Landeros Jennifer

English 101

Professor: Holly Batty

5/31/17

Literary Analysis Essay Reflection

My essay needs a lot of revising and fixing. First I need to find a third article, because I

only used two articles on my essay. I will find a reliable article that relates to my topic and use it

on my essay. I will go back to my essay and explain my quotes I used on the articles. I will

rewrite my third paragraph and add reliable sources. I will explain the quotes I used in my third

paragraph and describe how it relates to my topic. I noticed that I didn't make a counter argument

so will make a counter argument on my third paragraph. My conclusion is not strong enough; I

will revise it and restate my thesis. I am going to re read it and fix my punctuation and grammar

errors.