Marking Scheme for 2016 Year 4 Second

English Language Evaluation Writing Paper

SECTION A (10 marks)
1)
2)
3)
4)
5)

car production factory

and builds machines
returns home at
attend meetings
a hardworking

(2m)
(2m)
(2m)
(2m)
(2m)

SECTION Bi (3 marks)
(any things from the poster)
i.
ii.
iii.

candy
dices
book

(1m)
(1m)
(1m)

SECTION Bii (12 marks)

Dear Diary,
Today, I attended a talk on Money Management in school. There are few tips which
I want to follow.
Firstly, I will do a monthly budget. I will plan my spending wisely. Next, I will keep a
monthly spending journal. I will record all my expenses in this journal. Lastly, I will not buy
things that I do not need. I have to remind myself to buy only the necessary things.
I will use these tips to manage my money wisely.
(80 words)

SECTION C
One day, Amir saw a blind man with a walking stick by the road. He was trying to
cross the road but there were many cars. Amir felt pity for the blind man. Amir wanted to
help him.
Amir quickly walked up and offered the blind man to cross the road. They used the
pedestrian crossing. Amir held the blind mans arm while crossing. They reached the other
side of the road safely.
The blind man thanked Amir for his help. He also praised Amir for his kindness. Amir
was happy because he has done a good deed.
(98 words)