1.

INTRODUCTION
This article is talk about the how bad is the Marijuana for peoples health and bad
affect to humans mental problem. According to the article, author wants to give the
smokers some advises to quite smoking as early as they can. It is because the
smoking Marijuana will affect the health of a person. In the other hand, it may not
only will cause the diseases to a person but also increase the risk death to a person. In
the additions, the long-term smokers may experience memory and attention loss.
There is also some to be identify the mental problem with schizophrenia.

2. SUMMARY
Articles are written by Brian Palmer on 1 May 201.Articles tells about the
dangers of Marijuana meditating on our health. Articles were written based on the
research that they done it. Base on this articles we can make analysis how author
write the articles about dangerous Marijuana for our health. The main purpose
write this articles to tell people about disadvantages of Marijuana for our health .
Beside, the tone that author use it show author very worried about the people that
did not know the dangerous of Marijuana for our health. In addition, the authors
also provide information to us about the dangerous Marijuana to health. All
written by this author is fact and opinion research conducted. We also get to see
the reaction of the readers of this article are not very encouraging because the way
these articles are written quite boring. To find out more about all briefly recounted
above can read in the next page.

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3. ANALYSIS OF PRESENTATION
3.1.
Authors purpose
Authors purpose in this article is to inform all smokers about the disadvantages or
the dangerous of the smoking. Author stated that the marijuana smoking is related
with some of the forms of respiratory dysfunction. Most of the smokers body check
up report always trouble with, wheezing, coughing and phlegm. Besides, the lung
cancer can consider is a murkier problem. Marijuana smoke has included higher
concentrations of some carcinogens than cigarette smoke does. The physiological
effects of increscent marijuana usage are uncertain. In the addition, some of the
studies also show that for those who had experience impairments may recover soon
when they are quit smoking. For the heavy smokers or the long-term smokers, they
may experience memory and attention loss. There is also some evidences stated that
the heavy marijuana users are more probably to be diagnosed with schizophrenia. It
may be the case that people with schizophrenia are self-medicating with marijuana.
3.2.

Authors tone

Author was worry and take care of the health of Marijuana smokers and the
smoking Marijuana will affect the teenagers education and their mental problem.
Author had stated that the teenagers who were smoke pot do poorly in school. In the
other hand, it may cause teenagers with schizophrenia commit suicide.
3.3.

Informative

Author had given moderate information about how the Marijuana affected human
mental and physical. For example, author stated they may face some physical problem
if overload taking Marijuana smoking. They not only will get the respiratory
dysfunction like phlegm, coughing, and wheezing but also lung cancer. In the
addition, author also stated that a healthy person would have to smoke dozen of joints
in a single session to risk from death from overdose. People who do die from the
acute effects of Marijuana die in accidents. In the other hand, overload taking
Marijuana smoking will also affect the mental problem such as schizophrenia.
Schizophrenia will cause the person cannot differentiated the real life and non real
life, in this case, they may do some action that consider as dangerous like commit
suicide or hurt people in the situation that they not clear in mind.
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3.4.

Facts versus Opinion

Author had given many facts in this article. For example, author stated that a press
release from the Society for Neuroscience publish the Gilman studys importance due
to it looked at casual users rather than regular pot smokers, who form the basis of
most marijuana studies. The subjects averaged 3.83 days of smoking and 11.2 total
joints per week. Identifying these people as informal pot smokers was a great media
hook, but it defied common sense. Furthermore, author also stated most of the studies
advice that any potential health risks of cannabis are dose-dependent which means
that the people who smoke not much, the risk to get is very low. Meanwhile the
people who smoke a lot, the risk to get sick is very high. In the addition, author also
show that frequent marijuana smoking is associated with some forms of respiratory
dysfunction.

3.5.

Audience

This Article is written more to tell the facts that have been studied by researchers
about the Marijuana for health. Author also did not use the sentence to attract readers
when they reading the article about the dangerous of Marijuana for health. Besides
that, the writer has chosen to present about the information of dangerous Marijuana to
health use the method of fact. Besides, the readers will fell boring read the articles
because everything is facts. The author should put something interesting to attract the
readers, because people like to read and see something different and unique of way
the author present the fact of that information. Example is give the fact about the
information with the interesting way like picture, pie chart or graph. This the way to
attract them continue read and influence about the topics.

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4. RESPONSES TO PRESENTATION
Author had used the simple and directly words and sentences to make some
conveniences for reader to read. For example, author wants to let the reader
understand about the disadvantages of Marijuana smoking for health, he gave
some diseases such as lung cancer told the reader about the death risk for taking
overload Marijuana. In the other hand, we think that author can give more
examples and the information about the diseases to reader for their further
references. Author not only listed out the name of diseases but also give how is the
diseases in human body such as the growth of lung cancer cell can spread beyond
the lung by process of metastasis into nearby tissue or other parts of the body. The
most common symptoms are coughing with blood, weight loss, shortness of
breath, and chest pains.
Furthermore, we also think that author should list down some solutions in
order to let the Marijuana smoker know how to quit smoking rather that only
advice the smoker to quit smoking without any solutions. For example, author
may state that smoker MUST decide not to smoke TODAY. Each day don not
smoke is a victory for those who want to quit smoking. In the addition, spend the
free time in the public places where smoking is not allowed like libraries and
malls. Another example is try to choose the drink that are low calorie or non
calorie and refuse to drink coffee alcohol, or the drinks that link with smoking for
at least a couple of months. If you are missing the feeling of marijuana smoking,
you may try to handle a pencil or coin to forget the feeling of smoking.

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5. CONCLUSION
In the conclusion, we think that this article can be one of the references to the
readers. It is because this article is clear and easy to read and understand. Reader can
understand and remember the information easily. Besides that, we will recommend
this article to our course mate or some smoker friends in order to let them know the
disadvantages of the Marijuana smoking. Besides that, the articles also can
recommend the articles to people how want to know more details about the dangerous
of Marijuana and also to researches is do the research about Marijuana for references.

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