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Children around
responsibilities.
the
world
have
rights
and
Teachers:
Susan Kernaghan, Mark Adam, Lynton De Kock,
Winnie Beuane
Grade: 4
STUDENT QUESTIONS
Of Human Rights
Persuasive writing
W.4.1. Write opinion pieces on topics or texts, supporting a point of view
with reasons and information.
W.4.1a. Introduce a topic or text clearly, state an opinion, and create an
organizational structure in which related ideas are grouped to support the
writers purpose.
W.4.1b. Provide reasons that are supported by facts and details.
W.4.1c. Link opinion and reasons using words and phrases (e.g., for
instance, in order to, in addition).
W.4.1d. Provide a concluding statement or section related to the opinion
presented.
Learning Purpose
KNOWLEDGE
Humanities
Learners will be able to identify
the rights and responsibilities of
citizens
SKILLS
English Language Arts
Learners will be able to write
opinion pieces with reasons and
information to support a point of
view.
ADDITIONAL ASSESSMENTS
Pre-Assessment
'I see... I think... I wonder...'
A large selection of photographs of children is
presented to the students representing children
around the world, from different economic and social
backgrounds
etc.
Students
generate
3
statements/questions starting with these phrases
making connections with Human Rights.
Assessment
Formative
In the see step, after students have written down
the obvious details encourage them to look again for
less obvious features.
In the think step ask What makes you say that? to
extend students thinking on the observations they
have made in the see step. Observe if justifications
are firmly rooted in the image, or if they based more
on personal opinion.
In the wonder step, are students able to formulate
broader questions that connect the object in question
with the bigger picture? Or are they just asking for
some specific facts about the object itself. There is
nothing wrong with asking specific factual questions,
but students need to also go beyond this.
Diagnostic
Are students able to extend their thinking beyond
describing what they can see. Are they able to
identify the product, the argument, the supporting
facts and the persuasive language techniques.
get him an iguana? Looking for students to identify that Alex had facts, arguments and persuasive language features. Start a list of words, phrases and techniques that are persuasive and display these on
the wall as a reference.
Deconstruction & Modeling: Compare to pieces of text about butterflies. Work in pairs. One student has a report about butterflies; the other student has a persuasive piece about butterflies. (Why I like
butterflies) The student with report reads to their partner the facts about butterflies. The student with the persuasive writing highlights the same facts within the persuasive text. Together students
highlight with a different colour the persuasive vocabulary and phrases in the persuasive text. Students add to the list of persuasive words, phrases and techniques on the wall. Students discuss the
similarities and difference between the texts and create a chart. Students should be able to identify that both texts had information but the persuasive text used that information to support an opinion, used
emotive/persuasive language techniques. Students are able to identify the structure of both pieces of writing, (Introduction, related ideas together in the same paragraph, transition words/phrases,
conclusion.)
Joint Construction / Guided Practice: We have the right to play verses we have the right to an education. Students are divided into two groups. One group will argue for more recess time. One group will
argue to keep recess time the same. Students are given time to discuss their rights and responsibilities and how they can persuade the opposing group. Students are encouraged to consider what facts and
persuasive language techniques would best support their opinion. Students should predict what arguments the opposing group will think of and be ready to respond. The class then debates the topic.
Following the debate students work in small groups to construct an opinion piece of writing using the writing process. (Planning, writing, editing, publishing). Success criteria: A clear introduction, related
ideas grouped together to support the opinion, reasons should be supported by facts, persuasive writing techniques used, transition words and phrases, and a conclusion. Peer assessment students share
their writing with another group. Students assess if the success criteria has been achieved. Are students able to identify the features of persuasive writing? Can they make suggestions to improve the
writing?
Independent Construction / Freer Practice: Students independently use the writing process to create a piece of writing that informs the reader about Pennies for Peace (Listen to the Wind charity) whilst
Students should make clear references to the rights (and responsibilities) of the children (particularly girls) of Pakistan and Afghanistan
Success criteria:
W.4.1. Write opinion pieces on topics or texts, supporting a point of view with reasons and information.
W.4.1a. Introduce a topic or text clearly, state an opinion, and create an organizational structure in which related ideas are grouped to support the
writers purpose.
W.4.1b. Provide reasons that are supported by facts and details.
W.4.1c. Link opinion and reasons using words and phrases (e.g., for instance, in order to, in addition).
W.4.1d. Provide a concluding statement or section related to the opinion presented.
Stage Six: Resources
Jacobs story - http://www.tes.co.uk/teaching-resource/Refugees-and-Human-Rights-6204325/
http://www.crae.org.uk
Listen to the Wind, The story of Dr. Greg and three cups of tea, by Greg Mortenson. ISBN-10: 0803730586 http://www.amazon.com/Listen-Wind-Story-Greg-Three/dp/0803730586
Pennies for Peace http://www.penniesforpeace.org/forkids/
The Sneetches by Dr. Seuss. http://www.amazon.com/The-Sneetches-Other-Stories-Seuss/dp/0394800893 and https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PdLPe7XjdKc
Samir and Samiras story in Brazil - http://www.tes.co.uk/teaching-resource/A-childhood-in-one-of-Brazil-and-39-s-most-dangerous-slum-6428565/
Youtube UNICEF rights of the child article videos
Find a place online to save the photos of children so that Gordon and Sasha can see the options available to the students.
I wanna iguana book amazon and youtube.com video
Butterfly text one factual information about butterflies and one persuasive text about butterflies. Same information contained in each.
Stage Seven: How well did we achieve what we set out to achieve?
1. To what extent did the students achieve the target understandings?
2. To what extent did the assessment tasks allow students to demonstrate understanding?
3. To what extent did the learning activities help students build understanding?
4. To what extent did the resources help support students in building understanding?