CU- Close Up

MS- Mid Shot

WS- Wide Shot
EXT. CEMETERY- NIGHT
WS of a large fire near Bobbys grave. CU of Zorf removing a
bowl of broth from the flames. MS of him pouring the broth
over Bobbys grave.
WS of the group of Makara raising their hands to the starry
sky. The sky swirls with green and purple color. Energy
streams into the grave. MS of David dropping to his knees
and bowing his head in prayer. Lightning strikes and it
begins to storm heavily. The green light in the sky fades
and the Makara disappear into the night. The storm calms
down and only small flashes of lighting are left.
CU of Davids face, his glasses wet with rain. He blesses
himself. CU of Bobbys grave, lightning flashing in the
distance. A hand slowly pushes its way out of the dirt,
reaching up towards the sky. Lightning flash.
EXT. OUTERSPACE
Flash of light and WS as we pass a star with planets
orbiting. There are small space ships transporting from
planet to planet. We accelerate speed to the left several
solar systems away. We slow and glide along as a Dyneeran
spaceship passes.
INT. DYNEERAN SPACESHIP
CU zoom out of Bobbys voodoo doll, sitting upright on a
spaceship control surface, slowly growing shiny metal
shards, like splotches of scales, across the body. The
Dyneeran leader Skwaak enters the frame and picks up the
doll, shuts his eyes and chants in a whisper. He stops and
looks up.
SKWAAK
He is alive again...Why is he alive
again?! Parnarsuss!
MS of PARNARSUSS, a Dyneeran shaman, swiftly entering.
PARNARSUSS
I am at your service.
Skwaak hands the doll to Parnarsuss.

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2.
SKWAAK
Kill him.
PARNARSUSS
He seems to have some armor? Weve
already killed him once, sire.
SKWAAK
Fullfill your contract, shaman. I
need him dead.

Skwaak exits.
Parnarsuss looks at the doll skeptically. The metals scales
on the doll reflect in the light.
Zoom out of the spaceship, it passes. Zoom out of the solar
system.
Fade to BLACK
EXT. DAVIDS HOUSE- NIGHT
WS of Davids house. We hear an owl.
INT. DAVIDS BEDROOM
Wide pannning shot of Davids room, him asleep in his
and the windows with the streetlight shining through.
light becomes blue and misty and we hear high pitch
deepspace tunnel wind and Parnarsuss and two Dyneeran
arrive in the room with little flashes of light. They
shade of blue, with tribal colors.

bed
The
guards
are a

They stand in silence in the dark for a moment.

PARNARSUSS
David. David...David! David?
Parnarsuss turns to his right and asks one of the humongous
humanoid guards.
PARNARSUSS
Give me a good roar, would you?
DYNEERAN GAURD
(roars like dinosaur)
MS of David startling awake, freaking out in the blanket as
if he is trapped, and falling on the floor.
Silence.
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3.

PARNARSUSS
David?
MS of Davids head poking up from behind the bed.
DAVID LIEBE HART
Huh? Who are you? What are you
doing in my bedroom at this time of
night? You should be ashamed of
yourselves!
WS of David turning on a light.
DAVID LIEBE HART
Wandering into a grown mans
bedroom to startle him awake for
god knows what favors! Ive got a
good right toPause.
David stares at the Dyneeran shaman and his two guards.
PARNARSUSS
Hello, David. Im Parnarsuss. I
believe youve met our sister
species, the protector of these
planets, the Makara. Weve got a
good guess that youve spent some
time with them and found some
sacred way to heal your son. It was
so very sad when he passed away.
Tell me...where is your son,
Bobby?
DAVID LIEBE HART
How did you make it past the Makara
to get to me?
PARNARSUSS
Were very well connected. We have
a special link to the homosapiens.
A bridge if you will. Someone very
special to you.
DAVID LIEBE HART
I know who your species are. Ive
been plotting my revenge for 10
years. Dont think for a second
that Ive forgotten.

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4.
PARNARSUSS
Its best if you put your boy back
in the ground. Skwaak used his
death for an important reason. To
bring your Eemza closer to him, so
she would surrender. Soon we will
have the blessing to drink human
blood, rich in precious metals,
iron and spirit, a fountain of
youth you might say.
DAVID LIEBE HART
Get out of my house!
PARNARSUSS
We deeply regret any inconvenience
we may have caused you, but when we
discovered your wifes unique
talent for magic, it was undeniable
that her blood was elixir itself.
You chose a pure woman, but she no
longer belongs to you. Skwaak has
paid his reparations in gold.
DAVID LIEBE HART
Your money is worthless.
PARNARSUSS
As is the resurrection of your son.
It is best you disappear David.
Your brave heart does not belong
spilled on the battlefield.
DAVID LIEBE HART
On the contrary-

WS of David ducking behind his bed. He pulls out a machine

gun. He fires, but Parnarsuss quickly disappears. David
kills the two gaurds. The bullets are lasers and the impacts
land in explosions.
BLACK
INT. BATHROOM
CU of David washing his hands of blood. He washes his face
in cold water. He takes two pills with water and looks in
the mirror. MS of him grabbing his gun and exiting. WS of
him laying in bed watching the news. CU of him slowly
falling asleep, he startles awake and reaches for his gun to
make sure its still there. His eyes close.
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INT. SPACESHIP
WS of a dark spaceship hallway. Eemza is in the middle, some
distance away.
EEMZA
David! David!
INT. DAVIDS BEDROOM
CU of David asleep, twitching in this emotional dream.
INT. SPACESHIP
MS of EEMZA, still a dark and cloudy picture, in the space
ship hallway. She is reaching out to hand David a rose.
EEMZA
David Liebe Hart! Ich liebe dich!
David Liebe Hart! Ich liebe dich!
WS of Eemza as shes sucked through the spaceship hallway.
We hear her cry out as she disappears in the darkness.
BLACK
Suddenly we see CU of Eemza inside a closed door cell. She
is wide eyed, tear stained, blood shot eyes. MS of her
holding the rose, staring up at the door. CU of the peephole
at the top sliding open. MS of Eemza startled. CU top shot,
looking down on Eemza frightened.
SKWAAK O.S.
Hello, my love.
EEMZA
Hes not dead is he?
pause.
SKWAAK O.S.
Im afraid his illness got the best
of him.
Tears stream out of Eemzas eyes.
EEMZA
What do you want with my species?
CU of the peephole. We see a shadow of a mouth speaking.

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6.

SKWAAK
Your souls of course.
EEMZA
I will never love you.
SKWAAK
Then everyone you love will die.
Slow zoom in to CU of the shadowed mouth speaking through
the door.
SKWAAK
Well move on to David, then your
already dying mother. Your nephews
are not safe. Your heart will be
mine. I have chosen. You are the
purest on this planet.
CU of Eemza very upset. She screams and casts her arms at
the door. MS of electricity coming out of her fingertips but
fizzling away and sending jolts of currents through her
body. She drops to the ground in pain and exhaustion. CU of
the rose in slow motion falling to the ground. CU of the
door peephole shutting.
BLACK
INT. DAVIDS BEDROOM- MORNING
MS of David waking up suddenly. The blinds are blocking most
of the light in his room. CU of the alarm clock at 1:27pm.
CU of him grabbing his gun. WS of him sitting in bed
breathing heavily holding the gun. Slow zoom in to CU of a
rose on the floor. Slow zoom in to CU of David seeing the
rose.
BLACK