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Профессиональный Документы
Культура Документы
5.
to compete
competition
competitor/ fierce competitiveness
CONSUMER
to consume
consuming (time consuming)
consumption/consumer society
INVESTMENT
to invest
investor
LEADERSHIP
to lead-led-led
leader
leading
PRODUCTION
to produce/manufacture
Producer/manufacturer
product
SUPPLIER
to supply
supply (and demand)
BENEFICIARY
to benefit/beneficial
ADVERTISING
to advertise
advertisement (ad)/to place an ad
MANAGEMENT
to manage
manager managerial
A) verbal
B) non-verbal
Verbal communication:
a) room size
b) location
c) furnishing
d) machines
e) architecture
f) wall decorations
g) floor
h) lighting
a)
b)
c)
d)
facial expressions
eyes expressions
gestures
postures
e) smell
f) touch
B. For written messages
- The envelopes overall appearance : a) size
b) colour
c) weight
d) postage
- The appearance of the messages
stationery
: a) length
b) format
c) typing
I. Personal computers
Match the words with their definitions:
1. Personal computer/PC/desktop
computer
2.Laptop
3. Hardware
4. Software
5. Floppy (disk)/diskette
6. Hard disk
7. Disk drive
8. Modem
9. Scanner
10. To download
11. RAM (random access
memory/memory
12. Spreadsheet (program)
webcast is a media presentation distributed over the Internet using streaming media
technology to distribute a single content source to many simultaneous listeners/viewers
FAQ: frequently asked questions, a list of common questions and helpful answers
Intranet: a computer network with restricted access, as within a company, that uses
software and protocols developed for the Internet.
music too.
B.New technology in business: a) computer conferencing; b) video conferencing; c)
audio conferencing; d) communication satellites; e) desktop publishing; f) facsimile; g)
CD ROM; h) electronic meeting; i) electronic mail; j) internet/ on line access
Read this report about the convergence of mobile phones and handheld computers.
Underline either the adjective or adverb each time.
It seems (1) strange/strangely, but some people are walking around with a mobile phone,
a handheld computer like a Palm, a pager, and even a notebook computer with a (2)
conventional/conventionally keyboard as well. These digital devices are converging (3)
rapid/rapidly, but manufacturers are finding it difficult to get all the parts to integrate (4)
proper/properly. Contemporary mobile phones look (5) good/well, are relatively (6)
good/well at sending short text messages but dont work (7) good/well as handheld
computers. They lack memory, synchronize (8) bad/badly with desktop PCs, and are not
(9) easy/easily to use for writing emails. Searching for an address-book entry or scrolling
through a contact list is (10) slow/slowly, although once you find the name you can call
the person (11) direct/directly by just touching the phone number. Of course the big issue
in the future is Internet access it needs to be fast, (12) easy/easily and (13)
cheap/cheaply, but still allow phone companies to make a profit. Things are moving very
(4) quick/quickly in this area, and the manufacturers who succeed in getting everything
(15) right/rightly are going to make (16) huge/hugely profits.
Emails and faxes
Many companies do business with vendors and other clients by using a large amount of
paper. They will write up an invoice on paper and even send physical billing statements
to their clients. Instead of doing this, you can set up an online system to take care of this
process. Many companies are now going to online order processing systems that can
avoid using paper in most cases. This is especially applicable if you are an online retailer.
You can set up a system where clients can make purchases from your website and they
will be able to receive an e-mailed receipt or statement. By doing this, you will be able to
eliminate the majority of the paper that you consume every year. It is cheaper and more
effective than verbal conversation when passing technical information. If you need to get
feedback as you communicate, then you can employ the use of instant messenger e.g.
Yahoo Messenger. This is very cheap and as effective a phone call. If you are not
comfortable typing, you can make a PC to PC call using SKYP or a similar online
facility.
Retail/retailer
Wholesale/wholesaler
Purchase=to buy
Purchaser=buyer
Formatting Business Email
When using email in business, most of the guidelines for standard formatting in business
letters apply. Here are a few differences:
Choose a subject line that is simple and straightforward. Refrain from using key
words that might cause an email to go into another person's trash box.
Repeat the subject line in the body of the email, beneath the salutation (as with a
letter).
Use the "cc" address line to copy more than one person with your correspondence.
You can request a receipt for important letters. The system will automatically let
you know when someone has opened your email.
Instead of a signature, include your typed name, and below it include your email
address, business name and address, phone and fax number, and website if
appropriate.
Remember that people often print out emails, so your own email address and the
subject line would be lost if you had not included them in the body of the email.
Internal electronic mail may be formatted more like a memo than a formal letter.
TO:
FROM:
DATE:
SUBJECT
INTERNET MESSAGE
FROM: Mira Garcia
To: Pierre Grimal, Technical Director
Sent: 14 March 2011
Subject: Visit to Switzerland
Message text:
I (already book) your flight to Switzerland. You (leave) on Wednesday 5th
at 9.35 in the morning, so youll arrive in Berne before lunch. Someone (be) at the
airport to meet you. Your first meeting is with Thomas Legrand , and you (see) him at 1
pm at our local office. He (take) you out to lunch. After lunch you (not do ) anything until
4 pm, so you (have) time to go to the hotel. You (stay) at the Intercontinental, which is in
a very central location. I (go) to the travel agents to pick up the tickets this afternoon, so I
(give) them to you tomorrow.
INTERNET MESSAGE
FROM: Mira Garcia
To: Pierre Grimal, Technical Director
Subject: Visit to Switzerland
Message text:
FAX TRANSMISSION
From..
To..
For the attention of
Page 1 of
Date
To fax no
From fax no
Message
a)
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b)
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c)
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d)
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e)
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f)
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g)
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h)
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i)
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j)
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k)
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Some more tips for writing e-mails:
One email should contain several parts such as: subject line, opening, introducing subject
of the mail, necessary clarifying points, body of the mail and of course the closing.
1.The subject line
It is important to write a short and clear subject line as when the people look for old
emails in their folders they must find them easily and quickly
Example: Notice about the changed prices of ABC company
2. Opening
In different situations you can begin with Hi/Hello + first name or no name at all
starting the message immediately.
Examples of starting messages:
Happy to meet you yesterday.
It was nice to encounter you last week.
Best wishes/Best regards/Kind regards + your name or just your first name.
Complete the e-mail using phrasal verbs from the list below that mean the same as
the words in brackets. Three verbs need to be put into an ing form.
Back up break down call on
draw up
drop off
find out
get by
keep down look through print out ring up sort out
turn up check in
From: David R.
To: Simon
Sent: 25 May.
Subject: Things to do
Message:
1. Mr. Yamanaka
Mr. Yamanaka will be arriving at the airport at 10.30 tomorrow. Can you (1)
pick him up. ..(collect by car) from there and (2)drop..himoff(leave) at
his hotel? Hes staying at the Marriott. I wont be able to (3)turn up..(arrive) there
until about 1 p.m., so perhaps you could stay with him and make sure there are no
problems (4) checking in(registering) etc. Then Ill be with Mr. Yamanaka for
most of the afternoon, so Mike and Kate will have to (5)get by.(manage)
without me in the sales meeting.
2. Spain trip
Im trying to (6)to sort out.(organise) the itinerary for my trip to Spain next
Month. Can you (7) draw up (think about then write) a list of all our Spanish customers by
(8)looking through (examining) our customer accounts database? Id like to know
exactly who I need to (9) to call on (visit). Also the flight needs to be booked - can you (10)
ring me up (telephone) the travel agency and check flight times and prices? Were trying to
(11) to keep down (control to stop them increasing) travel expenses at the moment so just
(12) find out (discover) prices for Eurotraveller class.
3. March Spreadsheet
The printer keeps (13) braking down (stopping working), and I didnt have a chance to (14)
(print) to print out the spreadsheet for last months figures. Can you do it and then (15) back
up (make a copy) the file onto a disk for me to use my laptop?
Thanks
position
interest
- Figure out the best resolution you can expect
what is a fair and reasonable deal
what is a minimally acceptable deal
- Decide which are your competitive advantages
and disadvantages
upon a strategy to follow
Behaviour skills in negotiations:
1) learn to be dissatisfied
2) the defend/attack spiral
3) check the temperature
4) pride
5) warm and tough
Cross cultural negotiations
MEETINGS
Definitions:
1 A business meeting : a gathering of business persons where
purposive discourses take place for exchanging information on a
common topic or problem, for its better understanding or for
solving a problem.
2 Types of Business Meetings:
a)
1. Conference
2. Colloquy
3. Colloquium
4. Symposium/symposia
5.Panel forum
6.Debate
7. Teleconference
8. Webinar
3 Steps of meetings-arrangements:
a) consider the problem and determine the purpose
b) decide who should participate
c) arrange for meeting date, time and place
d) announce the agenda
e) physical arrangements
4 Procedures during the meeting:
a) the opening statement of the meeting
b) stimulate discussions for solution discovery
c) understand roles of the participants
3) The Sales Director must be an expert in sales, a good negotiator, having a good
command of foreign languages, knowing perfectly the products he sells as well as
the products of the competitors. It is absolutely necessary for him to know the
market and the habits of the customers. He must smile constantly using a
language adapted to the level of the client and be a perfect negotiator.
4) The Chief Marketing Officer is an expert in marketing being vital for the
company. He must make market research extremely useful for the company to
guide the production on the direction of the products asked by the market. He
needs to make marketing research, marks conclusions, advising the general
manager of the company in the good direction as to produce the products asked by
the market only.
The Chief Executive Officer
The position of Chief Executive Officer is hard to be kept for a long period of
time in the competitive world of the multinational corporations. The exception from the
rule was Jack Welch, CEO of General Electric for 20 years. Two-thirds of the CEOs in
the corporations are replaced after only five years of work. These things started after the
explosive success of three CEO in the 1980s. The prototype was Lee Iaccoca, the
Chrysler Corp saviour. Then in the 1990s several CEO issued to the surface of the
business environment such as Bill Gates, General Manager of Microsoft and John
Chamber, General Manager of Cisco. They managed to produce constantly a rising of the
shares prices. Nowadays the situation is quite different because of the global economic
recession which is disastrous for everyone.
Milestone
To find found found
To found, founded
To be cost conscious/ to be fashion conscious
Fill in the following gapped text about the beginning and growth of the Body Shop
Company, one of the best known companies producing and selling cosmetics made of
natural ingredients. Try to infer from the text the culture of this company and discuss about
it.
When she returned, she thought of doing the same thing for women in Britain. She wrote to
several big cosmetics 10) companies but they refused her. Then she found a chemist who agreed
to make these things for her. Next she 11) borrowed 4,000 from a bank and rented a shop in
Brighton, a big city not far from her native town. She called it 12)
In the beginning, she didnt have enough money 13) to run her shop and had only fifteen
products to sell. She was worried because the shop needed to take at least 300 a week and she
found some original 14) ways to attract people to her shop. So, one day she had the idea of
pouring perfume along the street leading to her shop door.
The summer of 1976 was very hot and many people who went to the beach 16) got burnt.
They heard about The Body Shop and bought a lot of creams. Her business took 17) off and in
just a few months she was doing so well that she decided to open another shop. As she didnt
have enough money for her new shop and she couldnt borrow from the bank 18) either, she
associated with a man called Ian McGlinn who gave her the money for the shop and became the
owner of a half of the Body Shop.
One of her friends liked her products so much that she asked Anita if she could 19) open a
Body Shop, too. When this new Body Shop became 20) successful, she looked for other people
who wanted to open a Body Shop. In this way her business grew in size and 21) spread all over
Britain. Soon, the first Body Shop opened outside the UK in Brussels and then in Sweden and
Greece. By 1981 a new Body Shop was opening somewhere in the world 22) every two weeks.
After 1990 the company also conquered 23) Eastern Europe. After a few years her business was
so successful that she became a millionaire and her company got listed on the Stock Exchange.
The Body Shop franchises spread all over Europe and even beyond it.
Anita Roddick was probably so successful because it was also a period when people became
more and more interested in natural 24) cosmetics, realizing the harmful effects of modern
industry and 25) chemical products. But Anita got involved in more than a simple business. She
thought that by promoting natural products she could make the world a 26) better place. She
started working with Greenpeace that was protecting the 27) environment She also worked with
other groups to keep the seas clean, to save rare animals and to help people who were prisoners of
28) consciousness. At the same time she helped poor countries by buying different oils from
plants that she found in the far-off forests.
Many businessmen envied her business and criticized her, saying that her campaigns didnt
really 29) want to save the world but to advertise her products. Nevertheless, her business has
continued to grow and people all over the world keep buying her healthy and 30)quite
.cheap products.
We may keep in mind her words Business is not about financial language. It is just about
buying and selling and making a magical place where buyer and seller come together
Fill in the following gapped text about the beginning and growth of the Body Shop
Company, one of the best known companies producing and selling cosmetics made of
natural ingredients. Try to infer from the text the culture of this company and discuss about
it.
How a small business grew into a big one
The Body Shop is a 1).new company in the cosmetics industry and it was set 2)
by an intelligent and courageous woman, called Anita Roddick. Before the Body
Shop, cosmetics 3)..sold for high prices in expensive bottles and packages and companies
rarely used natural ingredients 4).their products.
Anita grew 5)in Littlehampton that used to be a popular place for English people 6)
.their holidays. Her first experience of business was helping her mother in the busy
kitchen 7)..her caf. She studied to be a teacher and then she decided to travel and she visited
many 8)..places including Tahiti, Australia and South Africa. During her travels Anita saw
how women in many countries 9)..cosmetics from natural products. She was impressed
how good and healthy they were.
When she returned, she thought of doing the same thing for women in Britain. She wrote to
several big cosmetics 10)but they refused her. Then she found a chemist who agreed to
make these things for her. Next she 11).. 4,000 from a bank and rented a shop in
Brighton, a big city not far from her native town. She called it 12)
In the beginning, she didnt have enough money 13)..her shop and had only
fifteen products to sell. She was worried because the shop needed to take at least 300 a week
and she found some original 14).to attract people to her shop. So, one day she had the
idea of pouring perfume along the street leading to her shop door.
The summer of 1976 was very hot and many people who went to the beach 16)burnt.
They heard about The Body Shop and bought a lot of creams. Her business took 17)..and
in just a few months she was doing so well that she decided to open another shop. As she didnt
have enough money for her new shop and she couldnt borrow from the bank 18), she
associated with a man called Ian McGlinn who gave her the money for the shop and became the
owner of a half of the Body Shop.
One of her friends liked her products so much that she asked Anita if she could 19)
a Body Shop, too. When this new Body Shop became 20), she looked for other people
who wanted to open a Body Shop. In this way her business grew in size and 21).all over
Britain. Soon, the first Body Shop opened outside the UK in Brussels and then in Sweden and
Greece. By 1981 a new Body Shop was opening somewhere in the world 22)..two weeks.
After 1990 the company also conquered 23)..Europe. After a few years her business
was so successful that she became a millionaire and her company got listed on the Stock
Exchange. The Body Shop franchises spread all over Europe and even beyond it.
Anita Roddick was probably so successful because it was also a period when people became
more and more interested in natural 24), realizing the harmful effects of modern industry
and 25).products. But Anita got involved in more than a simple business. She thought
that by promoting natural products she could make the world a 26). place. She started
working with Greenpeace that was protecting the 27).. She also worked with other
groups to keep the seas clean, to save rare animals and to help people who were prisoners of 28)
..At the same time she helped poor countries by buying different oils from plants that
she found in the far-off forests.
Many businessmen envied her business and criticized her, saying that her campaigns didnt
really 29)..to save the world but to advertise her products. Nevertheless, her business has
continued to grow and people all over the world keep buying her healthy and 30)
.cheap products.
We may keep in mind her words Business is not about financial language. It is just about
buying and selling and making a magical place where buyer and seller come together
- Different types of legal structures in business
A sole-proprietor (AmE) or sole-trader (BrE) is a one-man business.
A partnership represents a group of people who work together sharing both the profits
and the risks (e.g. a firm of accountants, a firm of lawyers). There are three main types of
partnerships: general partnership, limited partnership, partnership-at-will.
A private company is a company whose shares are owned privately (usually by a small
number of people, e.g. a family business).
A corporation (AmE) or Public Company (BrE) is the largest type of company which is
listed on the Stock Exchange.
The business's policy is a guide that stipulates rules, regulations and objectives,
and may be used in the managers' decision-making. It must be flexible and easily
interpreted and understood by all employees.
The business's strategy refers to the plan of action that it is going to take place, as
well as the resources that it will be using, to achieve its mission and objectives. It is a
guideline to managers, stipulating how they ought to use best the factors of
production to the business's advantage. Initially, it could help the managers decide on
what type of business they want to form
Traditional Interpretation
There are a variety of views about this term. Traditionally, the term "management" refers
to the activities (and often the group of people) involved in the four general functions
listed below. (Note that the four functions recur throughout the organization and are
highly integrated):
1)Planning,
includes identifying goals, objectives, methods, resources needed to carry out methods,
responsibilities and dates for completion of tasks. Examples of planning are strategic
planning, business planning, project planning, staffing planning, advertising and
promotions planning, etc.
2) Organizing resources
to achieve the goals in an optimum fashion. Examples are organizing new departments,
human resources, office and file systems, re-organizing businesses, etc.
3) Leading,
includes setting direction for the organization, groups and individuals and also influences
people to follow that direction. Examples are establishing strategic direction (vision,
values, mission and / or goals) and championing methods of organizational performance
management to pursue that direction.
4) Controlling, or coordinating,
the organization's systems, processes and structures to effectively and efficiently
reach goals and objectives. This includes ongoing collection of feedback, and
monitoring and adjustment of systems, processes and structures accordingly.
Examples include use of financial controls, policies and procedures, performance
management processes, measures to avoid risks etc.
Another common view is that "management" is getting things done through others.
Yet another view, quite apart from the traditional view, asserts that the job of
management is to support employee's efforts to be fully productive
To most employees, the term "management" probably means the group of people
(executives and other managers) who are primarily responsible for making decisions in
the organization. In a nonprofit, the term "management" might refer to all or any of the
activities of the board, executive director and/or program directors
4) Managers roles
To meet the many demands of performing their functions, managers assume multiple
roles. A role is an organized set of behaviors. Henry Mintzberg has identified ten roles
common to the work of all managers. The ten roles are divided into three groups:
interpersonal, informational, and decisional. The informational roles link all managerial
work together. The interpersonal roles ensure that information is provided. The
decisional roles make significant use of the information. The performance of managerial
roles and the requirements of these roles can be played at different times by the same
manager and to different degrees depending on the level and function of management.
The ten roles are described individually, but they form an integrated whole.
To liaise Figurehead/Leader/Liaison
Monitor/Disseminator/Spokesperson
Entrepreneur/ Disturbance Handler/ Resource Allocator/ Negotiator
Memos are short internal business letters that are sent to the staff within the same
company in order to keep them informed concerning a number of issues or to help them
improve their performance. More often than not they are sent by the company officers
and they are a form of top-down communication. A memo (or memorandum) may also
be posted somewhere inside a company so that everybody may become acquainted with a
certain problem. However, memos are losing ground as e-mail becomes more and more
common. Unlike letters, memos do not contain salutations or closings. They are usually
written in block format including "From", "To", "Date" and "Subject" followed by the
message itself. The tone of the letter is professional, but not too formal.
Fill in the missing words in the following Memo. Then complete the first part by yourself
thinking of a suitable subject.
LG ROMANIA
MEMO
TO:
FROM:
DATE:
SUBJECT:
The management department 1) been thinking of a series of actions to 2).taken in
order to reduce the companys expenditure, trying to eliminate 3)..unnecessary costs.
Our plan to 4)the costs includes the following:
To reduce the staffs traveling 5)..by sending them personally only when we
have to settle very important problems. To this 6)we should set up a system where
clients can make purchases from our website and they will be able to receive an 7)
.receipt or statement. By doing this, our employees it will no 8) need
to go and collect the invoices.
In 9)to decrease the number of kilometers driven 10)..the city area and
therefore the quantity of fuel used, we can deliver our merchandise only three days 11)
week and plan very carefully our drivers 12)...
To increase and optimize the use of 13)mail, especially for long and detailed
messages. If we need to get feedback when we communicate, we can also make 14)
..of instant messenger. e.g. Yahoo Messenger. You can also make a PC to 15)
call using SKPE or a similar online facility. In this way we will reduce
considerably the costs of our telephone conversations and we will be very efficient 16)
the same time.
Last but not 17).., our attention should focus 18).cutting down the
warehousing expenses and this could be achieved by installing more video cameras that
will diminish the number of guards.
LG ROMANIA
MEMORANDUM
The management department 1) has been thinking of a series of actions to 2) be taken in order to
reduce the companys expenditure, trying to eliminate 3) all unnecessary costs.
Our plan to 4) reduce the costs includes the following:
To reduce the staffs traveling 5) expenses by sending them personally only when we
have to settle very important problems. To this 6) end we should set up a system where
clients can make purchases from our website and they will be able to receive an 7)
electronic receipt or statement. By doing this, our employees it will no 8) longer need to
go and collect the invoices.
In 9) order to decrease the number of kilometers driven 10) around the city area and
therefore the quantity of fuel used, we can deliver our merchandise only three days 11)
per week and plan very carefully our drivers 12) route.
To increase and optimize the use of 13) electronic mail, especially for long and detailed
messages. If we need to get feedback when we communicate, we can also make 14) use
of instant messenger. e.g. Yahoo Messenger. You can also make a PC to 15) phone call
using SKYPE or a similar online facility. In this way we will reduce considerably the
costs of our telephone conversations and we will be very efficient 16) at the same time.
Last but not 17) least, our attention should focus 18) on cutting down the warehousing
expenses and this could be achieved by installing more video cameras that will diminish
the number of guards.
Taking 19) into account all these measures, I am positive that we will manage to
eliminate some 20) useless expenses and make a better use of our human and material
resources. If we manage to reduce some of our business overhead costs, our company
will be better off.
[Company-name/logo]
MEMORANDUM
From: [name or initials]
To: [name or initials]
Date:
Subject: [short description]
Minutes are compulsory documents for business meetings as they are accurate records of
what has been discussed. As meetings basic documents they state what the meeting was
about, who attended, who ran it, when and where it took place.
. Translate the following minute into English making use of the words and phrases below:
sales department
to increase by
compared to
sales strategy
in charge with
to enjoy a great success
overseas branches
further on
a market research trip
to carry out market research
quarterly production
to assign a task
a
thorough report
to take the necessary steps
to occur
thoroughly
Protocol referitor la intalnirea desfasurata in data de 1 septembrie 2010 la S.C. LG
INTERNATIONAL S.A.
Participani:
Domnul Wo Ho Park
Domnul Stavarache Dumitru
Domnul Matei Mihail
Doamna Florea Ion
1. Situaia vnzrilor de la nceputul anului pn n prezent
Main parts:
Introduction
The Body
Style:
formal, impersonal
should be in keeping : a) respectful and polite, with the target reader
with suggestions for the manager to consider (if written for a senior
manager)
b) a direct style, short statements rather than
suggestions (if written for junior staff)
Introduction
states the purpose of the report
Main Body/Findings
It contains most of the
information which should be
organized into smaller subsections
(with subheadings)
The points presented must flow in
a logical order and be linked with
each other
Conclusion
a summary of the points presented
above with a an emphasis on the
most significant ones
Recommendations
- We strongly recommend that
Suggest what improvements could
- A set of measures should be taken
be made/steps taken
- We have four main recommendations to make
Recommendations can be listed
- I recommend that we take immediate steps as to
and numbered
There are different types of reports. Match the following ones with their explanations:
1. Informative Report
2. Analytical Report
3. Research Report
4. Survey Report
Read this report about the International Fair from Versailles and choose the correct words:
To: Mr. David Gordon
From: John Churchill, Administrative Officer of International Electronics Ltd., Organizer of the
Versailles International Fair
Subject: International Fair, Versailles - France
Introduction:
The 1) purpose/result of this report is to 2) inform/announce on the International Fair which took
place at Versailles-France between 15-22 August 2011.
Location:
The 3) exhibition/display was located in a very beautiful area within 3 kilometers from
the Palace of Versailles which attracted a lot of 4) visitors/guests. We had five big 5)
halls/lounges so there was enough room and the exhibits were not 6) crowded/crammed.
We had air-conditioning and two smaller conference halls.
Hotel lunge/departure lounge/arrival lounge
Participants and products:
It was an opportunity for many important international companies to show their new products,
their performances, innovations and utilities. The majority of electronics companies (LG, Sony,
Hewlett Packard, Compaq and Samsung) proved remarkable improvements as to the quality and
design of their 7) products/production. The LG multinational company came with 8) state-of-the
art/exquisite TV sets and lightning equipment which were very appreciated by the visitors. I think
that LG registered the 9) largest/biggest number of buyers. Our electronic products were also 10)
highly/greatly valued. The visitors constantly tried our equipment to test the quality of our
products. Our products were 11) entirely/completely appreciated and we sold more than 235 3D
ultra slim TV sets.
Organization:
Our representatives had a professional 12) behaviour/conduct and proved to be very 13)
competitive/challenging. It was a good mark for our brand and company. Sadly, we had
also several difficulties that I will mention below.
Firstly, there were some difficulties as to the on-line registration to attend the event. The
computer didnt accept several applications we installed.
Secondly, there were not enough 14) leaflets/brochures to be taken by the visitors
interested in our companies products and we didnt have enough 15) personnel/personal
to talk to them.
Thirdly, many visitors complained about the air conditioning which didnt work 16)
accurately/properly and they avoided to stay too long due to the heat.
All in all, I consider that the event was successful 17) despite/in spite of all these
shortcomings. However, I consider that some measures should be taken for our next event
which will be held in October.
Recommendations:
a new and better computer network must be introduced by our company to avoid
the formal registrations 18) problems/issues.
a larger 19) stand/stall must be reserved for our products and we should send
more representatives. Also, we need to print a larger quantity of leaflets and other
informative materials.
we have to be careful as to the air conditioning 20) although/though in October it
will not be so hot.