First needs to be assignment brief Show feedback on the first script Rename research on media rules to media techniques Fix logos Add to target audience Fix BBFC 15 image as it is blurry Demographics be consistent with the text Make sure the budget is the same for everything Do the costume notes Answer who would distribute our film in the pitch Mention similar films in our pitch Suggest the possible stars of our film in our pitch Ask specifics about the film in the questionnaire Get straight to the point in the questionnaire Move production team profile to nearer the beginning of the blog