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The Author Editing Approach
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Writers of Research Papers
Valerie Matarese
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Editing Research: The Author Editing Approach to Providing Effective
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Contents
Figures, Tables, and Sidebars. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . xi
Foreword . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . xiii
Preface. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . xvii
Acknowledgments . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . xxi
Prologue: Birth, Metamorphosis, and Flight
of a Research Article. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . xxiii
Chapter 1 Aims and Challenges of Writing for Publication
in Todays Global Research Environment. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1
The Research Publishing Landscape. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1
The State of Scholarly Writing. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 7
The Internationalization of Scholarly Writing . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 9
English for Research Publication Purposes. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 11
Challenges of Research Writing. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 12
Writing in Isolation. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 20
Less Support from Publishers. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 21
Conclusions. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 22
Notes. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 23
Chapter 2 Editing in the Sciences and Other
Scholarly Disciplines . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 25
Editing Defined. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 25
The First Publishers and Editors . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 26
Levels of Editing. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 33
A Temporal Classification of Editing. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 47
Notes. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 49
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Contents ix
Chapter 7
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Tables
1 Alignment of editing terms used in the booklet Levels of Edit
and defined by editors associations. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 35
2 Examples of lexical errors in scientific and technical
terminology made by EAL authors writing in English (L2) due
to linguistic interference by their native language (L1). . . . . . . . . . . . . 39
3 Optimization of the wording of a sentence containing
a reference citation. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 95
Sidebars
1 Substantive editing can be done after an R&R decision even
when the reviewers limited their criticisms to language
problems. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 80
2 A successful outcome of developmental editing of serially
rejected manuscripts requires the authors collaboration and
trust in the editor. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 82
3 Pre-review of a manuscript by an authors editor can reveal
the need for developmental editing, ultimately resulting in
a publishable research article . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 97
4 Authors editors have ethical standards for research and can
impart these values to novice researcherauthors. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 114
5 Main points to consider in setting up an institutional editing
service. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 160
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Foreword
When I chose medical editing as my full-time contribution ... I entered
an occupation that W. Albert Noyes Jr. recently said is a way to lose old
friends and to make no new ones. True enough, an editor is paid to
find fault.
Richard Miner Hewitt, AM, MD1
Publication is the final stage of research. Of the people involved in the publication process, most visible are the authors, journal editors, peer reviewers, and journal production staff. Less visible, if present at all, are authors
editors, who work for and with authors to make scientific manuscripts
more readable, more accurate, more complete, and more concise before
submittal to a journal. In my area of interest, medical publicationsin
which evidence-based medicine is literature-based medicinewe also
strive to document research designs and activities according to standards
that allow the validity of the research to be properly assessed.
Authors editors routinely identify and respond to everything from
misspellings to scientific misconduct; from poorly written sentences to
poorly constructed data displays; and from unfocused discussions to
unfounded conclusions. In addition, an often-unappreciated truth is that
author editing is usually the shortest, least expensive, and arguably the
most important stage of the publication process. The published article
is often the only record of the research and is usually the most lasting.
Once published, the article is in the literature forever, preserving any
mistakes, omissions, and inconsistencies for all timewith the authors
names on it.
Whereas authors focus on content, authors editors focus on presentation. Unlike literary editors, who try to improve a text without trespassing
on the authors words or compromising the authors voice, technical
editors are usually charged with meeting the information needs of readers rather than the personal needs of authors. As my mentor used to say,
Tom, if you dont understand it, the colonel never will. If you dont clarify
the meaning now, it wont get done.
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In general, and with the exception of some journal editors, authors editors are the only group paid specifically to review a scientific manuscript
at length. Peer reviewers are generally rushed and uncompensated, and
production editors rarely have time to do more than correct formatting
and grammatical errors. Skilled authors editors, on the other hand, are
given the time to critically appraise a manuscript; to study it, dissect it, and
reconstitute it into a coherent record of the research.
Many years ago, the Society for Technical Communication published a
Code of Conduct for its members. Among other points in the Code was
that technical writers and editors are The bridge between those who create ideas and those who use them. That is, they neither create nor use the
information they process; they are somewhere between. In fact, authors
editors are often called professionals without portfolios. They are specialists with backgrounds, employment settings, and job expectations so
diverse that many do not have a clear sense of the history, extent, and value
of the profession or even that they are part of one.
Editing Research changes everything. In this excellent book, Valerie
Matarese describes for the first time the place of author editing in the ecology of scientific publishing. Several books have been written about author
editing, many by authors editors, but this is the first book about authors
editors. After decades of helping to prepare the literature, authors editors
themselves are now represented in the literature, and admirably so.
The breadth of Editing Research is impressive. On one hand, some topics are as narrow as the origins of terms such as press, edit, and publish. In a profession that prides itself on using language precisely, it is
embarrassing to learn that the title of editor refers to more than a dozen
job descriptions and that the same job description is labelled with a dozen
titles. By tracing the origins of these terms, however, Editing Research
shows how they evolved and differentiated over the centuries. In so doing,
it explains, if not excuses, this apparent lack of precision.
On the other hand, some topics in the book are as wide as the globalization of science and scientific publishing. For better or worse, English has
become the language of science worldwide, posing an additional burden on
nonnative English speakers who must publish in English-language journals
to participate in the scientific community and to advance professionally.
The book explores the implications of this new market for authors editors
and thoughtfully summarizes the problems facing authors unfamiliar with
Western publishing conventions, as well as with the use of English.
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Note
1. Hewitt RM. The Physician-Writers Book. Tricks of the Trade of Medical Writing.
Philadelphia: W.B. Saunders Company, 1957, page 311. Richard Miner Hewitt,
AM, MD, was Senior Consultant (an authors editor) and later the Director of the
Section of Publications at the Mayo Clinic for many years and President of the
American Medical Writers Association from 1955 to 1956. He first articulated
the criteria for authorship used in the original definition of authorship issued
by the International Committee of Medical Journal Editors in 1991 (see page 315
of the above-cited book).
Preface
Thousands and thousands of people today are editing research articles
before these texts undergo peer review and, ultimately, publication. These
editors support a large but unknown portion of the worlds 79 million academic researchers who aim to publish their studies in one of the
approximately 28,000 English-language scholarly and scientific journals.
The editors do not work for the journals or their publishers, however; they
work for the authors of the manuscripts.
Editors of manuscripts form an ill-defined group. They may be employed
by research institutes or work as freelancers, independently or through an
intermediary. They may view editing as a temporary occupation or a fulltime career. They probably have a university degree, but it may be in a hard
or soft science, a language, translation, communication, journalism, or any
other field of study. They may have no specific preparation for editing, or
they may have learned editing skills through mentoring, formal study, or
self-education. And they may spend anywhere from 3 to 30 hours on a
particular text, making minor changes to grammar or substantially revising
the language and, perhaps, the content.
This motley assemblage of editors is a relatively new phenomenon in the
350-year-long history of scholarly and scientific publishing. Only in the past
1020 years have global editing services been created, engaging hundreds if
not thousands of editors to process hundreds of thousands of manuscripts
each year. This proliferation in the provision of editing services is in response
to the enormous growth in global research output on the one hand and
the reduction or elimination of publisher-provided editorial services on the
other. It responds to the massification of academic research with the massification of a knowledge-intensive service. And although it usefully helps the
global body of researchers publish their work in English, it also takes advantage of the precarious position of many highly educated personsoften toting PhDswho accept to edit, in many cases, for incommensurate fees and
at stressful paces in todays distorted knowledge economy.
But, as I have discovered, the editing of research manuscripts has a
longer, more dignified history that continues, quietly and inconspicuously,
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into the present day. For more than 50 years, earnest and principled
editors have been supporting researchers as they write for publication
through direct personal interactions based on open dialog, a mutual
understanding of roles, and respect for publication ethics. These are true
professionals. Whether employed by research institutes or working independently, they facilitate the communication of research by bringing to the
collaboration editorial expertise, linguistic skill, familiarity with genre, and
disciplinary knowledge. Their goal is to help authors produce a clear and
accurate text that effectively communicates the research message to journal
editors, peer reviewers, and readers of all kinds. They work with loyalty
to their authors, not to journal editors, publishers, or editing service
providers. As such, they call themselves authors editors and their work,
author editing.
Author editing is a profession that originated in the United States.
While not exclusive to research communication (the close relationships
between some literary editors and authors of American fiction are the paradigm of author editing), it is in the research setting that author editing
evolved from an art to a profession. Author editing for research emerged
in the immediate post-World War II period and later matured in continental Europe. Although not widely recognized by outsiders as a profession, author editing rests its professional status on a solid foundation: a
long history and development, a large (albeit obscure) body of literature,
eloquent opinion leaders, and associations providing opportunities for the
continuing professional development of their members. Over the years,
authors editorsthe practitioners of this professionhave elaborated an
approach to working with researcherauthors that respects authorship,
educates about academic writing and publishing, and serves science.
The author editing approach has never been fully told, and few authors
editors are aware of the history, knowledge, and experiences that underpin
it. A few years ago, when I was editing the multi-authored volume Supporting Research Writing: Roles and Challenges in Multilingual Settings, I agreed
to co-write a chapter on author editing1 with Joy Burrough-Boenisch, an
authors editor who, about a decade earlier, had earned a PhD in applied
linguistics for her study of English academic writing by Dutch scholars. In that chapter, we set out to define and describe author editing in
non-anglophone contexts, by discussing the different types of editing an
authors editor does and examining the practicalities of collaborating with
researchers. We wrote from personal experience and the shared experiences
of colleagues.
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Note
1. Burrough-Boenisch, Joy, and Valerie Matarese. 2013. The authors editor: working with authors to make drafts fit for purpose. In Supporting Research Writing:
Roles and Challenges in Multilingual Settings, edited by Valerie Matarese, 173189.
Oxford: Chandos Publishing
Acknowledgments
This book would not have been possible without the critical participation of the eight expert informantsin alphabetical order, Simon Bartlett,
Susan Kaplan, Alan Lounds, Katharine OMoore-Klopf, Sunita Patterson,
Jackie Senior, Carlotta Shearson, and Marcia Triunfol Elblink. To these
colleagues, I express my sincere gratitude for their openness and willingness to share their precious time, knowledge, and personal experiences
with me and the books readers.
I also wish to thank the myriad persons who assisted me with the
research for this book. I cannot name all those who kindly responded to
my requests for articles and information on ResearchGate.net and discussion fora such as those of CSE and EASE. A particular thanks goes to
those who scanned or mailed me copies of non-digitalized literature or
who sent me relevant articles I hadnt even requested: Michael S. Altus, Joy
Burrough-Boenisch, Margaret Cooter, Paola de Castro, Dominic Fuccillo,
Barbara Gastel, Sheryl Hinkkanen, Tom Lang, Maeve OConnor, Serena
Sangiorgi, Karen Shashok, Rachel Spassiani (AMWA), Bruce W. Speck,
LeAnn Stee, Joan Turner, and Robyn Woodward-Kron. I acknowledge
with gratitude the free access to articles kindly offered by the American
Podiatric Medical Association and the American Medical Writers Association. Elke Bartholomus and Joy Burrough-Boenisch are thanked for
providing examples of linguistic interference.
This book was researched, written, and illustrated entirely with free,
open source software in the Mageia Linux distribution. To the open source
community, my thanks and appreciation.
Chapters of this volume have benefited from being critically reviewed
by the informants and by Joy Burrough-Boenisch, Tom Lang, and Karen
Shashok, who all helped me avoid conceptual blunders, stylistic infelicities, and second-language interference. Naturally, the remaining errors are
my own.
Finally, I thank John B. Bryans at Information Today, Inc. for having
suggested the format for this book and for believing in my ability to carry
out the research and the writing.
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strategic and proactive in making your workflow processes and client base
transparent (Cozzarin 2004).
As for defining the skills, knowledge, talents, and aptitudes that make
a successful authors editor, a substantial amount of information is already
available, and the qualitative research reported in this volume adds to that
body of knowledge. Additional research from the viewpoint of applied
linguistics, continuing on from the first research thesis already written
(Burrough-Boenisch 2002; see Chapter 5), will provide insight into editing processes. Altogether, a continuous, systematic effort to document the
work of authors editorsthe business, practical, linguistic, and interpersonal aspectswill enable us to define the best practices for supporting
researchers when they write for publication.
contribute to our profession too. For example, we can invite them to join
an association and to contribute as a volunteer, and we can encourage
them to reflect on their work, talk about it at meetings, and write about
it for journals pertinent to our field (Appendix 2). These are the ways that
some of my informants were mentored by their seniors when they were
just starting out a few decades ago. Mature authors editors today can act
similarly, passing the wisdom on and helping to keep our profession alive.
Editors who are just starting out can tap into this wisdom by actively
looking for a mentor. As Katharine OMoore-Klopf explains, Although
there are fewer in-house publishing jobs now than before, it is still easy
enough to find a mentor via online communities and professional associations. If you start asking questions, you will find people willing to
answerthose are the ones who you want as mentors. An informal mentoring arrangement is just fine today. These informal mentors can provide
guidance on career advancement and on how to deal with clients, build and
grow a business, and achieve a good work-life balance. They are unlikely,
however, to check ones editing work because of the time required; for this
kind of feedback, a more formal (paying) arrangement is required.
Be Business-Wise
Authors editors who work autonomously must always consider the business aspects of running an editing service. Alan Lounds has clear advice. If
you wish to go into editing, he says, price it right, pace yourself, specialize, have direct contacts with clients (do not work through an intermediary), and establish personal relationships with your clients.
Marcia Triunfol Elblink elaborates on Alans first point. Be very clear
to yourself and to clients what is included and what is not included in the
fee. Accurate pricing is critical because clients have limited funds and
time, and some manuscripts may require an exorbitant amount of revision; if a proper balance is not struck, either clients will not be satisfied or
the editor will not earn enough for the service offered. To facilitate billing
and increase the chances of getting paid, Marcia has a novel suggestion:
Treat editing and billing as separate activities done by different persons. If
you work alone, create an imaginary digital persona (e.g. a unique email
address at your domain) and delegate to this colleague all discussions of
money issues with clients, including follow-up in the case of non-payment.
Alans last pointestablishing relationships with authorshas been
addressed by Katharine OMoore-Klopf (2014). Writing on the blog of
the American Society of Business Publications Editors, she explained that
working with authors is an arena where we all need to improve our skills
to help illustrate our worth. The benefits are that authors become easier
to work with, the quality of their writing and the published texts improve,
and the editors business expands. But, she warns, dont just hope that your
clients and employers will notice on their own that [you] produce desirable results. Show them. Give presentations, talk individually with them ...
Write blog posts and posts for LinkedIn. Tweet ... Make it clear that youre
the one behind the good outcomes, but show explicitly how those outcomes
benefit the specific client or employer (OMoore-Klopf 2014).
For research center editors, establishing good relationships with employers
is just as important as doing so with authors. As Lang, Samulack, and Davies
argued (Lang 1999b; Cozzarin 2004), authors editors working in these settings need to proactively show their value. They should also convince their
employers to replace them when they retire, and to prepare for this change in
advance. As Jackie Senior has observed, a successful transition between a retiring editor and a replacement requires a training period of 12 years to allow
the trainee to absorb the best practices already in place. Ensuring this continuity will avoid service interruptions and loss of productivity in the unit.
Take Care
Author editing is a caring profession. We take care of our authors manuscripts and help with all things editorial. We must also take care of our
business and ourselves, because as independent operators (irrespective of
our work setting) no employer or union is looking out for our wellbeing.
We can also take care of our profession by maintaining high standards and
by helping to raise its profile. In particular, we can help raise awareness of
author editing among journal editors by being active members of associations that connect editors serving different roles, such as CSE and EASE.
We can also help increase understanding of our work among applied linguists by writing, blogging, and joining associations such as MET that
welcome a range of language professionals.
Authors editors, like any other occupational group, are also often called
upon to care for elderly or seriously ill family members. This responsibility is often a source of personal and financial stress, requiring one to
cope with the emotional strain while juggling new duties with less time
for work. In a thoughtful essay, Elizabeth Whalen, a freelance editor, and
Barbara Gastel, a physician specialized in biomedical writing and science
journalism (and, when the article was published, also editor of Science
Editor), discussed how some CSE members have coped with caregiving
(Whalen and Gastel 2001). They observed that science editors have particular characteristics that enable them to deal effectively with this role,
including communication skills; science literacy; proficiency in information-gathering, planning, and organization; adeptness with paperwork;
flexibility; internal motivation; and ability to identify small changes that
can make big improvements. Their essay offers advice and strategies that
editors, both employed and autonomous, can follow when the need to care
for a family member arises.
the interface between content and code (e.g. Java and XML). Furthermore,
the use of new media forms of communication (e.g. blogs, tweets) will be
increasingly common among researchers as they carve out for themselves
a professional online profile (needed today to secure funding and be promoted). Although these informal genres may not be thought to require
editing, EAL scholars venturing into the blogosphere may appreciate the
support of an authors editor in handling a new style of writing.
The research article itself is evolving in response to demands for greater
transparency, openness, and reproducibility. Changes already being put
into place at some journals include more detailed methods sections (e.g.
publication of study protocols) and data sharing (e.g. depositing data in
approved repositories). A modular set of standards, called Transparency
and Openness Promotion guidelines, was recently developed to help journal editors understand and implement open reporting practices (Nosek
et al. 2015). What is needed, however, are complementary changes in
academia. This point was emphasized by Macleod and colleagues in their
introduction to The Lancet series on research waste:
[I]nstead of being judged on the basis of the impact factors
of the journals in which their work is published, academics
might be judged on the methodological rigour and full dissemination of their research, the quality of their reports, and
the reproducibility of their findings. If these factors were to
contribute substantially to promotion, funding, and publication decisions, institutions might even ... pay more attention
to continuation of professional development and appraisal of
the research workforce. (Macleod et al. 2014)
The situation they envisage presents clear opportunities for authors
editors. We can only hope that this heightened attention to the problem of research waste presages a return to the employment of authors
editors within research departments. A return, that is, in the few countries where embedded authors editors were once common (e.g. United
States, N
etherlands, Finland), but also the spread of this practice to non-
anglophone countries where researchers have great need for writing assistance but currently receive little institutional support or understanding.
These countries include the main research-intensive nations of Europe
(France, Germany, Italy, and the United Kingdom) and Asia (Japan,
South Korea), as well as emerging research nations such as Brazil, China,
and India, but also Iran, Turkey, and others. The growth of research and
research publishing in China, including the creation of new Englishlanguage journals, is particularly impressive. This trend poses an immediate need for Chinese-fluent authors editors, and invites us to ponder
the possibility that the rhetoric of research, as we know it today, is ready
for metamorphosis.
Notes
1. On this point, I acknowledge Karen Shashok for having eloquently put into words,
in informal discussions, an idea that was germinating in my mind. Her expression
is presented here in somewhat paraphrased form.
2. www.rprcoalition.org