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every

daily (every day)

always

weekly (every week)

usually

fortnightly (every two weeks)

sometimes

monthly (every month)

normally

yearly/annually (every year)

seldom

in the morning

often

in the afternoon

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in the evening

twice

at night

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A kitten

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yesterday
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this morning

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learning

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1. Study the pictures.


2. Read the note expansions and circle the verb as to recognize the tense that
should be used to write the story.
3. Write 2 -3 sentences for the introduction and they must be related to the
story.
4. The introduction should be written in Simple Present Tense.
5. You only need to number up the sentences as given in the note expansions.
6. From the note expansions that have been given, you only need to insert a few
words/phrasal to make them complete sentences.
7. You may try to do it by yourself and ask your teacher/parents to correct it for
you.
8. Do the corrections after they have corrected the sentences for you.
9. When you do the corrections, you may transfer the sentences into paragraphs
which a for the first paragraph b second paragraph c third paragraph.
10. Do practice writing the essay because Practice Makes Perfect.

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Lets try this one even though without any pictures you still can write it. Just insert
words/phrasal in the note expansions.
This is an example how you are supposed to use the note expansions as your guidance to
write the essay by yourself.

Rina family outdoor activities

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- picnic jungle trekking bird watching camping

- decided go picnic beach

- beach located kilometers housing area

- mother prepared food drinks picnic - departed

- departed home quarter to nine journey an hour reach destination

1. Rina and her family like outdoor activities.


2. They like to go picnic, jungle trekking, bird watching and camping.
3. Last Saturday, they decided to go picnic at a beach.
4. It was a beautiful sandy beach which was located about 60 kilometers from their
housing area.
5. Rinas mother prepared some delicious food and drinks for the picnic before they
departed.
6. They departed from home at a quarter to nine and the journey took about an hour to
reach the destination.
B 1 - reached beach, Rina family searched suitable place sit rest - eat
2

- chose spreading mat shady tree

- mother served food drinks brought home

- enjoyed sea breeze eating - food

5 - eating siblings changed swimming costumes went play swim sea


6 - enjoyed swimming playing crystal clear sea
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1. When they reached the beach, Rina and her family searched a suitable place for them
to sit, rest and eat.
2. They chose spreading the mat under a shady tree.
3. Rinas mother served the food and drinks that they had brought from home.
4. They enjoyed the sea breeze while eating the delicious food.
5. After eating, Rina and her siblings changed into their swimming costumes and went to
swim and play in the sea.
6. They enjoyed swimming and playing in the crystal clear sea.

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Rina family did not miss the golden opportunity building sandcastle beautiful
sandy beach

2 - collected seashells put aquarium took photographs keep sweet memory


3 - evening packed things returned happily tired
4 - really great moment spent beach
5 - hoped father would beach again perfect beach - picnic
6 - dusk reached home

1. Rina and her family also did not miss the golden opportunity building a sandcastle on
the beautiful sandy beach.
2. Then, they collected some seashells to put in their aquarium and took some
photographs to keep as their sweet memory.
3. In the evening, they packed their things and returned home happily even though they
were so tired.
4. They really had a great moment spent their time at the beach.
5. Rina hoped her father would take them to the beach again because it was a perfect
beach for a picnic.
6. At dusk, they reached home.

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You may copy the sentences that I have constructed and numbered up in three
paragraphs.

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to
can
could
shall
should
will
would
do
did
must

Examples :
The journey took an hour to reach the destination.
root words

Rina hoped her father would take them to the beach


again.

Do remember to use only one verb in past tense in a sentence unless you are using the
conjunctions.

Example :
1. Rinas father chose to spread the mat under a big shady tree.
2. They departed from home at a quarter to nine.
3. The journey took about an hour to reach the destination.
4. They departed from home at a quarter to nine and the journey took about an hour to
reach the destination.

If you are using another verb in the same sentence without any conjunction, you must add the
second verb with ing.
Example :
Rinas father chose spreading a mat under a big shady tree.

Same as when you use the verb after and before without using any pronouns after them. But, if
you are using the pronoun you must use the verb in past tense.
Examples :
After eating, they changed into their swimming costumes and went to swim and play in the sea.
After they ate the delicious food, they changed into their swimming costumes and went to swim
and play in the sea.
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1.

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Irene brother, Jason helpful caring

- love mother, Madam Jessica much

Last - Mothers Day

Irene Jason decided give surprise mother

- wanted prepare breakfast mother

- woke up morning prepare breakfast

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Irene cooked porridge pot stirred ladle


Jason helped make half-boiled eggs toasted few slices - bread Madam
Jessicas favourite

After Irene scooped porridge bowl put half-boiled eggs toasted bread
plates

Then, - served dining table teapot black coffee

- decorated dining table flowers vase

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- Madam Jessica woke up surprised see breakfast serving dining table

C1
2

At moment, Irene Jason kissed both cheeks wished Happy Mothers Day

Madam Jessica happy thankful what children done

- praised Irene Jason good deed

- enjoyed marvelous breakfast together

You may add your own ideas to make a good essay.

It is not compulsory for you to use all the words given in the pictures.

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went sightseeing museum history

afternoon old folks lunch listened

evening stroll ducks enjoyed

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Azlan year six SK Taman Rimba

- reading could help increase knowledge especially historical - country

- after UPSR examination class teacher, Mr Tan decided take Azlan


classmates sightseeing

Mr Tan decided bring museum old folks home park

- places located kilometres school went bus

- gathered school hall boarding bus

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- journey half an hour reach destination

Everyone excited

- gained knowledge museum chanced see - historical things displayed

After museum went old folks home located 20 minutes away museum

- brought food wanted lunch residents

- residents gave warm welcome happy have lunch them

- listened stories leaving place

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- evening went strolling park nearby

- enjoyed beautiful scenery park fresh air

Azlan classmates enjoyed watching ducks pond

- did not miss the golden opportunity take photographs

- left home dusk

- was great outing everyone happy tired

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- walking school windy


dark blowing - leaves

- nest fallen nestling


chirping - scared

-box fed warm lamp


mother

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Alvin helpful kind-hearted

- goes school on foot located 2 kilometres housing area

Last going rain as returning home - school

It - windy sky getting dark

leaves falling - trees

Suddenly passing by big tree saw bird nest - road

- nest would fallen tree

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- nest would fallen tree

Alvin walked nest saw nestlings inside

- nestling chirping knew hungry

- felt pity afraid would die hunger

Thus, - picked up nest took - home

- carried carefully nest palms

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When reached brought nestlings bedroom

- put nestlings box - study table

- switched on study lamp wanted keep warm

Then, - searched worms backyard house

- fed nestlings worms

Alvins mother proud done good deed

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Lets try this similar story without any pictures but I am definitely sure you still can

write it.

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Hakim - kind-hearted

- goes school which located only a walking distance housing area

- walking home school found nestling tree roadside

- nestling dropped nest high tree

- wing broken pity nestling

- picked up brought home

B1
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When reached home treatment nestling


- bandaged broken wing put cage
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- fed worms caught backyard

- took care -

Each day nestlings wound getting heal fully recovered weeks later

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Amir decided release nestling which able fly

- brought cage field near house

- opened cage freed nestling

- happy see nestling flying high sky freely

- done good deed

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Tuck Meng cycling shop sound

stopped looked drain


found - kitten

picked up kitten brought


home kept - pet
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Tuck Meng helpful kind-hearted

- gives a hand mother doing house chores

- asked - buy a packet sugar grocery shop housing area

- cycled shop located few blocks house -

On way back shop heard meowing sound

B1

- stopped bicycle looked around


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- sound came drain

- looked drain saw kitten

- kitten wet dirty

- pity kitten without longer picked up kitten drain

- wrapped poor kitten handkerchief put basket in front bicycle

- cycled home slowly afraid kitten might fell basket

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When reached home showed kitten mother

Then, - fed kitten bowl milk

- kitten licked milk greedily it cleaned - bowl

After kitten full bathed shampoo

- dried kitten hair dryer slept basket put beside bed

- asked permission mother keep kitten pet agreed him

Tuck Meng jumped for joy was not only doing good deed also got kitten pet

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-friend jogging park evening

-cycling drain fell bleeding

-helped injury bandaged


- thanked
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- best friends live neighbourhood

jogging evening park

- park located just a walking distance housing area

- went jogging park usual

- many children doing recreation activities park

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As jogging around saw boy groaning painfully bicycle

- stopped walked towards boy who knew - well find out happened

- boy told fallen bicycle leg bleeding

- felt pity boy pain thus, - helped walk took clinic nearby

- walked slowly boys limped leg

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At clinic doctor treatment boys injury

- bandaged gently wound gave medicine

- called boys parents public telephone clinic come pick up son

When parents reached clinic shocked see sons injury

However, - grateful thanked helpfulness

- happy done deed

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-park many jogging


playing - sitting

-jogging realize behind

-ran shouted joggers


chased - catch

-handed police thanked swift

snatched - necklace

1 Decide the main character/characters


2 It is similar to no.4 essay.
3. Sentences no.1 to no. 3 are the introduction which you are supposed to use in
Present Tense.
4. You must use the words/phrasal - Last_____ or One _____to begin the story in
Past Tense.

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A1

- best friends live same neighborhood

- jogging park evening completing homework

- routine jogging park want fit - healthy

- park located housing area

- went park

- park crowded jogging playing relaxing

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While jogging around park realized someone running behind -

Suddenly, as fast as lightning man snatched gold necklace

- neck injured shocked

- shouted help persuaded

Without thinking longer joggers heard shouting saw incident, chased snatcher

C1

- snatcher not able escape managed catching


Meanwhile, one joggers made call police station reported incident

Within ten minutes policemen arrived scene

- joggers handed snatcher police took police station

- thanked joggers helpfulness grateful - get necklace

- also lucky had minor injury

- learnt lesson incident promised listen mothers advice - future

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-Sunday Danish family


theme park father tickets counter

-entered many gamesplayed afraid

-four hours satisfied left


dinner restaurant

A1

- like outdoor activities

-takes family beach park other attractive interesting places

- Sunday took family theme park -

- located housing area

- departed home children excited along hours journey

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- reached park crowded visitors

- father bought tickets counter entrance

As entered park, Danish brother surprised different types games

- did not miss the golden opportunity play almost games joyfully

However, - too afraid ride roller coaster even though father challenged

- spent four hours enjoying theme park

C1

Danish brother satisfied chanced spending time playing interesting games


park

Before left home Danishs father stopped restaurant

- dinner enjoyed marvelous meal

Danish thanked father taking theme park hoped would chance repeat
visit

-went home happily tired

- great moment Danish - family

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-boys house rambutan


climbed plucked riped -

-after climbed collecting


fruit noise turkeys -

-running boys frightened


ran away

-proud happy extra - food

Mak Temah old lady lives alone village

- rears couple turkeys grows rambutan trees house

Meanwhile, Amir Hakim naughty village

- passing by house saw rambutans tree

- ripped looked juicy

- decided pluck rambutans without asking permission Mak Temah

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- climbed tree pucked rambutans while waiting tree gathered

- got down tree had enough fruit

While as busy as a bee collecting fruit heard noise turkeys gaggling

- turkeys coming towards

- scared turkey going attack

- left rambutans ran fast lightning escape - turkeys

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Mak Temah who kitchen heard noise

- rushed out see what happening

- saw rambutans gathered tree two boys running fear

- knew boys trying steal rambutans turkeys caught -

- happy turkeys done

- that evening fed extra food felt proud of

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- walking school found


wallet - picked

- opened money - police station


told officer-in-charge

-owner happy offered


reward - refused

A1

Jason Iqwan honest

- classmates live neighbourhood

- walk school together located just a walking distance housing area

- returning school found wallet roadside

- picked wallet opened

- shocked see money

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- decided take wallet police station

- told showed wallet officer-in-charge

- same time man came police station lodge report missing wallet

- police officer noticed man person identity card wallet

- definitely - owner

- police officer explained man Jason Iqwan found

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- relieved get wallet

- thanked offered money reward

However, refused politely

- man proud praised honesty

- done good deed

- did remember teacher told honesty is the best policy

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Try another similar story. I know you still can write it even though without any
pictures.

A1

Edwin honest

- goes school foot located housing area

-afternoon - walking school found wallet roadside

Hence picked wallet opened

- large amount money owners identity card

- knew neighbour

B1

- house a block Edwins -

- decided give wallet evening returned home work

That evening completing homework went house

- garden watering plants

- greeted politely
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Then, - showed handed wallet

- took wallet grateful get

- thanked returning

- took out RM100 note gave reward

-refused politely did need repayment

-praised honesty good deed

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canteen queued buy food


drinks - hungry

noodles dropped floor sad money

pity offered share grateful


kind
A1

- kind-hearted generous

- studies year six SK

- school canteen crowded recess

- queued patiently pupils school buy food drinks

- wanted fried noodles syrup

B1
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- buying food walked table sit together friends


- walking towards table saw classmate, ________ - accidentally dropped
noodles

- noodles scattered floor looked sad

- felt pity

- greeted suggested another plate noodles


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Unfortunately did money buy

Hence, - offered share plate noodles

- grateful thanked sharing - food

- class teacher saw incident praised kindness generosity

- a good example other pupils school done good deed

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Similar essay without pictures. Lets try writing it.

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Sarah - kind-hearted generous girl

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- studying year six SK____________

- going sit UPSR examination attends extra class Mondays Thursdays

- normally buys lunch food stall school eats friends school compound

- Sarah friends eating lunch saw friend other class - sitting alone shed
far

B1

- looked sad pity - walked greeted

- asked why so sad

- told hungry unfortunately not money food

Thus, - offered money buy food

- grateful took money

- thanked promised pay back Sarah told kindly donated money -

C1

After buying food sat together enjoyed lunch

Madam _________ , class teacher who there - saw what Sarah done

During extra class praised kindness generosity

Sarah given good example other students done deed

Madam - also reminded students about a friend in need is a friend indeed

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holidays Amar went


Cameron Highands - family

visited vegetable
strawberry farms tea
plantation

went jungle trekking


enjoyed fresh cool air scenery
A1

Amar family visiting beautiful interesting places Malaysia

- go vacation school holidays

- school holidays decided go Cameron Highlands

- departed home a quarter past seven morning

Amar siblings excited first visit Cameron Highlands

- journey took hours reach - destination

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A few kilometers reaching Tanah Rata, could see vegetables flowers farms
tea plantation

Amars father booked homestay located Brinchang

- planned stay 3 days 2 nights

That evening, went night market

-crowded people buying selling different types things

Amar siblings bought - souvenirs night market

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- next day went visit- vegetable strawberry farms

- mother bought vegetables fruits could not find place

At strawberry farm, - had chanced pluck fresh strawberries

- loved eating strawberries honey whipped cream

- also enjoyed eating scones strawberry jam tasted - strawberry ice-cream

- strawberry trademark Cameron Highlands therefore Amar family did


chance taste strawberry products

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On final day, went jungle trekking after dawn

- enjoyed fresh cool air beautiful nature scenery

Amar family did miss golden opportunity taking photographs

- afternoon packed things returned home

On way back home stopped tea plantation which one famous products
Cameron Highlands

bought packets tea variety flavours

really great vacation Amars family looking forward visit Cameron


Highlands

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-way home school saw


blind man - road

helped cross thanked grateful


Didik 2005 pg 70

teacher saw - congratulated


good deed

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A1

Aida Suzy helpful

- classmates best friends

- staying same neighbourhood

- go school on foot located kilometre housing area

- on way home school saw blind man roadside

- blind man wanted cross road

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- trying cross road speedy car came


Without thinking longer, Aida and Suzy ran grabbed hands stopped crossing
road

Then, when saved cross road held hands helped cross road safely

- blind man thanked girls helping -

- grateful helpfulness

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At same time class teacher, Encik Fazli there saw incident

- walked girls congratulated what- done

- praised Aida Suzy felt proud them

Both a stitch in time saved nine

- done good deed

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Ganesh helpful

- goes school on foot needs pass by busy road reach school

- returning home school saw blind man roadside

- wanted cross road too busy could cross

- pity blind man

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Without longer walked blind man greeted - politely

- offered a help

- blind man happy grateful

- held hand walked zebra crossing nearby

Then, - crossed other side busy road safely

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- blind man thanked helpfulness

- shook hand Ganesh handed money reaward

However, refused politely

Ganesh told honestly helping did need repayment

- done good deed

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scouts - went jungle Sg. Pauh


- bus

reached campsite- pitched


tents - firewood

trekking saw motorcycle


stuck - helped

grateful thanked returned


told - praised

Adib active outdoor activities

In school joins Scouts Society co-curriculum activity

- society held camping trip 3 days 2 nights jungle - Sg. Pauh Campsite
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Hence, - did miss golden opportunity go troop of scouts school

- took bus go after school Friday evening

- gathered school compound boarded - bus

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- journey hour reach destination

When reached campsite scouts master divided a few groups

- worked hand by hand pitch tents collected firewood fetched water waterfall -

- campsite beautiful nature scenery

After completing work went swim crystal clear waterfall

Adib friends cooked meal dinner

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Next day went jungle trekking

- scout master asked collect rare plants doing activity

While busy doing activity saw motorcyclist

- old man carried a bundle firewood motorcycle

Unfortunately, - motorcycle stuck muddy road

Without longer, Adib friends walked old man offered help

- helped push motorcycle mud

- old man grateful thanked

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After completing activity Adib friends returned campsite

- told scout master incident

- scout master proud

Everyone camp praised Adib friends as they had been helpful

- done good deed

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Qayum active-

- outdoor activities therefore joins Scouts Society school

- Scouts Society held camping trip 3 days 2 nights jungle

- jungle located kilometers school would go - bus

- did miss opportunity join camping trip

- packed things knapsack excited join camping trip friends

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- gathered school compound boarded bus

- journey hours reach destination

When reached jungle had walk 50 metres campsite

- campsite located beautiful stream

- scout master divided troop scouts few groups do tasks

Hand by hand - pitched tents collected firewood fetched water waterfall

7 That evening cooked meal dinner

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- made campfire in front of tents sat around while enjoying dinner


After dinner scout master strummed guitar sang songs together before
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- was first experience Qayum sleeping tent jungle

For the two days camping, joined activities had been prepared scout master

- activities - challenging everybody having fun

- liked jungle trekking most

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On final day had picnic waterfall

Everyone enjoyed swimming playing crystal clear water

- did miss chance take photographs together

- packed things cleaned campsite leaving home

- bus came fetch dusk

It great memorable moment Qayum friends camping - jungle


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bedroom iron clothes parents

-away heard telephone

rushed living room chatted

remembered blouse
damaged - regretted
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Elena helpful but forgetful

- helps mother house chores weekends school holidays

- Thursday stayed alone home parents working it school holidays

- went parents bedroom clean up room saw basket clothes

- knew mother did have time iron

Hence, - decided give a hand ironing clothes

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While ironing mothers blouse telephone rang living room

- put iron blouse rushed pick up phone

- call classmate best friend, Fatin

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Suddenly, smelt burning remembered blouse

As fast lightning ran parents bedroom

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Unfortunately too late

- blouse damaged big hole

- so regretted

That evening, -when parents came work, - told incident

- mother reminded switch off iron before telephone

- apologized mother promised be careful next time

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Sarah helpful sometimes forgetful

- likes mother house chores whenever free time weekends school holidays

Last school holidays started left alone home parents work

- decided clean up house

When entered parents bedroom saw basket clothes needed ironed

- wanted give surprised parents ironing clothes

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While ironing mothers favourite blouse telephone rang

Without wasting time rushed living room pick up

- a call classmate, Adibah

Adibah asking homework that given teachers holidays

Suddenly, after talking telephone - five minutes smelt burning quickly hang
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As fast as ran bedroom


- regretted found iron blouse

- burning

There big hole blouse scared mother would angry

That evening parents work told incident

- mother scolded warned be careful next time

- promised herself - buy new blouse mother replace burning blouse

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Mr Leong reminded
students examamination
hear - said

dinner watched told


study asleep - sofa

morning woke late


arrived students examination
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Faizul playful lazy - does pay attention lessons class even though going sit UPSR examination
September just around the corner -

- week an examination preparation actually UPSR examination

A day before exam class teacher, Mr Leong reminded

However, - hear Mr Leong said busy drawing something piece paper

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That night, - dinner usual sat front television watched movies

- mother angry asked study disobeyed

- watched movies past midnight fell asleep sofa

Thus, - morning woke up a quarter past seven late school

- quickly bathed put school uniform

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- walked hurriedly took ten minutes reach school

When arrived classroom saw students doing examination

Mr Leong angry did allow entering class

As - punishment, Mr Leong asked stand up classroom

- learnt a lesson incident ashamed himself-

From day promised turn over a new leaf wanted score flying colours
UPSR examnination

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school holiday went


grandfathers orchard village

help plucked gathered fruits - happy

durian dropped head


pushed - save

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Ezads grandparents village

- usually visits school holidays

- grandfather owns orchard located just walking distance house

- grows different fruit trees orchard rambutans langsats mangoes - durians

Ezad lucky, as last school holidays fruits season parents sent village

- followed grandfather orchard


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- jumped for joy saw ripped fruits orchard especially favourite fruit king of
the fruits, durian

- helped grandfather pluck rambutans langsats

- also collected gathered fruits grandfather wanted - sell fruits stall


roadside

Besides, - did not opportunity eat fruits

- enjoyed durian very much flesh sweet tender

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One day busy collecting durian under trees, did not notice durian suddenly
dropped one of - trees

- durian nearly dropped - head

Fortunately, as fast as grandfather pushed aside

- shocked thanked grandfather

- would forget incident

However still great moment spending holiday orchard village

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night walking tuition


past - house

saw climbing
neighbour break into

ran telephone police


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Prakash hardworking brave

- going sit UPSR examination September

Thus, - attends tuition teachers house night

- house located few blocks house usually walks alone -

Last night walking home tuition saw - men climbing neighbours fence

- trying break into house

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- knew neighbour not home going - vacation

- men covered faces bandannas definitely sure burglars

- panicked - scared

Thus, without longer took handphone pocket

- made call police station reported officer duty incident

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Within policemen petrol cars arrived scene

- quickly surrounded house

- burglars able escape policemen arrested

- handcuffed burglars took police station

Before left thanked praised bravery quick action

- done - deed

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Jason year six Sekolah Kebangsaan Sungai Pauh

- going sit UPSR examnination studies pass mid-night weekends

Last was warm night thus, opened window beside study table

Suddenly, - studying saw man break neighbours house, Mr Leong - through


window

- man covered face piece - bandanna

- knew family home vacation week

B1

- ran living room dialed police station

- reported incident

After making call woke up parents told burglar

- later policemen arrived scene petrol car

- managed arrested burglar trying escape house


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- handcuffed burglar

Before leaving police station policemen wanted know made call

Jasons parents told policemen made by

- thanked praised quick action deed

Jasons parents proud

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-friends colouring contest


early- limited - participants

-theme National Day Parade


one hour coloured pencils

-winners announced happy


friends first prize

-voucher meal favourite


reataurant free lunch

Linda arts

- drawing colouring

- friends decided join colouring contest organized held shopping mall

- shopping mall located housing area

Thus, - went early shopping mall parents

- early because contest limited 25 participants only

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- shopping mall crowded people

- organizer gave each participants set colour pencils crayons

- sat together friends contest

- theme contest National Day Parade had an hour complete -

- coloured drawing beautifully


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- prize giving ceremony organizer prizers winners

Linda won first prize hamper voucher

- happy parents friends congratulated

- voucher free lunch for two Lindas favourite restaurant shopping mall

- went restaurant mother

- ate Lindas meal really - great moment eating mother

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-cycling saw throwing drain

-stopped looked - boys ran


saw - kitten

-home cleaned food pet


asked happy care

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-cycling

-cycles neighbourhood evening

- cycling saw boys standing drain

- throwing something drain

-curious know thus, - cycled

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-boys ran saw

-stopped bicycle looked drain

- saw kitten pity

-jumped drain rescue kitten

- picked up kitten brought home

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- home cleaned kitten

Then, - fed kitten cat food

- showed kitten mother asked permission keep kitten pet

- mother agreed as long as would good care

- thanked giving permission promised taking care -

- happy get kitten - pet

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-garden - project behind classroom

-pulled weeds loosen


planted seeds herbs names
- vegetables

-teacher happy duty

roster - water
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Alvin studying year six SK

Science favourite school

Science teacher, - suggested make - herbs garden as - project behind classroom

Alvin classmates worked hand by hand clean up place cutting - long grass
bushes pulled - weeds

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- used hoes loose soil made - beds


- planted seeds herbs vegetables beds

After planting seeds - herbs vegetables named -

- used pieces plank wrote names herbs vegetables

Mr Choong happy satisfied work

- made duty roster water herbs vegetables


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Fortnightly put fertilizer herbs vegetables

- used organic fertilizer make sure herbs vegetables grew well

Within weeks herbs vegetables could able harvest

- teachers school wanted buy herbs vegetables well growth fresh

Alvin classmates saved money class fund

- jumped joy successful project

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Faizul reading

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- always goes public library Saturdays borrow story books

- public library located kilometers village needs take bus go

Even though raining cats and dogs Saturday, Faizul still go public library

- walked rain umbrella bus stop waited bus town patiently

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Suddenly, - lightning waiting bus

- struck big tree opposite bus stop

- tree fell blocked road

-shocked did not panic

- thinking longer ran food stall nearby

- village headman few men having breakfast

Faizul told incident

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- village headman commanded villagers give a hand remove tree blocking


road

- took chainsaw axes cleavers scene

When Faizul villagers arrived scene road getting jammed

- villagers worked hand in hand cut trunk big tree chainsaw small logs

- used axes cleavers branches

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Luckily few minutes big tree fell, - rain stopped easier villagers clear - road

- drivers gave a hand pulled logs branches roadside

- managed clear half an hour

Everybody thanked praised quick action

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-morning boys fishing -

-saw man exhausted - lost

river

-called villagers- help


drink - food

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-took hospital grateful -

thanked

Syahmi Adib fishing leisure weekends school holidays

- go fishing river village

- river few kilometers houses

- went fishing river usual

- brought- fishing rods worms use baits

- chose sit shady tree river

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While waiting fish eat baits saw man

- came out bushes dirty clothes exhausted

- recognized English man lost jungle past two weeks

- thinking longer ran village headmans house tell man

Meanwhile - went telephone booth called hospital - ambulance

- village headman called villagers give hand

- went river brought food drinks

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When reached river handed food drinks man

- gobbled food shivering hand

- minutes ambulance arrived scene

- paramedics carried man - stretcher ambulance took hospital

praised quick action good deed

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Suresh Chee Fatt Ezad sharing interest

- fishing

- go river located walking distance housing area

- Saturday morning went river usual

- brought fishing rods tins worms - baits

- caught worms backyard houses went fishing

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When reached river chose sit shady tree

- put worms hooks threw fishing lines river

- sat quietly waited patiently fish eat - baits

- did want home empty hands

- an hour, Ezad felt pulling fishing rod

However could pull himself

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Hence shouted Suresh Chee Fatt help

- pulled fishing rod

- surprised happy Ezad caught big

- brought fish Ezads home asked Ezads mother cook fish

That afternoon lunch together

- fish fresh delicious satisfied

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