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Introduction

Welcome to Openbravo documentation style guide.


This style-guide contains basic rules, tips, and suggestions for people intending to develop documentation
for the Openbravo project. When different documents use the same guidelines, they are more user friendly,
consistent and more simple to combine and reuse. We therefore strongly encourage all contributors to follow
these guidelines for the benefit of the community.
This guide does not attempt to cover all aspects of technical writing. The objective is to be concise and
focused for Openbravo documentation writers.

Use US English
Throughout Openbravo, US English is the standard for all written materials.

General Rules
-our vs. -or
UK words ending in -our (such as flavour) lose their U when converted to US English. For example flavour
becomes flavor, colour becomes color. The same thing usually applies to words with -our in the middle, so
behaviour becomes behavior.

Double Consonants
When you convert a verb to its -ing form, remember that US English has a single, not a double consonant.
For example travelling becomes traveling, levelling becomes leveling etc.

List of common UK and US spellings


For a more exhaustive list, see Wikipedia
UK English

US English

Analyse

Analyze

Behaviour

Behavior

Cancelling / Cancelled

Canceling / Canceled

Centre

Center

Cheque

Check

Colour

Color

Customisation

Customization

Customise

Customize

Favourite

Favorite

Labour

Labor

Licence

License

Travelling

Traveling

Writing Rules
These are some basic rules that make documents more clear, precise, and easy to understand.

Keep it simple
Use short sentences and punctuation to keep ideas clear and simple. Introduce a single idea, concept or
action per sentence.
Wrong
The manufacturing module allows users to define the process plans, work requirements and work efforts;
this is how the processes that produce intermediate and final goods work.
Correct
The manufacturing module allows users to define the process plans, work requirements and work efforts.
This section describes how processes that produce intermediate and final goods function.

Tenses
Always use the present tense. Avoid past or future tenses if possible.
In addition, try to refrain from using must, have to, need to, will, should and similar forms.
Keep in mind that a manual describes mandatory procedures to follow to accomplish a certain task.
Wrong
You will have to press return to reboot the system.
Correct
Press return to reboot the system.

Aggressive Language
Avoid using aggressive descriptions.
Wrong
Hit return to reboot the system.
Correct
Press return to reboot the system.

Use the active voice


Write using the active voice where possible.
Wrong

The alarm was fired by the system.


Correct
The system fired the alarm.
Using the active voice makes documentation easier to read and understand. It also helps to clarify who is
doing what, and that is important in user documentation.
If you are writing an error message, it is acceptable to use the passive voice to avoid blaming the user.

Use third person


Where possible, use the third person imperative. For example:
Run the installation script
is better than:
You should run the installation script
However, so long as you don't overdo it or sound aggressive, it's fine to address the user directly using
"you" if it makes the documentation easier to follow.
Avoid referring to the user as "the user", for example: "Users should log into the system using their
passwords", unless you are specifically distinguishing between users and somebody else e.g. an
administrator
The exception to these guidelines is error messages: if error messages address the user directly, they can
sound blaming. For example:
'Error: incorrect password'
is better than:
'Error: you have entered an invalid password'

Punctuation

Exclamation marks
There are virtually no circumstances where it is acceptable or necessary to use an exclamation mark in
documentation or in error messages.

Abbreviations
Do not use an apostrophe for plural abbreviations: Wrong: Use the Purchase Order window to create PO's
Right: Use the Purchase Order window to create POs

No personal opinions
A manual or any other technical document is not the right place to make statements about what you think
about competitors, products or the features described.
Wrong
Select the Report option to generate a full report of the customer data. Most of the time is better to export
the data and generate a report from third-party applications due to the lack of configuration settings.
Correct
Select the Report option to generate a full report of the customer data. It is also possible to export data and
generate a report from third-party applications.

Also, be careful about expressing an opinion on whether a task is easy or not. If the user makes a mistake
when you have mentioned that a task is simple, it can make them feel stupid even if the mistake is not their
fault. For example, avoid expressions like:
"It is easy to configure the application using the Wizard".

Capitalization
Avoid over-capitalization. It can be tempting to capitalize particular words in a sentence just because they
seem important, but this looks untidy and makes it hard to maintain consistency in a long document. Only
proper names, menu items and proprietary names require leading capitals.

Avoid gender discrimination


Readers of software documentation are men and women. Unfortunately in English there no personal or
possessive pronoun that denote gender neutrality. Avoid using expressions that refer to specific gender
forms. Pay special attention to the she, he, him or her pronouns.
Wrong
Every user has his home directory.
Right
Every user has a home directory.
Although it's technically incorrect, many technical authors now use "they" or "their" as a neutral pronoun
rather than "s/he" or "his or hers". It's not perfect but if you have a lot of pronouns in one sentence it can
make it easier to read. In general try to rephrase the sentence to avoid the issue - see the example above.
User stories and training scenarios are a good place to show diversity.
Remember that in English, only people have a gender. Most other nouns are neutral.

Only describe current functionality


Avoid talking about future features or plans for a product or an application.
Wrong
Graphics can be saved as a GIF image. Support for new formats will be added in future versions.
Correct
Graphics can be saved as a GIF image.

Terminology

Checkbox
Checkbox is all one word (not check box). Checkboxes are either selected or cleared.
For example:
"Select the Active checkbox to make the field visible" "Clear the Active checkbox to make the field
invisible".

Login vs Log in
The verb is Log in and Log into "Log in using the password provided" "Log into Openbravo ERP" The noun
or adjective is Login "You will need valid Login credentials to use the system"

Not logon, log, log-in etc.

Spanish - English False Friends and other pitfalls


If Spanish is your first language, beware of the following common mistakes

Dudas / doubts
"Doubt" in english usually has quite a negative meaning. A better translation is questions or queries.
Wrong: If you have any doubts about Openbravo, consult the wiki.
Better: If you have any questions about Openbravo, consult the wiki.

His / hers
In English, only people have a gender. Things are always neutral and take the possessive pronoun "its"
(without an apostrophe).

Bold and Italics


Because we use different documentation sources, including Mediawiki, a limited number of formatting styles
are used:

Bold. Use sparingly for emphasis, or to highlight file paths


or option names, for example:

Italic. Use it when quoting a piece of a text from another


source, a piece of text in another language or to give an
example, such as sample text to be typed in a text field.

File paths (i.e. particular file locations) should follow the


standard

From the File menu, select New.

File / Menu Paths

"Directory/subdirectory/file.extension" format.

For menu navigation (for example starting a new


document) bold the whole thing and use > to separate the
menu items.

Orient the user by starting with the first thing the user needs to look for. For example:
From the File menu, select Document > New > Template.
not
Select Document > New > Template from the File menu.

Platform

Openbravo runs on many different platforms. When documenting a feature that varies by platform, note the
platform before the example or exception. Readers can then skip sections, rather than reading a paragraph
before finding it is not relevant, and having to search for the correct section.
Phrase language and layout in a way that allows future editors familiar with a platform to add valid
examples. Platform variations are a sensitive topic, keep language neutral and factual. For example:
Wrong
To start Openbravo POS double click start.bat
Correct

Linux
To start Openbravo POS run the shell script start.sh either by clicking it or by typing ./start.sh from a shell.

Windows
To start Openbravo POS run the batch file start.bat either by double clicking it or by typing start.bat from
the command line.

Other Conventions

When describing options always start from left to right and


from top to bottom.

If you have a list of items (for example a list of files to be


downloaded) order them alphabetically unless there is a
more obvious logical order.

Try to be consistent with the way you describe similar


processes. For example don't mix mouse navigation in with
keystrokes in the same procedure unless it's really
necessary. In general, pick your interaction style (menus,
keystrokes etc) and stick with it throughout the document.

Do not use contractions (don't, you're, etc).

Writing for a global audience


Open source software is global by definition. Keep in mind that people from all over the globe have access to
it and its related documentation.
Some important recommendations:

Avoid using names of people, addresses, and other sample


information that are not common in the English language.

Remember that currencies and formats to represent dates


and numbers are not the same in every part of the world.

Final checklist
Upon completing a document, it is a good idea to perform the following quick checklist:

It is clear? Does the text follow well from paragraph to


paragraph?
It is concise? Does it have a clear communication style?
It is coherent? Does the text jumps from topic to topic?
It is grammatically correct? Have you spell checked the
text? Have you asked a native speaker to proof-read your
text?

Links
Interesting links and references related to documentation.

Openbravo documentation forum


Fedora Project Documentation Guide
Ubuntu Documentation Style Guide

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