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Joshua McNatt
Creative Writing Final
I'm not sure, my lord. I... The samurai's eyes narrowed and he frowned. The others are
performing. Putting on a show. He's just killing. Trying to be the last one standing.
Mm. Perhaps, with some direction and discipline, he could make a valuable servant to our
house. What do you think?
The samurai frowned. I'm not sure if I could make him any more than a killer, but perhaps the
Sun Temple could. I believe the master there is accepting students again.
The noble lord nodded, thinking. Let's go find out who owns him.
Another pained cry was followed by the crowd cheering and the scream of a trumpet.
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He was escorted by two armed guards, shackles on his ankles and wrists. He'd been cleaned up
in the hour since the fight, made presentable. Walking down the corridor, the boy was silent, following
the guard in front of him until they arrived in the well-furnished room of the arena's owner.
Ah, yes, there he is. Come over here, boy. The fighter did as he was told, walking over to
where the large man spoke with his guests. This is Lord Jinin of House Varja. He saw your fight
today.
Looking at the two blue-robed men, then back at the arena's owner, the boy frowned.
So?
So they've decided to purchase you.
Oh.
What is your name? This time it was the older nobleman that spoke, giving a polite smile
toward the slave.
Shiryou, sir. He shifted nervously.
Well, Shiryou, I would like to give you an opportunity. As it stands, a recent disaster has left
my house's guard somewhat short-staffed. You were very efficient in the fight today...
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I'm efficient in every fight. That's how you live. The arena's owner tensed at the interruption.
People had been killed for less insult before.
...yes. With some education and direction, you could be a valuable member of House Varja.
Thank you, sir.
Soon the boy and the samurai waited outside as payment was arranged, then Lord Jinin joined
them. Are you ready to go? Do you have everything?
Shiryou looked a little confused at the notion he might have things to take with him, then he
smiled. One moment. Disappearing down the side of the fighting pit, he climbed back out after a few
minutes with a stained, crude knife carved from a large wooden splinter. Now I'm ready.
The two noblemen exchanged a glance, then headed with him back to the caravan.
The day we found you in that town I predicted you'd end up here. The samurai looked as
though he had aged a decade in the few years since they had met, the ravages of an affliction that had
never quite left him be. I'm interested in seeing what you pick up here. Ah! Master Tenken. Thank you
for accepting our request.
An older man was waiting for them at the other end of the courtyard. Dressed in a simple white
set of clothes, he and the samurai bowed to one another as they neared, and he looked to the young
man.
So, this is the student? What is your name?
Shiryou, master.
And do you know why you have been brought to me?
Shiryou looked around. To learn swordplay, master.
The monk grinned. Play is for children, young man. What I teach is art.
Suiton patted his companion's shoulder. I'll stop by in a few days to see how you're doing and
bring you any news. Try not to make a fool of yourself.
Master Tenken bowed again to the samurai before gesturing toward the inside of the temple.
Come now, let me show you to your room. As they walked together through the halls, Shiryou looked
around at the painted architecture, finally pausing before a golden sword enshrined in a side passage.
What's this?
Tenken turned to look at him, then followed his gaze to the sword. Ah. That is Hinoiri. It
belonged to the founder of this temple.
Why is it here?
Tenken, looked between the boy and the sword for a time, then took a deep breath. Hinoiri's
master was a samurai named Sangeki Motoi. He was a veteran of the wars fought to free this land from
the tyranny of the old Yama Kings, the demons that ruled over the world in the old days. He founded
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the Temple of the Sun, as did many of those responsible for banishing the Yama Kings, in order to
ensure they never returned. It was Sangeki who defeated the last of them, destroying its earthly form.
But the victory was short-lived. The Yama King's spirit took refuge within Sangeki. It nestled
in his chest, and as the weeks passed it began to take over Sangeki's heart, turning the peaceful monk to
acts of violence and debauchery. When he realized what had happened, Sangeki took up Hinoiri one
last time, using the golden blade to cut out his own heart.
Shiryou frowned, eyes transfixed on the weapon. That was stupid of him. Who would cut out
their own heart?
Tenken sighed, tugging on the boy's shirt to get his attention. It's not for us to say if it was right
or wrong. Would you have the courage to carve evil from your breast?
The boy frowned, his gaze lingering on the enshrined blade one last time before he followed the
monk deeper into the temple.
even further from his teacher, trying to think of a way around such a defense. Finally, his shoulders
slumped and he lowered his weapon.
I don't...there's no... His expression changed to one of curiosity. How do you do that?
Tenken pushed the sword the last inch into the scabbard, locking it. Giving a dismissing nod to
the samurai, he started going back into the temple. With a quick bow and a wave to Suiton, the boy
followed.
*****
After his three years in the temple, the room they sat in was a familiar one. It was the place he
came to meditate every day. He'd learned old stories here, been taught languages by a Tengu, one of the
humanoid birds whose settlements dotted the forested regions between the temple and the mountain
range to the north. Now, he sat quietly as his teacher gathered his thoughts.
Do you know what the most important part of a duel is, Shiryou?
I don't think so.
The old monk began painting, the thin brush gliding over the large paper in front of him in
shapes Shiryou couldn't see from where he sat.
The most important part of a duel is the deciding blow. It may come at any time, and will
rarely be expected. At that point, the fight might continue, but this is wasted energy. The victor has
been decided, and everything following this is his to determine.
I...think I understand.
The monk continued his painting in silence for a time.
But what about larger battles? It can't be that simple in such a melee... The painting stopped,
and the monk blew on the ink for a moment before turning the work to show him. Several warriors
battled, a sea of weapons and bodies between two men on horseback.
Tell me what you see.
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Shiryou studied the image for a long time before finally speaking up.
A fight? Two warlords and their armies?
That is correct, but not what I meant.
Shiryou frowned and studied the picture for a moment gain.
They're all having little battles. Each person is fighting his own little duel before moving on to
the next one.
Tenken nodded.
Even the two warlords are locked in a duel. Their armies are their weapons. Do you
understand?
The boy nodded. Yes, I think so. What does this have to do with that think you did in the
courtyard, though?
Which of these two warlords is going to be victorious?
Shiryou frowned when it seemed his question was ignored and turned his attention to the image.
The red one, I suppose.
Why?
I don't understand what this has to do with anything...
Humor me.
Shiryou sighed and studied the image for a while.
His forces have more direction. The warlord painted in green is throwing his army at the his
enemy to overwhelm him, and the people in red seem to have a plan.
Explain.
Well... He was hesitant. The green warlord has his warriors scattered everywhere, with no
direction but their own. The red's conscripted soldiers...at least I think that's what the ones with farming
attire and spears are...are being used as buffers while the samurai move toward the enemy commander.
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and pieces of broken rock scattered around where he was. Clean up in here, then take the night to
reflect on today. Tomorrow we'll start working on teaching you to use your sword in this manner and
catch the sun with your blade.
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Chapter 4: Homecoming
Shiryou looked about him as they made their way through the village, taking in the sights and
trying to quell his nervousness. It had been almost eight years since he was home, and so much had
changed. Old shops he thought he could recall were gone, replaced by alien sights and smells. The
horse beneath him knew the way, following Tenken's mount ahead of it and picking its way up the
cobblestone streets toward the manor. Even the estate itself had changed, with new banners and
trophies lining the entryway.
The people waiting at the grand hall's entrance had changed most of all. Lord Jinin was now
grey-haired, with the stature of a man who spent more time in a chair than the proud warrior that he had
met when he was just a child fighting desperately to survive. Suiton was older, too, but it seemed less
noticeable. Shiryou decided it must have been due to his frequent visits to the temple.
He rode in silence, finally dismounting the animal and approaching at the left of his teacher, a
few steps behind him. Moving to stand before his lord, he lowered himself to his knees and bowed his
head, eyes closed and sword across his legs, parallel to the stone beneath him.
You have a stubborn young warrior here, Lord Jinin. I think I got through to him, though. The
monk grinned, bowing to the nobleman.
Thank you, old friend. I am eager to see what you have molded him into. Looking toward his
right-hand man, Jinin smiled. What do you think, Suiton? Would you like to see what our investment
has grown to become? The samurai nodded.
Looking back to the young warrior, Jinin stepped forward and offered a hand. Come, now. This
is your day, it should not be spent on your knees. Shiryou took the hand and rose, bowing to his
master.
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Jinin and Tenken spoke briefly for a time, then the two nobleman returned to the manor.
You have come a long way since you were first brought to the temple, child. Tenken patted
him on the shoulder. But don't take that to mean you have nothing left to learn. As Shiryou put away
his weapon, the old monk moved to sit on the exposed root of a large tree at the edge of the field.
Even this ancient warden has room left to grow.
I understand, master. The younger man sat on another root, looking out over the village below
them.
I have spoken to Lord Jinin. One day, you may be called upon to take my place at the temple.
He has accepted such an event. Be that as it is, I would like it if you resumed your duties there from
time to time, so that the transition will be easier. Shiryou looked startled, but nodded.
Of course, master. It would be an honor.
You are welcomed to return at any time your duties allow. Until then, child. Rising, the old
monk made his way across the field back toward the house to retrieve the horses.
Shiryou remained where he sat for a few moments, watching the sun set before finally returning
home.
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Oh, come now, Tousen, he's just having a look. We won't let him break anything. Higeki
Akodo grinned, looking toward Shiryou and retrieving a flute from his bag.
Another grand ballad to your legend, Higeki?
Of course! This one will tell the story of the battle against the wild beast the gods unleashed
upon the poor village of Tomaru last spring, and how I struck the beast down while bereft of my
weapon.
You mean that time a wild boar got loose in the market square and broke a fruit stand? The one
you killed with a farmer's shovel?
Bah, you're a terrible storyteller. All legends have a little embellishment. It's what makes them,
you know, entertaining.
Shiryou rolled his eyes, then adjusted some of the silks to make a cushion and laid back.
Moving his sun hat to cover his face, he closed his eyes, mumbling barely audibly through the straw.
I'm gonna take a nap, then. Wake me up if you need someone to explain away the screams of
the damned soon to follow us down the road.
Ha ha, your wit is as sharp as your weapon. Higeki raised the flute to his lips and started
playing, the melody echoing out through the forest, as if inviting the birds to join in.
Then, the cart stopped.
Shiryou frowned, setting aside his hat and turning to look at the source of their delay. A log had
been placed across the road, stripped of its branches and leaves.
Bandits. The two men grabbed their weapons, turning to look about. It wasn't long before the
culprits appeared.
Hello, gentlemen. It's a good thing we caught up to you in time. Would be a shame if you had
made it any further without paying the tax. Four men in light to heavy armor made to surround the
cart, armed with swords and one carrying a large studded club.
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The transaction finished and the log moved to the side of the road, the two warriors settled back
into their place in the back of the cart. Higeki stared at Shiryou as the younger man waved farewell to
the bandits.
We don't have any kind of air spirit like that. What kind of rumors have you been spreading?
Shiryou grinned and shrugged.
Maybe I'm not such a bad storyteller after all.
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Chapter 6: Tragedy
It was late in the night when Shiryou returned to the estate from his latest visit to the Sun
Temple. He found the place full of activity, people rushing about frantically. Making his way through
the chaos, he found Suiton making his way toward the courtyard.
What's going on?
Suiton jumped, turning to look at him. Distress was painted across his face and his entire body
was tense. Voice choked a little, he tried to speak.
It's Lord Jinin. He's dead. He was struck suddenly ill in the night. Higeki found him while on
guard.
Shiryou's blood ran cold, and he put a hand on the wall to steady himself. Staring at the floor, he
sighed.
How can he be dead? He...I mean, he was fine this afternoon. Was he poisoned?
I can't imagine anyone got past Higeki.
I...yeah, that's true... Shiryou sighed and closed his eyes, still reeling from this turn of events.
What can I do?
Get some rest. We've got it covered. News will have to go out. There's going to be a power
vacuum, so for the next few weeks we need to keep everything from getting out of hand. Go get some
rest, we've got a lot of work ahead of us.
Shiryou nodded, then walked to his quarters in a daze.
*****
The next few weeks passed in a haze. Everyone that was available was called back to the estate,
and within a week the service had been performed. There was some debate among the house about who
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would succeed Jinin as head, and within a few days it had been decided: Jinin's daughter was to marry
the head of the Akodo family, who would then take over as the new head of house Varja. The ceremony
was short, the entire affair merely put on for show. Shiryou spent more and more time at the Sun
Temple as the arrangements were made, and once the new lord was settled in the Shiryou's assignments
began taking him away from the estate for long periods of time.
It wasn't until a year later that he started to notice something was off.
At first he thought that it was his grief and the shock that made him mistrustful of the new lord
and the guests he frequently entertained at the manor. Most of them seemed to come and go at odd
hours, as though trying to escape notice. Still, he let it go. Then rumors began persisting that some of
the warriors were being sent to waylay travelers and perform assassinations. The last straw was the
overseas assignment he received.
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Chapter 7: Revelation
Shiryou was out on the weather deck, leaning against the railing and watching the sunrise over
the ocean. They'd left port a few days before, and he was eager to return home to the temple. There was
something about transporting live cargo that bothered him, and the captain's insistence that he go into
town while the animals were loaded on board bothered him even more.
Pretty, ain't it? He turned his head to see one of the deckhands standing nearby, taking a break
from his mopping.
Yes. There's not so many colors here, though. Back home it shines in an array of shades.
The sailor shrugged. Yeah, well, once we get our ship tied up in port you can be on your way.
Cap'n'll send your boss our praise. I mean, I never seen one 'a them water things before leave a ship
alone. Then again, ne'er thought to try talk'n to it, neither.
It just wanted us to acknowledge that we were passing through its domain. Looking toward
the trap door, he shifted his weight. No one's fed them this morning. Any reason you're not?
The deck hand shook his head.
Naw, gonna wait 'til someone else takes care of it. I hate lissenin' to 'em. Dunno why they
askin' me to let 'em go, s'not my place.
The warrior's stance shifted.
Excuse me? The sheep talk to you? He'd heard of shamans that could speak to animals, but
somehow he doubted this deckhand had the capacity for it.
Sheep? Ah, naw I'm not one a them crazies what thinks they hear animals. But I mean,
people're always sore about being chained up in a ship, 'specially if they're goin' to work in a mine.
Now Shiryou was on his feet, a hand around the surprised deckhand's throat.
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Tenken nodded slowly, helping Shiryou to his feet. I have duties I must attend, it's almost
sunset. Go to the shrine, ask Sangeki for guidance. Reflect. Meditate. Pray. Do whatever you must. I'll
join you shortly.
Shiryou nodded, sighing and going to the shrine. Kneeling before the sword and armor there.
Eyes closed, head bowed, he cleared his mind, reflecting on everything he had learned, the last decade
and a half of teachings. Looking toward the armor, he sighed.
What would you do? Were you in my place, what answers would you see that are hidden from
me...? A thought occurred to him, half-forgotten and buried in over ten years of memories. Would you
have the courage to carve out your own heart? His attention shifted from the armor, and he saw his
answer.
It was over an hour later that Tenken finished his duties, walking into the shrine room and
stopping in his tracks, finding it empty of more than just his student.
No, child, what have you done...?
Shiryou spurred his horse faster, making for the estate overlooking the village that was now as
alien to him as it had been the first day of his new life. The young monk would do anything to protect
the legacy of the man and family that had given him that life. He steeled himself for what he needed to
do, the act that would make him a traitor. An exile, never to return home. He thought about the future
he was about to abandon, the life he was about to take, and turned his head to look at the weapon at his
side.
The fires of the setting sun shone off the golden blade.
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