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Assignment :
Task 1 Creative writing ( You and Me )
Task 2 Write an essay that discusses how the study of stylistics / language in
literature can help improve ones English language.
Task 1.
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You and Me
1.0 Introduction
The theme for my poem here is basically a person seeking his or her lost love
but fate gets in the way of the relationship. His or her lover left the persona for some
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unknown reason. When I was drafting this poem, my mind was filled with a lot of past
memories and hatred. However, after jotting down all the emotions in a paper, I realize that it
is not the hatred I had for the person but how much I missed the person and the moment we
had. The first stanza and last stanza of the poem is basically taken from the television series,
Charmed. I wanted to infuse the incantation into my poem as it is the main sources of my
idea. The first two lines in my first stanza talks about the hatred the persona had for the lover
and how much the persona wanted to make him or the memories disappeared. It is also
known as the Vanishing Spell in the TV series. Then the third and fourth line talks about it
is too precious by the persona to be vanished thus reaffirming the back the memories. In the
TV show, the spell is a counterpart to Vanishing Spell and it is nameless. The last stanza is
a prayer to the spirit or the Gods that blessed persona to find the lost love that he or her once
had. It is called the Summoning a Spirit Spell where it is used to summon a person that you
miss dearly . The second stanza implied that the persona had gone through many years with
her or his lover. However, the persona has lost the lover and he or she is looking desperately
for the love( when I shall call for you name / You shall feel my flame ). The third stanza is
pure hope saying that one will be together with his/ her lover if it is true love. The fourth
stanza is suggesting that love is just fated and sometimes, love can make us lose our mind (...
losing the sense of reason). The fifth stanza suggests that the persona will continue to love the
person forever (my love shall not wither) and the love is timeless (take my heart nearer thee /
across time and shall be). The next stanza suggests that no matter how much the persona
love the lover, fate always get in the way of life causing them to be apart( I reached out to
grasp you but was dissolved into foam / Fate repeatedly jabs our hearts ). The next stanza ,
however, is pleading for sympathy (Guiding spirit I asked for your charity / make me gleeful
for just one night ). The next stanza suggests that the wrongdoing in the world is too painful
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2.0 Linguistics Element
2.1 Graphology
Graphology simply is the pattern of the written language or the shape of the
language on the page. Graphological Deviation, this is the deviation in which poets
disregard the rules of writing. They write the words in such a way without any boundaries in
lines, space, or rhymes.. I utilized two graphology method in my poem. First, I bolded the
first stanza and the last stanza. The reason I bolded it is it was not my own work. I took it
from a TV series, Charmed back in the year 1998 and 2001. I wanted to highlight that
incantation or spells are basically poetry too. They rhyme and carry a meaning for a certain
event. For example, the first stanza is vanishing spell whereby I was hoping to vanishing my
feelings towards a person but then I add on a reaffirming to show that I realized that it is too
precious to be vanished. These incantation can be found the TV series, Charmed in 1998 and
2001. Besides that, I wanted to stress that the bolding is a highlight to acknowledgement to
ancient prayer. The another reason why I bold the two stanzas is to foreground the meaning of
the poem which is memories. The meaning of the first two line (Let the object of objection
become but a dream / As I cause the Seen to be Unseen ) in stanza 1 is basically that the
persona wants the obstacles such as his feelings and memories towards his lover to disappear.
The meaning implied third and fourth line is stanza 1(Let the object of objection return/ So
that its existence may be reaffirmed) is the memories is, however, too precious to be
forgotten .The meaning of the first two lines alone could stand for many lines in the poem.
For example, in stanza 2 line 9 and 10. (Staying paired is blissful /But to sever, bitter: a trap
in itself where devoted lovers) which basically trying to imply that love was beautiful but it is
a trap for devoted lovers especially when they break up. The memories of these lovers will
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leave a deep footprint to them if they ever be apart. However, it would be waste if we forget
about the memories we had. It is important that one remember the sweet and romantic
moments we once had. We should learn to cherish the good memories and forget the bad
memories. With that, that is where the line 4 and 5 in stanza 1 comes in handy. The last stanza
is a Summoning a Spirit Spell. It simply means that the persona is summoning his lovers
spirit back to him in line 61 to 64 in stanza 9 (Hear these words, hear my cry /Spirit from
the other side / Come to me, I summon thee / Cross now the great divine). As I mentioned
before, the reason why I bold it is because it carries the entire meaning of the poem. If you
look at line 42 in stanza 6 ( I reached out to grasp you but was dissolved into foam) , you will
find that this line stands for the persona tries to get back on track with his lover but it is only
an illusion. Thus the last stanza could represent the hope or inner desire of the persona
towards his beloved. I also bold the stanzas because it is not my work and I copied it from the
TV series. Hence the quoting of the television shows name. It helps me to brainstorm my
ideas and thought into words. However , it doesnt affect the poem if it is bolded. The second
graphology deviation is the indentation of the poem. As you will notice, some of the stanzas
are at the left and some are at the right. This is purely aesthetics. I wanted to just show that it
is different stanzas and make it easier for the readers to read. It has nothing to do with
intentions and the meaning of the poem will remain the same if I place it all in the left.
You and Me is written with a lot of reference to figurative language. The first
phrase is applied to an object or action which is not literally applicable. Another definition of
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metaphor would be a thing regarded as a representative or symbolic of something else
especially something abstract. From the second stanza, it is clear that the metaphor in that
stanza is in line 7, This flying pair, travelling from north to south. In the literal
meaning,this phrase is referring to the wild geese that migrated from north pole to south pole
during the transition of winter season to spring season. Figuratively, it is trying to imply the
journey of a couple in understanding each other. Since the journey from north to south is a
very long journey and sometimes it will be tiring. Thus a couples of understanding each
other is similar to the journey, it takes a long period and at times it will be tiring. Another
metaphor I used is light of flame in stanza 2 line 11and line 14. The word flame is a
metaphor to the passion of a couple in love. I used the word flame due to the symbolic idea
of burning desire to passion. Another metaphor would be in stanza 6, line 42 (I reached out to
grasp you but was dissolved into foam), the phrase dissolved into foam is a metaphor for
the awakening (dissolved) from disillusion (foam). From that line, one would understand the
meaning of the metaphor by looking at the target domain which is I reached out to grasp
you and one would understand that it is trying to say the persona is trying to get hold of his
beloved. Thus when the source domain was dissolved into foam, it is easily understood that
it is an illusion because the word foam. Foam does not last long which is like bubble where
it will pop once touch or hold. Another metaphor would be in stanza 7, line 47 (Hear my cries
through the sky), the word cries is a metaphor to sadness and suffering. It is clear that when
one loses his love , the person will cry due to sadness and sufferings (mental torture). This
metaphor suits the theme of the poem which is seeking love. In stanza 8, line 59 (Finding
ourselves in midst of fire and ice) the phrase in midst of fire and ice is a metaphor to
dilemma. This could be interpreted when one could not decide, the situation is similar one is
asked to choose to stay in fire or ice. If one picked fire, he will be burnt to death and if one
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Another figure of speech I used is personification. Personification is a figure
where human qualities are given to animals, objects or ideas. In other words, it means the
3 line 18 This spell will surely catch. The verb catch is used with the subject spell and
we all know that spell is just a magical charm or incantation which is basically abstract and it
is impossible for it catch anytime. However the figurative meaning of the line is basically the
charm will help to get the personas beloved back if they really are meant for each other.
Another personification would be in stanza 5 line 36 My love shall not wither, this is a
personification because the verb wither is used on the subject My love. One may asked
how can love wither? The word wither is normally used plant to show that plant is losing
freshness due to natural circle. Thus, the line 36 is basically implying figuratively that the
personas love will not fade off due to natural effects or time. In stanza 6 line 40 , But fate
repeatedly jolts around, it is a personification because the verb jolts is used on fate.
Jolts literally mean push or shake something or someone abruptly and roughly. Fate is an
abstract word which means that it cant shake anyone literally. However, fate can jolt
someone figuratively when one is shocked by the news that was destined to happen.
more than one single meaning. Thus making the poem worth studying. Having figurative
language in poetry is to invoke the sense of imagination of readers. Learning to use figurative
language is an important step in developing a mature and rich writing style. From similes and
metaphors to hyperbole and personification, taking words beyond their literal meaning
through the use of figurative language is enjoyable for both the writer and the reader. In fact,
the ability to use figurative language successfully is one of the most effective tools in a
writers skill set. Creative writers use metaphor, analogy, symbols and more to stir the
reader's imagination and bring out the emotion and understanding that can't be expressed by
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the words' dictionary meaning alone. It is the best way to exaggerate and stretch the meaning
of words to get the most extreme meaning possible. The best part of using figurative language
is it does not have to make sense rationally or logically. Reader can easily get the point of the
2.3 Parallelism
same; or similar in their construction, sound, meaning or meter. Parallelism examples are
found in literary works as well as in ordinary conversations. This method adds balance and
rhythm to sentences giving ideas a smoother flow and thus can be persuasive because of the
While composing You and Me, I wanted to make it rhyme a lot to bring the
sound qualities and to show parallelism in poetry. Thus I looked up for the term whimsical,
1, line 1, let the object of objection become but a dream , there is assonance. Assonance
means the repetition of vowel sound. It is obvious that the sound of vowel e is so strong in
that line. Another phonological parallelism that I used is the rhyme at the end. This could be
seen in stanza 2 When I called for your name / You shall fell my flame. I end the sentences
with the same vowel e to invoke the sound quality and make it rhyme. Another example of
rhyme that I utilised is in stanza 3 line 17 and 18 If we shall be perfect match / this spell will
surely catch. Notice the last word? match and catch is eye rhyme where the groups of
words has no phonetic rhyme but a graphological parallelism. Another example would be in
stanza 3 line 21 and 22, the word trust and lust have the same end rhyme. There is also
stanza 4 , line 25 to 28 The me in your eyes / The me in your heart / The me who met you. I
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repeated the phrase The me The syntactic parallelism creates convincing tone to the
Parallelism is a very effective to break the use of repletion by laying out many
different ways of expressing the same thoughts or idea. It provides structure, order, and
balance in a poem and clarifying the argument or meaning. The reason I used parallelism is to
make the poem more memorable and more musical-inclined. Thus, it will not be bored when
it is read. By making it rhyme, readers will find it interesting to actually remember and
3.0 Conclusion
There are many more linguistic elements that I tried to utilise when composing
the poem. In fact, there many more elements in the poem that I, myself have not discover.
However, I am very sure that the linguistic elements aid the poem to be a greater piece of
literary work. By creating a piece of work with a lot of rhymes and figurative language makes
the work or poem worth studying. Reader could interpret the poet in different point of views
and concepts.
Task 2
distinguished into Literature and literature. As for Literature, the context for this is
basically the classical text such as Charles Dickens, William Shakespeare and many literary
canons. literature stands for text that are more popular such as fictions, fable and song
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lyrics. Many authors, critics and linguists have puzzled over what literature is. Numerous
creators, commentators and language specialists have considered what writing is. One more
extensive clarification of writing says that scholarly messages are items that reflect distinctive
parts of society. They are cultural documents which offer a deeper understanding of a country
or countries (Basnet & Mounfold 1993). Other linguists say that there is no inherent quality
to a literary text that makes a literary text, rather it is the interpretation that the reader gives to
the text (Eagleton 1983). This takes us back to the above definition as in literature is just
Literature texts are used widely in class in countries like in The United States and
The United Kingdom. The text can be studied in the original form and also the abridged form.
The use of literature is a rather popular technique to teach. The circle is consisted in reading,
writing, listening and speaking. As for language area, it is used to teach vocabulary, grammar
many challenges faced by the teachers and students. For example, the text selection. This is
major issue arise while using literature component in class. The text chosen must be
appropriate to the age of the students. In Malaysia, the texts chosen for secondary school had
been switched for the third time. This is due to the inappropriate message sent to students
reading them. The second issue faced by the teachers are the culture difficulty, the text chosen
are from worldwide and students find it hard to relate the motive of the write and themselves.
The common genres used by the schools and teachers for teaching is poetries, short stories,
Literature should be used if one wants to improve his/her English. This is because
literary works is consider as an valuable authentic material as it is not fashioned for specific
purpose of teaching a language (Collie & Slater:1997). The characteristics of literature is not
static especially the language used is one of the main reason why literature serves as good
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material to improve ones English. Literature presents different linguistics uses and the
conventions of written styles. For instances, narration. Animal Farm by George Orwell is a
modern narrative example that aims at explaining a writers political views. This is known as
the political satire where it uses animals on a farm to narrate the overthrow of the last the
Russian Tsar Nicholas II and the Communist Revolution of Russia before World War 2. This
The second way how language in literature helps one to improve his/her English is
through the language enrichment in a literary work. Literature provides the learners with a
wide range of individual lexical or syntactic items. One can affirm that a literary piece
through the vocabulary and language features. Students become familiar with many features
of the written language, reading a substantial and contextualized body of text. With that,
students are able to transfer knowledge and make generalization. Through literature, one
would learn about the syntax and discourse function of sentences, the various way to connect
ideas which will develop their composition skills. Through the richness and diversity of the
language, one would be more adventurous and productive with their own potentials. Studying
the language of the literary text would help to integrate the language more closely. One would
be more familiar with the grammatical, lexical or discoursal categories to make aesthetic
communicative and cultural competence in the real richness, naturalness of genuine texts.
Language in short stories is one of the methods used to improve ones English
especially in secondary school even in Malaysia. In Malaysia, the short stories used are The
Minfong Ho and Leaving by M.G Vassanji. These literature components are used due to the
language and it helps to improve the command of English. The reason short stories are a great
because it provides a great platform for writing. By using short stories, one could learn to
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make outline. They could identify the topic, main, and secondary idea of the story. Besides
that, the organization and layout of the outline, indentation, roman, numerals, numbers dan
letter helps students to visualize how ideas could be related to each other. Later on, students
are able to learn to summarize and paraphrase. Learning how to summarize and paraphrase is
one the ways to improve ones English language. Using short stories to enhance ones English
is a great way because students could express their own ideas to make the story more
interesting. They could also enhance their thinking ability but coming out with the theme of
the stories and if they good enough, they could even critique the story they could make the
current story more interesting by adding new characters and change the plot of the story.
Literature encourages the learner to reflect on their own personal experiences, feelings and
opinions. At the same time of learning English, they become more active, both intellectually
and emotionally. This method is also an excellent stimulus for group work
Another benefit of using the language in literature would be literature could expand
ones language awareness. One of the heated debates revolved around the teaching of
literature in class is the language in literature is pretty much different from the other forms of
discourse. This is simply because in literature , the language often breaks the common rules
of syntax, collocation and cohesion. With the use of literature , the learner would be more
sensitive or aware to some of the overall features of English. For example, Seamus Heaneys
around the smell. The learner would be aware of the personification used by the author. The
learner will know that the verb gargled is used to describe the movement of the bubbles.
One would understand how the language is played and will not take the meaning literally.
Thus making the learner more aware of the colourful use of English language
All in all, the roles of language in literature are significant. Many educators
including teachers realize the importance of the use of the literary work to the students
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because it has broadened the students viewpoint about cultures and world views beside
improve their grasp of the targeted language especially English. However, the teachers styles
as well as the text chosen also plays a undeniable role in arousing the interests of the learner.
With regard to the literary texts selected, it was found that the learner had their own choice of
texts. Simple language with simple issues in the texts and familiarity with the texts were their
first choice. Learning literature actually encourages students to read and in doing so they will
unconsciously improve their vocabulary which is great way to improve the grasp of English
language. The vast vocabulary helps them to write confidently and creatively. Furthermore,
general knowledge and the development of the intellect are involved in the learning of
literature. Students are able to put their thinking caps on. Unfortunately, many factors
contribute towards the successful implementation of the literature in ones learning of English
Language. An experimental study is suggested to be carried out to figure out the effectiveness
of the method currently used pertaining to the teaching of literature in the classroom.
Research could also be conducted on the effectiveness of the training and courses organized
by the education department or the curriculum centre in the effort to inculcate interest of one
to learn literature as part of English Language learning subject and how the interest affects
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