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Peer Feedback: Short Story Papers (Draft 1)

Pass this worksheet and your 1st draft to the left. Dont forget to put your name at the top.

Peer Name: ________________

1. Organization: Does this paper include: (Make a check mark in areas that are complete)

a narrative arc that is readily identifiable?

o Exposition
o Rising action
o Climax
o Falling action
o Resolution

Comments/Questions/Feedback:

Peer Name: ________________

2. Narrative Development: Does this paper include: (Make a check mark in areas that are complete)

Well development narration

o Setting
o Plot
o Character
o Conflict
o Theme
o Dialogue

Comments/Questions/Feedback:

Peer Name: ________________

 3. Detail and Clarity: Does this paper include: (Make a check mark in areas that are complete)

Point of view is clear (1st or 3rd)

Word choice establishes
o Tone
o Imagery
o Theme
Sensory language is used in order to show, rather than tell

Comments/Questions/Feedback:

Plan for Improvement: Based on the feedback provided by your peers, what do you plan on changing about
your paper? What will you require to make those changes effective? What questions do you still have?