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At the end of the lesson, we will come back to the small group table together to
discuss our work.
Plan
Hook: 5 min.
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Student (an advanced reader) will read the excerpt out loud from The Power of
Student Protest [Read the introduction and the section with the subtitle 2012Present: Black Youth Matter.]
POINT: This is similar to playing a sport: before you go out onto the field or
before you begin to write, you huddle with your team so we are going to
huddle together like a team, and look at the skill of citing evidence together.
QUESTION: Why is citing evidence important in argument writing?
QUESTION: So why does evidence make an arguments stronger and more
convincing?
ANSWER: Helps to make a convincing argument, shows the reader that other
people support your argument, as writers we have to write to convince our
reader
POINT: So before I ask you all to answer the question, Why are student
protests successful? I am going to model what it looks like to cite text
evidence.
POINT: I am going to show you what I think about when I cite evidence.
POINT: In class you have already practiced writing text dependent questions
using ACE, so we are going to focus on the C part of this lesson.
[Show sample response on chart paper.]
POINT: Here is my argument. Lets read this together to see what my argument
says.
[Read aloud my claim, evidence, and explanation. See sample page.]
QUESTION: What are the three parts of a strong argument?
ANSWER: Each text dependent answer has three parts: the claim, evidence,
and explanation.
QUESTION: Which part of this argument is the evidence? [Students highlight
the evidence.]
QUESTION: What do you notice about this evidence?
QUESTION: What did the writer include in their evidence?
ANSWER: says who the author is, the title of the text, quotation marks at the
Show students an example of a poor example of citing text evidence and have
them compare and contrast it with the first example.
QUESTION: What is the difference between these two examples of evidence?
ANSWER: poor example doesnt say who the author is, the title of the text, not
a relevant quote
QUESTION/POINT: What do you need to know about a quote before you cite it?
[Skill: (Write on chart paper student responses) What is the name of the
author? What is the title of the article? What type of text is this? Where is the
quote located in the article?]
ANSWER: Using this list give one example of a sentence starter, demonstrating
how I used the above information to properly create a sentence starter for my
quote.
According to [type of text], [the author] [how they say it] [quote].
Example: According to the letter to his mother, Dr. Rush exclaims
[quote].
In the [location of quote] of the [type of text] titled [title of text],
[author] claim [quote]. Example: In the second paragraph of the
article titled, Germs, students argue [quote].
In the [title of text][type of text] [the author] [how they say it]
[quote]. In the Hercules editorial, Mr. Reid, examines [quote].
POINT: So, there are multiple ways to cite a source as long as we know these
pieces for information.
POINT: So now its your turn, to answer the question: Why are student protests
successful?
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POINT: Also, as a heads up, you will be sharing out your writing with each other
when you are done.
POINT: You will have 15 min. to write independently. During this time I will
check in with you.
[Allow students to select a spot to sit.]
Students will read their chosen paragraph quietly to themselves and then
begin to write their responses.
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As students read, I will note which passage they selected write about.
As students write, I will rotate around and ask them questions.
Potential
EARLY FINISHERS: When students finish their writing early, then assign them to
work with a partner to give each other feedback (one glow and one grow).
[This will be staggered as students finish at different times.]
EARLY FINISHERS: Then, give students time to revise their writing based of
peer feedback.
Wrap
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questions to ask students ask they write (taken from Calkins p.226):
Hows writing your evidence going?
Tell me how you wrote this evidence.
What problems have you encountered while writing the evidence?
What are you planning to do next?
If you were going to do more with this detail, what might you do?
Before opening up the time for peer to peer feedback, I will review our
Feedback Talk Moves anchor chart with the students and encourage them to
use these sentence starters during their feedback.
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POINT: Please initial your feedback so I know who is giving the feedback.)
Students will stand and in a gallery walk style, they will walk around the
table, reading their peers work and five post-it note feedback in the form of a
glow and a grow.
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Give the opportunity for a few students to compliment each others work.
QUESTION: What is one thing you loved about someone elses writing?
Too Challenging?
Give the students a more challenge text to cite evidence from.
Give more explicit sentence starters
o According to [type of text], [the author] [how they say it] [quote].
Example: According to the letter to his mother, Dr. Rush exclaims
[quote].
o In the [location of quote] of the [type of text] titled [title of text],
[author] claim [quote]. Example: In the second paragraph of the
article titled, Germs, students argue [quote].
o In the [title of text][type of text] [the author] [how they say it]
[quote]. In the Hercules editorial, Mr. Reid, examines [quote].
Too Easy?
Ask the students to then focus on citing more than one quote to support their
claim.
Also, students can work on the explanation section of their short answer
response, which elaborates on why the student chose a particular quote.
Give the students a more challenging text to cite evidence from.
Assessments
I will check for understanding throughout the lesson in a variety of following ways:
Student participation/discussion
Students written response: why are student protests successful?
Exit Ticket reflection
Student Name:
SKILL: Citing Text Evidence
What do you need to know about a quote before you
cite it?
Student Name:
Question: Why are student protests successful?
ANSWER:
CITE EVIDENCE:
EXTEND:
SAMPLE
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Which
passage
did the
writer
pick to
read
and
write
about?
Is the
quote
relevan
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STUDENT SAMPLE
Student protests have been successful
STUDENT SAMPLE
According
to Sadie
Price-Elliott,
author
of The
large groups
to fight
for something
they
Power
Student Protest, students part of the
believeofin.
#BlackLivesMatter movement protested the
non-indictment of the officer who shot Michael
This quote reveals that a large group of
Brown when more than 1,000 students walked
students wanted teachers, administrators
and community members to know that
they disagreed with the Michael Brown
verdict. By coming together, the students
at Garfield High School gained national
attention and showed the public how they
thought the Michael Brown verdict was
wrong. Indeed, this type of protest was
successful because a great mass of
students agreed to protest in the same
way at the same time for the