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Form: Design
Absent or
Below Basic
Figures or formatting do not
match the papers purpose or
are not explained by author.
Developing
Proficient
Form: Genre
Content:
Information
Content:
Support
Content:
Organization
Frequently unorganized:
difficult to find a clear
relationship between
paragraphs or sentences.
Headings are inappropriate,
unclear or absent.
Advanced
Designincluding figures and
formathelps author achieve
purpose with style.
Good job! I think the resume
format is used correctly. Its
eye appealing. The bullet
points and headings allow for
easy skimming.
Follows generic conventions
(whether for instruction
manual, cover letter, etc.)
consistently and with
sophistication.
Resume genre is achieved
through the use of action
words such as organized,
exemplified etc. Objective
is concise. Nice way of
choosing words that show
managing.
Supplies all necessary
information with
sophistication.
Info. is supplied and
organized through use of
headings and chunking.
Supports all claims with
specific, relevant details and/or
evidence. Employs different
types of evidence.
The claim (obj.) is provided
with enough evidence from
the subheadings and
information.
Effectively ordered paragraphs
cover only one topic each and
are generally linked with
useful transitions. Headings
are appropriate and clear.
Sentences flow logically to
persuade reader.
Citations:
Readability:
Comments: On what two or three areas do you think this writer needs to focus before submitting this document?
1. Focus on setting the dates on the right side on the same vertical line to achieve a vertical whitespace and guideline
2. Maybe put heading on left side of the resume