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2. Mara Cuerda Clemente
3. Juan Carlos Martnez Modia
4. Juan Manuel Garca Dujo
5. Maite Lorente Roda
6. Silvia Mogena Fernndez
7. Aitziber Latasa Sorondo
8. Alicia Snchez Ferro
9. Virtut Ribalta Siles
10. Sandra Rueda Ayala
11. Denisa Andrea Drideanu
12. Mara Teresa Prez Arias
13. Alberto David Vidal Rodrguez
14. Sara Fuerte Carrillo
15. Jos Javier Cabello Burgos
16. Mara Isabel Vivas Martn
17. ngel Mariano Maas Prez
18. Cristina Alonso Gonzlez
19. Ana Artero Hernando

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Pacfico, 57

28007 Madrid
November 17, 2013
Director of Human Resources
Adelfas Elementary School
Adelfas, 19
28007 Madrid
Dear Sir or Madam,
Ester Lpez, one of the teachers at your school, told me that you are looking for a
French teacher for a maternity leave replacement. I am interested in applying for
this position.
As a 2008 graduate of the Universidad de Barcelona, I have teaching experience on
the primary and secondary level and have taught adult and immigrant students, as
well. My resume is enclosed for your review.
I would like to combine my knowledge with my ability to learn from this new
experience at your school. (and I would love doing it in your school.)*
I look forward to meeting you for an interview and hope to hear from you at your
earliest convenience.
Sincerely,
Gisela Martnez
*You can use the clause in parenthesis, but it sounds a little bit effusive for a cover
letter.

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Dear Hiring Manager Sir/Madam,


I am writing to express my interest in the Teaching Assistant position as advertised in the
November 24 edition of The Times. Although my confidential resume is enclosed for your
review, allow me to introduce myself.
I have satisfied the requirements for a five-year Bachelor's degree in Spanish language and
literature from the Spanish National University of Distance Education (UNED). Regarding to
my first work experience, I was a volunteer teacher for an international NGO in a rural school in
Guatemala for nine months That which was a rewarding experience. Since then, I have been
working in Spain for six years at a private academy as a Spanish teacher for foreigners, but the
academy was (definitively) shut-down last September, and (now) I a()m willing to take on new
challenges. (I love them).
I am an enthusiastic about teaching and learning, and I have the passion to get the most from
your students. In addition to this, I feel very committed to the student-centered learning, and I
enjoy teamwork. My experience involves I possess good communication skills, technological
knowledge and abilities practice in the area of for blended learning. too.
I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you and discuss how my qualifications could be
guided to meet your needs for this position in your leading bilingual English-Spanish secondary
school in London. Additionally, I am available for A a web conference interview could also be
possible from Monday to Friday, in the evening, from 4 PM to 7 PM. Thank you in advance for
your time and consideration.
(Yours faithfully) / Sincerely,
Juan Carlos Martnez Modia
Enc. Resume

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C/ Cervera, 6 ATD Palencia 27th November 2013


Director of Human Resources Department
IT New World
7th Main Street
London
Dear Sirs,
I would like you to take some minutes reading enclose a copy of my CV/resume. I think
that my profile could be very interested interesting to your company. I am a Telecom
Engineer with an important experience in management of companies, project
management and a big knowledge of technology.
I am applying for the position of IT manager that your company has published in on the
website Infojobs website. I think that I have a qualifications and skills that fit in this
position.
I would welcome an opportunity to meet you and discuss my application, and I would
like to explain my experience and my possible career in your company.
Sincerely
Juan Manuel

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Dear Mr. Jones,


(My name is Maite Lorente.)I am writing to apply for the job of journalist.
I saw your job offer in the want ads of the newspaper, and I think that I am suitable for
your position because of my (great) experience and my qualifications.
Actually, I am working at a newspaper as a journalist assistant since 2000 (year).
I have a degree in Journalism from UNED.
You can examine my experience as a journalist and my certificates of studies
in the attached documents.
I am currently working as a journalist assistant; however my ordinary assignments are
as an interviewer.
I have interviewed several (a lot) (of) sports (iest) personalities and singers, such as
Jennifer Lpez, Madonna and Beyonce, which you can find in my CV.
(You can check in my CV.)
(If you have any time for me,) I would like to explain to you in greater (more) detail(ed)
my work experience in an interview,( we could have a meeting when you can) at your
convenience.
Thank you for considering my request.
Sincerely,
Maite Lorente

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C/ Martn Luther King, 36


November, 21st 2013
Director of Human Resources
Mitsubishi Electric US, Inc.
5900-A Katella Avenue, Cypress, California 90630, U.S.A.
Dear Sir or Madam:
From the Mitsubishi website I read about your need for a Civil Engineer for one of your local
office, and believe that I have the necessary aptitude for the position.
I worked as a Civil Engineer for the last four years, although at this moment am unemployed. I
designed electrical station and loved my job. I consider that am a hard-working and perfectionist
woman and both of them are important qualities in this kind of job.
Attached is a copy of my resume, which more fully details my qualifications for the position.
I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss a position with you, and will contact you in a few
days to answer any questions you may have.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely,
Silvia Mogena Fernndez

I have rephrased your sentences. It doesnt necessarily mean that your letter is wrong, though.
November 21, 2013
Director of Human Resources
Mitsubishi Electric US, Inc.
5900-A Katella Avenue
Cypress, CA 90630
USA

C/Martin Luther King, 36


(City/town/country)

Dear Sir or Madam,


I read about your need for a civil engineer at one of your local offices from the Mitsubishi
website, and I believe that I have the necessary aptitude and qualifications.
I have worked as a civil engineer for the last four years; although, at this moment, I am
unemployed. I designed electrical stations and loved my job. I consider myself a perfectionist
and am a hard-working person/woman -- both qualities being critically necessary for this type of
work/job.
Attached is a copy of my resume which details my qualifications for this position.
I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss possible employment with you and will gladly
answer any (and all) questions you may have.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely,
Silvia Mogena Fernndez
+There is no comma after "and" if there is no clause with a subject that follows.
+The state and zip code are on a separate line.
+Dates in letter headings are simple cardinal numbers -- not ordinal.
+The sender's home address is complete with street and city names.

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November 26th, 2013


Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you regarding an opportunity to work in
your company's legal department. I've sawn seen your online
ad looking for a full-time lawyer and I'm very interested
in it the job.
As you can see in my attached resume, I've been working in
the area of labour and social security law for ten years,
so I think that my subject knowledge on this area and my
experience in judicial proceedings fit in the profile you
need.
I look forward to having the opportunity to meet you soon
and arrenge arrange / schedule an interview. (this is
redundant)
Sincerely,
Aitziber Latasa.

+Dates in letter headings are simple cardinal numbers -- not ordinal.

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Alicia Snchez Ferro


(address)
24th of November of 2013
Director of Human Resources
Data Analysis
Dear Mrs. Mara Lpez,
I saw in some online job search pages the offer of the job/job offer of half-time Java
programmer. I have the skills required for it, so I would wish to apply for it and work in
your company, which I have seen find/consider very interesting.
For this job I am studying a Degree in Computer Science for this job, so/therefore I
have good qualifications for that job/it and some skills as patience and work in
groups/teamwork, also as well.
I would wish to have an opportunity to make an interview in your company and discuss
with you these skills told before/I would welcome the opportunity to meet you and
discuss the possibility of my working for your company.
Sincerely,
Alicia Snchez Ferro

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Catalonia Street, n 10
Cervera Lleida
27 November, 2013
Director of Human Resources
Ondara Auditors
Major Square, n 8
Cervera (25200) Lleida
Dear Sir,
I am writing to request information about the position of full-time auditor that
was advertised on Cerveras council website. Unless Although your ad does(nt)
not give many details about work conditions, you specify that living in Cervera is
essential.
My name is Virtut Ribalta and Im 24. Nowadays I live in Barcelona but I would
like to return to my village, Cervera. As you can see in my CV, while I was
studding studying my degree, I had a grant that allowed me to work in Montreal
for six months. I have a year of experience as a consulter consultant in Faura
Houses. After that, I had the change chance to start working in Deloitte as an
auditor.
I consider that Im an organized, dynamic and a responsible person. I love
working in a team/teamwork and I have very good computer skills. I would be
very happy to meet with you and discuss my qualifications further.
I hope to hear from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Virtut Ribalta

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Dear Mr. Baeza (Sir),


My name is Sandra R. I'm applying for a job of part-time administrative assistant. (and)
John G., one of your managing managers, told me that your company are is looking for
a part-time administrative assistant and recepcionist receptionist and I think that I have
the skills you are looking for.
I'm attaching a copy of my resume which lists my work experience as an administrative
assistant. My qualifications for the position include an ability to successfully write
letters and correctly answer calls. My attached resume gives you an idea of my
experience.
I would be very happy if you concede me an interview. I'd welcome an opportunity to
meet you and discuss the possibility to work for your company and my qualifications
for the position.
(Best regards).
Sincerely,
Sandra R.

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Rodrguez, Javier
Sanitas Residencial Hospital
RE: Enthusiastic and Hard-Working Nurse

Dear Director of Human Resources Sir/Madam,


Iam contacting you in regards to the Nurse nursing position at Sanitas
Residencial Hospital, as advertised on your website. I am very interested in
further particulars and in filling out an application form.
Ive studied to pursue the position of am a trained professional nurse. I have
(so) much to offer -- to helping enrich clients lives as they live at home or while
in the hospital or to help providing them with comforting solutions to clients
while receiving in home-care. Beyond my enthusiasm and dedication, I also
have a background in nursing courses on at private institutes and practice in
multiple healthcare units.
Id would be happy to provide more detailed information greater detail about my
skills and experience during an interview. Please call me at your earliest
convenience.
[this is redundant and somewhat familiar...you have already asked to be called]
(Looking forward to hearing from you.)
Sincerely,
(Best regards) [redundant and a bit too familiar],
Denisa Andreea Drideanu
(Your Phone Number)

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Director of Human Resources


Doxland Pharmaceutical
23LexingtonAvenue
Hawthorne, NY 10532
Dear Sir,
Im writing in response to your job offer advertised on your website, dated November
21th, where you need to hire a pharmacist.
Im interested in that position because I think that I have the skills you are looking for.
As you can see in my resume, which is attached to this letter, Im experienced as a
pharmacist in this field.
I worked for an important pharmaceutical company for four years and Im currently part
time working as a pharmacist three days a week. Im also studying a masters degree in
biochemistry which I will finish next month.
(One of the reasons why Id like to get that position is because Id rather have a full
time work job from Monday to Friday)+. Besides Im a responsible, hard-working and
sociable person and I have experience in working in teams/teamwork.
My resume contains additional details about my professional accomplishments and
academics. It would be a pleasure for me to be able to have an interview to discuss my
resume with you.
Thank you for your consideration.

Yours sincerely

M Teresa Prez
+ I dont think you should mention this.

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C/ Constanti Ribalaigua, n 42
Zip Code

City

24 November, 2013
Director of Human Resources
Gameloft
C/ Rossell, n 214,
Zip Code Barcelona.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Sara Fuerte, I am 27 years old and I would like to apply for the position of
3D Environment Modeler. I saw your ad on the website Infojobs and I think I have the
skills you are looking for.
I have over a year of experience as a 3D Artist in a creative studio named El punto de
vista. I also worked as a Graphic Designer in different projects as you can see in my
resume. I have a degree in Audiovisual Communication from University of Seville. I
have successfully completed a course in Videogame Development at Confederation of
entrepreneurs of Andalusia, and a course in Graphic Design at the school Ribera
Cultural del Sur.
My qualifications for the position include skills in 3D high and low poly modelling, as
well as knowledge of videogame art standards.
I am attaching a copy of my resume so that you can see my experience and
qualifications for the job. I would welcome an opportunity to meet you and discuss the
possibility of my working for your company.
Thank you for considering my request.
Sincerely.
Sara Fuerte.

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Jos J. Cabello.
lamos Street, 19
Mlaga.

November 27, 2013.

Director of Human Resources:

Sur in English.
Larios Street, number 4.
Last week I saw your online ad for a full time job as a journalist in your office in
Malaga. I think I (could) have the experience and the skills needed for that job. I have
worked for five years in La Opinin de Mlaga, as a part time journalist and two years
in on its website, writing about P politics.
I attach my Curriculum Vitae (resume), so that you can check my work experience and
my qualification. I wrote lots of articles about P politics, both, N national and I
international news. Before that, I was a sport journalist, and I wrote about the weekend
football matches. I wrote also about the 2003 Football European Champonist
Championship. So, I could be adaptable to different departments (and) as I am
hardworking and responsible.
Although I (am working in) have a part time job right now, I would like to change muy
work job. Moreover, it would be a pleasure to have an interview in the (next days) near
future to discuss the possibility of working in such an important company.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,

Jos Javier.

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New Education Magazine


[applicant's name and address]
Human Resources Depart(a)ment Department
5th Main Street
Manchester, NH, etc. [name of state, abbreviated followed by zip
code]
November 25, 2013

Ref. 570 AF MARKETING


Dear Sirs: [use plural only when there is more than one addressee listed]
I am writing to apply for the position of Marketing Assistant which was advertised in the latest
edition of New Education Magazine. [use italics, if possible]
I am currently employed by a small school as a part-time teacher, but I am keen to pursue a
career in publishing, because I enjoy reading and writing my own stories.
As you will notice on the attached CV, I (graduated) majored In Spanish Literature. At
University I gained considerable experience working on the student magazine; (so) therefore, I
am familiar with editing techniques. I work well under pressure and enjoy working in a team. In
addition, I speak French and Spanish.
I would be available for an interview (from) beginning/anytime next week. Meanwhile, please
do not hesitate to contact me if you require further information.
I look forward to hearing from you.
(Yours) Sincerely,
Pablo del Rio

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C/Luxemburgo,4
Monday 18th November
Director of Human Resources
Mackenzie
Princesa, 2. Madrid
Dear Sarah / Madam,
I saw your online ad for the job full-time jewerely jeweler and think that I have the
skills you are looking for.
I am attaching a copy of my resume, wich lists my work experience as a jewerely
jeweler.
My qualifications for the position include dynamism and organization.
I would be very happy to meet with you to discuss my qualification further.
Sincerely.
Cristina Alonso.

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Ana Artero Hernando


C/Mlaga, 1
04638 Mojcar
Almera
Director of Human Resources
Mojcar Playa Asesores
Parque Comercial de Mojcar, Local 84 Planta 2,
04638 Mojcar
Almera
Dear Juan A.,
I am applying for the position of part-time accounting advisor that was
advertised in on your website.
My qualifications for the position include an ability to work under pressure and
to keep the accounts of all kinds of companies.
I would welcome an opportunity to meet (with) you and discuss the possibility of
my working for your company.
Sincerely,
Ana.

The letter should be longer. Remember that a higher level of complexity is


expected for B1.

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