Task 1

Based on the novel, describe a character who shows admirable character traits and
who has inspired you in any way. Support your answer with close reference to the
text.

Write in

In not less than 50 words

In continuous writing (not in note form)

Introduct Based on the novel that I have studied which is The Elephant man
ory written by Tim Vicary, there are many admirable characters in the
paragrap novel. The novel is about a disfigured man with a terrible disease who
h suffers humiliation and finds happiness later in life. A character that
shows admirable character traits and inspired me is Dr. Frederick
Treves.

Topic I admire Dr. Frederick Treves because he is an observant person.

Sentence
1
Example Firstly , he notices everything about the Elephant Man his appearance
A as well as physical condition.
Example Another example is when he sees that the cloth is placed over Merrick
B head because of the cold.
Example Furthermore, he is able to see the difference between the right and left
C hand and the way the Elephant Man walks.
Analysis 1 This shows / I believe that he possesses admirable character traits of
KBAT being an observant person and I wish I could be like him too so that I
could be aware of my surrounding.
Topic I also admire Dr. Frederick Treves because he is a curious person.
Sentence
2
Example Firstly , he stops to look at the picture of the Elephant Man in the shop
A window
Example Another example is when he is willing to pay more to see the Elephant
B Man immediately.
Example Besides that, he also wants to look at the Elephant Man more closely
C and he arranges to fetch him to the hospital.
Analysis 2 This shows / I believe that he possesses admirable character traits of
KBAT being a curious person and I wish I could be like him too so that I
could be sensitive to my environment.
Example Dr Frederick Treves is polite person.
A
Example One of the evidence is he speak courteously even though the
B shopkeeper and Elephant Man are rude to him.

Example Furthermore Dr. Frederick Treves is willing to Im sorry for not realising
C that the Elephant Man has a problem climbing into the cab
Closing Hence/therefore/in conclusion, Dr. Frederick shows admirable character
Paragrap traits and inspired me because he is observant and curious.
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