ENGLISH

STATISTICS AT A GLANCE

Total Number of students who took the examination

158,816

Highest Marks Obtained

99

Lowest Marks Obtained

14

Mean Marks Obtained

71.30

Percentage of Candidates according to marks obtained

Mark Range

Details
Number of Candidates
Percentage of Candidates
Cumulative Number
Cumulative Percentage

0-20
55
0.03
55
0.03

21-40
3,446
2.17
3,501
2.20

41-60
33,637
21.18
37,138
23.38

61-80
78,315
49.31
115,453
72.70

81-100
43,363
27.30
158,816
100.00

Range of Marks Obtained

49.31

Percentage of Candidates

50.00
45.00
40.00

35.00
27.30

30.00
21.18

25.00
20.00

15.00
10.00

0.03

5.00
0.00

0-20

2.17

21-40

41-60

Marks Obtained

61-80

81-100

ENGLISH LANGUAGE
ENGLISH PAPER 1
I.

ANALYSIS OF PERFORMANCE

Question 1
(Do not spend more than 35 minutes on this question.)
Write a composition (350 - 400 words) on any one of the following:

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(a) Write an original story that begins with the words: He was the funniest boy I had ever
met. He would make everyone laugh.
(b) You had booked a ticket on an early morning train. However, you woke up late and missed it. You
then decided to run to catch a bus to the next station where you hoped to catch up with the train.
Narrate the entire event, how you felt, the effort you made and how you finally caught the train.
What did you learn from this stressful experience?
(c) All Girls or all Boys Schools provide a better learning environment than co-educational schools.
Express your views either for or against the statement.
(d) Describe in detail the view from your bedroom window. Does your room overlook a park?
A busy street? What are the sights, sounds and smells that you would typically see, hear and
experience at different times of the day? When do you most enjoy the view? Early in the morning,
in the evening or late at night?
(e) Study the picture given below. Write a short story or description or an account of what the picture
suggests to you. Your composition may be about the subject of the picture or you may take
suggestions from it; however, your composition must have a clear connection with the picture.

Examiners Comments
(a) A number of candidates attempted this question but a
good many of them failed to understand that when
the opening sentence is given, they must use the
entire sentence without making any alteration in the
syntax or sequence of the sentence. A number of
candidates did not understand that the short story
should have been about a boy whom they knew who
was prankster or one who was fun loving and
comical. There was hardly any evidence of the boys
funny character and more often the story ended with
the boy dying of some incurable illness. Many
candidates merely described the boy with no
reference to any funny episode. In a few cases the
stories were not original and in some cases there was
no link between the opening sentence and the rest of
the story. Story building exercises can be begun as
early as class VI and used as a block building
exercise. This is not only an amusing activity but also
one that initiates creativity and imagination.
(b) This essay had points clearly identified in the
question paper. It was merely a linear description of a
chain of events. Words describing anxiety,
nervousness, haste, relief and joy should form part of
this exercise. However a number of candidates
wasted words on preparations to catch the train,
reasons for delay, causes for the journey and very
little focus on the actual series of mishaps.
(c) A number of candidates attempted this essay but a
large number of them merely generalised the
advantages of coeducational schools versus gender
specific schools. The ability to write in a logical and
clear manner with argument and inference using
examples to support a point of view was singularly
absent. Very few candidates had the ability to present
the case in a cohesive manner. The aspect of a better
learning environment was completely absent and in
many cases the candidates wrote about education for
girls or gender justice.

Suggestions for teachers

To help children write stories give
them situations and ask them to
draw conclusions first orally and
then in writing.
Explain to them the consequences
of plagiarism. Story telling in the
primary classes is a very important
exercise and its importance cannot
be over emphasised.
Using debate as a classroom
exercise will enhance logical
reasoning. Ensure that every child
should participate in these sessions.
Picture writing and picture talk
form an essential part of primary
and pre-primary education. It is
recommended that a junior school
level only picture composition is to
be given before other forms are
taught.
Students must be taught to read the
question properly and understand
what is being asked. All parts of the
question must be addressed.
The importance of correct listening
and speaking can never be over
emphasised unless the natural order
of language learning is followed
there will always be interferences
from the mother tongue.
Students must be given an
opportunity to express themselves
in all the five genres.
Teaching Composition writing is a
long and arduous process and there
are no short cuts. Teachers should
work in a coordinated and graded
link to establish this.

Unless debates are taken seriously in schools and students encouraged to express their points of
view, this skill will soon become a dying art. Adequate debating almost on a weekly basis is
required to enable students to think and argue creatively and be bold enough to dissent popular
opinion.
(d) This is a descriptive essay and candidates are expected to describe a scene from a window through
different parts of the day and in the closing lines to say which part of the day they liked best. A
large number of candidates opted for this and many children living in rural, semi-rural, moffusil
areas or children living in hill stations and sea side towns wrote feelingly on this topic. Some
candidates did not address which part of the day they liked best. A number of candidates lifted
from Bazaars of Hyderabad. The Last Leaf or The Open Window.
(e) Although the picture was attractive and thought provoking a number of candidates merely
described the elements of the picture. A good number rewrote the 2014 comprehension passage
from the Life of Pi or The Tiger in the Tunnel. There were some instances of mistaking the Tiger
for either a lion or panther. Candidates must be taught to look at the picture carefully before
attempting to answer.
MARKING SCHEME
Question 1.
a) The story must be original. It must begin with the given lines in their entirety. The story should
deal with the boys comical nature, his ability to make others laugh and then how things change or
do not change. The story should begin on a light hearted note- it may change later. The character
development of the boy is important, if not original.
b) A first person account therefore it should be written from the experience of the child. The tension
of waking late- the anxiety- putting things together-packing- running to the station- the shock and
disappointment at seeing the train leaving the platform-the whole cycle of stress-catching the busrunning to the next station-running on the platform-success or disappointment lesson learnt.
c) An argumentative essay-views for or against the motion are to be accepted. Credit is to be given for
a cohesive, well-constructed, logical argument and ideas and reasoning based on personal
experience.
d) This is a descriptive essay-candidate must in vivid sensory detail the view from his /her any
window. The description must include details of typical sights sounds and smells that he/she sees,
hears and experiences. The description must differentiate between morning and evening/ night
experiences and clearly state the time of Question 2 day preferred by the candidate. [words like
park busy street are merely pointers and need not be a part of the description- the candidate
may describe ANY view.]
e) Accept a wide interpretation-an essay on Project tiger/wild life sanctuaries/tiger in a zoo etc. Any
relevant ideas taken from the picture should be accepted. No penalty if tiger is called
leopard/panther or lion...accept any member of cat family! Any other creature. A mere itemized
description of the picture is to be penalized.

Question 2
(Do not spend more than 20 minutes on this question.)
Select one of the following:
(a)

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Break time (recess) at your school is only for a duration of fifteen minutes. Write a letter
to your Principal requesting an extension in the break-time from fifteen minutes to half
an hour. Give reasons for your request and explain in what way an extended break
would make a difference to you as a student.

(b)

You are to be awarded a Special Prize at the Annual Prize Day ceremony of your school.
Write a letter to a lady relative giving her the news. Be sure to include details of the prize
that you are to receive and tell her why you have been chosen for this honour

Examiners Comments
FORMAL LETTER:
a)

Format: - The Format was largely incorrect. Most

candidates have not mastered the correct format and
have put wrong salutations or subscriptions. Many
candidates spelt principal incorrectly. This was
unfortunate as the word was in the question paper.

b) Content: - Candidates were unable to address two

points separately and although they asked for the
extension of the recess they did not say how it
would benefit them.
c)

Suggestions for teachers

Letter writing to be practiced from
class V onwards.
An oral discussion on the content of
the letter before writing would help.
Teach students to identify the points
that have to be addressed in the
question paper.

Expression: - Candidates must be taught to write in paragraphs using the same standards as for
composition writing.

INFORMAL LETTER:
a)

Format: - Incorrect. Many did not understand the term lady relative and began the salutation as
dear lady relative.

b) Content: - A majority of candidates failed to name the award and merely repeated the term
special prize. There was no attention paid to the different parts of the question.
c) Expression: - Candidates did not address the points in separate paragraphs. No attention was paid
to clarity of expression and good vocabulary.

MARKING SCHEME
Question 2.
Formal Letter:
From address (home/school)
Date
To address ONLY Principal, [spelling counts] + School address
Salutation [ Sir/ Madam/ Dear.../ Rev. Mother etc
Subscription. Yours faithfully
Name + surname/initial
Informal letter:
Address (Home/school)
Date
Salutation- Dear/My dear [-name]/female relative
Subscription- Yours lovingly, /Yours affectionately, /Your loving,/affectionate...
First name
Ensure that the format is correct and that the following points of each letter are clearly brought
out:
a) Formal Letter (format, content, expression)
1. Why? [Reason for request eg. Not enough time to visit library/ school canteen/ play/ eat]
2. How? [itll make a difference-eg. Students feel refreshed / ready for next half / less rushed]
b) Informal Letter (format, content, expression)
(i) Name the prize [eg. Attendance / Maths Prize/ Courage or Bravery Prize]
(ii) Why is awarded? [to reward regular attendance/ to honour the top scorer in maths / for
having displayed courage / for doing an act of valour]
(iii) What is the award?- details of award- eg a trophy/ a book/ a cash prize/ cheque, etc.

Question 3
Read the following passage carefully and answer the questions that follow:
Lying in bed, Swami realized with a shudder that it was Monday morning. It
looked as though only a moment ago it had been the last period on Friday;
already Monday was here. He hoped that an earthquake would reduce the
school building to dust, but that good building --- Albert Mission School had
withstood similar prayers for over a hundred years now. At nine oclock

Swaminathan wailed, I have a headache. His mother said, Why dont you
go to school in a bullock cart?
So that I may be completely dead at the other end? Have you any idea what it
means to be jolted in a cart?
Have you any important lessons today?

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Important! Bah! That geography teacher has been teaching the same lesson
for over a year now. And we have arithmetic, which means for a whole period
we are going to be beaten by the teacher.. Important lessons!
And Mother generously suggested that Swami might stay at home.
At 9:30, when he ought to have been lining up in the school prayer hall, Swami

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was lying on the bench in Mothers room. Father asked him, Have you no
school today?
Headache, Swami replied.
Nonsense! Dress up and go.
Headache.

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Loaf about less on Sundays and you will be without a headache on Monday.
Swami knew how stubborn his father could be and changed his tactics. I cant
go so late to class.
I agree, but youll have to; it is your own fault. You should have asked me
before deciding to stay away.

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What will the teacher think if I go so late?

Tell him you had a headache and so are late.
He will beat me if I say so.
Will he? Let us see. What is his name?

Mr. Samuel.

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Does he beat the boys?

He is very violent, especially with boys who come late. Some days ago a boy
was made to stay on his knees for a whole period in a corner of the class
because he came late, and that after getting six cuts from the cane and having
his ears twisted. I wouldnt like to go late to Mr. Samuels class.

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If he is so violent, why not tell your headmaster about it?

They say that even the headmaster is afraid of him. He is such a violent man.
And then Swami gave a lurid account of Samuels violence; how when he
started caning he would not stop till he saw blood on the boys hand, which he
made the boy press to his forehead like a vermillion marking. Swami hoped

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that his father would be made to see that he couldnt go to his class late. But
Fathers behaviour took an unexpected turn. He became excited. What do
these people mean by beating our children? They must be driven out of service.
I will see
The result was he proposed to send Swami late to his class as a kind of

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challenge. He was also going to send a letter with Swami to the headmaster.
No amount of protest from Swami was of any avail: Swami had to go to
school.
By the time he was ready Father had composed a long letter to the headmaster,
put in an envelope and sealed it.

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What have you written, Father? Swaminathan asked apprehensively.

Nothing for you. Give it to your headmaster and go to your class.
Swamis father did not know the truth, that actually Mr. Samuel was a very
kind and gentle man.
(a) Give the meaning of each of the following words as used in the passage.
One word answers or short phrases will be accepted.
(i)

jolted (line 8)

(ii)

stubborn (line 21)

(iii)

avail (line 45)

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(b)

Answer the following questions briefly in your own words:

(i)
(ii)
(iii)
(iv)
(v)
(vi)

(c)

(i)
(ii)

What did Swami wish for on a Monday morning? Why was his
wish unlikely to be answered?
Which sentence tells us that Swamis father was completely
unsympathetic to his sons headache?
In what way was Swamis Mothers response different from his
fathers?
Why did Swami give a colourful account of Mr. Samuel to his
father?
In what way did Fathers behaviour take an unexpected turn?
What was Swami finally ordered to do by his father?

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In not more than 60 words describe how Swami tries to prove that
Mr. Samuel is a violent man.

[8]

Give a title to your summary in 3(c). Give a reason to justify your choice.

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Examiners Comments
(a)

(b)

(c)

Very few candidates wrote all three words correctly,

some candidates wrote more than one answer with at
least one alternative used wrongly and some used the
words in sentences of their own without bringing out
their meaning. The meaning of all these words could
have been gleaned from the context but the
candidates were unable to do this correctly.
Many candidates merely copied large sections of the
passage and seemed unable to answer specifically.
Candidates seemed to have trouble with Why
questions. 1, 2 & 5.
Several candidates merely rewrote the paragraph and
no attention was paid to the word limit, neither a grid
used clearly. A reflection of the fact that there is no
practice given to this question in the classroom.
The title for the prcis is very often based on the
entire passage with no reference to the 60 word
summary. In many cases candidates have justified
their choice of title by simply writing because I
think this is the most suitable title!

Suggestions for teachers

The use of class and school libraries
must be encouraged with children
being taught to infer word meanings
from the context. Students must be
told that the meaning can easily be
deduced from the passage.
Students must be taught the use of
dictionary as an important tool in
language learning, it can be used in
games to encourage students to get
used to it.
Drill work in prcis writing is
essential. Unless adequate practice
is given from class 8 upwards
students will not be able to draw
sequential order from multiple
stimulus that ones senses are
bombarded with.
Assign summary writing tasks
based on passages from the
literature texts and call out the
answers in class.
After an exercise on summary
writing is done, discuss possible
titles for it and encourage them to
explain why a title may or may not
be suitable.

MARKING SCHEME
Question 3.
a)
(i) Jolted: shaken up badly, jerked, rattled, jarred, jounced, bounced, lurched, [tossed/ bumped/
thrown/ knocked + about. DO NOT accept these words without about]
(ii) Stubborn: obstinate, unbending, unyielding, adamant, rigid, inflexible, obdurate, mulish,
pig-headed
(iii) Avail: use, purpose, benefit, advantage
b)
(i) That an earthquake would reduce the school building to dust + that the building had
withstood similar prayers for over a hundred years now
(ii) His father said; Loaf about less on Sundays and you will be without a headache on
Mondays [Must quote exactly. NO MARKS for paraphrasing. Marks deducted if only a
part of the sentence is quoted.] No marks for more than one sentence.
(iii) Mother let him rest at home/ believed him/ was kind/ generous/ sympathetic +Father was
not (contrast between mothers response and fathers must be evident.)
(iv) Swami did not want to go to school. + He hoped that his father would believe/ feel sorry for
him/ be frightened for him.
(v) Father became excited/angry (with Samuel) + He wrote a letter.
(vi) Give a letter to Headmaster + go to class
c)
(i) Swami tries to prove that Samuel was a violent man by saying:
1. that he often beat the boys ( especially late-comers)
2. a boy had been made to kneel for a whole period
3. gave him six cuts
4. twisted his ears
5. Even Headmaster was afraid of him
6. would not stop caning until the boy began to bleed
7. would make the boy press bloodied hand to forehead like a vermillion mark.
[Accept ANY SIX of the points listed above]
(ii) Accept any apt title - suited to the summary NOT to the whole passage. [Tile MUST NOT
refer to Headmaster/ Swamis father/ Swamis friends]
Reason must justify choice of title [not to lift reason from the question].

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Question 4
(a)

Fill in each of the numbered blanks with the correct form of the word given in brackets.
Do not copy the passage, but write in correct serial order the word or phrase appropriate
to the blank space.
Example:
(0)

One morning I (0) (see) the python curled up on the dressing table.
Answer: saw.

It was (1) (gaze) at its own reflection in the mirror. I (2) (go) for grandfather but
by the time we (3) (return) to the room, the python (4) (move) on. He was seen in
the garden and once the cook saw him (5) (crawl) up the ladder to the roof. Then we
(6) (find) him on the dressing table again (7) (admire) himself in the mirror.
Hes trying to look better for Aunt Mabel I said. I (8) (regret) this remark
immediately because grandmother overheard and held up my pocket money for the rest
of the week!
(b)

Fill in the blanks with an appropriate word:

(i)

He found the key just _______ the front door.

(ii)

I could not accompany my cousin _______ the trip because I had fever.

(iii) The noise prevented us _______ sleeping.

(iv) The young man put the flute _______ his lips and began to play.
(v)

Ashok leaned ________ the wall tiredly.

(vi) The paper dart went gliding ______ the air.

(vii) The cyclist rode quickly ______ the path.
(viii) The young child carried the heavy bucket ______ the stairs.
(c)

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Join the following sentences to make one complete sentence without using and, but or
so.
(i)

He has learnt to cycle. He has yet to learn to swim.

(ii) The child helped her mother to make breakfast. She washed the tomatoes.
(iii) They bought a new car. They can travel long distances.
(iv) Sunita opened her purse. She found the money missing.

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(d)

Re-write the following sentences according to the instructions given after each. Make
other changes that may be necessary, but do not change the meaning of each sentence.
(i)

Arun gave Ramesh some excellent advice.

(Begin: Ramesh was)

(ii)

As soon as Sania sat down to study, the lights went off.

(Begin: No sooner ...............................................................)

(iii)

Has Alia written to you?

(Begin: Have you )

(iv)

As soon as the function got over. The crowd dispersed.

(Begin: Hardly had ........................................................)

(v)

The monsoon is the best season in our country.

(Rewrite using good)

(vi)

Harish was so tired that he could not keep his eyes open.
(Begin: Harish was too .)

(vii)

Father said to Sunil, I can help you with your homework.

(Begin: Father told Sunil...............................................)

(viii)

Naresh goes to a school which has over a thousand students.

(Begin: There.............................................)

Examiners Comments
a) Candidates made several errors of tense, constant
use of present continuous tense. A number of
candidates made spelling mistakes.
b) The correct use of prepositions is an indicator of
correct listening in early years. Most candidates
seemed to be guessing and sub-sections (i), (iv) and
(viii) is where many made mistakes.
c) Candidates were unable to use gerund and infinitive
correctly. Very often candidates are unable to adhere
to the meaning of the given sentence.
d) Sub-question (ii), (v) and (viii) were areas where the
candidates committed errors.

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Suggestions for teachers

Drill work is of paramount
importance in the teaching of
grammar.
Regular classes in conversational
English would train the ear to
listen to what sounds correct.
Grammar must be taught structure
wise and adequate practice and
reinforcement to be given before
moving on to the next structure.
Worksheets and grammar games
must be used to make learning
enjoyable.
Grammar has a concentric syllabus
and students must move over the
same structure from easy beginnings
to more complex forms.

MARKING SCHEME
Question 4
(a)
1. gazing

2. went

3. returned

4. had moved

5. crawl/ crawling

6. found

7. admiring

8. regretted

(b)
(i) near/ by/ beside/outside/ behind
(v) against

(ii) on

(iii) from

(vi) through (vii) down/along/ across

(iv) to

(viii) up/ down

(c)
1. Although he has learnt to cycle/cycling, he has not yet learned to swim/swimming. [Though
he./Inspite of his having learnt./ Despite having learnt)
2. The child helped her mother to make breakfast by washing the tomatoes.
3. Since they have bought a new car, they can travel long distances. [ as/ because/ Now that
they have bought ]
4. Sunita opened her purse to find the money missing/When Sunita opened her purse, she found
the money missing/ On opening her purse, Sunita found her money missing [ Do not accept missing money/As soon as./No sooner than../Hardly.when]]
(d)
1. Ramesh was given some excellent advice by Arun.
2. No sooner did/had Sania sit/sat down to study, than the lights went off.
3. Have you heard from Alia?/ Have you had/ received a letter from Alia?
4. Hardly had the function got over when the crowd dispersed.
5. No other season in our country is as (so) good as the monsoon.
6. Harish was too tired to keep his eyes open.
7. Father told Sunil that he could help him with his home work.
8. There are more than/ over a thousand students in Nareshs school/ the school that Naresh goes
to/ attends.
For Questions 4C and 4D meaning of the sentence must not change.

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Topics found confusing / difficult:

Candidates were unable to deal with short story. The qualification of what is humorous varied from
the vague to the eccentric.

The candidates wasted too many words on the reasons for missing the train rather than on the series
of mishaps which should have followed missing the train.

The format of the letter continues to be unclear to the candidates and many children would
otherwise have done well failed to score in question 2.

Poor reading is reflected in question 3 where candidates are unable to comprehend unseen passages
without a teachers explanation.

Grammar, which should have been a high scoring area works the other way around and candidates
lose marks because of it.

Suggestions for Students:

Learn to write in your own words and for this listen to well Spoken English when you can. The
television is full of good educative and enjoyable programmes.

Speak in English, avoid the temptation of thinking in your mother tongue and then translating into
English.

Practise the format of letter, underline the part of the question that you are supposed to address.

Read for pleasure.

Be a part of classroom debates and discussions.

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