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Nov/8/16
Creative Writing
Our Friendship throughout the years
Thinking back to the first year,
you decided to talk to me;
I did not know Id come to hold you so dear;
I can not believe I didn't have to plea.
My social skills are not the best,
But they didnt faze you, which put my nerves to rest.
You made a joke about your sweat,
It made me laugh so hard, I had no breath.
Back then, I would have never bet,
That the type friendship that we would erect
Would be so grand. Words can not not describe
The joy that is so divine.
Thinking back to the second year,
Im now thankful for the way you act;
you make the world seem clear.
Im always so happy at the fact,
That even though it went by in a flash
My memories of our second year will forever last.
Geometry was the class I mostly remember;
You made each day more bearable,
I wish it could have lasted forever;
My day would always start off less terrible.
Biology was another class we had together
And you kept it from being a disaster.
This will be the third year,
And I sincerely hope it won't be the last.
Im astonished of how you made the world seem clear;
Everything feels like it's going to fast.
Even so, Im always so amazed at the fact,
At how you, in my life, have made a big impact.
CATEGORY
Structure Rhythm/Meter
There is no
apparent attempt
at rhythm and
meter
Rhyme scheme is
consistent
throughout poem.
There is no
apparent attempt
at rhyme scheme
Creativity Imagery
There is little
evidence of
creativity in the
poem. The poet
does not seem to
have used much
imagination.
Poet uses
figurative
language, but it is
ineffective or
distracting.
Poet effectively
uses sound
devices to create
an image, feeling
or emotion.
Focus
Conventions
(Spelling,
Punctuation,
Grammar
There are no
convention errors
in the final draft.
Poetic
Language
Figurative
Language
(simile, metaphor,
personification,
hyperbole)
Poetic
Language
Sound Devices
(onomatopoeia,
repetition,
alliteration,
assonance,
consonance)
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