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Understand that peoples evaluations of texts are influenced by their value systems, the
context and the purpose and mode of communication ACELA1565
Compare and evaluate a range of representations of individuals and groups in different
historical, social and cultural contexts ACELT1639
Compare and evaluate how voice as a literary device can be used in a range of different
types of texts such as poetry to evoke particular emotional responses ACELT1643
Evaluate the social, moral and ethical positions represented in texts ACELT1812
Analyse and evaluate how people, cultures, places, events, objects and concepts are
represented in texts, including media texts, through language, structural and/or visual
choices ACELY1749
Identify and analyse implicit or explicit values, beliefs and assumptions in texts and how
these are influenced by purposes and likely audiences ACELY1752
English Romantic poet Percy Bysshe Shelley in his manifesto In Defence of Poetry, described
poets as the unacknowledged legislators of the world. For Shelley there was an inextricable link
between poetry, political views and social action and he wanted to challenge the legislation of his
time through his poetry.
In this sequence the students explore the interplay between context, political views and social,
moral and ethical positions represented in contemporary Australian poet Bruce Dawes poem On
the Death of Ronald Ryan (published in Sometimes Gladness: Collected poems 19541978).
Ryan was the last person to die under capital punishment legislation in Australia.
Activity 2: The context for the poem On the Death of Ronald Ryan
Context literally means with text. This includes the social and historical context of a text as well
as the contexts for its reading, hearing and viewing: who interacts with it, where, when and why.
In this activity the students explore what was at stake in the writing of this poem by exploring its
context.
Preview the following websites that document social reactions at the time:
The State Library of Victorias information on Ronald Ryan. Highlight the navigation on
the right-hand side that loads newspaper articles and images from the day.
The video Last Man Hanged at the Australian Screen website.
Students should investigate:
the purpose of the websites
the origins of the information, including the authors
the viewpoint of the website creators in relation to the death of Ronald Ryan
the voices and views that are privileged and silenced on the site.
Source: English For The Australian Curriculum. (2013). Lesson sequence 2 - poets: the unacknowledged
legislators of the world. Retrieved from http://e4ac.edu.au/units/year-10/sequence02.html
102086 Designing Teaching & Learning 1H 2017
Assignment 2: APST and QT Analysis Template
Evaluate the lesson plan according to the following Australian Professional Standards for Teachers. Only
standards directly addressed in Designing Teaching & Learning that are relevant to this assignment have been
included. However, this does not mean the other standards are irrelevant to lesson planning and evaluation
more generally.
Evaluate the lesson plan according to the following NSW Quality Teaching model elements.
Evaluation score refer to NSW QTM Classroom Practice Guide for each element
Comments incl. evidence for evaluation score (2 sentences)
1 Intellectual quality
1.1 Deep knowledge
12345 Comments: Students can draw on resources from the internet to help build
knowledge while the lesson keeps a sustained focus on the key ideas. The lesson
provide scope for students to focus on developing deep knowledge on poetry,
political views and social action and provides an overall vision that links context,
political voice and poetry
1.2 Deep understanding
12345 Comments: Students can construct explanations and draw conclusions in relation
to the central ideas through the series of formative tasks. Students consolidate
their learning and apply their newly-learned knowledge in contemporary context
1.3 Problematic knowledge
12345 Comments: The lesson does not encourage students to assess information from
different sources and different points of view
1.4 Higher-order thinking
12345 Comments: The lesson assists students to analyse, question, apply and synthesise
the gathered information and create new understandings, words and poem
1.5 Metalanguage
12345 Comments: The lesson do not provide a glossary of potentially difficult terms to
promote understanding and correct pronunciation
1.6 Substantive communication
12345 Comments: Tasks require students to communicate their knowledge and
understanding only in written mode
Quality learning environment
2.1 Explicit quality criteria
12345 Comments: Activity 2 and 3 provides explicit criteria for a quality response
2.2 Engagement
12345 Comments: Activities have been developed to create some student enthusiasm
and interest in the topics around political voice
2.3 High expectations
12345 Comments: It is clear on from the outset that expectations are high due to the
challenging writing activity at the conclusion of the lesson
2.4 Social support
12345 Comments: There is no clear indication of providing any teacher support
although possible
2.5 Students self-regulation
12345 Comments: Lesson encourages student autonomy and develop initiative to
thoughtfully participate in critical and creative writing. There is a clear outline of
the student responsibility for each task
2.6 Student direction
12345 Comments: The last writing activity allows for element of choice that relate to
areas of interest and relevance to young people. However, they cannot control
over the time spent on each activity and neither can negotiate the criteria
3 Significance
3.1 Background knowledge
12345 Comments: Students have the opportunity to draw on their life experiences and
make links with previous knowledge when determining the selection of a
political issue to write a poem
3.2 Cultural knowledge
12345 Comments: Students recognise the cultural knowledge of the Anglo-Australians
but no other social groupings
3.3 Knowledge integration
12345 Comments: Students draw on knowledge gained in other subjects and KLA's
such as ICT and Modern History to effectively research and investigate
3.4 Inclusivity
12345 Comments: The activities do not take into account the diversity of young people's
backgrounds in the classroom and do not encourage use of cultural knowledge
3.5 Connectedness
12345 Comments: Activities are highly connected, offering students opportunities to
engage with and see the relevance of the learning experiences and to discuss the
current issues
3.6 Narrative
12345 Comments: Students explore a narrative account of Ronald Ryan and finally
construct a narrative of their own in a poetic form
Identify the two APST standards and two NSW QT model elements you are targeting for improvement.
APST
QT model
1) 1.6 Metalanguage
2) 3.4 Inclusivity
Modified Lesson Plan
Cross Curriculum themes & General Explicit subject specific concepts and skills
capabilities English Romantic poet Percy Bysshe Shelley in his manifesto In
Asia and Australia's Engagement with Asia - Defence of Poetry, described poets as the unacknowledged
Activity 2&4 legislators of the world. For Shelley there was an inextricable link
between poetry, political views and social action and he wanted to
ICT capabilities - Nearpod challenge the legislation of his time through his poetry.
Literacy - Activity 3&4 In this sequence the students explore the interplay between context,
Critical and Creative Thinking - Activity 3&4 political views and social, moral and ethical positions represented in
Personal and Social capability - Activity 3 contemporary Australian poet Bruce Dawes poem On the Death of
Ethical Understanding - Activity 2&3 Ronald Ryan (published in Sometimes Gladness: Collected poems
19541978). Ryan was the last person to die under capital
punishment legislation in Australia.
Time Teaching and learning actions Organisation Centred
T/S
Intro Activity 1: Read On the Death of Ronald Teacher: S
Ryan - Poll Prepare the students to use the smart
5-10 mins devices to access the Nearpod
- What ideas sound familiar in the poem? interactive lesson and provides the
- What pictures appear familiar in the high contrast print-outs of the poem
poem? with low vision
- What techniques are used in the poem? Reads the poem aloud with the
students
Ask the students to complete the
Nearpod poll and check for student
understanding as their individual
responses appear live on the screen
Provide general feedback and identify
struggling students
Student:
Read/listen to the poem and complete
Nearpod poll
Resources:
On the Death of Ronald Ryan poem
print-out
Nearpod live lesson pin : TOCKY
https://nearpod.com/student/
Resources:
Nearpod live lesson
Reflection
What have I learned about the teaching and learning process when preparing this lesson?
Preparing a lesson plan according to the requirements of the National Standards and
Quality Teaching Model was a new and rewarding experience for me. Analysing the original
lesson plan using the standards and teaching model made me to understand the value of
thoughtful preparation not in displaying teacher talents but teacher traits. Therefore, taking
the challenge of building a lesson that is assessable, accessible for students with disability,
uses metalanguage and inclusive was a pruning process for me as I had learn how students
learn and fix my focus on having the traits that meets the learning needs at every
component of the lesson.
I learned how to be a teacher that plans adjustments for students with learning difficulties
and disabilities using ICT that they may have equal access to participate and demonstrate
learning. Moreover, I understood ICT is a great tool to be a teacher that constantly assess
and keeps record of both classroom and student progress in order to make a reliable report
of the student achievements and critical reflection of my teaching practice. The use of
metalanguage assisted in becoming a teacher that helps students achieve sufficient literacy
proficiency to gain access to the lesson content by engaging the students in a language that
they can comprehend. Exploring the curriculum priority Asia and Australias engagement
with Asia in the lesson plan helped me to be a culturally responsive English teacher that
promotes inclusion of students of other backgrounds.
Overall, I understood I need to set aside sufficient time to prepare a good lesson that meets
the learning needs of all students and creates an environment that invites all students to
learn. Moreover, I greatly benefited from the experience of measuring the quality of my
lesson using the National Standards and Quality Teaching model.
Need to ensure there is adequate ventilation in the classroom when using laptops to eliminate
overheating of the machines.
Academic Justification
teachers to make numerous learning and participation decisions based on a students limited
cognitive abilities, affective abilities, and experiences, and environmental factors (Darling-
Hammond, & Bransford, 2012). The Australian Professional Standards for Teachers and
NSW Quality Teaching model achieve its primary purpose when teachers comprehend with
competence what it tells about learning and at what angle of view learning must be centred
All students have exclusive and distinctive abilities and skills (Coil, 2005).
Therefore, knowing the students and how they learn as stated in Standard 1 can help modify
and personalise the learning to improve student achievement. The original lesson plan
though comprehensive lacked in recognising Standard 1.6 that states to employ strategies to
support full participant of students with disability (AITSL, 2016). It is through each childs
cognitive structures that enables them to retain and comprehend their learning (Garner,
2007). Cognitive structures allow students to learn by establishing relevant links with prior
knowledge, discovering patterns and relationships and recognising rules and associating
concepts to real-life situations (Garner, 2007). Students develop cognitive structures through
two particular skills; reflective awareness and visualisation (Garner, 2007). However,
physical impairments, psychological disorders can prevent or slow down the development of
cognitive structures (Garner, 2007). Effective use of ICT can provide learning opportunities
in the classroom that activates the essential skills of reflective awareness and visualisation
(Adam & Tatnall, 2017). Nearpod Virtual Reality task will prompt the students to notice
what their senses are telling them in response to the 'People Say No' protest thus being
reflectively aware. The task also enable students to visualise the information about context
their teaching practice is, assessment (Earl, L, 2003). From the analysis of the research
findings, it is evident that there is a link between assessment practices and motivation of
student learning, hence it is crucial to use assessment practices in daily teaching (Wiliam, D,
2011). The original lesson plan lacked in enriching student learning and performance
through assessment feedback that is given explicitly, aptly and constructively (Wiliam,
2011). Standard 2.3 requires assessing strategies that will ensure the documentation of each
students achievement, progress and potential (AITSL, 2016). One of the strategies used for
which is utilised both in the beginning and during the lesson. The Nearpod diagnostic tools
will initially help to determine what students already know and where there are gaps and
misconceptions. Subsequently, students can then reflect and examine their own progress
from the feedback provided during successive informal assessment during the activities.
In response to the improvements made to the original lesson plan using the NSW
Quality Teaching Model, the aspects of the lesson's metalanguage and inclusivity were
addressed. Activating the students' existing knowledge about a lesson topic and engaging all
learners in critical thinking requires the necessary literacy support (Wilhelm, & Wilhelm,
specific learning difficulties like dyslexia can exhibit problems acquiring literacy skills
(Basil, & Reyes, 2003). Therefore, the original lesson plan lacked in using the metalanguage
to build the students' capacity of all learning levels to participate in the challenging literacy
the target language, offering guided practice with high success rates and supporting with
self-reflective feedback for further improvement (Schleppegrell, 2013). This was addressed
by employing the A Learning and Responding Matrix (ALARM) cognitive scaffold to
provide a meaning metalanguage to analyse and revisit the text and to construct a response
based on the writing criteria. Thus, each student can participate by experimenting a feature in
the prepared lesson and collect the sufficient knowledge and equally interact with other
and safe principles, students do not become resistant but rather inflexible contributors
(Carlson, Hemmings, Wurf, & Reupert, 2012). Reports display significant gap in student
classroom alienation, language barriers, racism, poor self perception of academic ability, and
prior learning failures are factors known to be affecting their active involvement (Wilhelm,
& Wilhelm, 2010). Quality Teaching model proposes to identify strategies to promote
inclusivity. This was addressed by adding the Context Clues activity based on the Hong
Kong 'People Say No' protest. This meet the cross-curriculum priority Asia and Australia
engagement with Asia which advocates the social and cultural forces to shape the students to
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Carlson, L., Hemmings, B., Wurf, G., & Reupert, A. (2012). The instructional strategies and
attitudes of effective inclusive teachers. Special Education Perspectives, 21(1), 720.
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Supervision and Curriculum Development.
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State Library of Victoria. (2017). Ergo research resources results: Ronald Ryan.
Retrieved from http://ergo.slv.vic.gov.au/explore-history/rebels-outlaws/city-
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Reaching All Learners through Inquiry. Middle School Journal, 41(5), 39-46.
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