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INTRODUCTION
1. Motivation for the study
It is popularly admitted that language is an indispensable part of our societys
cultural richness in particular and of the worlds in general. However, in order to
keep ourselves on a par with the global standards in the todays world which is
called international community, we need to have the understanding of English - an
international language. English is considered as the most popular language popularly
used to exchange information and ideas among different nations and cultures today.
Thanks to their English translated versions, countries are able to have mutual
understanding and a sense of global citizenship in this multilingual world. It is
considered as an effective means to learn how to appreciate different countries
cultures, communities and people. By making comparisons, people are able to gain
insight into their own culture and society as well as mutually exchange countries
beauty of cultural values. Moreover, English translation makes people understand
each other more in the process of diplomatic relations and economic cooperation and
other fields in todays era when countries tend to integrate for the whole
development. As a result, English translation has gradually become an indispensable
and pressing tool which set the path for the global success of individuals,
organizations, and even businesses in the modern time when society is more
developed and competition is relentless. Therefore, nowadays when Vietnam
becomes one of the members of World Trade Organization, it is necessary for
Vietnamese students of English to have expert translation skill in order to meet the
demand of integration into the world economy and exchange of culture with other
countries. As a result, learning translation skill is undoubtedly an advantage for
Vietnamese students ideal future jobs.
However, in reality, Vietnamese-English translation skill is not easy for
Vietnamese students to master, so learners can not avoid mistakes in their translating
prsctice. Perhaps, because of some influence on the differences about cultures or
their own limited language ability, etc, Vietnamese students of English in general
still have mistakes on grammar, word choices and so on in translating Vietnamese
texts into English. The study Common mistakes in learning translation subject by
the second-year English majors at Dong Thap University (Duong Thi Thuy Hang
and Nguyen Thi Cam Xuyen, 2010, p.32-p.33) found the followings:
Lack of vocabulary causes many problems in translation process, frequently; they
could not choose the right word in the context and tried or code it did not know.
In the final text for BA English 2006 class, in the part of Vietnamese-to-English
translation, there was a phrase: n xin th thc- and the large percentage of
the students could not understand the meaning of the phrase. Therefore, they
translated with a wrong meaning or skipped it. Many students did not know what
th thc means, and they thought that it was a thing related to food, so in many
test papers, it is translated into food as in the following: n xin th thc
The answer is Visa Application Form. The translated phrases by the students:
Declaration going food
Enter-exit food
Form of beg for food
Giving foods form
The mistakes in tenses as in:
Con b dng nh bun ng (this sentence was extracted from the first
semester final test papers for BA English 2007 class).
The key is The little girl seems sleepy. But many students translated into: The
little girl is seem sleepy, they were confused with the verb to be and the verb
seem.
In these situations, foreigners will misunderstand, even be not able to
understand the meaning of the passage when they read.
aims at finding out what the secondyear English majors common mistakes on verb
tenses and word choices, which reasons causing those mistakes as well as how to
avoid them. It is a strong hope that the study will be a useful reference helping
improve translation skill for not only the secondyear students majoring in English
at Dong Thap University but also all Vietnamese people who are interested in
translation work and really want to become expert translators.
2. Aims of the study
The primary aim of the thesis is to find out the second-year English majors
common errors on verb tenses and word choices in translating Vietnamese texts into
English. The study also aims at finding causes of these problems and then
suggesting some possible strategies to overcome the problems. The targeted subjects
of this thesis are mainly students; nevertheless, all people who are interested in
translation work can consider it as a useful reference for improving their translation
skills as well.
3. Scope of the study
When the second-year students of English major at Dong Thap University
(2010-2014 curriculum) translation courses, they have to study both EnglishVietnamese translation and Vietnamese-English translation. This thesis focuses on
analyzing the errors on verb tenses and word choices found in the VietnameseEnglish translation part of the final tests and the extra test papers made by the
second-year students of English major at Dong Thap University and making some
suggestions to help avoid those errors.
4. Significance of the study
The thesis will help the students recognize their common errors on verb tenses
and word choices in translating Vietnamese texts into English. The study will be a
useful reference with the solutions suggested which help the students be able to selfcorrect their common mistakes and find out their own effective ways in leaning in
order to improve their translation skill. Furthermore, it helps the students not only
improve their language learning in general but also have a great advantage for their
future ideal job.
5. Related previous studies
Errors in the translation of topic-comment structures of Vietnamese into
English, Pham Phu Quynh Na, School of Languages and LiteratureUniversity of Western Syney, Australia.(n.d)
Problems in Vietnamese-English translation of the third-year students of
English major at Dong Thap University: cause and solutions (The B.A
thesis), Nguyen Ngo Minh Tri and Le Thi My Duyen, Dong Thap University,
2009.
Common mistakes in learning translation subject by the second-year English
majors at Dong Thap University (The B.A thesis), Duong Thi Thuy Hang
and Nguyen Thi Cam Xuyen, 2010.
6. Organization of the thesis
This thesis consists of the following parts:
INTRODUCTION
Chapter 2: METHODOLOGY
3.1 Results
3.1.1 Result collected from the questionnaire
3.1.2 Result collected from the interview questions
3.1.3 Result collected from the test papers
3.2 Discussion
REFERENCES
APPENDIX
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some others say the number may be as large as eight thousand. What a habit man
has that of speaking different tongues! And thus he offers himself difficulties and
obstacles.
Since communication within only one community is not enough, certainly there
has a great number of times arisen a situation in which some individuals are unable
to understand the words or expressions of some others. This phenomenon creates a
barrier to understanding whenever man tries to communicate across a great distance
of space or across a great interval of time. Something has to be done to overcome
this restriction. One way to cope with the restriction is for individuals to know the
foreign language. But this is not the final solution because apparently no individual
in the world can know all the languages in use. The best polyglot so far knows only
about twenty five languages, and still people want to read what other people write
and what people say. Translation and interpreting may be considered as the most
universally accepted solution for surmounting the obstacle. And thus there is a need
for professional translators and interpreters. (Bui Tien Bao and Dang Xuan Thu,
1997)
Stuart stated that translation as the product of language learning projected onto
an interlanguage framework. Therefore, translation skills should be evaluated
according to the state of learners interlanguage in any stage of its development.
(Stuart Campbell, 1980)
Translation is a real-life, natural activity and increasingly necessary in a global
environment. Many learners living in either their own countries or a new one need to
translate language on a daily basis, both informally and formally. This is even more
important with the growing importance of online information.
Translation can be support for the writing process, especially at lower levels.
Research has shown that learners seem able to access more information in their own
L1, which they can then translate. (Stuart Campbell, 1980)
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The research totally agrees with the above ideas. When the human language
appears, translation becomes necessary and significant. Translation becomes more
important when all countries in the world have exchanged and cooperated together
in variety aspects like culture, education, business, etc. In order to meet the demand
of the multilingual worlds development, it is required an appearance of a common
language to be used. Nowadays, English has been used as the universal language all
over the world. In our country, English more and more plays an important role in the
economic aspect. It is really true in business when our country is in cooperation with
foreign investors, contracts, emails, agreements or conventions, etc in English so it
requires they have to be translated effectively. Therefore, the role of translation was
attached importantly to every field in society.
1.3 Types of translation
1.3.1 Literal translation versus idiomatic translation
Because a text has both form and meaning, there are two main kinds of
translation. One is form-based and the other is meaning-based. Form-based
translation attempts to follow the form of the source language and is known as literal
translation. Meaning-based translation makes every effort to communicate the
meaning of the source language text in the natural forms of the receptor language.
Such translation is called idiomatic translation. An interlinear translation is a
completely literal translation. For some purposes, it is desirable to reproduce the
linguistic features of the source text; as for example, in a linguistic study of that
language. Literal translation can be considered as a very low level of translation. A
literal translation sounds like nonsense and has little communication value.
For example:
Vietnamese: Mi bn v nh ti chi.
Literal translation: Invite friend about my house play. (nonsense)
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This literal translation makes little sense in English. The appropriate translation
could be a question: Would you like to come to my house?
Idiomatic translations use the natural forms of the receptor language, both in
the grammatical constructions and in the choice of lexical items. A truly idiomatic
translation does not sound like a translation. It sounds like it was written originally
in the receptor language. Therefore, a good translator will try to translate
idiomatically. This is his goal. However, translations are often a mixture of a literal
transfer of the grammatical units along with some idiomatic translation of the
meaning of the text. It is not easy to consistently translate.
In one translation, the source text said, Nhiu du khch nc ngoi gii
thiu cho chng ti v khch sn Hng Giang. It was translated, Many foreign
tourists have introduced us about Huong Giang Hotel. (literal translation) It would
have been translated idiomatically, Huong Giang Hotel has been recommended to
us by a number of foreign tourists.
The translators goal should be to reproduce in a receptor language a text which
communicates the same message as the source language but using the natural
grammatical and lexical choices of the receptor language. The basic overriding
principle is that an idiomatic translation reproduces the meaning of the source
language in the natural form of the receptor language.
1.3.2 Translating grammatical features
Each language has its own division of the lexicon into classes such as nouns,
verbs, adjectives and so on. Different languages will have different classes and
subclasses. It will not always be possible to translate a source language noun with a
noun in the receptor language.
Grammatical constructions vary between the source language and the receptor
language. The order of the words in the sentence may be completely reserved. The
following Vietnamese simple sentence is given with a literal English translation:
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Vietnamese: Ch sng u?
Literal English translation: You live where?
Understandable translation into English requires a complete reversal of the
word order: Where do you live?
It is common that passive constructions will need to be translated with an
active construction or vice versa, depending on the natural form of the receptor
language.
For example, Vietnamese people tend to use active constructions to express
their ideas whereas English people prefer to use passive constructions.
Vietnamese: Ngi ta xem Nguyen Du l mt nh th v i. (Active)
English: Nguyen Du is considered to be a great poet. (Passive)
The above translated sentences are only examples to show some types of
grammatical adjustments which will result if a translator translates idiomatically in
the source language. Certainly, there will be times by coincidence they match, but a
translator should translate the meaning not concern himself with whether the forms
turn out the same or not.
1.3.3 Translating lexical features
Each language has its own idiomatic way of expressing meaning lexical items.
Languages abound in idioms, secondary meanings, metaphors and other figurative
meanings. All languages have idioms the string of words whose meaning is
different than the meaning conveyed by the individual words. In English to say that
someone is bullheaded means that the person is stubborn. The meaning has
little to do with bull or head. Similarly, in Vietnamese to say that someone is
cng u, cng c means that the person is stubborn. The meaning has little to
do with u or c. Languages abound in such idioms. The following are a few
English idioms using in and into: run into debt, rush into print, step into a practice,
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jump into a fight, dive into a book, stumble into acquaintance, fall in love, break into
society, etc. In spite of all these combinations, one cannot say the following break
into debt, fall into print, rush into a fight or dive into debt. The combinations are
fixed as to form and their meaning comes from their combination. A literal wordfor-word translation of these idioms into another language will not make sense. The
form cannot be kept, but the receptor language word or phrase which has the
equivalent meaning will be the correct one to use in the translation.
For example, the Vietnamese idiom mnh nh tru is literally translated into
English as in the first column and is idiomatically as in the second column. The
literal English is misleading.
Literal
He is as strong as a buffalo.
Idiomatic
He is as strong as a horse.
Translators who want to make a good idiomatic translation often find figures of
speech especially challenging. A little translation of strong as a horse might
sound really strange in a language where the comparison between a strong person
and a horse has never been used as a figure of speech. In Vietnamese it would be
more natural to say strong as a buffalo. Similarly, a literal translation of blind as
a bat might sound really strange in a language where the comparison between a
blind person and a bat has never been used as a figure of speech.
Names of animals are used metaphorically in most languages. But the
comparison is often different and so the figure will be misunderstood unless aome
adjustment is made. For example, when someone is called a pig in English, it
usually means he is dirty or a greedy eater. In Vietnamese, it has different meanings.
It could means that the person is stupid or that the person is a greedy.
Some lexical combinations of the source language may be ambiguous. The
meaning is not clear. For example, It is too hot to eat, could mean any of the
following: The food is too hot to eat; the weather is too hot for us to feel like eating;
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the horse is too hot after running a race and does not want to eat. In the process of
making an idiomatic translation, such ambiguities must often be resolved to keep the
intended meaning in the context of communication.
In short, there are four typical types of translation: literal translation, idiomatic
translation, translation grammatical features, and translation lexical features.
However, one of them, literal translation, should be avoided because it will make the
translation meaningless or nonsense. Idiomatic translation, in contract, is considered
to be a strongly recommended mean.
1.4 Strategies for translation
Strategy 1: How to deal with non-equivalence at word level
It is often the case that no direct equivalents can be found in Vietnamese for
English words. It may be that the concept or idea is new to Vietnam, as is the case
with gender, which is in fact a relatively new concept in general, and a difficult
one to understand and explain in many languages. Or, it may be that the concept is
known or readily understood but there is no specific word in Vietnamese to express
it. Another difficulty id that, in addition to their concrete meaning, some words have
special connotations that are not conveyed by the Vietnamese word for the same
thing. The strategies listed below can be used to handle cases of non-equivalence.
Translating by a more specific word
In some case, it may be appropriate or necessary to use a more specific word to
translate an English word into Vietnamese. This usually involves choosing among
several different words, as there may be many Vietnamese words that correspond to
the general category or meaning expressed by the English term. For example, the
English word for rice can be translated by many different Vietnamese words (ht
la, ht thc, ht go, cm), depending on whether one is planning it, harvesting it,
cooking it, or eating it. In these cases, the English word alone is not enough to
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geographical position, natural and social conditions of the culture in which the
language is used. Thus, the sets of idioms and fixed expression in different
languages vary in many ways. Idioms and fixed expressions can be dealt with in
ways similar to those discussed above. With idioms, however, there is the added
difficulty that the translator may not realize that she is dealing with an idiomatic
expression, since more idioms may make sense when translated literally.
Using an idiom or fixed expression of similar meaning and form
It is sometimes possible to find a Vietnamese idiom or expression with a
similar meaning to an English idiom or expression, and which is expressed in the
same way. One example is the idiom to fight like cats and dogs, which is
expressed using the same words in Vietnamese ci nhau nh ch vi mo;
another is Better late than never, which is translated as Th mun cn hn
khng. It is ideal if such a match can be found, but this kind of correspondence is
not common, and it is usually necessary to use other strategies in dealing with
idioms and fixed expressions. One example is the idiom It is raining cats and
dogs. This idiom does not have any meaning related to the pets (cats or dogs), but
it just means It is raining heavily Tri ang ma to. or Ma tm t. in
Vietnamese. If this English idiom is translated in the way of literal translation which
just focuses on the meaning in dictionary of the word cat- con mo and the word
dog con ch like Tri ang ma nhng con mo v ch, the sentence is
totally nonsense. Thus, it is clear that no Vietnamese idiom or expression with a
similar meaning to this English idiom can be found.
Using an idiom or fixed expression of similar meaning but dissimilar form
It is also possible, and usually easier to find a Vietnamese idiom with a similar
meaning to an English idiom or set expression, but which is expressed differently. A
good example is the translation for ch ci v rng, which is translated as to
carry firewood to the forest. However, in English to carry firewood to the forest
is not an idiom and does not have the meaning as the Vietnamese idiom ch ci v
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rng. The correct English equivalent of the Vietnamese idiom is to carry coals to
Newcastle. The meaning here is clearly the same for both idioms - to bring
something to a place that already has an abundance of that thing - but the way in
which each language expresses it is bound to the culture of that language. It would
be far more cumbersome to translate this idiom word-for-word into Vietnamese with
an explanation that Newcastle is a well-known coal-producing city in England (as
was suggested by some Vietnamese translators), which would unduly interrupt the
flow of the text and greatly diminish the idioms impact. By substituting a similar
Vietnamese idiom, then, the flow and the impact of the original text are retained in
the translation.
Translating by paraphrase
When Vietnamese equivalents cannot be found, paraphrasing may be the best
way to deal with an idiom or fixed expression. A good example can be found in an
article on maternal mortality, which includes the sentence, But before the new
estimates replace the old as a way of packaging up the problem, it should be said
that a mistake has been made in allowing statistics such as these to slip into easy
language. The expression packaging up the problem presented problems in
translation, as it was misinterpreted to mean assembling or gathering together.
However, even if this phrase were clearly understood, it would be difficult to find a
concise equivalent in Vietnamese; in fact, it would be difficult to re-state concisely
in English. This phrase is best dealt with by paraphrasing, which in English should
read something like, summing up the problem by referring to it simply as number,
which does not reflect its true magnitude or impact. The expression to slip into
easy usage is problematic for the same reasons, and is also best dealt with by
paraphrasing, as a direct translation into Vietnamese would nonsensical.
Strategy 3: How to deal with voice, number and person
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VOICE: The passive voice is used very frequently in English and poses some
problems for translation from English into Vietnamese and vice versa in the
following ways:
(a)
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= Ai lm v chic a CD ri.
= The CD has been broken.
The positive and negative connotation is often conveyed in English, it can be
difficult to know which verb to use in the Vietnamese.
For example: English:
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Bc Kinh = Beijing
c or xtraylia = Australia
X hi ch ngha = Socialist
Braxin = Brazil
Names of organizations: Translation from Vietnamese into English: often
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possessive
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1.5.4 Context
A language is the vehicle of our ideas, thoughts and perspectives of our world.
Translation is understood as an act of carrying the meaning of a text from one
language to another one. This process involves interpretation of meaning of the
source text and producing the same meaning in another language. Texts however,
cannot exist out of context. By context what is meant is the entire environment in
which the word or sentence is expressed or stated. Any word in the text is not
present in isolation but interacts with other words in the text and with the whole text
at large. This interaction among words determines their meaning rather than its
isolated meaning. For example, the uses of the word work in the following
sentences:
(i) I work at Ministry of education and training.
(ii) Kieu story is a famous work.
(iii) After graduating, I will look for work.
The word work in example (i) is a normal verb, it means the activity by
which one makes a living; in (ii), it means the output of a creative writer, whereas in
example (iii), the word work has another meaning that is a job or an
employment.
Context helps us grasp what word we should choose to have the suitable
meaning in our translated text. If we misunderstand the context, it leads to choosing
of unsuitable meanings. Context partly contributes to creating a true translated text
which is considered the most important requirement of translation.
1.5.5 Characteristic of language
There are certain characteristic of languages which have a very direct bearing
on principles of the translation process.
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sentence My uncle runs for governor., run has the contextual meaning - to
stand as a candidate for the position of a governor of an office.
The principle is not limited to lexical items for it is also true that the same
grammatical pattern may express several quite different meanings. For instance, the
English possessive phrase my house may mean the house I built, the house I
rent, the house I live in, or the house for which I drew up in my plans.
Whole sentences may also have several functions. A question form may be
used for a non-question. For instance, the question: Daisy, why dont you wash the
dishes? has a form of a question, and may in some context be asking for
information, but it is often used with the meaning of a command rather than a real
question. A simple English sentence like He made the bed may mean either He,
a carpenter, made the bed. or He put the sheets, blanket, and pillows in neat
order on the bed. Just as words have primary and secondary meanings,
grammatical markers have their primary function and often have other contextual
functions. The preposition on is used in English to signal a variety of meanings,
Compare the following uses of on with the corresponding form used in
Vietnamese.
English
Vietnamese
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In the first sentence, by is used to signal the meaning that the policeman is
the agent of the action. In the second sentence, by is used to signal that the
bookstand is the location.
We have seen that one form may express many meanings. On the other hand,
another characteristic of language is that a single meaning may be expressed in a
variety of forms. For example, the idea that cat is black, which is black,
depending on how that meaning relates to other meanings. In addition, the meanings
of Is this place taken?, Is there anyone sitting here? and May I sit here? are
essentially the same. Also, the meaning is essentially the same in the following
English sentences:
Others blamed John because of the difficulty.
Others blamed John for the difficulty.
Others blamed the difficulty on John.
Others said John was responsible for the difficulty.
Others accused john of being responsible for the difficulty.
Moreover, English has a very clear distinction between tenses while the tense
distinction in Vietnamese is not clear. For example, Vietnamese people tend to use
present simple tense instead of past simple tense (, ri).
Vietnamese: Hm qua l ngy Ch nht.
English: Yesterday was Sunday.
We have seen that even within a single language there are a great variety of
ways in which form expresses meaning. Only when a form is being used in its
primary meaning or function is there a one-to-one correlation between form and
meaning. The other meanings are secondary meanings or figurative meanings.
Words have these extended meanings and in the same way grammatical forms have
extended usages (secondary and figurative function). This characteristic of
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skewing; that is, the diversity or the lack of one-to-one correlation between form
and meaning is the basic reason why translation is a complicated task. If there were
no skewing, then all lexical items ad all grammatical forms would have only one
meaning and a literal word-for-word and grammatical structure-for-grammatical
structure translation would be possible. But the fact is that a language a complex set
of skewed relationship between meaning (semantics) and form (lexicon and
grammar). Each language has its own distinctive forms for representing the
meaning. Therefore, in translation the same meaning may have to be expressed in
another language by a very different form.
1.6 Common errors in Vietnamese-English translation
The following errors are usually found in Vietnamese-English translation.
1.6.1. Vocabulary errors
Word collocation
Word collocation is defined as a sequence of words or terms which co-occur
more often than would be expected by chance. Each of language has its own
principle in word collocation. For example, the word pretty often goes with girls
and women, while the word handsome often goes with boys or men. Some
translators do not realize this, which leads to wrong and funny collocation. For
instance, in Vietnamese the word ung (drink) can go with many different kinds
of liquid including water, beer, alcohol, medicine and even poison. It is incorrect to
say drink medicine in English there are clear distinctions as follows:
Drink beer/ water/ wine/ coffee.
But:
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(As a qualified teacher for many years, Mr. Nam is experienced about
educating and teaching the students.)
As can be seen from the above-mentioned examples, the translators tended to
choose the English prepositions basing on Vietnamese meanings without paying
attention to their variations. These errors could be corrected as follows:
1. Ta n nhn dn quyt nh kt n h 15 nm t v ti bun lu ma ty.
should be translated The Peoples Court decided to condemn them to 15
years imprisonment for the drug smuggling.
2. L mt gio vin u t trong nhiu nm, ng Nam c nhiu kinh nghim v
gio dc v ging dy hc sinh. should be translated As a qualified
teacher for many years, Mr. Nam experienced in educating and teaching the
pupils.
In English, prepositions themselves are difficult to use, so in VietnameseEnglish translation the use of prepositions become even more complicated.
Therefore, the errors related to the misuse of prepositions are common and
unavoidable. In order to avoid this type of errors the translators should learn the
prepositions going with nouns, adjectives or verbs by heart. If they do not know how
to use prepositions exactly, they tend to the Vietnamese ones into English or vice
versa. As a result, the translators should be provided with as many structures with
prepositions systematically as possible to help them take notes and draw out the
formation and rules.
Misuse of synonyms
Some translators depend largely on the meaning in dictionary picking out the
synonyms without paying much to context. In fact, the pairs of synonyms share at
least one sense in common, but they do not share all their senses. To some extent,
they can hardly substitute for each other. The misuse of synonyms makes the
meaning of one of the following sentences unacceptable.
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Most of the synonyms have the same meaning in certain context. If a translator
uses synonyms without referring to the context, (s)/he can make wrong & funny for
his readers. In order to avoid the misuse, the translator should carefully take the
synonyms into consideration before using them. In addition, it would be better for
the translator to consider the differences of the pairs of synonyms when translating.
Spelling errors:
Spelling errors in translation are also the common errors like spelling errors in
writing. When people have to translate a Vietnamese text into English in a short
period of time, surely they do not have much time to read their translation products
before they submit it. Sometimes, people are so careless that they dare to write out
the words which they have not used for a long time. Moreover, the misuse of the two
similar words in written form can also lead to spelling errors.
All in all, some inexperienced translators committed the vocabulary errors
mentioned above in concluding those of word collocation, misuse of prepositions,
misuse of synonyms, and spelling errors. They are committed by those who have
little knowledge of target language. At the same time, they thought that although
English is different from Vietnamese, both languages have a correlation about
lexical items. In practice, in terms of translation, it can be chosen the only one
appropriate equivalent from this into that language. Even more, that equivalent
hardly keeps the meaning of the word itself but that of context.
Another problem is that some translators did not realize the linking meaning of
word units. It is obvious that these units link together to create a larger unit of
meaning in a given text to be translated. The linking meaning itself does not exist in
separate word units but in the link of the units constituting the whole text.
1.6.2 Grammar errors
Grammar errors are also common in Vietnamese-English translation. They are errors
related to tenses, the forms of words, the sentence structures found in the translated
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text. These errors are caused by the misuse of verb forms, the misuse of relative
pronoun, and the misuse of part of speech.
Misuse of verb forms
The grammar errors which are related to the misuse of verb forms often occur
when the translators keep Vietnamese structures to translate the Vietnamese
sentences into English. The following sentence is considered to have grammar error
because the translator misused the voice.
Vietnamese: Gio dc qua mng, hay gio dc trc tuyn l mt loi hnh
gio dc pht trin nh vo tin b ca ngnh cng ngh thng tin.
English: Internet or on-line education is a form of education which develops
thanks to information technology. (Incorrect)
(Nguyn Thnh c, 2009)
The error of this example is the verb develops, which is in active form. It
must be in passive form is developed because Internet or on-line Education
cannot develop by itself. Therefore, the Vietnamese sentence should be translated
Internet or on-line Education is a form of education which is developed thanks to
information technology.
Misuse of relative pronouns
The grammar errors related to the misuse of relative pronouns often occur
when the complex Vietnamese sentences are translated into English. The following
sentence is considered to have grammar error because the translator misused the part
of speech of pronoun.
Vietnamese: Cc nh khoa hc nhn thy nhng ngi ph n n nhiu
chocolate trong sut thi gian mang thai th con ca h ci nhiu v nng ng
hn nhng b m khng h n chocolate trong thi gian mang thai.
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English: A research group observed that the children of mothers who eat
much chocolate during their pregnancy frequently laugh and more active than the
children of other mothers. (Incorrect)
(Nguyn Thnh c, 2009)
The error of this example is that the wrong combination of the noun phrase
children of mothers and the relative pronoun who fails to express the meaning
the pregnant women eat chocolate. In this case, the relative pronoun who must
be replaced by the relative pronoun whose. Therefore, the Vietnamese sentence
Cc nh khoa hc nhn thy nhng ngi ph n n nhiu chocolate trong sut
thi gian mang thai th con ca h ci nhiu v nng ng hn nhng b m khng
h n chocolate trong thi gian mang thai. should be translated A research group
observed that the children whose mothers eat much chocolate during their
pregnancy frequently laugh and more active than the children of other mothers.
Misuse of the part of speech
The following sentences are considered to have grammar mistakes because the
translator misused the part of speech.
Example 1:
Vietnamese: Trong i sng con ngi, ci l du hiu ca mt c th khe
mnh.
English: In peoples lives, laugh is a sign of a healthy body. (Incorrect)
(Nguyn Thnh c, 2009)
The English sentence In peoples lives, laugh is a sign of a healthy body. is
incorrect because of the subject laugh. In above Vietnamese sentence, ci has
a general meaning, so a laugh, laughing, or to laugh will be the suitable
subject. Therefore, there are three ways to translate the Vietnamese sentence Trong
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The cultural implications for translation may take several forms ranging from
lexical content and syntax to ideologies and ways of life in a given culture. The
translator also has to decide on the importance given to certain cultural aspects and
to what extent it is necessary or desirable to translate them into the TL. The aims of
the ST will also have implications for translation as well as the intended readership
for both the ST and the target text (TT).
Considering the cultural implications for a translated text implies recognizing
all of these problems and taking into account several possibilities before deciding on
the solution which appears the most appropriate in each specific case. Before
applying these methods to the chosen text, this essay will examine the importance of
culture in translation through a literature review. The different general procedures of
treating the cultural implications for translation will be examined as well as
analyzing the ST and the aims of the author. The translation process will also be
treated using specific examples found in the ST before discussing the success of
aforementioned theoretical methods applied to the TT.
Although corresponding to cultural categories examined, the title will be
considered separately in order to determine the pertinence of conserving,
highlighting, or excluding certain aspects. Due to these considerations, the title will
be considered after the other aspects as all other cultural implications need to be
examined before reaching relevant conclusions.
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CHAPTER 2: METHODOLOGY
The purpose of this chapter is to present the methodology used in this thesis. It
includes research questions, research participants, data collection instruments and
research procedure.
2.1 Research questions
To obtain the above stated purposes, the study has to answer the following
questions:
1. What are common errors on verb tenses and word choices which the secondyear English majors often make in the process of translating Vietnamese texts
into English?
2. Which causes lead to the mistakes?
3. What should be done to avoid the errors in order to make Vietnamese-English
translating be smoother and more fluent?
2.2 Research participants
2.2.1 The researcher
The study is implemented by Huynh Thanh Thuy, the fourth-year student of
English 2008A, Foreign Language Department, Dong Thap University.
2.2.2 The subjects
The subjects are the second-year students of English majors (2010-2014
curriculum) at dong Thap University. They had 2 periods of translation per week.
Their main study materials are the selected texts for translation, which are edited by
their teacher. The teacher who teaches translation for these students is also the
supervisor of this thesis.
2.3 Research procedure
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It took about three month to finish the study at Dong Thap University. First, the
researcher started to choose the topic, then collected the related previous studies,
materials from the Internet and reference books from the supervisor to figure out the
outline, after that the questionnaire was designed and delivered; the interview
questions were also designed and implemented interviewing as well as the test
papers were on statistic to collect data for the study. Finally, the study was
implemented to find out the common errors on verb tenses and word choices in
Vietnamese-English translation by the second-year English majors at Dong Thap
University and some suggested solutions were given as well.
2.4 Data collect instruments
2.4.1 The test papers analysis and statistic
There were two sources of doing statistics in the study. Firstly, the researcher
did the statistics on the final test papers on Vietnamese-English translation which
were taken by classes English 2010 students who are the second-year English
majors at Dong Thap University. Secondly, the statistics were done by analyzing the
extra test papers consisting of ten short passages of different topics in Vietnamese,
which were edited by the researcher, translated into English by the students. In
statistic process, the researcher classified the common mistakes to get the basing for
suggesting solutions to the problems.
All the previously referred test papers consist of 100 final test papers for
English classes, including 2010-2014 curriculum for the students of university
academic standard and 2010-2013 curriculum for the students of college academic
standard, and 105 extra test papers done by the students. Totally, there are 205 test
papers.
2.4.2 The questionnaire
The questionnaire is considered a very common mean or instrument used to
collect data on phenomena, which are not easily observed such as attitude,
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texts to translate is effective or not. Question (10) was for seeking the ideas of the
students about topics of translation texts which they are interested in.
Question (11) was to clarify what the students do to improve their grammar
points relating to verb tenses.
Question (12) was applied to know their views on the factors which play
important roles in Vietnamese-English translation.
Question (13), (14) and (15) were related to the students self-study translation
subject. Question (13) was about types of translation texts which are frequently
chosen by the students to practice translation. Question (14) was used to find out the
amount of time the students spend on Vietnamese-English translation self-study per
week. Question (15) was to know their opinions of how much time is enough for
them to self-study translation per day.
Question (16) was to find out whether the students use reference books or not
in learning translation and what kinds of books they have used.
2.4.3 The interview questions
In order to make the study more reliable, the interview questions were designed
to get more information about the teachers remarks on the students common
mistakes on verb tenses and word choices in Vietnamese-English translating, the
possible ways to improve the students ability to translate. The researcher
interviewed the teachers who are responsible for teaching translation subject to the
students in this academic year as well as who have taught translation and have many
experiences in teaching translation subject.
Question (1) was to know the students attitude towards leaning translation
subject basing on their teachers comments.
Question (2) was designed to get information about kinds of translation texts
which the teacher focused on during teaching process of translation subject.
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Question (3) was made to find out which kinds of translation texts the students
often make mistakes or have difficulties.
Question (4) was to find out kinds of errors relating to verb tenses and word
choices which the students usually make in Vietnamese-English translation texts.
Question (5) was used to find out the possible reasons why the students often
make the above mistakes.
Question (6) was to get information about the teachers ways of improving the
students Vietnamese-English translation skills.
Question (7) was used to know the students consciousness in self-study.
Question (8) was designed to ask about the teachers feedback in translation
lessons.
Question (9) was asked to know difficulties or obstacles which influence on the
teaching and learning process of Vietnamese-English translation.
Question (10) was designed to ask about the teachers advices to help the
students overcome difficulties in improving Vietnamese-English translation skills.
2.4.4 Theoretical analysis
The researcher studied principles, theories which are related to translation
books, textbooks, on the Internet to get the theoretical basis for the thesis.
In short, this chapter is about the aspects of methodology of the study such as
research question; the researchers, the subjects that directly participated in the study;
data collection instruments including the test papers statistics, the questionnaire, the
interview questions and theoretical analysis. The research questions are going to be
solved in next chapter.
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Percentage
97%
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B. no
Question 2: What do you think about learning
translation?
3%
Percentage
0%
88%
7%
5%
The answers to the question reveal that the number of the students who like
translation subject is obviously more than those who do not like it. It is encouraging
to see that most of them like learning translation subject (97%). The results in the
table also mean that the students interest in learning translation work. Their interest
in the subject they learn will be a motive which helps them try to learn it well.
However, there are 3% of the students who have not found their interest in learning
translation.
From the response of question 2, the researcher can know the students feeling
of learning translation subject. When the students were asked about how they feel
about learning translation, most of them (88%) answered that translation is difficult
but interesting. It can be inferred that although translation is a difficult subject for
them to master, they still feel interested in learning it and thus they will try their best
to learn and practice translation as much as they can.
There are only 5% of the students thought that translation subject is not only
easy but also interesting. The amount may be included students who are much
interested in translation subject and so that they feel translation subject is an easy
subject for them to learn. However, 7% of the students chose the answer English is
both difficult and not interesting. No one thought that translation is easy but not
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interesting. From the result, it can be concluded that although there are still small
amount of the students (12%) who were not interested in learning translation, most
of the students expressed their positive attitude toward translation subject. With
those positive attitudes, the researcher hopes that they can learn translation as well
as they can and get much success.
The students views on what translation subject supports their
language learning
Table 2: Translation subject supports their language learning
Question 3: In your opinion, studying translation can
help you
A. enlarge your vocabulary
B. use grammar structure more flexibly
C. improve language skills
D. All the above
E: others: ____________________________________
Percentage
Grade
15.5%
14%
15.5%
55%
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that studying translation brings to their language learning so they are able to find
their motivation for studying this subject so that they can learn it as well as they can
with their own effective ways.
The students difficulties and mistakes in translating Vietnamese-toEnglish texts
Table 3: Difficult type of translation texts
Question 4: In your opinion, what kind of texts is
difficult to translate?
Percentage
A. English-to-Vietnamese
9%
B. Vietnamese-to-English
91%
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Percentage
22%
language.
B. Finding suitable grammar structures in the target
57%
7%
14%
Percentage
12%
10%
74%
D. Others
4%
The table shows that more than half of the students (57%) have problem in
grammar points; specifically in finding suitable grammar structures in the target
language, English to transfer the ideas in the source language, Vietnamese,
effectively. 22% of the students revealed that vocabulary is their difficulty in
translating Vietnamese-into-English texts. They usually confuse in choosing
appropriate vocabulary in the English language. Unlike those students, it is not easy
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for some students (14%) to understand special phrases in the source text. It means
that these students knowledge of their mother tongue, Vietnamese, is quite limited.
In contrast, the rest of the students, only 7%, have trouble in analyzing and
understanding word order in Vietnamese texts to translate into English exactly. The
result prove that vocabulary or choosing words of English language are the big
problem, and using English grammar points is also challenge of the students in the
process of translating Vietnamese-English texts.
The students common mistakes in Vietnamese-English translation texts
corrected by their teacher are shown through question 6. As the table reveals, 12%
of the students often make mistakes in choosing appropriate English words to
translate Vietnamese ideas into English exactly. Unlike those students, there are
10% of the students have problems in using suitable grammar structures relating to
verb tenses for translating ideas in Vietnamese texts. Most of the students, more than
half of them (74%), have difficulties in both word choices and verb tenses when
translating Vietnamese-into-English texts. The rest of the students, only 4%,
answered that they have troubles in other aspects. From the result, it is able to
conclude that word choices and verb tenses are two big problems of most of the
students (96%) in their translating texts from Vietnamese into English. It requires
some effective and possible ways to help them overcome the problems in order to
make their Vietnamese-English translation smoother and get more success.
What the students do to improve translating
Table 5: How the students improve their translating
Question 7: What do you do when you encounter new
Vietnamese words or phrases in translation texts?
Percentage
52%
3%
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42%
D. Others: ___________________________________
3%
Percentage
A. learning vocabulary
10%
B. learning grammar
9%
10%
8%
63%
articles
F. Others: ___________________________________
How and what the students do to improve their translating are shown in table 5.
The responses to question 7 show how the students solve problems about
vocabulary. When encountering new Vietnamese words or phrases in translation
texts, 52% of the students often look up Vietnamese dictionaries; 3% of them
usually ask their friends and teacher; 42% of the students can guess the word
meanings from the context; the rest of them, only 3%, apply other ways, but they did
not present what ways they use. The result indicates that more than half of the
students still belong much to dictionaries to get the meanings of new Vietnamese
words or phrases, and most of others feel effective to guess the meanings through
the contexts. Looking at dictionaries can help the students know the words
meanings quickly when translating, but it will be more exact and effective for their
translating if they try to guess the words meaning from contexts because in
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Percentage
A. yes
58%
B. quite effective
35%
C. no
7%
Basing on answers for question 9, there are more than half of the students
(58%) who suppose that it will be effective if they themselves choose texts to
translate. 35% of the students believe that it is quite effective for them to choose
translation texts by themselves. Only 7% do not think they will translate texts which
they choose by themselves effectively. The result shows that most of the students
agreed that topics of the translations texts are able to influence on the effectiveness
of their translating. It will be more effective for them to translate texts whose topics
they feel interested in rather than the others whose topics they are not interested in
and know much information. Specifically, topics which the students are interested in
are going to be shown in table 7 below through question 10.
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Percentage
Grade
A. entertainment
19%
B. politics
4%
C. science
4%
D. economy
10%
E. education
19%
F. lifestyle
30%
G. health
14%
H. others: _____________________________________
entertainment
politics
science
economy
education
lifestyle
health
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students chose it. 19% of the students pay much attention to entertainment and
education. 14% of the students find their interest in the topic health and 10% of
them like the aspect economy. Only 4% of the students chose politics and
science. It can be included that most of the students are not interested in topics
relating to political and scientific aspects. In contrast, topics relating to lifestyle,
education and entertainment are their interest so they are able to translate texts
related to these topics effectively.
What the students do to improve their grammar points relating to verb
tenses
Table 8: The students learning grammar points relating to verb tenses
Question 11: What do you do to improve your
grammar points relating to verb tenses?
A. Reading grammar books relating to verb tenses and
Percentage
19%
doing exercises
B. Searching and studying online on the internet
6%
C. Both A and B
75%
D. others: ___________________________________
The result shows that the students pay much attention on to improving their
grammar points relating to verb tenses and have applied many ways to be more
flexible in using English grammar points in translating. From the table, there are
19% of the students who have read grammar books and practice exercises about
verb tenses. 6% of the students have applied searching and studying online on the
Internet. Almost students (75%) have used the two ways as well. It is obviously to
see that most of the students nowadays know how to combine traditional way,
reading books, with the high technique of the Internet to improve their learning in
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general and their language learning. In fact, it will bring many benefits to them in
language learning if they know how to apply the high technique of the Internet well
combined with reading reference books.
The students views on the factors which play important roles in
Vietnamese-English translation
Table 9: The students thought of the factors which help their translating
Vietnamese-to-English texts
Question 12: In your opinion, which of the following
factors can best help your translating Vietnamese-to- Percentage
Grade
English texts?
A. grammar
18%
B. vocabulary
25%
C. mother tongue
2%
D. context
13%
E. background knowledge
30%
12%
G. others: ____________________________________
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grammar
vocabulary
mother tongue
context
background knowledge
topic of the source text
Percentage
15%
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B. Vietnamese-into-English texts
7%
61%
17%
Question 14: How much time do you spend on selfstudy on Vietnamese-English translation per week?
A. never
Percentage
B. about 2 hours
62%
C. about 4 hours
24%
D. others: _______________________________
14%
Percentage
A. 30 minutes
28%
B. 1 hours
38%
C. 2 hours
34%
D. 3 hours
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Vietnamese, then Vietnamese-English. The rest of the students (17%) first practice
Vietnamese-English translation, then English-Vietnamese.
Self-study is very important to the students studies. The answers to question
14 show that more than half of the students (62%) spend about 2 hours per week on
self-study Vietnamese-English translation. However, more frequently, 24% of the
students spend about 4 hours per week on practicing Vietnamese-English
translation. 14% of them chose the answer others but they did not refer how much
time they self-study. No one answered never practice translation at home. It can
be concluded that most of the students expressed their positive attitude towards selfstudying Vietnamese-English translation as well as learning translation subject in
general.
Looking at the result of question 15, there are 28% of the students think that 30
minutes per day is enough for them to self study translation. 38% of them suppose
that it is about 1 hours, In contrast, 34% of them think self-studying translation need
about 2 hours per day. No one chose 3 hours per day.
Whether the students use reference books or not
Table 11: The students using reference books relating to translation
Question 16: Do you use any reference books?
Percentage
A. yes
45%
B. no
55%
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Through question 16, it is clear to see the amount of the students who have
used reference books relating to translation subject. From the table, more than half
of students (55%) have not used any reference book. It can be inferred that they still
have not paid much attention on studying translation subject so they do not find out
and read some more extra documents to improve their translation skills. As the
result, they cannot be successful in learning translation subject. In contrast, nearly
half of the students (45%) have used reference books. Some of them are referred in
the table like Luyn dch Vit Anh Anh Vit, Articles in translation books and
English compositions.
3.1.2 Result from the interview questions
In order to make the study more reliable, the researcher interviewed the
teachers who are responsible for teaching translation subject to the students in this
academic year as well as who have taught translation and have many experiences in
teaching translation subject. Here are the questions used in our interviews
1. Would you like to give some comments about your students attitude
towards learning translation subject?
2. What kind of translation texts do you focus on during your teaching process
of translation subject?
3. Which kind of translation texts do the students often make mistakes or have
difficulties?
4. What kinds of errors relating to verb tenses and word choices in VietnameseEnglish translation do your students often make?
5. Would you like to state the reason why the students often make the above
errors? What are they?
6. What do you do to improve your students translation skills?
7. Are your students conscious in self-study?
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8. How can you give feedback to the students translation products in class?
9. In your opinion, what are difficulties or obstacles which influence on the
teaching and learning process of Vietnamese-English translation?
10. Would you like to give some advices which help your students overcome
difficulties in improving Vietnamese-English translation skills?
From the teachers responses, it can be included that most of the students
have positive attitude towards learning translation, most of them go to class
regularly and all prepare for the lesson at home by reading and translating texts
which the teacher asked in the previous lesson. About type of translation texts, the
teachers said that they have not focused on English-Vietnamese translation or
Vietnamese-English one, so the students have to translate both Vietnamese-English
and English-Vietnamese kind of texts in each topic. The teachers also said that the
students often have difficulties and make mistakes in Vietnamese-English
translation rather than English-Vietnamese one. The result is totally true with the
result from the questionnaire for the students; most of the students suppose that
Vietnamese-English texts are difficult for them to translate. As mentioned above, the
results from the questionnaire show that the students usually make mistakes on
vocabulary relating to word choices and grammar points about verb tenses in their
Vietnamese-to-English translation texts. It is also proved via the responses to
question 4 answered by the teacher. About word choices, the students use English
words to transfers Vietnamese ideas incorrectly and inexactly. They do not read the
whole text to understand the true meaning of the text and just transfer word by word
a Vietnamese text into English. Especially in using synonyms of words, words they
used are not suitable with the context of the translation text, so it makes funnies
sentences which are called English for the Vietnamese. Choosing prepositions to use
is also their language weaknesses. When using grammar structures, the students also
have many mistakes relating to verb tenses. The teacher said that their students lack
of knowledge about usages and forms of grammar structures relating to verb tenses.
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The tenses they used are sometimes are unsuitable with the context and even the
structures or forms of verb tenses they used incorrectly. The teachers stated that the
reasons of those weaknesses are their weaknesses of vocabulary and grammar
points, their limitation of mother tongue - Vietnamese, their background knowledge
of the society and especially cultural barriers or the differences between English and
Vietnamese culture about language. To improve the students translation skills, the
teacher asks their students regularly attend translation class, read and translate the
texts which they asked at home and present their products of translation on the board
in class to be corrected by other students in the class and the teacher. In addition, the
teacher focuses on the way to correct mistakes. The students are introduced different
words and structures which are suitable with the context to translate one idea.
Moreover, the teacher introduced reference books, WebPages for them to self study
in order to improve their vocabulary and grammar as well as translation skills.
According to the teachers opinion, self-study is very important. However, the
teacher commented that many students have not taken the chance of self-study
seriously. It also means that their attitude towards self-study translation is not
positive as the teachers expected. As mentioned above, difficulties or obstacles of
teaching and learning process of Vietnamese-English translation are about the
students vocabulary and English grammar, knowledge of their mother tongue
Vietnamese- and of aspects in the society, what they know about English culture in
language and one more important factors that is about their attitude towards selfstudy translation. In order to help the students improve their translation skills as well
as get more success in teaching translation subject, the teachers advised that the
students should self practice grammar, learn vocabulary through reading reference
books, articles in English, read more about English and American culture in using
language, and especially improve their mother tongue in order that they are able to
know obviously the differences between the two languages in using language.
In general, the teachers responding to the interview questions are quite
corresponding to that the researcher collected from the questionnaire.
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Grammar errors
Vocabulary errors
Having-mistakes test
175/205
182/205
(85.4%)
(88.8%)
The number of
Percentage
errors
(%)
88
50.3%
22
12.6%
Incorrect structures
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37.1%
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Misuse of
verb tenses
Misuse of
verb forms
Incorrect
structures
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While the key is: On November 22nd at Nguyen Sinh Sac relic (Cao Lanh
city), Dong Thap province solemnly organized the 82nd death anniversary of Nguyen
Sinh Sac who is Ho Chi Minhs father.
Because the sentence is about an event which occurred already in the past, it is
not correct to use simple present tense as the sentence (i) and the passive voice of
present perfect tense in (ii) which is just used to describe an action in a period in the
past leading and lasting up to the present. Furthermore, it is not exact for the
students to use the passive voice of present continuous tense as in (iii). In the
sentence (iii), there are three errors. First is using incorrect tense which is
mentioned. Using are is the second error because the subject Dong Thap province
is singular, so it is not appropriate to use are. The third error is the word solemn
which is an adjective. After the word organized, it has to be an adverb
solemnly. The error is also occurred in the sentence (ii) when the students used
solemn before the word organized, so it has to be changed into solemnly in
this position.
Example 2: The source sentence Tuy cng ngh mi ang c th nghim
nhng Gio s Clark lc quan v tim nng tng lai ca n trong vic ch bin tt
c cht thi thnh nhin liu sinh hc. was translated by the students as follow:
(i) Although new technique are trying, Professor Clark is optimistic of its
future potential to processing all waste into biology fuel.
(ii) New technique is trying, but Professor Clark is optimistic about its future
potential in processing all waste into biology fuel.
(iii) Although new technique will be tested, but Professor Clark is optimistic
about its future potential that processing all waste run into biology fuel.
Whereas the key is Although new technique is being tried/tested, Professor
Clark is optimistic about its future potential in processing all waste into biology
fuel.
In the sentence (i), there are three errors. The first is that it is not appropriate to
use active voice present continuous in this situation because the subject new
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technique is not able to try by itself. The second error is that it is incorrect to use
the word are for the subject new technique which is singular form. Moreover,
it is not exact for the students to write to processing in this sentence because to
express purpose of using the technique here it is a rule to write to process. It is
also acceptable to change this into in processing or about processing.
In the sentence (ii), the students used incorrectly the tense present continuous
active voice like in (i). The students did not realize that the subject new technique
has to be tried by people or professors. Therefore, it is suitable and appropriate to
use passive voice.
There are three errors in (iii). The first is using passive voice of simple future
to express the idea. Because the action of trying the technique is occurring in the
present, so it is incorrect to write will be tried. The second error is that the
students used both although and but in the sentence. In order to express the
idea Tuy nhng or mc d nhng , it is a grammar rule to use just
one of them as Although , or , but . The third mistake is the phrase
that processing. It is unclear to know what the students mean to use that here.
As mentioned above, it is suitable to use in/about processing in this position.
Example 3: the sentence B i ln vo y th mt ht, ch chng ln ra
du. was translated by the students as Soldiers hide in here, so the enemy will lose
their marks. In both two clauses the students used incorrect verb tenses. The
situation here is about a past event. Therefore, it is not appropriate to use simple
present tense in the first clause and simple future tense in the second clause. To
express the idea in the source sentence, simple past tense is the best choice, so the
suggested translation sentence is when soldiers hid here, the enemy failed to find
any traces of them.
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has. In the sentence, the way the students used the word eye-catching is also
incorrect and suitable with the meaning of bt mt, but it will be discussed later.
Example 4: The students translated the sentence 8 triu tn v cam b vt b
mi nm c th c dng ch to ra ha cht, nguyn liu hay nhin liu. into:
(i) 8 million tons of orange peels which are threw-away each year can be
used to produce chemicals, raw materials or fuel.
(ii) 8 million tons of orange peels throwed-away each year, can be used to
produce chemicals, raw materials or fuel.
(iii) 8 million tons of orange peels which are throw-away each year can be
use to produce chemicals, materials or fuel.
The three examples above are mistakes about regular and irregular verb forms.
In the sentence (i), after the word are, it needs a past participle to form the
passive voice. However, threw-away is just past form of the verb throw-away
which means nm i or vt i in Vietnamese. In the sentence (ii), the students
confused regular form and irregular form. The verb throw is an irregular verb, so
it is totally unacceptable to write throwed. In the sentence (iii), there are two
mistakes about verb forms. The first is the verb throw-away following are. As
discussed above, after are it must be past participle form thrown-awayinstead of present form throw-away. The second error in this sentence is the word
use. Because in this case it is the passive voice of the modal can, after can
be it must be past participle used. Suggested translation sentence is 8 million
tons of orange peels which are thrown-away each year can be used to produce
chemicals, raw materials or fuel.
Incorrect structures
When using English tenses to describe ideas in Vietnamese, the students had
problems. They did not use correctly and appropriately tenses. The following
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examples which are extracted from the tests papers contain incorrect structures of
tenses used by the students.
Example 1: The students translation for the sentence Are harvesting,
everyone busy with farm works. is wrong English sentence. Firstly, the phrase are
harvesting is not accepted in this position because it does not make sense. To make
sense it needs a subject. Secondly, busy is an adjective, so it is incorrect to directly
follow the subject everyone. Therefore, it is necessary to insert the word is
between everyone and busy to make sense for the sentence. Because the
situation is about past event, so it is suitable to use past tense and suggested sentence
is Because it was in harvest season, everyone was busy with farm work.
Example 2: The students translated the sentence Tn ch no lt vo y th
ng hng quay tr ra. into The enemy was not return when they came here. In
this sentence was not return is incorrect English structure. Because return is a
verb, it must be used did not instead of was not to express negative point.
Example 3: the sentence Ni y tng tip n cc tu bun t la, gm x
n mua bn. was translated as This place welcame silk and ceramic merchant
vessels. The error here is the way the students used welcame which is not exist
in English because welcome is a regular verb. Therefore, the word welcame
must be changed into welcomed.
Vocabulary errors Word choices
This part only focuses on analyzing the vocabulary errors related to word
choices. Errors which are related to grammar points and others points of vocabulary
will not be analyzed in detail in this part. The percentage of the test papers which
contained vocabulary errors related to word choices is 88.8%.
Lack of vocabulary causes many problems in Vietnamese-English translation
process. Frequently, they could not choose the right word in the context. In the test
papers made by the students of English 2010 classes, there are some mistakes about
word choices as example below:
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Example 1: there was a phrase Khu di tch Nguyn Sinh Sc and most of the
students translated the phrase it with incorrect and inexact phrases as Nguyen Sinh
Sac vestiges, Nguyen Sinh Sac vestiges zone, Nguyen Sinh Sac relic district,
Nguyen Sinh Sac relic region, Nguyen Sinh Sac vestiges region, Nguyen Sinh
Sac tomb or Nguyen Sinh Sac mausoleums while the key is Nguyen Sinh Sac
relic area. In this case, most of the students had mistakes about misuse of
synonyms when translated khu into zone, region, areal and district, and
the word di tch into vestiges and relic. They did not realize that although
those words have some near points about meaning in dictionaries, they are only used
suitably in some certain situations.
Example 2: The Vietnamese word phrase dng tc Nguyn Sinh was
translated by the students as Nguyen Sinh line, Nguyen Sinh family line,
Nguyen Sinh lineage, Nguyen Sing descent, Nguyen Sinh kinship or Nguyen
Sinh relative, the same clan of Nguyen Sinh whereas the key is Nguyen Sinh
ancestry. It is nearly like with the example 1, the students had mistakes about
misuse of synonyms when they used line, lineage, descent, relative,
kinship and clan to translate the word dng tc into English. However, the
real meaning of those words is totally inappropriate with this case, so the most
suitable word is ancestry.
Example 3: The Vietnamese phrase Lng m thc Vit Nam was incorrectly
translated by the students into English as follow:
Vietnam eating circles
Cuisine Village of Vietnam
Village of Vietnams culinary
Culinary industry in Vietnam, etc.
The suggested translation phrase is: Vietnamese cuisine
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Most of the students did not clearly understand that lng in the Vietnamese
phrase means an aspects or a field. It does not mean village- lng or x in
Vietnamese. Furthermore, it is incorrect to use the word industry ngnh cng
nghip or the word circles which does not make any sense in this case.
Example 4: When the students translated the sentence Tng mn n c
trang tr rt p, bt mt v tn nhiu cng sc ng ngha nem cng, ch
phng into English, they translated the phrase nem cng, ch phng as
follow:
Meat roll, fermenting pork roll
Delicacies, choice dishes
Grilled rolls of phoenix, etc.
Basing on the context, nem cng, ch phng is used to express delicious
foods, so it is the most suitable to translate the phrase into the word delicacy
which has enough meaning for this case. Because most of the students just translated
basing on the two nouns nem cng and ch phng, they translated incorrectly
like phrases above.
In brief, most of the students of 2010 classes still have some problems about
using verb tenses and choosing words suitably in translating Vietnamese texts into
English. In verb tenses, the students are confused in using tenses and their structures
or forms of verbs. The students also had difficulties in transfer Vietnamese words
and phrases into English as the above example. Therefore, there is an urgent demand
to find causes of problems and techniques or suggestions in order to help them
improve their Vietnamese translation skills.
3.2 Discussion
Basing on data collected from the questionnaire, the interview questions and
the test papers, there are some causes of problems in Vietnamese-English translation
of the students found as follow:
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English 2010 in particular and the students of English major at the school in general
as well as readers who are interested in Vietnamese-into-English translation.
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