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Joanna Rivera pd

To Trust Someone
In Raymonds Run Squeaky, the main character, is characterized as
being someone who looks out for her family by the way she stands up for
her brother. but later on his sister squeaky realizes that he doesnt need
her to protect him. Squeakys characterization is being fearless and that
she can stand up to anything. But not all the time she has to take care of
her brother. Also, whenever her brother was picked on, she was never one
to be scared to confront them. Because she is capable of taking down
anything. Squeaky takes risks in order to protect her brother from getting
picked on,even if the consequences can be her getting into something bad.
She's strong and wont back down from anything that comes in her way.
Partway through the story, she says, If anybody has anything to say to
Raymond, anything to say about his big head, they have to come by me.
But what she doesnt realize is that raymond can take care of himself and
that not all the time he needs his little sister taking care of him. All in all,
there are times that she has to trust Raymond to figure things out himself.

Rubric

Self Score

Peer Score

Joanna Rivera pd
3

H- header

1/1

1/1

Title

1/1

1/1

Indent

1/1

1/1

TS - topic
sentence

3/3

3/3

IQ- introduce
your quote

4/5

5/5

Q-quote

5/5

5/5

SD supporting
details

4/5

5/5

T- transitions

2/3 (use at
least two!)

2/3

FL- formal
language

3/3

3/3

DS - double
space

1/1

1/1

Proofreading
errors

Total

24/28

26/28

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