proposition
4.
Proof
5.
Rebuttal
6.
Conclusion
Alsocalledthestatementof
validity.Showthatyouunderstand
thattherearesituationsinwhich
theseviewsarevalid.Whichparts
oftheopposingargumentsdoyou
concede?Underwhichconditions
mightyousharetheseviews?
Nowthatreadershaveseenthat
youvegivenfullconsiderationto
viewsotherthanyourown,they
shouldbepreparedtolistenfairly
toyourviews.Stateyourposition.
Describesituationsinwhichyou
hopeyourviewswillbehonored.
Byshowingthatyourpositionhas
meritinspecificcontexts,you
recognizethatpeoplewontagree
withyouallofthetime.However,
opponentsareallowedtoagreein
partandsharecommonground.
Appealtotheselfinterestofyour
opponentsbyshowinghowthey
wouldbenefitfromacceptingyour
positionthisconcludesyouressay
onahopeful,positivenote.
DRAFT
ExploringBothSides
WhetheryouusetheclassicalorRogerianapproach,youMUSTexaminebothsidesoftheargumentwhen
prewritinganddrafting.Consideringbothsidesofanargumentinthiswaymayhelpyoudeterminewhere
yourargumentisstrongestandwheretheopposingviewisweakest,ORitmayleadyoutosomecommon
groundbetweenyourpositionandtheopposingviewpoint.Inanycase,exploringthecounterclaiminthis
wayhelpsyouappearmorereasonabletoyourreader.Notetheexamplebelowinwhichthewriterhas
donesomeprewritingtoconsiderbothsidesofthequestionofwhethergirlsshouldbeencouragedtoplay
firstpersonshootervideogames.
Prompt:Shouldgirlsbeencouragedtoplayfirstpersonshootervideogames?
OneView...
OpposingView...
Firstpersonshootervideo
gamesareGOODforgirls.
vs
COUNTER
CLAIM:
Firstpersonshootervideo
gamesareBADforgirls.
REASON
1
becausebeatingguysattheirown
gameisempoweringforgirls.
vs.
REASON
1
becausetheypromoteantisocial
valuessuchasindiscriminate
killing.
REASON
2
becausebeingskilledatthese
gamesfreesgirlsfromfeminine
stereotypes.
vs.
REASON
2
becausetheyamplifythebad
sideofmalestereotypes.
REASON
3
becausetheygivegirlsadifferent
wayofconnectingwithmales.
vs.
REASON
3
becausetheywastevaluable
timethatcouldhavebeenspent
onsomethingconstructive.
REASON
4
becausetheygivegirlsnew
insightsintoamalesubculture.
vs.
REASON
4
becauseFPSgamescould
encouragewomentosee
themselvesasobjects.
CLAIM:
DRAFT
PRACTICE:Foreachblank,fillinagoodreasonfortheopposingviewtotheclaimthatwomenshouldbe
preventedfromjoiningmilitarycombatunits.
Prompt:Shouldwomenbeallowedtojoinmilitarycombatunits?
OneView...
OpposingView...
CLAIM:
WomenshouldbePREVENTED
fromjoiningmilitarycombatunits.
COUNTER
CLAIM:
WomenshouldbeALLOWEDto
joincombatunitsinthemilitary.
REASON Womentypicallydonothavethe
1
strengthorenduranceforcombat.
REASON
1
???
REASON Womenincloseknitcombatunits
2
wouldhurtmoralebyintroducing
sexualjealousies.
REASON
2
Theimageofwomenascombat
soldierswouldhelpsocietyovercome
harmfulgenderstereotyping.
REASON Womenhavenotbeensocializedinto
3
fightersandwouldnthavethe
killemwithabayonetspiritthatmen
canget.
REASON
3
???
REASON Womenwouldbelessreliabletoa
4
combatunitiftheybecamepregnant
orhadtocareforinfantsorsmall
children.
REASON
4
Womenwouldhavemore
opportunitiesforpromotionsifthey
couldserveincombatunits.
REASON
5
???
REASON
5
Allowingwomentoserveincombat
unitspromotesequalrights.
DRAFT
DRAFT
CounterArgument
ExcerptedfromTheAcademicEssay:ABriefAnatomybyGordonHarvey
Whenyoucounterargue,youconsiderapossibleargumentagainstyourthesissclaimorsomeaspectof
yourreasoning.Thisstrategyisagoodwaytotestyourideaswhendrafting.Inthefinishedessay,itcanbe
apersuasiveanddisarmingtactic.Itallowsyoutoanticipatedoubtsandheadoffobjectionsthataskeptical
readermighthave.Italsoenhancesyourcredibilitybecauseitpresentsyouasthekindofpersonwho
weighsalternativesbeforearguingforone,whoconfrontsdifficultiesinsteadofsweepingthemunderthe
rug,andwhoismoreinterestedindiscoveringthetruththanwinningapoint.
TheTurnAgainst
Counterargumentinanessayhastwostages:youturnagainstyourargumenttochallengeitandthenyou
turnbacktoreaffirmit.Youfirstimagineaskepticalreaderwhomightresistyourargumentbypointingout
aproblemwithyourdemonstration,e.g.thatadifferentconclusioncouldbedrawnfromthesame
facts,akeyassumptionisunwarranted,akeytermisusedunfairly,certainevidenceisignoredor
playeddown
oneormoredisadvantagesorpracticaldrawbackstowhatyoupropose
analternativeexplanationorproposalthatmakesmoresense.
YouintroducethisturnagainstwithaphraselikeOnemightobjectherethat...orItmightseemthat...orIt's
truethat...orAdmittedly,...orOfcourse,...orwithananticipatedchallengingquestion:Buthow...?orBut
why...?orButisn'tthisjust...?orButifthisisso,whatabout...?Thenyoustatethecaseagainstyourselfas
brieflybutasclearlyandforcefullyasyoucan,pointingtoevidencewherepossible.
TheTurnBack
Yourreturntoyourownargumentwhichyouannouncewithatransitionalwordsuchasbut,yet,however,
neverthelessorstillmustlikewiseinvolvecarefulreasoning,notasimpledismissal.Inreasoningaboutthe
proposedcounterargument,youmay
refuteit,showingwhyitismistakenanapparentbutnotrealproblem
acknowledgeitsvalidityorplausibility,butsuggestwhyonbalanceit'srelativelylessimportantor
lesslikelythanwhatyoupropose,andthusdoesn'toverturnit
concedeitsforceandcomplicateyourideaaccordinglyrestateyourthesisinamoreexact,
qualified,ornuancedwaythattakesaccountoftheobjection,orstartanewsectioninwhichyou
consideryourtopicinlightofit.
WheretoPutaCounterArgument
Counterargumentsmostcommonlyappear
aspartofyourintroductionbeforeyouproposeyourclaimorthesiswheretheexistenceofa
differentviewisthemotiveforyouressay,thereasonitneedswriting
asasectionorparagraphjustafteryourintroduction,inwhichyoulayouttheexpectedreactionor
standardpositionbeforeturningawaytodevelopyourown
asaquickmovewithinaparagraph,whereyouimagineacounterargumentnottoyourmainidea
buttothesubideathattheparagraphisarguingorisabouttoargue
asasectionorparagraphjustbeforetheconclusionofyouressay,inwhichyouimaginewhat
someonemightobjecttowhatyouhaveargued.
WRITE:Usingtheturnagainstandturntowardstepsabove,writeacounterargumentrefuting
whywomenshouldNOTbeallowedincombatunits(seepreviousexample).
DRAFT
IllustratingyourReasonswithExamplesandStatingyourAssumptions
Whilecounterargumentsareespeciallyhelpfulinestablishingyourcredibility,withoutexamplessuchas
factsandfigurestoillustrateyourownargumentforyourreader,yourargumentwillfallflat.Itisalso
importanttostateoutrighthowtheseexampleshelpillustrateyourreasonsandsupportyourclaim.Never
assumeyourreaderwillmakethisconnectiononhisorherown.Itisalsoagoodideatodeterminewhich
assumptionsarenotsharedbyyouandyouraudience.Bystatingtheseassumptionsoutright,youanswer
thequestion,Sowhat?forthereader.Inthisway,thereaderwillseeyouhavesolidgroundsforyour
claimwhetherornotheagreeswithyourclaim.(Theassumptionthattiesyourclaimandevidencetogether
isalsoknownasgrounds,asuppressedpremise,enthymeme,orwarrant.Inyouressay,itwilloftenappear
inyourclincher.)
Thetablesbelowillustratehowstatinganassumptionmakestheexamplespurposeclearinsupportingthe
argument.Noticehowthestatedassumptionclearlycallsbacktotheclaimandreasonusingtheirexact
phrasing(thesecallbackwordsareitalicized).
CLAIM
REASON
EXAMPLE
STATEDASSUMPTION
Sowhat?Howdoestheexampletiethe
reasonandclaimtogether?
Someteachersassign
toomuchhomework...
...becausethey
forgetthat
studentshavea
lifeoutsideof
school.
Forexample,Mr.
Hammerhead
requiresstudents
tocarryanotebook
andkeepawritten
loginanotebookof
everytimewe
recycle.
Mostpeoplewouldagreethatteens
havearighttosociallifeoutsideof
schoolandteenswouldfindit
embarrassingtocarryarounda
notebooktosocialevents.Since
teenswillnormallyoptforsocial
acceptanceoverembarrassment,it
isnotrealisticorrightforateacher
toexpectstudentstodothiskindof
aroundtheclockhomework.
CLAIM
REASON
EXAMPLE
STATEDASSUMPTIONS
Womenshouldbe
preventedfromjoining
combatunits
...because
womentypically
arenotstrong
enoughfor
combat.
Forexample,
womengenerally
haveweaker
upperbody
strength,acrucial
requirementfor
carryingawounded
soldieroffofthe
battlefield.
Clearlymenweighsignificantlymore
thanwomen.Itwouldbewrongto
jeopardizewoundedmenslivesby
reducingthenumberofthosestrong
enoughtoliftandcarrytheseheavy,
woundedmentosafety.Beingfairto
womenbylettingthemjointhe
infantrymeansbeingunfairtomen
whowoulddieonthebattlefieldasa
result,whichiswhywomenshould
bepreventedfromjoiningcombat
units.
DRAFT
PRACTICE:Makeaclaimaboutsomethingyoubelieveandprovideagoodreasonsupportingyour
claim.Stateanexamplewhichillustratesyourreason.Explaintheassumptionthatconnectsyour
exampletoyourreasonandclaim.Usethetablebelowtohelpyoudevelopyourideas.
CLAIM
Statesomethingyou
believeinstrongly.
REASON
Provideagood
reasonsupporting
yourclaim.
EXAMPLE
Stateanexample
whichillustratesthe
reason.
STATEYOUR
ASSUMPTIONS
Sowhat?Explainhowtheexample
tiesthereasonandclaimtogether.
Circlethewordsthatcallbackto
yourclaimandreason.
DRAFT
GRAPHICORGANIZERSFOREXTENDEDARGUMENTS
GettingStartedwithClaims,Reasons,andCounterclaims
1. Decideonanissueforanextendedargumentessayyouwouldliketowrite(e.g.,firstpersonshooter
videogames).Makesureitsadebatableissuethatreasonablepeoplecoulddisagreeon.
2. Writeaonesentencequestionthatsummarizesthecontroversialissueyourclaimaddresses(e.g.,
Shouldgirlsbeallowedtoplayfirstpersonshootervideogames?).Thiswillbeyourpromptfor
writing.
3. Draftaworkingthesisstatement(claim)foryourproposedargument.
4. Listseveralbulletedbecausestatementsforyourreasons(twotofourissufficient).NOTE:Aclaim
CANNOTbesupportedbyotheropinionsunlessacceptedbythereaderasfact(e.g.,adoctors
opinion,anexpertsopinion,etc.).
5. Draftaworkingopposingthesisstatement(counterclaim).
6. Listseveralbulletedbecausestatementsascounterreasons.
7. Freewriteforseveralminutesexploringyourownfeelingsandthoughtsaboutthereasonsonboth
sides.Trynottofinalizeyourpositionuntilyoufinishwriting.Keepanopenmind.
8. Decideonasidetoargueandfinalizeyourposition.Writeyourclaim.
9. Finalizeyourreasonsandlistthem.Makesuretheyaregoodones.Orderyourreasonsinaway
thatmakethemostsense.
10. Finalizeyourcounterclaimandcounterreasons.Listthemusingthechartbelow:
PROMPT:__________________________________________________________________________
OneView...
OpposingView...
vs.
COUNTER
CLAIM:
REASON
1
>because...
vs.
REASON
1
>because...
REASON
2
>because...
vs.
REASON
2
>because...
REASON
3
>because..
vs.
REASON
3
*>because...
REASON
4
>because...
vs.
REASON
4
>because...
CLAIM:
DRAFT
DevelopingyourArgumentFurther:ExamplesandAssumptions
1. Foreachreasonyouprovidedabove,listatleastoneexamplewhichillustratesthereason.
2. Next,statehowtheexampleindeedhelpsproveyourpoint.
3. Usethetablebelowasmanytimesasneededtoelaborateonyourreasonsconvincingly.
RestateyourClaim:
_______________________________________________________________________
REASON1
Provideagoodreason
supportingyourclaim.
EXAMPLE
Stateanexamplewhichillustrates
thereason.
STATEYOURASSUMPTION
Sowhat?Explainhowtheexampletiesthe
reasonandclaimtogether.Circlethewords
thatcallbacktoyourclaimandreason.
REASON2
Provideagoodreason
supportingyourclaim.
EXAMPLE
Stateanexamplewhichillustrates
thereason.
STATEYOURASSUMPTION
Sowhat?Explainhowtheexampletiesthe
reasonandclaimtogether.Circlethewords
thatcallbacktoyourclaimandreason.
DRAFT
REASON3
Provideagoodreason
supportingyourclaim.
EXAMPLE
Stateanexamplewhichillustrates
thereason.
STATEYOURASSUMPTION
Sowhat?Explainhowtheexampletiesthe
reasonandclaimtogether.Circlethewords
thatcallbacktoyourclaimandreason.
REASON4
Provideagoodreason
supportingyourclaim.
EXAMPLE
Stateanexamplewhichillustrates
thereason.
STATEYOURASSUMPTION
Sowhat?Explainhowtheexampletiesthe
reasonandclaimtogether.Circlethewords
thatcallbacktoyourclaimandreason.
DRAFT
StrategizingandOrganizing:ClassicalorRogerianStructure?
DecidewhethertheclassicalorRogerianstrategyisbestsuitedforyouressayspurpose,occasion,and
audience.Next,fillouttheappropriatebrainstormingsectionsforEITHERtheClassicalorRogerianplans
below.Tohelpyoubrainstorm,usetheclaims,reasons,counterclaims,examples,andstatedassumptions
youhavealreadydeveloped.
ClassicalOrganizer
SECTION
BRAINSTORMHERE...
(eachofthefivesectionsmayconsistofmore
thanoneparagraph)
Introduceyourtopic
(onetoseveralparagraphs)
>Beginwithanattentiongrabbinghook(e.g.,
amemorablescene)
>Explaintheissueandneededbackground
>Stateclaim(thesis)andprojected
organization(arguments)
Presentyourposition
>Thisisthemainbodyoftheessay.
>Presentandsupporteachreasoninorder.
>Tieeachreasontoavalueorbeliefheldby
theaudience.
Summarizeopposingviews
>Summaryofviewsdifferingfromwriters
(opposingviewsshouldbefairand
complete).
Respondtoopposingviews
>Dismissorconcedetoopposingviews.
>Showweaknessesinopposingviews.
>Mayconcedetosomestrengths.
Conclude
>Summarizetheargumentbriefly.
>Leaveastronglastingimpression.
>Callsforanactionorrelatetopictothe
broaderworldofideas.
DRAFT
RogerianOrganizer
BRAINSTORMHERE...
Introduceyourtopic
Statetheproblemyouhopetoresolve.By
presentingyourissueasaproblem,raisethe
possibilityofpositivechange.Trytostatewhy
opponentswillwanttosolvethesameproblem.
SummarizeOpposingViews
Asaccuratelyandneutrallyaspossible,state
theviewsofthepeoplewithwhomyou
disagree.Bydoingthisyoushowthatyouare
capableoflisteningwithoutjudgingandhave
givenafairhearingtopeoplewhothink
differentlyfromyou.
ShowYouUnderstandtheOpposition
Alsocalledthestatementofvalidity.Showthat
youunderstandthattherearesituationsin
whichtheopposingviewsarevalid.Which
partsoftheopposingargumentsdoyou
concede?Underwhichconditionsmightyou
sharetheseviews?
MakeyourClaim
Nowthatreadershaveseenthatyouvegiven
fullconsiderationtoviewsotherthanyourown,
theyshouldbepreparedtolistenfairlytoyour
views.Stateyourposition.
GuardyourClaim
Describesituationsinwhichyouhopeyour
viewswillbehonored.Byshowingthatyour
positionisreasonableinspecificcontexts,you
recognizethatpeoplewontagreewithyouall
ofthetime.However,opponentsareallowedto
agreeinpartandsharecommonground.
StatetheBenefits
Appealtotheselfinterestofyouropponentsby
showinghowtheywouldbenefitfromaccepting
yourpositionconcludeyouressayona
hopeful,positivenote.