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Durnin - 20141733
Alex,
you
have
done
some
great
work
on
your
diary
entry.
You
have
constructed
a
diary
entry
that
is
contains
three
events
from
the
past,
highlights
your
characters
lifestyle
and
some
research.
Although,
I
think
with
a
bit
more
research
you
would
be
able
to
create
a
diary
entry
that
contains
events
that
show
more
understanding
and
knowledge
of
the
life
of
a
first
settler.
But,
I
do
like
the
way
you
have
related
to
your
settler,
their
family
and
what
they
have
to
do
in
order
to
survive
the
first
six
months
of
settlement.
Overall,
I
think
with
more
development
in
your
sequential
writing
skills,
spelling,
your
understanding
of
events
and
the
difference
between
the
past
and
present,
you
will
be
able
to
improve
your
Humanities
and
Social
Sciences
skills.
I
look
forward
to
seeing
your
growth
in
Humanities
and
Social
Sciences
in
the
near
future!
Best
wishes,
Miss
Durnin