Two Films, One Dream

by Makenzie Failla

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Two Films, One Dream
GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

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Comment 1
You need to learn how to correctly integrate your sources in your text through in-text citations.

Comment 2
Delete the semi-colon and add a colon.

Comment 3
You need a colon here.

Comment 4
What inf ormation should the introduction provide f or the reader?

Comment 5
Your thesis is too vague.

Comment 6
Fragment

Verb T his verb may be incorrect. Proof read the sentence to make sure you have used the correct
f orm of the verb.

Comment 7
Wrong word

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Comment 8
All of this is nothing more than summary. You need to f ocus more on analyzing.

Comment 9
Improper character ref erences.

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Comment 10
Incorrect f ormat.

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word.

Comment 11
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Missing "?" Review the rules f or using punctuation marks.

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Article Error You may need to remove this article.

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Sp. T his word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proof read your work.

P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. You may want to revise it using the active
voice.

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P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. You may want to revise it using the active
voice.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Frag. T his sentence may be a f ragment or may have incorrect punctuation. Proof read the sentence
to be sure that it has correct punctuation and that it has an independent clause with a complete
subject and predicate.

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Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word.

Comment 12
Dev par.

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Missing "," Review the rules f or using punctuation marks.

Comment 13
T his par. needs to be developed.

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