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A Classical Approach to Writing Instruction: The Progymnasmata


by Jim Selby, The Whitefield Academy
Most teachers want to do a good only to be interested in something the progymnasmata.7 What follows
job teaching writing. Most would to learn. Consequently, it radically is a brief analysis of the pragmatic
also admit that they do not so gutted classical methodology, genius of Aphthonius vertically
much teach writing, but rather eliminating the six to seven years integrated progymnasmata. 8
they assess the end product. A of the progymnasmata, slashing The first two stages, fable
subjective and mysterious process,
some students seem to get writing Aphthonius Progymnasmata
while most do not, and we cannot
by conscious action seem to do
1. Fable 8. Invective
much about it. Writing teachers1 2. Narrative 9. Comparison
have learned to write through 3. Chreia 10. Characterization
experiencetrial and error
not by mastering a vertically
4. Maxim 11. Description
integrated, discrete set of skills and 5. Refutation/Confirmation 12. Thesis
sub-skills that make up the craft 6. Common topic 13. Proposal of Law
or art of writing. None of us were 7. Encomium
taught under classical composition
theory and its foundation, the the forty plus topics of invention and n a r r a ti v e, impart the
progymnasmata, which is to five modes of development,3 basic skills of inventing stories.
arguably the best curriculum and elevating the four types of Aristotle identified the enthymeme
that fully prepares students composition4 to ends in themselves, the substance of rhetorical
for tackling the art of rhetoric. subsuming arrangement and style persuasion.9 A general story or
This article will focus on the within these four purposes. The demonstration shares with the
pragmatic effectiveness of the sterile failure of modern theory enthymeme the fundamental
progymnasmata but I will take gave way to process theory in the substance of rhetorical
the liberty of digressing into 1970s. This pedagogy which has argumentthe innate ability
language theory, albeit in the dominated writing instruction in to engage the imagination by
broadest strokes, before launching our classrooms for the last thirty requiring the audience to infer in
into the heart of the theme. years notoriously defies logical order to create meaning. Aesops
Current writing curriculums analysis.5 Process theory abhors Fables do so with great effect.
derive from one of three theories categories of any kind, seeking Through explicit instruction,
of languageclassical, modern, or its essence in an authors voice multiple contexts, and deep
process theoryeach a product of and in the subjective encounter cognitive engagement students
a particular worldview. Classical of a reader with a text. Under learn the three components of
discourse theory argues that the tutelage of process theory plot: reversal, recognition, and
communication is an art that can only 22% of college bound high suffering (Aristotle, Poetics). They
be taught through the pedagogy school graduates who believe also learn the six categories of
of imitation and repetition 2 themselves equipped to write have narrative structure: agent, action,
explicit instruction, multiple been able to write a coherent and time, place, manner, and cause.
contexts, and deep cognitive cohesive essay upon demand.6 As In addition to these components
engagement. Modern composition classical Christian educators we and categories of plot that lay
theory affirms communication understand that worldview affects a foundation for the canon of
as art, but its progressive roots curriculum. This truth holds for invention, young writers learn
produce an abbreviated, ineffective writing curricula as well. We must the skill of creating stories by
pedagogy that abhors imitation give serious consideration to the mastering subskills. These
and repetition because of the belief only writing curriculum derived subskills include sequencing
that the child is perfect, needing from a classical view of language beginning a story at the end or
in the middle and retelling it
Jim Selby is the dean of students at the Whitefield Academy
coherently; point of viewretelling
in Kansas City, Missouri. He teaches rhetoric, Great Books,
the story from the perspective of
English literature and logic.

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A Classical Approach to Writing . . .


different agents; condensing of the curriculum, refutation figurative.12 This particular style
using as few words as possible and confirmation complete the is achieved through paraphrase
while maintaining coherence; and previous four stages and lay a and an abbreviated word count.
expanding though figures. These foundation for the most difficult Description is an expository
initial stages begin to train the task of writinginvention. 10 discourse which brings the object
mind to think compositionally, to Common topic follows exhibited vividly into view . . . one
generate ideas, through that most with a delightful experience for should adopt a free, relaxed style
effective of pedagogiesimitation junior high school students who and ornament it with different
and repetition. Students, gifted or seem to relish contradiction and figures, and in general hit off
not, practice and master a discrete conflict. The heads or categories the objects being described. 13
set of manageable subskills. of composition in this exercise This particular style is achieved
Teachers do not overwhelm introduce youngsters to the skill through a multitude of details,
and frustrate students by of arrangement. Students craft never dwelling upon an object but
assuming these critical subskills. effective introductions which moving quickly, and the use of as
The chreia and maxim stages include a thesis statement, and many figures as is necessary to
build directly upon skills acquired two arguments or heads of purpose reach an expanded word count.
in fable and narrative. Students supporting the thesis. Six heads or The thirteenth and fourteenth
develop or exposit a short, pithy categories follow, three narrative stages of exercises serve as a
statement or proverb through in form and three argumentative capstone to the six plus years our
eight heads of development. The in form. A concluding head uses students have been learning to
ability to invent four story all six heads of purpose mastered write with the progymnasmata.
types: general affirmative (cause), in refutation/confirmation. Thesis and law hone the reasoning
general negative (converse), Previous skills are reinforced and skills through the introduction of
general comparison (analogy), and varied through a specific focus counterpoints or qualification.
particular affirmative (example) or narrowing of thought around These stages provide the students
and to state the same idea in a new thesis each week. The with a plethora of opportunities
different words (paraphrase and students find this popular exercise to create arguments using the
testimony) are the foundational a creative, expansive experience. heads of purpose (invention) and
skills learned in these exercises. The next three stages of the to demonstrate these arguments
In addition, students learn an progymnasmataencomium, using the heads of development.
introduction that includes a invective, and comparisondeal With the completion of
rudimentary thesis statement with epideictic communication these final stages, next years
and several praise statements persuading as to what is or is rhetoric teacher will find a group
meant to lure the reader on as not. The introduction in these of skilled, competent writers
well as a brief epilogue. The stages, the most sophisticated yet, ready to tackle the canons of
ability to create a story through includes, as the previous exercise rhetoric. No other curriculum has
the use of the plot components did, a thesis and two arguments, as its purpose the preparation for
and structure lays a foundation but then it reaches back to the rhetoric. The before exercises or
in the mind for the full-blown skill chreia/maxim stages and uses progymnasmata equips students
of invention to be taught next. encomiums with the application with a basic ability to invent,
Refutation/confirmation of heighteners.11 Each head or arrange, and employ style which
teaches students to invent section serves to develop both rhetoric now takes to a height
arguments through using a the invention and arrangement we have not seen from our
limited number of six topics. As of arguments covering the adolescents since the eighteenth
juniors and seniors, our budding full scope of epideictic speech. century. The progymnasmata
writers will master thirty or forty The eleventh and twelfth originated in a classical worldview
topics in their formal rhetoric stages introduce the skills of and as classical Christian
classes but these progym stages style. The characterization educators we should give the
actually train the mind to use stage models for the students a curriculum serious consideration
these tools to generate arguments. style that is clear, concise, colorful, for adoption in our schools.
Though the most difficult stages unconstrained, not intricate or

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A Classical Approach Pro-gym-nas-what?


by Amy Kim, The Oaks: A Classical Christian Academy
to Writing . . .
NOTES When I first began teaching at and any examples I had were either
1. Whether learning through the Oaks Academy, I was not only clunky and formulaic or difficult
process theory or modern transitioning from twelve years to comprehend because of their
composition theory. at home with my children, but ancient language conventions.
also transitioning from teaching Over the next year, my
2. Quintilian, Institutio Oratoria,
in the public school system. colleagues and I spent a
Book II, Chapter 5, http://
Some parts of my newfound considerable amount of time
penelope.uchicago.edu/Thayer/E/
Roman/Texts/Quintilian/
job description were familiar rethinking our goals for writing
Institutio_Oratoria/home.html. to me: grammar and literature education at the Oaks as well
would be taught similarly to as the best means to accomplish
3. Comparison, contrast, cause and my previous experience. On the those goals. At what ages, we
effect, description, and explication.
other hand, when I was told that wondered, would the different
4. Narrative, descriptive, I would be teaching writing by steps of the progymnasmata be
expository, and argumentative. utilizing the progymnasmata, I most effective? At what grade
5. Donald M. Murray, Teach was at a loss. What exactly was should the process begin? How
Writing as a Process, Not progymnasmata?1 My department could we develop fluency with the
Product, in Cross-Talk in head gave me a list of the fourteen progymnasmata in our secondary
Comp Theory: A Reader, 2nd steps of the progymnasmata and scope and sequence? A watershed
ed., ed. Victor Villanueva their respective elements, which point came when we began
(Urbana, IL: National Council was somewhat helpful, but I still conferencing with Mrs. Cindy
of Teachers of English, 2003). struggled to understand these Marsch (Writing Assessment
6. The essay portion of the writing exercises. What did they Services, ACCS member since
ACT is optional. Only those look like in real life? Where could I 1997) and commissioned her to
students who think they can find examples of them? How could I help us adapt her progymnasmata
write spend another hour incorporate them into my teaching materials for use at the Oaks.
completing the essays. in a comprehensive fashion? Why As a result of this philosophical
7. I am aware of at least should writing be taught this and practical refining, the Oaks
one writing curriculum that way? I had no idea how to tackle writing curriculum now includes
extends the rhetorical canon this strange new approach. progymnasmata instruction in
of invention down into the What followed included hours grades three through ten, with
logic and grammar stages. spent on the internet, trying to find eleventh- and twelfth-graders
8. http://www.leeds.ac.uk/classics/ examples of the progymnasmata employing the progymnasmata as
resources/rhetoric/prog-aph.htm and examples of teaching materials. needed for rhetoric assignments.
I endeavored to incorporate into Formal writing instruction begins
9. Aristotle, The Rhetoric and
our literature study the steps of with third- to sixth-graders
the Poetics of Aristotle, trans.
Rhys Robers and Ingram the progymnasmata which I had focusing on fable and narrative.
Bywater (Columbus, OH: been assigned to teach my seventh In grades seven through ten,
McGraw-Hill, 1984), 2. and eighth graders. I began to we introduce the remaining
understand the place of the exercises along with outlining and
10. Cicero, Rhetorica Ad
progymnasmata in the Trivium traditional five-paragraph essay
Herennium, trans. Harry Caplan
as a tool for building skilled form. In each grade we review
(Cambridge, MA: Harvard
rhetoricians.2 And yet, I still found the previous progymnasmata
University Press, 1958), II.I.1
myself struggling to make writing exercises in order to help students
11. Aristotle, The Rhetoric, Rhys instructions with these forms become fluent with them. We have
Roberts (New York: Modern meaningful and effective. The also decided to teach some of the
Library / Random House: 1984),
exercises seemed difficult, if not progymnasmata out of order
62 (Book 1, ch. 9, 1368a.10ff).
impossible, to tie to the literature, to better coincide with other
12. Aphthonius, Progymnasmata,
trans. Malcolm Heath, http:// Amy Kim teaches 7th & 8th grade language arts at The Oaks:
www.leeds.ac.uk/classics/ A Classical Christian Academy in Spokane, WA. The Oaks is an
resources/rhetoric/prog-aph.htm ACCS-accredited school.
13. Ibid. SPRInG 2011
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