Thursd Sub strand: Introduction (5 mins) Success Criteria Pull small focus Share

ay Expressing & Teacher asks students to share one event they I will be successful if I.. group onto the Students
Writin Developing Ideas wrote about in their year 3 reflections floor to work on share
g Elaborations: Pen license, Reconciliation, Christmas Use different topic preposition something
50 VCELA350 ornaments, school production and linking editing piece & from their
mins VCELA351 sentences activity checklist
Development (10 mins) Re-read sentences they feel
WALT: We are Whole class edit a piece of writing using to ensure they - Larissa they did
learning to edit VCOP make sense - Nkensahni really well
our grade 3 Included 3 areas of - Dante and
I have noticed an improvement in
reflections our reflective - Olivia something
ensuring we description of events in writing and a to improve
writing checklist
include a good number of students have been Conduct roving on
really well
sentence starter including their feelings conferences to
Include a
and linking We need to consider more creative discuss and
thoughtful heading
sentence sentence starters and linking sentences complete
Use technology
Sentence starters: discuss & write up reflective writing
responsibly checklist with
Reflecting on
students
Year 3, I was no longer a junior at St Peters
Thinking of Year 3 so many great memories
come rushing back to me

Linking sentences: discuss & write up

Overall year 3 was..
Year 3 was special to me because
I felt proud of all I accomplished in year 3
An unforgettable year
Really important that all text is written
in past tense
Add several headings to edited piece
(Entry into middle school, Goodbye
junior school)

What are 3 areas from our checklist you really

need to work on to improve writing when
editing?

Consolidation (30 mins)

Students silently read reflections and
 make small changes to their writing in
their notebooks
Share with a peer to read
Type reflections on chrome books using
Hapara workspace
Check in with class and have them
share an event/sentence they are proud
of

Extension
Students continue working on scrapbooks

Conclusion (5 mins)
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