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Table of Contents
Table of Contents
1. Chapter 1: Solo Adventures
2. Chapter 2: Diagon Alley
3. Chapter 3: The Sorting Ceremony
4. Chapter 4: The Defence Professor
5. Chapter 5: The Forbidden Forest
6. Chapter 6: Crime Scene Investigation
7. Chapter 7: The Potions Master
8. Chapter 8: Sidequests
9. Chapter 9: Hallowe'en
10. Chapter 10: Odds of Survival
11. Chapter 11: The Troll and the Dementor
12. Chapter 12: Of Rats and Bowler Caps
13. Chapter 13: Roleplaying
14. Chapter 14: Talking is a Free Action
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"Who is he?"
"Is he a Muggle? How did he get through the wards?"
"Is he a student?"
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The next morning, it was a slightly apprehensive McGonagall who approached her
newest student in the hospital wing. To the growing concern and, frankly, terror
of their resident mediwitch, the last of Milo's injuries had vanished
completely.
"So," he said brightly, "What's the plan, then? Travel by horseback, Teleport,
Wind Walk, Phantom Steed, or something else?" The boy's rat was sitting on his
shoulder, mimicking Milo's every hand gesture and expression in a most
disconcerting way.
"We'll walk to the edge of Hogwarts grounds and Apparate there directly," she
explained.
"Apparate, eh? What's that?" Milo asked. He was getting very concerned at the
number of Knowledge (Arcana) checks he'd been failing recently. It was most
unlike him.
"We will be transported directly to Diagon Alley in London," she explained.
"From the point of view of those watching, we will appear to disappear."
"Oh, so we'll teleport?"
"In a manner of speaking, yes."
"Why can't we just do it from here?" Milo asked, gesturing around the hospital
wing.
"You can't Apparate or Disapparate on the Hogwarts grounds," McGonagall
explained.
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The first years all filed into the Great Hall apprehensively as McGonagall
explained about the four houses. Milo mentally filed them into: house for the
PCs, house for the villains, and two NPC houses to make up the numbers. Fair
enough.
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They met Hagrid and the quietly quivering Quirinus Quirrell in the Great Hall.
Hagrid, evidently some sort of half-giant Ranger, was carrying a heavy crossbow
(Milo was skeptical, light crossbows were much more damage-efficient) and
carrying Fang's leash. Milo had carefully prepared his spells that morning, and
avoided casting any throughout the daymeaning the Gryffindors started to be
late for class, again, as Peeves could harass them with impunity, and Milo was
starting to appear rather useless in their lessons. Still, he wasn't about to
venture into something called the Forbidden Forest without a full complement of
spells.
"Mage Armour," he cast as soon as they approached the professor and the Keeper
of the Keys. A thin, invisible field of force surrounded him like a second skin.
It was far from complete protection, but it would help a little.
"Hagrid!" Harry said happily.
"A-all right" Quirrell said, "our j-job is simple: all we're t-to do is enter
the f-f-forest and f-find whatever it is a-attacking the u-unicorns," he
stammered nervously. "A-and then r-return to H-Hogwarts so the H-Headmaster and
I can d-d-decide what to do."
"Sounds like a plan," Milo said, although he privately wondered why all the
powerful wizards living in Hogwarts didn't just use some Divinations to
determine what was in the forest.
"Yeh all right, Harry?" Hagrid asked the Harry, who looked a little nervous, but
determined. Milo was a little impressed that he'd volunteered for this, his
friend was only three days into his wizard training. Milo hadn't, in fact, seen
him perform any actual magic, yet. Now that's guts, he thought. But smart. If he
lives, anything we encounter will give him so much XP that he's bound to level
up at least once.
"Let's be off, then," Hagrid said, and led
sure looks eerie at night, Milo thought. A
felt a brief pang of homesickness; Thamior
the number of times Milo and his party had
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"Squeak?" he said hopefully to one, who woke up, looked at Mordy, and screamed.
Wrong one, he thought.
"There's a rat in my room!" she cried. "Lavender! Wake up!" another girl stirred
irritably.
"What?" Lavender asked sleepily. "Ack!" she shrieked. The other humans all stood
up out of bed while Mordy looked at them each, carefully, trying to figure out
which was the one with nice teeth. The fact that they all were screaming made it
easier.
"Hey, it's that rat Milo carries around all the time," said one (Hannah, in case
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Author's Notes: Thank you to all of the nice reviews I've gotten (they make my
day), and to Blinded in a Bolthole in particular for helping me rewrite my
summary.
Don't forget that you can check my Author page for a link to Milo's character
sheet and the free Fantasy, Sci-Fi, and/or Modern RPG, Semiautomagic, that I'm
working on.
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Throughout the day, several Gryffindor wellwishers came to visit Milo in the
hospital wing. Apparently, word had spread of his run-in with the acromantula,
and the rumours had quickly gotten out of hand.
"We heard you fought off a horde of giant spiders, mate " said one of the
Weasley twins (Milo decided, for convenience's sake, to call him George).
" and save a beautiful unicorn princess " said Fred (maybe).
" which is unusual, because unicorns tend to be male "
" and also managed to rescue Professor Quirrell "
" while growing increasingly weak from spider venom "
" defeated You-Know-Who for good "
" became king of the Goblins "
" found a Philosopher's Stone "
" so now, you can live forever "
" discovered a thirteenth use for dragon's blood "
" and that you're still an available bachelor "
" but maybe not for long, based on the rate these stories are spreading."
Following the conversation was somewhat dizzying, but sort of entertaining as
well. Hannah and Lavender dropped by with candy (though the people in this
strange land called them "sweets," which Milo supposed was generally accurate,
with the exception of several trillion flavours of the Every-Flavoured Beans),
and Lavender apologized for her behaviour during detention. Milo appreciated the
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"I'm just sad I didn't get to see his face when he read the Daily Prophet,"
Malfoy sniggered. Several Slytherins laughed as well. "I'll bet he was like,
'BWAH,'" he said, making a face that would match 'BWAH' rather well, in fact.
"Teach him to mess with Slytherin in our own dungeon," Crabbe (or Goyle) said.
"Yeah, shows him to mess with us in our own classroom," said Goyle (or Crabbe).
"And for that time on the train," Crabbe (probably) added.
"Yeah, that time on the Hogwarts express," said Goyle.
"Yeah, and for when Potter got the Remembrall from you," Crabbed continued.
"Yeah, for that time he showed you up in flying in front of everyone and got
Longbottom's Remembrall," Goyle clarified.
"And then when he got put on the Quidditch team even though first years aren't
allowed."
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"It shouldn't be too hard for you," Lucius said. "He's not a wizard." I doubt
he's even human. We may have accidentally created some sort of ... Homunculus.
An artificial human. There's no telling what it might do.
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When Milo returned to the castle, it was late afternoon. He was glad to make it
to safetynot because he thought he was really in any mortal danger, after what
he'd discovered in the forest, but because without any powerful spells he was as
good as useless if another plot hook appeared.
What he had to do was find Harry. He had a right to know about Milo's
discoveryit directly affected the Boy-Who-Lived, after all.
"M-M-Milo," Milo heard a familiar voice from behind him. "M-m-m-ight I have a
w-w-w-word with you?"
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The antidote, as it turned out, was harmless. That didn't stop Milo from buffing
himself up with a Resistance spell and keeping his Antitoxin on hand before
taking his dosage, however. Despite the fact that, aided by Snape's potion, Milo
recovered from the after-effects of his poisoning fairly quickly, the rest of
Autumn at Hogwarts was, well, unpleasant.
Harry and Ron made absolutely no progress in their hunt for information about
the Philosopher's Stone among the teachers, and for such a powerful and famous
artifact, Milo could barely find anything about it in the Hogwarts Library. He
Scholar's Touch-ed his way through mountains of thick, dusty tomes without even
opening their covers, and while he learned a lot of apparently useless
information, there was little that seemed relevant to him. Scholar's Touch
didn't grant any special powers to aid in memorization, so the fact that he
'read' the books so rapidly actually made it harder to keep his facts straight.
Still, he reckoned he'd absorbed enough general setting information that he
could start making Knowledge (History) checks about this world.
It was during this period that Milo noticed something unnatural about the people
here. The more he watched them learn, the less he was sure that they were even
human at allthey looked human, sure, but...
Well, to start, there was the food. The people here were obsessed with it, and
kept comparing the various flavours of dishes that the house-elves cooked up for
them (Milo was dying to meet one of the elves here, he was sure they could help
him. Elves were annoying, sure, but the pointy-eared pansies and magic went hand
in hand). Some even developed favourite foods and avoided certain ones
altogether. To Milo, food was a logistical challenge to be overcome while
adventuring and a source of danger if it ran low (thus, the Everlasting Rations,
which were all that Milo ever ate). The actual taste of food was something that
only came up in plot-relevant situations like smell, and the weather. The
people of Milo's world only smelled things when they were important, like a
Troglodyte's stench or a potential clue (or red herring, for that matter).
Otherwise, why bother even mentioning it?
Another peculiarity in these people was the inordinate amount of down time they
required. Milo had to spend eight hours sleeping and an hour memorizing spells,
but that left fifteen hours a day to put to use attending class, fighting
monsters, and crafting items off-screen. Milo knew an Artificer by the name of
Alton who, when he finally got his hands on a Ring of Sustenance, spent two
hours sleeping, eight hours crafting magic items (the maximum amount per day)
and the other fourteen hours in a day mass-producing baskets to fund his
adventuring. Alton did that every day for three hundred years straight, with
breaks to fight monsters to recover lost Experience Points, until he'd amassed a
fortune large enough to attract the attention of a wandering Blue Dragon.
Alton's unfortunate demise aside, it was just good sense to put their hours to
usethey were only given twenty-four in a day, after all. And besides, manual
labour was the sort of thing done during a timeskip, anyways, it's not like it
got in the way of the story. Even Hermione seemed shocked by the amount of time
he spent reading and working. In just one week, Milo managed to custom-tailor
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When Milo walked downstairs Hallowe'en morning, he was greeted by utter bedlam:
"II never thought this day would come," said Seamus. "Me mum always said it
would, but... I guess I never really believed her."
"Well, I, mean, it's surprising, but really, we've been ready for it," said Ron.
"I say it's about time it happened," said Fred.
"Keeps us from having to live out the rest of our lives in suspense, just
waiting for it to come," said George.
"I... I lost everything," said Lee Jordan soberly. "Everything."
"What happened?" asked Milo. "Did Voldid You-Know-Who return?"
"What?" asked Fred. "You've lost it, mate, it's nothing like that"
"Although to some, like our dear Lee here, it's arguably worse" continued
George.
"Teaches him to bet the farm on a sure thing"
"Don't be snide, you're only happy because it's your farm, now"
"Our farm, Fred, our farm"
"Look, guys," Milo interrupted. "Can one of you just give me a straight answer?"
"I am led to believe," said Hermione Granger, sitting casually in an armchair,
"that the Chudley Cannons went up against the Wigtown Wanderers this morning and
actually won."
"Wait, and this is supposed to be important?" Milo asked.
"Blimey, important, mate!" said Ron, "That was the Northwestern Regional
Semi-Finals!"
"So, to answer your question, apparently," said Hermione.
"The Cannons haven't won a match in decades!" Ron exclaimed. "Their fan club,
back when they had a fan club that is, well, its motto was Let's all just keep
our fingers crossed and hope for the best."
"Yawn," stated Milo. "Anyways, I have a sidequest to prepare forand, for that
matter, classes."
"Speaking of," Hermione said coyly, "what are you going to dress up as?"
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The boy is a Legilimens? Snape thought sharply. There was a sudden pain in
Milo's temple, and he felt a sudden sense of vertigo that knocked him to his
knees.
"H-how did you... what was... what just happened?" Milo asked, clutching his
head. His nose had started running, and he brushed it with his sleeve. The
Detect Thoughts spell no longer even registered Snape as an intelligent being,
it was like he wasn't even there.
"Answer me truthfully;I'll know if you're lying," Snape said imperiously. "Are
you a Legilimens?"
"Ah," Milo said, "No?"
Snape frowned. He's telling the truth, Snape thought to himself (and, this time,
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Author's Notes: I've gone back and changed the scene breaks on earlier chapters
to the oo that I use now, which actually appears on Fanfiction. Also, I've
edited some cases of the word Wizard to standardize capitalization: Capital W
refers to the D&D Wizard class, lower-case wizard refers to Harry Potter
wizards. However, I've probably missed a lot of them, but that's what I'll be
using from here on out.
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"All students, return immediately to your Common Rooms," said a beleaguered
Professor Trelawneyan attack by a Troll was enough to knock even the
Divinations Professor out of her usual half-asleep dazeto a group of
Gryffindors lounging in the Great Hall.
"Excuse me, Professor," said Percy, the Gryffindor Prefect. "what's going on?"
"There's a Troll loose on the second floor!" she said anxiously. "And to think
of all the poor students who saw the Grim today..."
"Right! Just leave it to me, Professor," said Percy, standing to his full height
(as if that would do much against the twelve-foot-tall monstrosity on the
loose). "Gryffindors, come with me! Are we missing anyone?"
The Gryffindors, mostly first years, looked around at each other.
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All the while with the most powerful men in the country breathing down his neck.
Wonderful.
"I'm sure if you just double-check your measuring," Hermione said in an attempt
to be reassuring, "you'll do fine."
Milo grinned nervously, then steeled himself. He had the beginnings of a plan in
mind, but for that he would need spells.
"So, erm, Milo my boy, where did you say you came from?" Fudge asked.
"Myra," Milo said proudly. "City of light! City of Magic!" The Myrari
government, though completely inept at dealing with dragons, goblins, and
bandits, nonetheless had a sophisticated system of Divinations set up to detect
citizens who didn't add the legally-mandated city motto after saying the city's
name. Milo wasn't sure exactly how far-reaching the effects were, so even here
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Author's Notes: The reviews I got this week really got to me. I'd hoped, but I'd
never really believed that something I wrote would be read around the world (I
just found out from Fanfiction that some of you live in places as far away from
me as Hong Kong, Jamaica, and South Africa) and actually enjoyed. Reading your
thoughts on what Milo's plan for escape would be was some of the most fun I've
had, ever. Coming up with his actual plan required me and a team of three highly
trained, well-equipped, professional, fully qualified geeks to stay up until the
birds outside started singing. The result is one that I'm particularly proud of,
and tops most of my zany D&D schemes by a wide margin.
Anyways. I'd just like to give a huge thank you to you folks around the world
for making a dream of mine come true.
P.S. Could someone with a recent print (i.e., bought it up to a few years ago
but not when it was new) of Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire PM me? It's
important.
P.P.S. From here on out, a double-length bar-o-thingy denotes the end of the
author's notes and the start of the story.
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"The nerve!"
"Who does he think he is?"
"He's in no position to make demands!"
The reaction to Milo's request for a larger cauldron was... varied.
"It's clearly a ploy," Snape sneered. "He hopes to dilute the potion so that it
won't explode in his face when he fails. It won't work."
"If he fails, Severus," Dumbledore said.
"No," Milo said. "Scale up the other ingredients proportionally."
There was a meaningful silence.
"Tell me, boy," Snape said finally. "Do you have a death wish? Do you have any
idea how large an explo"
"Oh, come now," Fudge interrupted. "We're in the presence of six of the
Department of Magical Law Enforcement's finest, not to mention the Supreme
Mugwump himself. I think we have more than enough magical muscle between us to
keep anyone from being harmed. Let's just get him a bigger cauldron and be done
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Author's Notes: To my knowledge, Rowling doesn't ever say exactly how large a
gold galleon is, but the Harry Potter Wiki said that the ones used in the movies
were the same size as an American Silver Eagle (57.2g if it were gold). Gold
pieces are 1/50th of a pound (9.071g) each, so some number crunching gave me an
exchange rate of 6.30854106 gp per galleon, assuming both have equivalent gold
purities.
P.S: the short break, oo, denotes a flash between simultaneous events in one
location and another rather than a full scene break. You'll see what I mean.
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Snape was decidedly more unpleasant towards Milo (and Gryffindor as a whole) in
Potions on Monday, presumably because of Milo's near-escape from Snape's test
over the weekend.
"You're holding your knife upside-down," Snape sneered at Milo as he sat
chopping Knarl tail. "Fifteen points from Gryffindor."
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As Milo walked to Binns' classroom, he decided fervently that the first spell he
was going to research would be one that turned his matchstick into a pin. The
only problem was that he couldn't think of any spells he'd ever heard of at his
level that could even come close to doing that.
The reason for Dumbledore's odd request that Milo sleep in the hospital wing
became immediately apparent upon his return to the Gryffindor Common Room Monday
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Author's Notes: Here's your Sunday bonus chapter, as promisedbut wait, there's
more! I don't know what's wrong with me, but I'm on a roll lately. I wrote an
entire chapter yesterday, and it wasn't this one. I'll put the finishing touches
on it today, and tomorrow, you, my faithful readers, get Bonus Chapter 2:
Revenge of the this Time it's Personal Strikes Back. Also, I decided to rename
the Hallowe'en chapters from the rather boring Part 1, 2, 3, and 4 to be
Sidequests, Hallowe'en, Odds of Survival, and The Troll and the Dementor,
respectively.
So: Chapter Seventeen will go up tomorrow, and Chapter Eighteen will go up on
Saturday, as usual. (Who knows, maybe Nineteen will be on Sunday?)
Anyways, on with the story! I hope nobody is deterred by the flood of chapters!
And if you like it, review it!
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"Sit," McGonagall commanded. Milo was in the hard leather chair in her office
before she'd finished saying the one-syllable word. "Your behaviour today was
cowardly, treacherous, sickening, and unbecoming of a Hogwarts student, much
less a member of my house. I have half a mind to expel you this very minute.
What do you have to say for yourself?"
"Well," said Milo, "in my defence, he sort of had it coming. I mean, look at
him."
"You will explain to me, right now, clearly and succinctly, how you could
possibly think that such a poor, sweet, innocent boy who has already suffered so
much hadwhat was it you said? Oh yes, how he had it coming. If I find your
explanation is in any way unsatisfactory, you'll be out of here faster than you
can say Mimbulus Mimbletonia."
"He's obviously working for You-Know-Who."
McGonagall sat down heavily in her office chair, stammering and apparently at a
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Author's Notes: To anyone who didn't check yesterday (Sunday), and it confused,
this is the second bonus chapter this week. If the last thing you remember in
the story is an angry McGonagall pulling Milo from a meeting with Quirrell, you
need to go back a chapter.
Also, to my absolute horror, as The Lost Hibiki pointed out, I've been reading
the requirements on Spontaneous Divination wrongly this whole time. I am so, so
sorrymy intent from the very beginning was to have Milo stay strictly within
the confines of the Rules as Written (RAW) in order to poke fun at some of the
quirks and inconsistencies in D&D, and also so that D&D fans would have a very
clear understanding of Milo's abilities (making it all the more fun to try to
figure out how he's going to get out of a tough position). As it turns out,
Spontaneous Divination requires substitution of one of a Wizard's bonus feats
other than Scribe Scroll, meaning it isn't available for Milo until level five
(meaning he can't have used it before his battle with the Troll). Normally, for
an error like that, I would go back and edit the previous chapters to fix it,
but in this case Milo's use of Spontaneous Divination is too deeply interwoven
within the plot to pull it out. I hope the hardcore D&D fans out there aren't
too put off by my mistake!
The best I can do is apologize, and say that either Milo comes from a campaign
world run by a DM who house-ruled Spontaneous Divination's prereqs, or
alternatively, Milo is such a munchkin that he figured out how to get it early
even though I never could.
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"Hey, Harry!" said Milo excitedly, running up to his partymember in their dorm
room. It was the day before the holiday, and everyone was eagerly awaiting two
weeks at homeeveryone, that is, except Harry and Milo, who were staying.
"What's up?" Harry asked.
"Check this out," he said, holding up an ordinary-looking Hogwarts school
uniform.
"You finally done tinkering with that thing?" Harry asked. "You said it would be
done weeks ago."
"Yeah, well," Milo said, "feature creep, you know. And then there's all the
detentions. Anyways, take this," Milo said, passing Harry the Cold Iron dagger
that he kept in his magic belt.
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Author's Notes: I just realized that, while D&D convention italicizes the names
of Spells, it doesn't italicize Magic Items. I'll start from here on writing
them without italics, and maybe go back and change previous chapters if I have
time. However, as always, writing new chapters takes priority over messing with
the formatting on old ones.
Also, I realized today that I'd been doing something this whole time that I
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Author's Notes: Sorry for the short chapter this week (a mere 7 pages instead of
the usual 10). I'm out of town with the family, so next week's chapter will
either be short as well or delayed a few days (Monday most likely, Tuesday at
the very latest). Also, as a result, this chapter hasn't been edited for grammar
and spelling as thoroughly as they usually are, but I'll come back and clean it
up later. Hopefully it's not too bad. Sorry about all that! Hopefully all the
bonus chapters last week and the week before make up for it.
Anyways, on with the story!
EDIT: Most of the typoes and things seem to have been caught now. Thanks to
everyone who helped point them out!
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"Look, I know people always say you look just like your dad, but with your mum's
eyes " Ron said.
"No, that's not what I meant. I actually saw my parents in this mirror. And
their parents, and their brothers and sisters, and a whole family." Harry told
them how, the night before, he'd gone exploring under his Cloak of Invisibility
and discovered the magical mirror in an unused classroom.
"Wow," said Ron, clearly impressed. "That must be some mirror."
"Show me," said Milo.
"Wait!" said Hannah. "You can't just go gallivanting off! You're supposed to
have complete bed rest, remember?"
"You sound just like Hermione," Ron muttered.
"Someone has to," said Hannah defensively.
Milo cursed. She was actually right if he got out of bed, he'd have to come
back and stay a whole 'nother day to get back to full hit points.
"I think I'll have to chance it," Milo said. With luck (something he very rarely
seemed to have) he wouldn't be needing all of his hit points for at least
another day or so. Harry's mirror, however, might not be there tomorrow at all,
and frankly, it seemed fairly plot-relevant.
"Let's go find it," Milo said, ignoring Hannah's protests. "But first, Harry
put it on your list. That, the Power of Love, and the Imperius Curse."
Harry shrugged, pulling the small stack of parchment which held The List (Milo
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Author's Notes: Sorry for the lateness (and, again, shortness) of this chapter!
I'm still flat-footed from my trip. Since Term is starting, I'll be switching to
Sundays for updates (thus giving me Saturdays to write). Once again, this
chapter was only briefly edited, so please forgive any errors! I'll try to fix
things over the course of the week. Things should be back to normal in terms of
length and grammar for the next chapter.
Also, an extremely helpful fan has shown me a workaround for a problem I've been
having with myth-weavers, so I might be able to post chapterly character sheet
updates. We'll see how things go.
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"You reckon we should go after him?" Harry asked.
"In a minute," Ron said absently, still staring at the Mirror.
"It's just ..." Harry said. "I dunno, he seemed a bit, well, off."
"I'm sure he's fine," Ron said, making a vague gesture.
"Looking into a mirror that shows your heart's desire and screaming your head
off doesn't seem particularly fine to me," Harry said with growing certainty.
"And, I mean, he's injured and all."
"Hey," Ron said, suddenly alert. "What do you reckon Hermione would see in here?
Herself with a load of the world's dullest books probably ... still, we should
probably show her when she gets back. And what about Fred and George?"
Harry looked at Ron, his eyes narrowing.
"So you think we should show a bunch of people?" Harry asked neutrally.
"Dunno," Ron shrugged. "Just wondering what they'd see is all. What about
Neville? Bet it'd be himself with no bandages holding a Remembrall that's
completely dim, eh? Or an 'O' in Transfiguration."
No way, Harry thought. Could Milo have been right about the Mirror?
"I think," Harry said slowly, "that we should go talk to Dumbledore or
McGonagall."
"What, really?" Ron asked, as if Harry had just suggested they jump into a pit
of venomous snakes.
"Yeah," said Harry. "I reckon the Mirror, it's, well, it's like Milo said, it's
making you want to go and get other people to show it to." The last several
words spilled out all at once.
"What?" Ron sputtered. "Need I remind you that he also nicked the contents of
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"Then, if you would just place your palm here," Dumbledore said, pointing at a
flat disc on one of the Debewitcher's spindly arms. Harry complied, taking care
not to go anywhere near the more dangerous-looking appendages. There was a tense
second or two as Harry waited for the results. The machine didn't, as far as
Harry could tell, give any sort of feedback, but eventually Dumbledore broke the
silence. "Well," he said, "it seems that you are, fortunately, no less or
more, for that matter yourself than you usually are." Harry sighed with
relief, collapsing into a nearby chair. "Now, Mister Weasley," Dumbledore said,
turning to Ron. "If you would ...?"
Ron gulped audibly, but put his now-heavily-sweating palm on the disc. To his
relief, nothing happened.
"See?" he said to Harry, pulling his hand away from the machine. "I'm fine, just
like I said."
"And Mister Amastacia-Liadon," Dumbledore said, turning to Milo. "It's your
turn."
"But I'm not possessed," he said stubbornly.
"I'm sure you're not," Dumbledore replied. "But, nevertheless, your two friends
were brave enough to try it. Surely you as, by your own admission, a hero
would be willing to do the same?"
"This is pointless," he muttered. "I'm sure we all have much more important
things to be doing especially you, headmaster, as Supreme Mugwump on top of
being Chief Warlock of the Wizengamot than entertaining a boy's delusions. I
mean, you yourself said the Mirror can't "
"You got his titles right," Harry said suddenly.
"Sorry, what?" Milo asked coolly.
"You get everything's name wrong," Harry said, backing away slowly.
"I don't "
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"What would you have done if that hadn't worked?" Milo asked.
"Ah," Dumbledore said with a slight twinkle in his eye. "In that case, I would
have done nothing."
"Nothing?" Milo asked, shocked. "Then the Hippogriff would have torn you to
pieces."
"I daresay not," Dumbledore said. "Minerva would have Stunned you well before
you finished casting your spell. Now, as to your second question...?"
"Right," Milo said. "What the Hells was that Mirror?"
"Ah, the Mirror of Erised," Dumbledore said. "It shows the heart's deepest, and
sometimes, unfortunately, darkest desire. Nothing more, and nothing less. I
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Author's Notes: Thank everyone for the increasingly positive flood of reviews!
Hope you enjoy reading this next chapter as much as I enjoyed writing it.
Also, I'm going to experiment with chapterly-updated character sheets now that I
can copy-paste them. Here's this one (replace the asterisks with periods):
myth-weavers*com/sheetview*php?sheetid=444154
EDIT: Wow, there were about a million embarrassingly obvious typos, grammatical
errors, and repeated sentences in the first version. Sorry, guys! I think I
caught most of them. Yikes.
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The remainder of the week was, for Milo, blissfully uneventful. Classes resumed,
and with them the hustle and bustle of several hundred Hogwarts students
returning from their vacation. Pleading illness (and who was qualified to
disagree with him?), Milo, true to his word, sequestered himself in the hospital
wing with Neville (Hannah, after a few days of rest and dozens of different
healing Charms and potions, was deemed fit to return to school) frantically
crafting Amulets of Protection From Evil and researching Kelgore's Fire Bolt.
It was here that Milo ran into a small problem of mathematics: it took two days,
hundreds of Galleons of owl-ordered supplies (Milo found he could affray these
costs somewhat by supplies nicked from Potions), and eighty Experience Points to
make each amulet. Milo really didn't know much about the demographics of this
plane (all he'd seen was a bit of Hogsmeade, Platform Nine and Three-Quarters,
and, of course, Hogwarts) but there were probably several thousand wizards and
witches out there. Even ruling out protecting the entire population and
focussing on those who posed an imminent threat to Milo anyone nearby who
possessed a wand, had a drop of magical blood, could see lightning and hear
thunder the number of Amulets required was insanely unrealistic.
"This is just so backwards," Milo muttered after, upon reaching the end of the
week, completing only his third Amulet of Protection From Evil. The problem was
that an Imperius'd wizard or witch was more of a threat to those around them
than to themselves, so Milo, in order to protect himself, had to equip anyone
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Author's Notes: For those who don't know, the Far Realm is basically the
Elemental Plane of Cthulhu. Also, Liquid Sunlight can be found on page 110 of
Complete Scoundrel and is useful for literally any character.
Minor Rules Note: I only realized today that 3.0 and 3.5 have different XP
reward rules. I never did get the 3.5 DMG and the SRD doesn't have the XP chart,
so who knew? Because it's what I'm more familiar with, I, as DM, rule that Harry
Potter and the Natural 20 uses 3.0's system for that alone. Anyways, on with the
story!
ORWELLIAN EDIT: Fixed a number of typos and some weird tense problems.
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3.5 rules
the average party
it by the
higher-level ones
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Milo had heard it said that a Wizard, given time to prepare, could defeat any
obstacle in existence. To be fair, most of these times had been from Milo's own
mouth. Also, the saying assumed the Wizard had access to Magic Item dealers and
a way to purchase spells. And, for that matter, three to four meatshields. That
said, walking down the dirt path to the Forbidden Forest at 8:00PM on Friday
evening, Milo felt ready for anything.
He had a holy symbol of Boccob around his neck with his Amulet of Protection
From Evil, a holy symbol of Pelor wrapped around his left wrist like a bracelet
and a holy symbol of Heironeous around his right even Mordy, sitting on his
shoulder, had a compact symbol of the local variety (just a pair of lines
intersecting at a right angle; how boring could you get?) held prominently in
his hand. The symbols were all of silver and polished till they shone like
mirrors for optimum effect. He'd whittled twelve wooden stakes, six of which he
kept in his Belt and six scattered about his person. That morning, he'd poured
several pounds of fine garlic powder into the water supply before showering; the
other Gryffindors had not been amused, but, Milo was pretty sure, neither would
any vamps who tried to suck his blood.
Somewhat more significantly, Milo had finally finished the Headband of Intellect
+4 that he'd been putting off for months (in actuality, it was a small, discreet
silver hairclip that would be all but impossible to notice in his tangled hair
local wizards, from what Milo could tell, rarely, if ever, wore the headbands
that were all the rage back in Myra (city oflight!cityofmagic!), but Milo still
thought of it as a headband). In addition to making him marginally better at
crossword puzzles, the Headband significantly increased the number of spells
Milo could prepare every morning. Spells which Milo had finally gotten around to
researching and he was dying to test out, ideally on some unsuspecting
bloodsuckers.
And this time, if only for the novelty of it, Milo had decided to actually make
sure that local vampires were anything like the vampire's back home. Quirrell
had given him permission to read books from the restricted section on the
subject, and, fortunately, they seemed more or less the same as what he was
familiar with. Pale skin? Check. Inexplicably heavy accents? Check.
Vulnerability to sunlight, running water, garlic, and mirrors? Check. Fangs? You
betcha.
What had surprised Milo, however, was their apparent acceptance in wizard
society. From what he could tell, they were persecuted, sure, but were still
allowed to walk down the street in broad daylight (so to speak). Fred and George
said that Honeydukes even sold blood-flavoured lollypops, although he wasn't
sure how far he could believe anything they told him. Throughout the Azel
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Author's Notes: Something I've been doing this whole time, which I only just
realized I haven't mentioned, is that I actually do roll for Milo's hit points.
He is... not overly blessed with luck.
Today's character sheet can be found here: www myth-weavers com/sheetview
php?sheetid=452348 (replace spaces with periods, as usual). Note: I just
realized that it was set to "Private" view, and not "Public;" you should all be
able to see the character sheet now. Sorry!
The whole chapter is posted. Once again, sorry for the wait! I'm doing my best.
There's a pretty good chance next week's chapter will be late as well, but after
that things should be normal again.
Also, I threw in a non-canonical AU sidestory I wrote in a particularly dull
European History class last week. It has moderate spoilers for Robert Jordan's
The Wheel of Time, so don't read it unless you're caught up. And if you're not
caught up, read the series. It's awesome.
SAD NOTE: Due to Prismatic Dragon-levels of homework, there will, tragically,
not be an update of Harry Potter and the Natural 20 on (the Canadian)
Thanksgiving weekend. (That's this weekend).
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And he called himself a Wizard. One of the Wise. He wasn't worth his pointy hat.
What had he accomplished? He'd as good as told Voldemort Godsdamned Voldemort
about the secret workings of Arcane Magic and the D20 System. Milo had almost
killed one of his best friends. With a dagger. Reality was his plaything, and
he'd resorted to throwing a block of sharpened metal.
With effort, he steadied his breathing enough to speak. He felt a sharp,
metallic tang of metal in his mouth.
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Author's Notes: last chapter's Wheel of Time joke-section (it's not meant to be
taken seriously) was rather a lot of fun, and fairly well received, so I might
do more in the future. We'll see how things turn out. Sorry for the long delay,
but it should be the last missed weekend for a whileI haven't got any
assignments worth mentioning due until mid-November. Updates might become
erratic around then. Apologies in advance.
Update Nov 3rd: Hello all you HP:MOR readers! It just came to my attention that
Eliezer Yudkowsky/Less Wrong recommended me on his blog on Thursday and a number
of new readers have arrived because of that. Which is awesome. Enjoy! Although I
think "Rationalist Fanfic" is somewhat of an exaggeration (albeit one that makes
me happy) and that "Rationalist-inspired Fanfic" is more accurate because, well,
anyone who's met Milo likely won't be immediately struck by how rational he is.
Is Irrationalist Fanfic a thing? /ramble.
In other news, there won't be an update tomorrow because of an essay due Monday,
but I think with some re-shuffling we can avoid the Great Schedule Slip of
October from re-occurring. I tend to leave my homework for weekends, which is
also when I do my writing. So. As an experiment, I am going to try switching the
update day to Thursdays. That way, if I can't find time in the weekend to write,
I won't just give up on the update altogether. Whether there will be one this
Thursday is only 50-50, because of Good Reasons I Swear, and Why Are You Looking
At Me Like That? Stop! I'm Trying Real Hard And The Next Chapter Will Be Real
Soon Now.
Update November 26th: Okay, so here's the deal. I'm starting to think I have the
mythical Writer's Block. I know what's going to happen nextit's all been
planned out for ages. From the beginning, basically. But, when I'm actually
staring at the screen and keyboard, every sentence I write has to be forced out
with far more effort than it should take. I'm writing this fic for fun, after
all, and every draft of Chapter 27 has been, well, atrocious.
So. I don't know when the next update will be, and I'm so sorry. It will happen
at some point, and that's a promise, Mister Frodo. Probably in January between
terms, but I can't know for certain. I haven't had to deal with this before, and
this is a decidedly inconvenient time for it to strike what with all the new
readers coming and all. But. I'm sure most of you know this, but if you hit
"subscribe" then you'll be the first to know when my block is gone and I stop
rolling 1's on Craft (Epic Fanfic) checks.
To re-iterate: I'm so sorry. I'm doing my best. But the more I worry about the
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Omake: HP:MoMunchkinality
Author's Notes: Hey, y'all! Two things were recently discovered, one by me, and
one by you. By me: my creativity isn't broke! And by you: I'm not dead!
Thanks to all of the encouraging PM's you lot have sent. Seriously, I have the
best fans ever. By way of thank you, I give you, Sir Poley's Essay
Procrastination Project! (Now in Technicolour(TM)). Or, in other words, what
if... Milo was sucked into a slightly different Harry Potter universe? I
present, in all of its 535-word, 45-minutes-of-typing-glory, Harry Potter and
the Methods of Munchkinality.
The next HP:N20 chapter will come out Real Soon Now.
EDIT: Just to clarify: This chapter has no bearing on the plot of Harry Potter
and the Natural 20. It's a non-canonical sidestory.
ooooooo
"So tell me, Harry, what's all this physics nonsense that you keep going on
about?" Milo asked.
Harry was... unusual, even in this world where the unusual was commonplace. He
seemed, at times, almost like someone from Milo's own worldhe was, for example,
more than capable of predicting what would happen next based on convention and
the patterns of story, but... sometimes, he was beyond alien. The strange little
boy's insistence on the fundamental rules of the universe was simply baffling.
Couldn't he feel the dice rolling? Couldn't he see that time was divided into
discrete, six-second intervals?
"Oh, well, it's simple, really. You see..." Harry spun an amazingly elaborate
web of rules and laws and equations, talking about Force (how a damage type
could be measured in units other than Hit Points, or have anything to do with
mass was simply insane), Power, Friction, and Energy. Most confusing of all was
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Some time before 7 AM, the villagers of Hogsmeade were surprised to find a
dirty, bloodied, half-dead (or rather, four-thirteenths, to be precise, since
you asked) young boy stumble into their village.
Again.
But, today, the boy didn't look exhausted. He didn't look lost, or confused, or
afraid, or even hungry (making him practically unique among eleven-year-olds
everywhere).
He just looked determined.
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Milo said. "We have no idea what's on the other side of this door.
killed the dog already, passing it off as necessary to save Hermione.
have replaced it with anything. Trolls, Giants," he glanced at Ron and
"Giant Trolls, Dragons, whatever."
"What's your point?" Ron asked. "We're going in anyway. We both know it."
"What I'm saying is: be ready for anything." Milo calmly drew his staff and
traded his knife from his extradimensional Belt pocket to a more-easily-reached
sheath, then checked his Magic Items to be certain. Robe, Belt, Amulet, Gloves,
Headband, check. He took a deep breath. "All right, party. It's taken us long
enough. Let's do this thing," and pushed the door open with his gloved hand.
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Author's Notes: I'm Back.
AKA "We now return you to your regularly-scheduled fantastic fan fiction."
AAKA If you don't get the reference in the chapter title, go read anything by
David (and Leigh) Eddings. You won't regret it.
AAAKA Merry Christmas, Internet.
(But seriously, short updates suck but better short than never. I decided to
stop being a perfectionist and just release it, warts and all. Fixing of typos
and whatnot will come later. If this keeps up, I'll have your next update
Thursday or Friday of next week.)
Author's Notes: Another short chapter but at least I'm on time! This will
continue until I get back into the swing of things.
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The locked door swung open without making a sound. Inside was a familiar, large,
dark room.
"Some lights all 'round, yeah?" Milo asked quietly. He'd do it himself, but he
had to conserve his magiceven the cantripsuntil the final confrontation. With
no discernible limit (as far as he could tell) on the number of spells they
could cast each day, Milo needed to rely on them to get him to Quirrell.
But that was the proper state of affairs. It felt right to him. All that solo
adventuring? That was unnatural. Wizards, while hardly social creatures, do
operate best in groups of less-arcane, more-giant-sword-wielding,
possessor-of-the-mighty-thews, slayer-of-many-a-fell-beast, meat shields. Or,
failing that, friendsMilo still couldn't believe he was using that term and
meant itwith magic.
It was like being in a party again. Even if it was a party entirely composed of
squishy wizards.
"Lumos," Hermione and Ron muttered, and the tips of their wands began to glow
like torches.
"Blimey," Ron said.
"Merlin," Hermione said in a whisper.
"Indeed," Milo agreed, staring into the room. This was most unexpected.
The room was empty.
"Well," Milo said. "That was most unexpected. I suppose they haven't gotten
around to replacing the dog, after all. Shall we?" He gestured to the trap door
that lay beneath where Fluffy once sat.
"You know," Ron said idly, "I seem to remember this room being, well, bigger
last time we were here."
"Now that you mention it," Milo said, "I think you're right. I mean, it is big"
"but not that big, you know?" Ron said.
"Yeah. Weird."
"It is not weird," Hermione said. "Honestly, haven't any of you ever read
Hogwarts: A History?"
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"Well, crap," Milo muttered. "That right there is a Hell of a lot of keys."
There were thousands of tiny golden, silver, and brass keys fluttering about the
chamber, somewhat reminiscent of Golden Snitchesif the semi-sentient sporting
equipment were somehow integral to solving the plot and defeating a powerful
dark wizard. (Psh).
"So... what," Ron mused, "we have to find the right one? That's like looking for
a, well, a key in a stack of keys. Moving keys. Blimey, this will take the rest
of our lives."
"Assuming we could even grab them," Hermione added. "They're pretty high up
there. Or, you know, I could save the lot of us a lifetime of searching, and
just Alohomora the lock."
"Brilliant!" Ron exclaimed.
Hermione raised her wand and aimed it at the door, but stopped abruptly.
"Unless, of course, someone wants to interrupt my spell to vent his or her
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Milo opened the door a crack and peeked through. The room was pitch dark, but
his sense of smell confirmed his suspicions.
Crap.
He, ever so quietly, closed the door and looked back at his companions.
"Right," he whispered. "So, there's a Troll on the other side of this door."
His companions stared at him blankly for a few seconds, then cursed sulfurously.
"The same one as before?" Ron asked after venting for a moment. "If we're lucky,
it'll be so scared of Hermione here that it'll lie down and play dead when we
enter."
"Could be," Milo said, "But I wouldn't count our lives on that. Frankly... I'm
not sure we can take him." The last encounter he had had with a Troll had proved
definitely, dreadfully, defenestratively disastrous. He looked at his comrades,
whose faces were ashen. They'd thrown everything they'd had at it, and it had
still gotten away. Hermione and he had been seriously injured.
"Wait!" Ron said, his face brightening suddenly. "Milo can just blast it like he
did that door!"
"Yeah..." Milo said, "about that. That was kind of a one-off. Sorry, guys. What
else have we got?" Maybe they should have tried to solve the last puzzle after
allthe fickle being that ran the universe appeared to be punishing him for his
brute force approach.
"If we had a large quantity of dust, I suppose I could use Ventus again,"
Hermione mused. "But even that didn't finish off the last one."
"How about a Hippogriff?" Ron suggested. "Like back at the Duelling Club. That
Hufflepuff was in the hospital wing for three daysmind, I reckon he was just
trying to skive classes."
"Didn't prepare Summon Monster," Milo admitted, "but I have something that's
almost as good for this. I only give it even odds of winning, though, so I
suggest we run past it while it's distracted. Sound good?"
"Not particularly," Hermione confessed, "But I don't see that we have any other
option."
"Great. This spell takes six seconds to cast, so open the door for me at the
count of five, okay?" Ron nodded, and moved to stand by the heavy, iron-studded
wooden door. Milo rolled up his sleeves, adjusted his Arcanist's Gloves
slightly, and began casting. Ron swallowed nervously, his hand on the doorknob.
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can think of no witch more suited for the task," someone said from
Milo, keenly aware he had only five hit points remaining (he'd
upon levelling up), not to mention no spells more powerful than
warily turned to the door.
"Professor!" Harry said in relief. In the doorway was none other than Professor
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Dumbledore simply smiled. "I think, if you move alacritously, you may be able to
catch your friends before they reach the hospital wing. If you do see them,
could you tell them that all four of you earned fifty house points each? Ohand,
if you could ask Harry to come visit sometime this evening, it would be much
appreciated."
"Th-thank you, Professor," Milo stammered. He was still too surprised by his
sudden discovery to fully process what was going on. His backstory was working
againbut it seemed somewhat different from before. Back then, the answers
simply appeared as necessary, but now... it was as if Milo had been the one to
will them into existence. This warranted further thought and experimentationbut
for now, he would just enjoy what had happened. He had to level up, sooner or
later he'd have to deal with the consequences of beating Malfoy and his mooks
senseless, and figure out a plan to turn a matchstick into a pin, but that could
(hopefully) be done another day.
As Milo turned the doorknob, Dumbledore spoke once more.
"Ohand Milo? I'm proud of you."
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Author's Notes: Fear not! Harry Potter and the Natural 20 is not over yet! Next
week's chapter will be mini-epilogues (a couple of largely disjointed short
stories covering a few things left to wrap up) which will then be followed by
year two, maybe after a week or two of planning, Harry Potter and the Confirmed
Critical. For simplicity's sake, as far as Fanfiction is concerned they'll be
the same fic (The first chapter of book two will be Chapter 34 of Harry Potter
and the Natural 20). That way, you don't need to worry about finding and
subscribing to a new fic.
Epilogue
Author's Notes: Sorry for the lateness (as usual). Term ends tomorrow, and then
there's exams, but after that I'll have a lot more time to make sure updates are
regular-ish, like last Spring/Summer.
In other news, my fic so far (including the two omakes, but not the author's
notes) clocks in at 265 pages, font-size 11, single-spaced. It's roughly double
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Author's Notes: Well, here it is, as promisedthe sequel. Here's Milo's latest
character sheet: ?sheetid=553596
However, Milo's build is undergoing some substantial behind-the-scenes
modifications, and it's not quite done yet. Nothing mentioned in the chapter
will be altered, but his stats, feats, spells, and gear are subject to change
without warning. I decided it would be ridiculous to hold back the next chapter
after I'd finished writing it just because I hadn't finished picking spells and
sorting through Milo's skills. Also, for those of you wondering about Milo's
choice of PrC, I have one answer to you: text trumps table. I couldn't believe
it either.
Chapter One: Dynamic Entry
"Gah!" Milo said, the sphere growing to reach his neck. "What did youhow didI
won Initiative, damnit! This isn't fair!"
Wellby watched, horrified, as a sphere of darkness flickering with green
lightning spread to envelop his young companion. What in Yondolla's cornucopia
was that? Ironically, Milo was the only one in the party with any significant
ranks in Spellcraft but he was far too busy being swallowed by the mysterious
void to identify the unknown spell. As a Rogue, Wellby had far more important
things to do with his Skill Ranks, plentiful as they were.
"You... you... " Wellby was speechless. Sure, sometimes PCs were killedor
worseby villains, but... in the surprise round? That broke the code.
"No, I didn't" Thamior the Thaumaturge protested, backing away in fear from the
ball of darkness. Milo was now nowhere to be seen.
Wellby glanced at Gerard, their heavily armed-and-armoured Fighter, who nodded
silently.
"Have at thee, thou villain!" Gerard shouted, brandishing his greatsword, and
charged Thamior, who still seemed too surpriseda careful act, no doubtto act.
If Gerard could land the swing, the fight would be effectively over. At third
level, there were few forces more feared than an 18 Strength, Power Attacking
Fighter armed with a Masterwork Greatsword making an unimpeded chargeespecially
to a target as squishy as Thamior, who, despite his title, seemed to be a
Wizard.
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idly. Wellby
heavy-lidded
dull boredom
bloodlust he
"Avada Kedavra." There was another brilliant flash, and Wellby heard a heavy
metal-on-stone clank. He didn't have to be able to see Zook to know what had
happened.
A primary caster with the ability to spam high-DC Save-or-Die spells? Wellby
thought rapidly. Two options: either she's well beyond our ECL, or she's
min-maxed to the Outer Planes and back. If so, she probably doesn't have the Hit
Points or Base Attack Bonus to back up that kind of magic. Either option
shattered conventionNPCs were not traditionally optimized, and it was
practically unheard-of for one high enough level to cast that many death spells
in a day to interfere with a third-level party. Either way, Wellby's best chance
lay in closing the distance and engaging in melee. He might be able to break her
concentration with Attacks of Opportunitymaybe. If he could last a few rounds,
he mightmightbe able to finish her off. Gerard could likely do it, but without
surprise or an ally to flank with, Wellby was unable to Sneak Attack, making him
barely more powerful than a caster of his level.
Nothing for it. Wellby eased his twin swords out of their sheathes, took a deep
breath, and leapt out from over Gerard's body. The woman let out a mad scream of
laughter, simultaneously condescending and contemptuous.
"Imperio."
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Eleven months later, Milo lay on his back in the grass outside the Burrow
enjoying a cool breeze. His modified Hogwarts uniform could protect him from the
heat of a burning building, meaning that even the normally-blistering July heat
passed him by completely. Mordy, Milo's rat familiar, was putting his modest
swim speed to good use splashing about in a nearby pond. A few of the Weasley's
resident gnomes had thought Mordy might make a decent light brunch a few days
before. The familiar remained evasive as to what, exactly, went down, but nobody
had seen nor heard from the gnomesor any gnome, for that mattersince.
Without a home to return to, Milo had tried to convince Dumbledore to allow him
to stay at Hogwarts over the summer. In addition to the obvious perksfree food
and solid stone wallsit would give him ample time to explore and discover some
of the castle's secrets before his next adventure. Also, though Milo was
somewhat hesitant to admit it even to himself, he'd been increasingly thinking
of the school as his new home. He must have failed his Diplomacy check pretty
severely, because the normally lenient Headmaster put his foot down. Apparently,
it was standard procedure to refuse students' requests to stay over the summer,
as Harry had also been sent home. Milo tried not to feel bitter about the whole
matter and make the most of his between-adventure downtime. Right now, though it
didn't look like it, Milo was actually (in a manner of speaking) hard at work
crafting magical gear.
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Author's Notes: It appears that last chapter's Author's Notes got misplaced
before posting, somehow. Peculiar. Well, it's back up, with the link to the
character sheet. Milo's build still isn't quite finalized (mainly I just need to
pick a few more spells for Spell Mastery and clean up his skills) but that won't
affect the story noticeably. Enjoy!
Today's Character Sheet: myth-weavers com/sheetview php?sheetid=553596
Chapter Two: Nicked
"WHAT THE EFF IS GOING ON HERE?" Vernon roared, climbing to his feet and
brushing dust and crme brulee out of his impressive mustache. "WHO THE"
"Nope," Milo said, using his magically-enhanced fencing ability to slice off the
left half of Vernon's exceptional mustache.
"Who is this 'Harry?'" asked Mrs Mason, who seemed to be taking the situation
remarkably well, all things considered. "There's no Harry here; I'm afraid you
have the wrong house."
"Harry Potter," Milo clarified. Pelor, but these people are dim. "He does live
here, does he not?"
"He's... our nephew," Vernon said, glancing hesitantly at the Masons. "Left in
our care after his criminal parents died. He's very disturbed, but we do what we
can"
"So he is here," Milo grinned. "Now hand him over before things get ugly."
Vernon turned back to Milo and drew himself up to his full height, brushing
splinters from the shoulder of his ruined jacket. He seemed to be two completely
different people, depending on who he was talking toingratiating to the NPC
couple, brash and boisterous to Milo. Peculiar.
"Do I look like the sort of man who can be intimidated?" he asked, his face
growing even redder. Milo looked him up and down. Well, yesif I had ranks in
Intimidate. But, seeing as how I do not...
"I was thinking less 'intimidation' and more 'business arrangement.' You give me
Harry, and I give you a house."
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a really good idea," Hermione approved. "From what I've read, one of the
problems they had there in the last war was being unable to determine
under the effects of the Imperius curse, or, even if they could, to
it. They're still trying to sort out who may have been compromised."
"Exactly. That, and the fact that I can charge whatever I want for them." If the
Ministry was interested, he could finally pay Harry back for the small fortune
he borrowed from him last year. Material costs aside, he still had to pay the XP
cost, meaning he couldn't just give them awayeven if he had the time to.
"We can go to the Owl Post Office, and by the time we're done, likely Harry and
Ron will have forgotten why they ran off in the first place," Hermione
suggested.
The Owl Post Office, as it turned out, was exactly what it sounds like.
OwlsMilo still couldn't understand why these wizards relied on owls for post,
especially when there were not one but two forms of teleportation (Apparating
and Floo powder) availablefluttered in and out through the largely open roof to
the floor, where frantic postal workers tied fresh parchment to their legs and
beleaguered janitors used magic and enchanted mops in a futile attempt to keep
the room clean. And that wasn't even getting to the noise. The screech of owls
and massed flutter of wings was nearly deafening.
"Morgana's ghost!" Hermione gasped. "It smells like a dung bomb went off in
here!"
Milo, choking, wrapped a black silk filter mask from his belt around his face,
covering it from the eyes down. While he doubted the smell was poor enough to
force him to make a Fortitude save, he wasn't taking any chances.
"How do the employees tolerate it?" Milo asked. Unfortunately, his newfound
appreciation for taste had the side-effect of drastically increasing his
perception of non-plot-relevant scents. In addition to being a minor hindrance
to his plot sense, it could also be extremely annoying.
"Bubble-Head Charm?" she suggested. "Although you'd think that long-term
reliance on a small volume of recycled air would weaken the immune system..."
"I think they get enough contact with unsanitary material through other means to
make up for that," Milo pointed out. After... certain events last year, he'd
decided to spend some time over the summer researching basic medical theory in
this worldenough that there wouldn't, hopefully, be a repeat of last Christmas
but not enough that he was forced to invest skill ranks cross-class in Heal.
"I'd be more worried about what happens to wizards and witches with bad breath."
An obviously-stressed young wizard was sitting behind the counter. His
fingernails had all been chewed to the quick, his hair was in disarray, his lips
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"We've been over this," Lucius sighed. "The Order had him well protected."
"Well, I for one am not afraid of a stay-at-home mom, her moronic husband, and a
bunch of schoolteachers," said Alecto Carrow irritably. "We could have taken
them."
"And then what?" Lucius said wearily. "Need I remind you that, the last time you
met, the subject in question managed to destroy your wand? In any case, it would
have blown our cover. That idiot Fudge doesn't, and can't, know that we're still
operating as a group."
"But we aren't, are we?" Amycus Carrow pressed. "Operating. What have we
actually done? That boy ran off, and we've just been sitting on our thumbs for
six months. And now he's in Dumbledore's grasp once more."
"He'd never left it, Amycus. Trust me; Dumbledore had that boy under lock and
key, even if it didn't look it."
"Was he, now? So, how, if he was under Dumbledore's lock and key, he ended up in
the hands of the Muggles?" Alecto had the look of a person who had planned this
conversation out in advance. Lucius realized he was treading on dangerous
ground.
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The necessity of subtlety entirely seemed to escape their grasp. Of course even
the Muggles could pull off a simple abduction. But to do so without stirring
suspicion requires all the delicacy and tact of plucking the sole egg from a
Hippogriff's nest.
"Nothing, Lucius," Amycus said, backing down somewhat. "Just frustration caused
by the heat." Lucius decided not to point out the fact that it was, in fact,
quite cool in his council chamber. Despite the late summer heat, there were
charms keeping temperature fluctuations to a minimum. Amycus deliberately chose
a thin excuse, and the others would notice it. Still, Lucius's position was
tenuous enough as it was. He needed to give them something to do other than
fight him, or worse: discover his secret. He didn't want the Dark Lord to
return. Things were better now.
It frustrated him to no end that they failed to see what he did. They'd already
wonor, at least, the Malfoys had won. There was hardly a department, bureau, or
branch of the Ministry that wasn't under his control to one extent or another.
He had had influence in every major economic institution and guild, save
Gringotts. But then, nobody had any influence over Gringotts. That was the
point. Cornelius Fudge may be the Minister for Magic, and Dumbledore may be the
Supreme Mugwump and Chief Warlock of the Wizengamot, but he, Lucius Malfoy, was
really in charge of Magical Britain. But they couldn't get over the fact that
the Dark Lord was dead, and that mudbloods roamed freely. Lucius hated
Muggleborns as much as the next manwell, generally more than the next man,
except in this particular companybut couldn't they see that they were going
about it the wrong way? The solution wasn't torture and murder. It was much more
insidious.
The solution, of course, was bureaucracy. Lucius couldgenerallyblock the
hiring and promotions of mudbloods and their sympathizers. On average. Arthur
Weasley was evidence of that. Give him ten years, and there wouldn't be a single
mudblood heading any department, and simple nepotism would do the rest. In fifty
years there wouldn't be one in the Ministry. In a hundred, they'd all be living
in ghettoesnot because they were ordered to, but because they couldn't afford
anything better. Another generation and they wouldn't be able to afford wands.
And he could do what the Dark Lord never couldensure a successor. The Dark
Lord's movement died with him, but there would be a Malfoy guiding British
politics and economics for generations.
But people like the Carrows and the Lestranges could never think that way, and,
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Author's Notes: Milo's character sheet for this year is finally finalized. Sorry
for the short (and late) chapter; I've had wisdom teeth-related issues and also
got distracted by another project. As such, this chapter and the next one will
sort of blend together into one slightly-larger-than-normal chapter in a lot of
ways.
Today's Character Sheet: myth-weavers com/sheetview php?sheetid=586163
Chapter Five: How Could This Go Wrong?
"Why in the Hells is there a Half-Fiend Horse strapped to that carriage?!"
Silence.
"Does it think it can fool us? Is it simply pretending to be a regular horse?"
Silence.
"Maybe it's trying to lure us in, and then... neigh at us. Evilly."
Silence.
"Foolish evil extraplanar equine Erinyes-extraction! For I can see your true
form! Fear my arcane mi"
"Er," Ron interrupted, "Before you get all worked up and turn that carriage into
a smoking crater, mate... what horse are we talking about?"
"The one pulling the carriage," Milo said, gesturing at the bony, black,
batwing-sporting horselike-creature. "I mean, just look at it. It has fangs, for
gods' sakes! That thing is evil incarnate."
"Yeah... about that," Harry said. "There's nothing there."
"Except for the carriage, which, by the way, is horseless," Hermione added
helpfully.
Milo gave Harry, Ron, and Hermione a skeptical look that was only matched by the
skeptical look that Harry, Ron, and Hermione were giving him.
"You mean you can't see it?" he said. They gave their murmured assents, still
giving him the look people reserved for situations like these. "So, the question
is: is it a phantasm, or is it selectively invisible?"
"A phantasm?" Ron asked.
"An illusion," Hermione responded.
"More specifically," Milo clarified, "An illusion that only certain individuals
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Author's Notes: I noticed today that fanfiction lets you make a cover image for
your story, so I made one in about 30 seconds on the gimp. It's not very good.
If anyone wants to make a better one (really, almost anything would be better)
just let me know.
There's some stuff happening next week, so the next chapter will be short and/or
late.
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Chapter Six: Whitewashed Secrets
Milo slipped through the doors to Lockhart's office, aware that he would be
largely helpless if the famous wizard had left any magical traps in case of
intruders. While Milo's instincts told him this was unlikelymost magical traps
he could name took hours or days to set up, and Lockhart had only just arrived
at the schoolhe reminded himself that wanded magic could at times be
unpredictable. Not that there was really much he could do about it.
He wasn't certain what he expected to find, which, in his experience, was
generally a good enough reason to investigate something.
While Lockhart appeared to have only been in this office long enough to drop off
his luggage (or, more likely, had a fan or house elf carry it for him), there
was already a pile of mail in the centre of the floor that reached Milo's
shoulders. No wonder the employees at the owl post office looked so stressed,
Milo thought. Probably half the mail in magical Britain goes to Lockhart.
"Scholar's Touch," Milo muttered, tapping eight letters more-or-less at random.
All eight were fan mail with no discernible secret code (of which Milo was
something of an expert, considering all of his Ranks in the
frustratingly-underused Decipher Script skill. He hadn't yet found anything
worth deciphering since he brilliantly deduced that 'Erised' was 'Desire'
written back-to-front). Still, that wasn't to say that there wasn't something
incriminating in there somewhere. However, it would take all of Milo's magic for
weeks to Scholar's Touch the whole pilenot to mention all the library books he
still had to read.
This was not to say that Milo was out of tricks, however.
"Spontaneous Search, Master's Touch." The two spells together allowed him to
thoroughly search Lockhart's entire office in the blink of an eye, much as he
had done to help Neville find his toad the first time he'd boarded the Hogwarts'
Express.
This time, instead of discovering a toad, Milo was presented with a catalogue of
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If they weren't
dealing with an
She was leaning
underestimating
It was clear what the other Fiona must have done, because the other Fiona had
the same lead she had: a name.
Dursley.
She itched to tug at that lead like a mosquito bite, but she knew she couldn't.
Not yet. Doing that was what ended the other Fiona. This whole situation getting
beyond hershe had only limited experience with conducting a full-blown
investigation. She was only a sergeant, what could she do by herself? She needed
allies, she needed resources, she needed a warrantbut she knew that nobody
would believe her story.
And that was why Fiona, for the first time in her life, committed a premeditated
criminal act. With no known means of contacting Loki directly, she was forced to
rely on something rather more blunt.
She gave the spray can three shakes with one hand, held up the stencil she'd cut
out ahead of time with her other, and with the press of a button defaced the
pristine white picket fence.
Inspector Hannigan Surrey PD knows about the magic.
And just like that, her trap was set.
oooooo
Author's Notes: Turns out having my Teeth of Wisdom +2 out was much less
conducive to writing than I'd imagined. Sorry for the delay, but in return, I
present my favourite chapter title so far. Alternate titles: I Scry With My
Arcane Eye, Scry Versus Scry, Scry Versus Spy, For Scrying Out Loud, Scry Kids.
(I apologize for nothing. If you really hated puns, you never would have made it
through an entire book of something I wrote).
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when, the next day, she issued a retraction saying that he was a wise,
man who was simply sometimes misunderstood and would have the entire
under control with help from the most talented wizards and witches the
ever seen?" asked a fourth.
She walked
hallways, said
and, once, had to
reason.
It had taken Milo half an hour to walk from the staircase that led up to
Gryffindor Tower to the Headmistress's office.
McGonagall led them back in under a minute.
"and that's how I defeated the Death Eaters and damaged the tower," Milo
explained. "And before you ask, don't worry. The trap will only trigger once; it
won't go off on the other students."
"Make no mistake, Mister Amastacia-Liadon, we are not yet finished with this
subject," McGonagall said archly. "You are not to go leaving booby-traps in this
castle, is that clear? No matter how safe you think they are. The possibility of
accident is far too great."
Milo sighed. "Yes, Professor."
"But for now, I believe, I shall simply say: well done. I can't think of many
grown witches or wizards who would have been able to not only escape from that
situation, but send the Death Eaters packing. However, would it not have been
more expedient to simply capture them? Every Death Eater in Azkaban is a Death
Eater we don't have to worry about."
"Well..." Milo frowned. Why hadn't he captured them? It would have been easy.
They were injured; he could have held them down with Evard's Black Tentacles, or
simply the threat of further Explosive Runes, until help arrived. He hadn't even
considered the idea. Had he simply failed an Intelligence check?
"Still, I can hardly blame you for panicking, all things considered. No matter;
they'll be found." It was a statement that left no room for compromise,
uncertainty, or alternatives. Milo reminded himself of which House it was that
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Author's Notes: Essay, Exam, and Holiday Season is finally over, so we can now
go back to our regularly-scheduled fanfiction.
Chapter Fifteen: Not So Subtle
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Author's Notes: Big hand to Estroll, everyone, who's taken it upon himself to
translate Harry Potter and the Natural 20 into Chinese. The URL can be found in
my profile.
Needless to say, this is just about the coolest thing that happened since I
found out I was on TVTropes.
oooooo
Chapter Eighteen: The Boy Who Lived
Gilderoy Lockhart yawned as he walked back to his office, flexing his sore
shoulders. He'd had a long day, between his lengthy correspondences to Rita at
the Prophet, trying to spin Dumbledore's string of fiascos to put himself in a
good light. He'd already half-convinced her that the only reason more students
hadn't gone missing was because he'd personally uncovered and run off their
kidnappers. Then there were the constant messages from the DMLE demanding more
information about the kidnappings, as if he knew anything. Honestly, it would be
so much easier if the kids had just been killed. Then people would stop asking
him to mount a rescue mission...
An idea struck him. A little false evidence here and there, a few altered
memories, and people would come to that conclusion without his needing to
suggest it. And if they did miraculously turn up eventually, Lockhart was
certain enough of his skills that he could take credit for that, too. A nice
footnote to his already glamorous career at best, avoiding a difficult
investigation and potentially hazardous situations at worst.
But all of that could wait until tomorrow. Tonight, nothing would stand between
Lockhart and a cup of hot tea, his stack of fanmail, and a good night's sleep.
Lockhart narrowed his eyes as he reached his office door. He had been about to
turn the knob and enter when he noticed something awry.
Ever since the delinquents that made up this school's student body had begun
leaving stink bombs in Lockhart's office every few weeks, he'd started taking
extra precautions. The students would expect magical countermeasures and perhaps
come up with workarounds, so Lockhart had resorted to a more mundane solution.
Besides, he wasn't certain he was capable of some of the spells required for
long-term, reliable security. Rather, he'd taken to leaving a hair wedged
between the door and the frame when he left.
The hair was on the ground.
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Lockhart moved his hand to his wand as casually as he could, trying to disguise
the motion as a scratch.
"I wouldn't try it," Snape said, raising his arms from below the desk. He'd had
his wand in hand the whole time, trained on Lockhart under the desk. "Let's not
escalate this further. The only reason I haven't revealed your secret yet is
that, frankly, I didn't care. But your continued presence is fast becoming
inconvenient."
"I... see," Lockhart said. "Let's pretend, for a moment, that you were correct.
What is the point in confronting me like this?"
"To tell you to stop. Now. Presently, I'm content to let the past stay that
waythe past. But if there's even one more, I might give the relevant
authorities the hints they need to connect the trail of victims to you. Or I
might come for you myself. I have yet to make up my mind. Are we clear? Yes?
Good. Dismissed."
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you want to. You've got that look. Adventurer's can spot them quicker
can spot the Rogue going for their purses. You're just dying to
at me. So out with it. I even promise to say 'you fiend!' and 'you'll
away with this!' at the opportune moments, if you want. Then I get to
See? Something in it for the both of us. We both go home happy. Well,
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But that was why Mordenkainen, who had pinpointed the monster by its distinctive
scent, hadn't fired at the snake itself.
It had fired at the ceiling above it.
Multiple tonnes of ancient stone bricks poured down onto the monster. The dust
and wind from the rock avalanche was enough to make Hermione stagger backwards.
"Did we get it, Mordy?" Hermione asked. "One squeak yes, two squeaks no."
"Squeak."
Hermione let out a breath she hadn't realized she'd been holding.
"Squeak squeak!"
She could hear stones rolling over each other, now. If only she could see. She
had no idea what was going on...
A thought struck her.
"Harry!" she said. "Pass me the Cloak!"
"Uh," it was Ron's voice. "It sort of... got Harry."
"What?" Hermione was shocked. When had that happened? Had the monster killed one
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breathing,
or a
what she
it if Draco
Mordy was sniffing the sword curiously. He was so coated in dust that he looked
gray rather than brown. He looked slightly battered, but otherwise fine.
Hermione wasn't particularly worriedMordenkainen worked like Milo did. As long
as he wasn't actually dead, he'd recover in a few days.
At some point, she'd have to find her wand, the Invisibility Cloak, give the
Sword of Godric Gryffindor to the proper authorities, and explain why there was
a schoolbus-sized dead snake in the hallway, but first, she decided, lying down
seemed very attractive.
oooo
"Mistake four," Milo said. He couldn't even raise his hand, anymore. "Your last
mistake. And it's a big one."
Riddle kicked Milo squarely in the stomach.
"And what could that possibly be?" he asked, his wand pointed at Milo's
forehead. "What mistake could I have possibly made that will save you, now? The
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missing magic kids. They were in Baldwin's magic room. All but one, anyway.
were tied up and blindfolded, but were otherwise in perfect shape. But...
vanished the second we turned our backs on them. We had an armed guard on
and everything, but nobody saw a thing."
SD 2: Old Friends
SD 3: Know Thyself
Chapter Three: Know ThyselfHannah dropped from her broomstick, her robes and
hair soaking wet from condensation and low-flying clouds.
Her heart was racing. That had been the first time she'd ever been on a
broomstick outside of class. She'd been so focussed on getting a good mark from
Madam Hooch (and on not dying) that she hadn't really noticed that flying was
fun.
The hamster floated in front of her in front of a sheer stone face in a large
rock.
"You want me to follow you?" she asked. It nodded. The hamster beckoned, then
floated through the rock.
Some people would find that strange or impossible, but some people hadn't had to
run through a seemingly-solid masonry wall at King's Cross.
She shrugged and walked through the wall. As soon as her hand touched the stone,
it turned... not quite translucent. She could still see the wall, but she could
also see a tunnel behind it. It was like one of those optical illusions;
depending on how you looked it at, it was either a woman with an unfashionable
hat or a bowl of fruit.
Hannah shook her head and walked in.
oooo
Milo sat in the darkest corner of the dark tavern, the Hungry Hungry Hippogriff,
and pulled his hood down so it covered his face, adjusting the several dozen
straps, buckles, and scarves dispersed about his outfit for maximum effect. He
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No, the important thing, the really, crucially, irreplaceable thing were the
people.
Specifically, the people dressed in strange, faraway clothing sitting in dark
corners.
Milo was only sitting for a few minutes when the doors slammed open. He didn't
look up. That was part of the trick. Instead, he waited for the light to flicker
over him, and glanced up disinterestedlymaybe too disinterestedly?at the
newcomers.
There were only three of them, and that was surprising. There were supposed to
be four.
He recognized two of them, but he knew who the third was.
He hardly had time to blink before they were sitting next to him.
"Greetings, stranger," said one, a gnome.
"There are other tables," Milo said in his lowest, raspiest voice.
"True, true. But we couldn't help but notice you were watching us. And I don't
recognize your clothing. Perhaps you could tell us where you're from?"
"I could. But why should I?" Milo asked, still not looking up.
The newcomer sighed. "Fine, fine. Relkin, your turn."
The one Milo didn't recognize (Relkin, presumably) spoke.
"Where are you from?" she asked.
Whoa. Milo had never been subjected to a Diplomacy check that powerful. He
almost replied 'Myra! City of Light! City of Magic!' reflexively. Instead, he
reminded himself that, technically, Diplomacy only worked on NPCs.
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"Horses won't get you there in time," Relkin said. "Fortunately, I have better."
oooo
Hannah found a pile of curious foot-long iron rods in one of the shelves
labelled, in that same weird silvery outline, a 'sunrodglows when struck.' She
wondered what struck meant in this case. Was it in the sense of how someone
might strike a match? Or did she have to kick it or something? Or maybe the
sunrods had to engage in collective bargaining and refuse services as a
bargaining ploy? She knew Milo's definition of certain words differed, somewhat,
from the norm.
She decided to go with the first option, and struck one, like a giant match,
against the wooden table. As soon as she did, the tipwhich turned out to be
made of goldbegan to glow brightly, illuminating the room. Wherever the light
touched, the silvery lines disappeared.
She rooted around in the drawers until she produced some blank paper and a
quill, and placed them on the table. Then she looked at the hamster pointedly.
"Right," she said. "I think you'd best draw where the rest of these little
hideaways are."
oooo
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chaotic, gaudy mess in the shape of a sailing shipsans sails. The hull
were carved and painted in a variety of seemingly-random swirly
and shapes. On the side, painted in bright silver, was its name: S.S.
INITIATIVE.
please," Milo said. "You don't expect me to believe you put that many ranks
Craft (Shipbuilding), Knowledge (Architecture and Engineering), and, for
matter, Profession (Sailor)? Is this like that time you decided I should
a higher Charisma than Constitution?"
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Chapter Four: Dragon in a Half-ShellAbby Michaels set her quill down and waited
for the ink to dry. Randal was finally starting to come around; they had to
block Lucius's push for Severus Snape to keep his position as headmaster. The
man was a world-class Potions Master, to be sure, and had many other admirable
qualities, but managing teachers and small children were not among them. In
fact, the rumours coming out of that school suggested that, sometimes, his
teaching methods were borderline abusive. Minerva was by far the superior
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he
gentle
of the
that
see a
SD 5: City of Light
SD 6: City of Magic
Chapter Six: City of MagicMilo was, barring one egregious error in ability score
allocation, a naturally pragmatic person. So much so, in fact, that he was
sometimes said to be almost robotic. Function over form, crunch over fluff,
Grease over Burning Hands. He liked things efficient and cheap, and didn't much
care about how they looked.
But even he had his breath taken by the City of Light. The City was laid out on
a grid with evenly spaced, wide boulevards cutting through on the diagonal. This
tended to wreak havoc on traffic systems and created complicated six-way
intersections, but it had the (deliberate) effect of creating very striking
sightlines clear through the city. Sweeping monuments, palaces, and key civic
buildings were located at the intersections of these diagonal roads, and could
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Chapter Seven: Magnum OpusCorporal Regina checked range and angle for the fourth
time, and once again found it to be perfect. It was as if the creepy,
self-winding catapult wanted to hit its target.
"Stop fiddling with it," her brother, Reginald, said. "That kid in the red cloak
said all we have to do is pull this lever."
"You mean your niece, Relkin?" Regina said.
"Yeah." Reginald blinked. "My niece."
Regina supposed she was her niece, too. Obviously. She'd always been her niece.
That's how nieces worked. She could even remember holding her as a baby. She was
family. You're supposed to do anything for family, right? That's what people
said. She didn't think most people usually meant treason, though, when they said
it. Did it count as treason if the emperor himself was being mind-controlled?
This was right, wasn't it?
Well, family or no, mentally dominating people was wrong. It was possibleeven
likelythat there would have been a mutiny once the extent of the domination
over the army was uncovered. Regina knew that she, at least, had been mad as
Hell when that boywho was her favourite nephew, she reminded herselfhad broken
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Chapter Nine: The Fourth Mistake"I only joined the Death Eaters in the first
place to get a shot at Bellatrix."
Magical rituals are fickle things.
"Isometimesenjoy Muggle jazz music."
They aren't spells. That's the first thing people get wrong. Spells are simple
and well understood. Use a wand, focus your mind, channel your inner magic
through the wand, say the words, and bam. Magic happens. The more accurately you
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Chapter Ten: The Dogs of WarThe dog under Milo stumbled slightly as the ground
he was standing on shifted from uneven forest floor to smooth, packed dirt.
Milo hopped off, grateful to finally be standing on solid ground. He wasn't
built for riding animals.
"Light," he said, tapping the wall and causing it to glow. The previously-dark
room lit up instantly, revealing the familiar sights of one of his many
nigh-identical bolt holes. This one, which happened to be closest, was located
in... ah, who am I kidding, Milo thought. I'm not going to pretend I remember
the names of this world's political regions. "It worked," he said, more than a
little surprised. He wondered what, exactly, would happen to his newly-learned
Teleport spell. In order for him to cast it like that, it had to be in his
spellbook. But he didn't have his spellbook... Riddle did, unless it was growing
dusty in the Chamber of Secrets. But he had learned the spelland Wall of Stone,
for that matter. Had the text of the spell simply appeared in the book, wherever
it was? Or...
Milo quickly skimmed through Thamior's really, incredibly gross spellbook. Nope,
not there. Milo shrugged. He was less dependent on his spellbook than most
Wizards; the important thing was that it still existed, wherever it was.
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"Well, I didn't even know the spell until I took out that Death Eater back
there," Milo said. "And once I did, Teleport only has, at best, a 97% success
rate." The more familiar Milo was with the destination, the more likely it was
that he would arrive on target.
The man-dog-man-person gave Milo a look with which he was fast becoming
familiar. It was sort of halfway between cautious and impressed. Oh, and
wondering if their leg was being pulled. It was a third of the way between
cautious and impressed and wondering if their leg was pulled. And the look
generally reserved for crazy people. It was a quarter of the way between
Well, you get the idea.
"I see," the man said, sitting down on one of the wooden chairs. "Who taught you
to Apparate without a license? And how come the Ministry lets you do magic
underage? Have things really changed so much?"
Milo shrugged. He wasn't sure how much information he should give to this
strange man. "I'm out of their jurisdiction."
The man nodded slowly, as if that meant something. For all Milo knew, maybe it
didhe understood, dimly, that there were other political bodies outside of the
United Kingdom, which had their own Ministries of Magic (or the equivalent). For
all Milo knew, maybe the local Ministry really couldn't tell if foreign children
were performing magic within its borders, and instead an alarm went off halfway
around the world.
"My turn for a question," Milo said. "Who the hells are you?"
oooo
There was a sharp pop as Riddle appeared by the uninhabited stretch of
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Chapter Twelve: Hot FuzzSomeone had seen Milo near Bristol, that someone had
recognized him on sight, and had chosen to report it to the Daily Prophet.
Based off of reports from their network of bird watchers, there were three
suspected magical homes in the Bristol area that subscribed to the Daily
Prophet. Or at least, there had been six months ago; most of her fellow
conspirators were now either dead or had moved on with their lives. Of them,
only two had any children. One of those seemed to have lost the genetic lottery
(assuming genes were even involved), and attended an ordinary public school.
That left a single
Abbot. She had the
the boy and report
if the Prophet was
Which was why, when, two hours later, Fiona spotted Hannah climbing out her
bedroom window, she had no intention of trying to track her with her bare eyes
alone.
The AM/NIR-7 was a bulky, military headset from the mid-eighties that flooded
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Chapter Thirteen: Passing Notes"Protection from Good," Milo cast on the silver,
palm-sized Eye of Boccob on the desk in front of him. In his experience, it
never hurt to have a couple of extra holy symbols around for when the vampires
come knocking. This time, just in case, he'd created the amulet while under the
effects of a separate Protection from Good spell. So even if Riddle was somehow
still in his mind, he wasn't exerting any influence over this amulet. He wished
he had his old spellbook back so he could cast the marginally more helpful
Protection from Evil, but he might as well wish for a Candle of Invocation or
the moon. He'd just have to make do with what he had, for now.
"Are you almost done yet?" Hannah asked, her arms wrapped around herself for
warmth. For all that it was late summer, it was also the middle of the night,
and the hovel Sirius had brought them to was far to the north. The thin glass
windows (where they weren't broken) and ancient wooden walls provided little in
the way of insulation.
Milo nodded. "Just finished," he said, clipping the amulet around his neck. The
plot was thickening fast, and he had absolutely no intention of going anywhere
without his customary Amulet of Protectionespecially considering that the
Ministry was after him, and they weren't known to use restraint when it came to
memory modification. Still, he had to be careful crafting items for now, because
he was only a hair over the threshold of level nine, and didn't have any XP to
waste.
"So can we go home, now?"
Sirius shook his head. The cold didn't seem to bother him as he reclined in a
shabby, rat-eaten chair. "I don't recommend it. They'll be watching your house.
Your disappearance will have confirmed for them that you're an accomplice with
Milo, here."
"My parents will be freaking out," Hannah said. "Could I at least get a message
to them?"
Milo scratched his chin. "I don't have any specialized long-range communication
spells, and I've only got enough juice for one more Teleport," he admitted. "And
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Chapter Fifteen: The Tour GuideIt was a small, dark, room with walls of bare
stone. From somewhere behind him, Milo could hear an irregular drip...
drip-drip... ... ... drip... drip-drip-drip that was wreaking havoc on his
concentration. A single light, simultaneously too bright to be comfortable and
too dim to illuminate the room, hung above him, flickering occasionally. Milo
himself sat in an uncomfortable, nondescript chair behind a simple metal table.
It was the sort of room that governments throughout time and across dimensions
all had, somewhere, but rarely showed to school tour groups. This one was
labelled 'Interview Room H.'
"What do
him. The
stood by
himself,
you know about the escaped fugitive, Sirius Black?" Amelia Bones asked
two witches that had followed Shacklebolt into the compartment earlier
the door with unreadable expressions on their faces. Shacklebolt
however, was conspicuously absent. Drip... drip...
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Chapter Seventeen: Stones and WindowsIt was evening, just after the Sorting
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Chapter Eighteen: A Better StoryA beat-up brown sedan pulled up next to the
glass phonebooth, and Fiona practically leapt at the door. She found herself
unable to manage even the simple mechanism with her numb fingers, however, and
would have screamed in frustration had her chattering teeth not prevented her.
The man inside reached over and opened the door for her, and Fiona crawled
inside, holding the still-unmoving Sprocket close to her chest.
"Jesus, Fiona," Travis said, stifling a yawn. "You look like Hell. What
happened?"
"One m-m-m-minute," Fiona said, closing the door behind her and turning the
car's heater to max. She tried breathing on her hands to warm them up, but
couldn't tell if it was working.
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