School Magazine Peer Feedback

Are the fonts readable? Are there a

maximum of 3 fonts? Have they
used a different font for their
masthead and their coverlines?

Is there a clear colour scheme? Is

there a sense of branding / House
style

Ana has used two versions of one font: small

and blue for the subtitles, and pink/white/blue
with a glowing effect for the masthead.

The colour scheme of Anas magazine cover

appears to be blue: the image on the page has
a blue tint, the font is blue and the models are
wearing blue items of clothing.

Is the eye flow natural?

The models are arranged in such a way that the
eye flows from the bottom left corner to the top
right corner of the page however, the
placement of the subtitles is less organised.
Is the picture believable/well
edited?
The picture is clear and of high resolution. The
models facial expressions are happy and give a
good image of life at the school.
Is the picture suitable for the
magazine? (Subject, model, miseen-scene, costume, props, location)

Is Spelling Punctuation and

Grammar accurate-Are there any
typos?

Are coverlines lined up

Central to the image is a group of young

people, which makes sense as this is a sixth
form magazine for 16-18 year olds. Costume is
casual overall: jackets, earrings, colourful
accessories etc. The mise en scene includes a
tall brick building with large windows: although
not an educational institution, it has
architectural features which remind us of a
school building.

Spelling, punctuation and grammar is accurate

throughout.

Are all key elements there

(Masthead, dateline, main cover
line, other coverlines
(kickers+explanatory)
Is the page on A4 (21cmx29.7cm)

Cover includes masthead and other coverlines

The page fits measurements close to A4 but not

exactly.

Other comments
A bright and eye catching piece of work which
accurately depicts a day at St Marylebone.