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The mass media, including TV, radio and newspapers, have great influence in
shaping people's ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree this
statement? Give reasons for your answer.
The mass media, including TV, radio, newspapers play a very important role in our
modern life. They have change our life very much. In my opinion, it is not execrable to
say that they have a great influence in shaping people's ideas, both for the better and
for the worse.
First, the mass media affec t people's fashion. Simply take a glance at the way you
dress right now, it was probably something you have pic k up over the internet or
magazines. What we are wearing may look similar to what famous actors or singers
have worn recently. And all of the things we often to is to imitate the models appear
every day in fashion shows.
Second, we c annot deny that the mass media have a great contribution to shaping our
ways of thinking. What we watc h on TV, radio: what we read in newspaper and
magazines affect ,without our awareness, a great deal to our thinking. Does what
Obama, Bill Gates say on TV mean anything to you? Does what your music idols wear
affec t your taste of fashion? I definitely believe the answer will be "yes". When
choosing what to wear, most of us have a tendenc y to c hoose what is said or shown
to be fashionable by famous people.
Third, it is obvious that the mass media also play an important role in our attitude to
life. Some people complained that children nowadays tend to be lazier and more violent
and want to c ome in for a share of soc ial's product as much as possible. This is simply
the result of bad programmes shown on T.V all time, incontrollable websites and even
the carelessness of parents. To be free from their children, some people allow the
children to surf the webs, without noticing that there are plenty of disasters on
Internet which the young have little experienc e to deal with. People, especially
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teenagers, always have an idol and they tend to follow what their idols do and say no
matter these things are good or bad.
In conclusion, we have absolutely no control over the media. However, we do have the
final decision on the path we c hoose to take. The extent of the power mass media is
able to influence us only reac hes this far, the rest is really still within our control.
agree or disagree this should read: agree or disagree with this statement?
Does what Obama, Bill Gates say should be: Does what President Obama and Bill Gates
say,
Michelle Fannin
You could say "my life," but if you use "our" you should say "our lives."
In my opinion, it is not execrable to say that they have a great influence in shaping
people's ideas, both for the better and for the worse. ---- thanks for teaching e a new
word! I never knew the word execrable until now!
:-)
The extent to whic h the mass media is able to influenc e us only reac hes this far, the
rest is really still within our control.
Kevin, EssayForum.c om
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About"execrable", I think I used the wrong word.
Can I use the word "exessive" instead, Kevin? I mean "In my opinion, it is not
excessive to say that they have a great influence in shaping people's ideas, both for
the better and for the worse."
Tramhuong
tran
Good question! Well, I had to look up execrable, ha ha! Excessive does work here, even
though it usually means "too muc h." It really works well here.
A simpler way that is not quite as interesting as your idea for using excessive is to say
"exaggerating:
"In my opinion, it would not be exaggerating to say that they have a great ...
Kevin, EssayForum.c om
hmm! not bad for a bigginer ,but i think you only concertrated on the image the media
potrays,check things like attitude of people on c ulture and the new c ulture .
THOSAGO MABORE
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You know? i read it all its good and it has good information. love it so much. good job.
Serkalem
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