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d: Revise texts using feedback to enhance the effect on the reader and clarify the presentation of implicit or explicit
theme.
Learning Target: I can create goals for myself in order to complete tasks to the best of my ability
AND
I can complete my persuasive letter using the tools I receive in live class.
Success Criteria: Students will complete a Playlist that has each student, depending on where they are in the process of writing
their persuasive letter, complete tasks that will help them finish the letter by the end of the day so they can enjoy their Thanksgiving
break.
Materials:
Playlist and subsequent documents.
Plan:
Before Class:
Students will come in, find their seats, and begin their
gratitude journal. I will ask them to really focus on the
24 hour part of the journal, to stay present. Push
through the day and get your work done and the break
will be as relaxing as it can be with all of their family
under one roof.
Beginning of
Class:
The Playlist:
Feedback
Solid lesson. Good scaffolding, strong mini lesson to clarify a concept. Added challenge: could have tried to have kids include an
allusion in their letter (bonus points?)
>Great opportunity to conference with each kiddo. Felt like an ordinary day in a smooth classroom. How did you choose what order
to meet with kids? Try to grab your most-at need students first.
>What will motivate kiddos to keep working through the hour?
>How will they earn point for today?
>Nice, clear, succinct feedback to kids. Really important when delivering instructions.
>Maybe good to pause during conferences and check in with any kiddos. Looks like Tryan is doodling?
>How do you determine seating in class? All choice = nice and flexible. There can be some rational to grouping kiddos based on
track (peer review, drafting, revising, etc). That way you can quickly look around the room and check in.
>Kids started packing up at 12:26
>Pacman screens, finish up what youre working on - slightly contradicting
>TOTD - always good to get one final question from kids -- where are you stuck? What is one question you have for me? What do
you need to do your best work on this?