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Panel 1
We see beautiful landscapes in grece, the sun almost hidden by the blue see
Panel 2
Panel 3
The summer breeze blowing through someones hair (we see the persons
back, wearing a cream colored suit)
Panel 4
Panel 5
He is walking down the streets reaching a house, a very greek typical white
house.
Side notes: The person is with his back at us, very close to the camera, we only
see a bit of his shoulder and head, the wind is blowing his hair
Panel 6
Side notes: the same image as in Panel 5 but now the flowers are not
bloomed, and leaves are flying around the person
Panel 7
The season suddenly changes and the autumn leaves pat the strangers shoe
Side note: I love the angle but he wears Cheshire boots, crme trousers and in
front of him is (the bottom part of ) the house, blurred. Also he is not walking,
hes standing in front of the house.
Panel 8
Side note: The angle is great, tho we can see that he is holding a pair of keys
and in the other a leave gets stuck in a white tshirt.
Panel 9
He looks up, not smiling this time, his eyes sad and his lips held tight.
Side note: The first picture is the position he is in the scene and the last 2
pictures are examples of emotions you can use (hes not crying tho)
Panel 11
Panel 12
The inside of the room is bright, the garden door wide opened, the white
curtain dancing as the wind sings.
Side notes: This is what he sees when he stands at the the front door.
Panel 13
Side notes: The person is male (Louis), not smiling, looking down
Panel 14
. while his eyes follow the sound of the door that just opened
Side notes: the same position, and expression but he is now looking up front
he glass
Panel 15
Louis gets to take off his lips from the glass but a few drops end up on the
white shirt he is wearing.
Side notes: The angle is great, but he is not sipping anymore, the glass is
apart from his lips and a few drops fall
Panel 16
He reaches up to cover the stain on the shirt with his hand, starting to laugh
at the action.
Side notes: Great angle, but he is wearing a simple white shirt and his hand is
on the stain on the shirt, looking down, frowning.
Panels 17
The person who enters the room watches the whole scene
Side notes: Please add Louis at the side of the counter with his hand on his
shirt stained with wine and smiling embarrassed. He looks up then at the
person who entered the room
Panel 18
Louis is holding the wine glass and tries to wipe the wine from their chin
Side notes: Same action from Panel 17 but his hand is on his chin, still
smiling embarrassed, he puts the glass of wine on the counter, but he is
gradually erased from the scene
Panel 19
He moves to greet the person from the door as they leave the glass on the
kitchen counter, but it loses its balance and topples and the little wine that
was in the glass is leaking on the counter and on the floor.
Side notes: The same Images from Panel 17 and 18 but , the glass of wine is
now off balance (45 degrees), wine is dopping on the counter and on the way
on the floor. Louis left hand is in the air, smiles, looks like he is reaching the
person at the door
Panel 20
Louis back is at the camera. He is reaching the door; the image changes and
we see the kitchen empty and cold, the sun disappearing leaving only the
dirty wine glass at the edge of the counter (slighty moving?). Harry is
standing blurred in front of the front door.
[Chorus]
We're not who we used to be
Panel 21
The person at the door is holding the white tshirt tight, we can see the white
of his knuckles
Side notes: He is holding the shirt, we can see the wine stain
Panel 22
The door suddenly shuts with a loud bang, Harry gets startled, turning his
head to the sound
Side note: Harry is standind in the left side of the image, his head turned at
the door, frowning, his shoulders a bit up as he got startled
Panel 23
The sound of a laugh gets the person attention and turns his head back
looking inside the room where the summer sun is again invading it
We can see the siluette of two people in the garden holding each other,
looking happy
Side notes: Add the siluette of two people holding each other orlooking like
they are ready to kiss
Panel 25
We see the room again dark and cold, feet stumbling to take a step;
Side notes: He is not bearfoot, but the angle and the action are great to use.
Panel 26
the white shirt is dropped on the floor (at beat the shirt is dropped).
[Verse 2]
The fridge light washes this room white
Panel 27
He opens it but a voice calling catches his attention and turns his head to the
garden door
Side note: The picture is great but he is looking out, not in the fridge
Panel 29
Louis is standing next to the door that leads to the garden, the moon draws
waves of light over his face, We see him smiling,
Side notes: I like the shadow on the faces, but he is slightly smiling
(smirking), his eyebrows are drawn up, like making a suggestion
Panel 30
Panel 31
Harry is smiling too, closes the fridge door and goes to take one glass in his
hand
Side notes:
Imagine the Images from Panel 12 ,on a larger scale, because they both need
to be included in the scene, Harry moving to reach Louis, both smiling
Tongue-tied like we've never known
Panel 32
Side notes: Same image as in Panel 31, but Harry is closer to the door, but
alone, Louis body shape is almost invisible
Panel 33
He looks down
He frowns
Panel 36
Panel 37
H holds the person too, turns around but the room is dark and no one is
there
Side note: The same scene as Panel 11 but he is about to turn around, no one
is behind him
[Chorus]
We're not who we used to be
Panel 38
Side note: The same scene as Panel 11 but he is now facing the inside of the
house, hes alone, the room looks uninhabited.
We're not who we used to be
Panel 39
Side notes: The covered couch now is a dark blue with subtle white flower
print
We're just two ghosts standing in the place of you and me
Panel 40
Side notes: The frames above the fireplace are not missing anymore
Panel 41
Moving his eyes from the fireplace to the little table in front of the couch, we
see a birthday cake. one person placing the cake on the table, an other
behind a golden retriever, holding him, singing happy birthday, blowing the
candles
Side notes: The angle the picture was taken is great, add the description
above and the couch in the right side of the scene, instead of the chair
Panel 42
Theres a flash, the person who brought the cake took a polaroid picture of
the cake, the dog and H blowing the candles
Panel 43
Side notes: The same scene as in Panel 40, the action from Panel 41, but the
person who brought the cake now is holding a polaroid taking a picture
Panel 44
The dog gets confused about the picture getting out of the polaroid and
snatch it when is all out and runs to the bedroom
Side notes: The same scene as In Panel 41, but now the dog is reaching to
grab the picture getting out from the polaroid with his mouth, both people in
the scene have their mouths open and eyebrows up.
Panel 45
Side notes: The same scene as In Panel 41, they are shocked of what just
happened but not much, Harry is on the floor, the dog is holding the polaroid
picture in his mouth
Panel 46
Panel 47
Panel 48
Side notes: The same scene as at Panel 41 but they are getting up, running,
chasing eachother, with cake over their faces
[Chorus]
We're not who we used to be
Panel 49
They run up the stairs in the bedroom to find the dog and save the picture
We're not who we used to be
Panel 50
Side notes: Something like this, suggesting that he got up the 2nd floor alone.
Id use the 1st picture and adding him, looking up, confussed
Panel 51
Panel 52
Side notes: The second pictre is great, but instead is bright in the room and
there are two people kissing, blurred
Panel 53
Panel 54
As soon as hes up, the room is not bright, but darker and H looks angry
pacing the room (he doesnt wear a shirt)
Side notes: Both pictures can be used but Louis is in bed on an elbow and the
other hand in the air looking at Harry frustrated and Harry is up in front of
the camera, we can see him from the waist up, angry/upset.
Panel 55
Louis is trying to make him stop pacing and turns him around to face him
Side notes: The same scene like at Panel 52 but now Harry is with his back
the bed, pitching his nose, one arm on the waist, frowning and Louis is up,
behind him, reaching for Harrys arm to turn him around
Panel 56
Eyes full of tears, desperation written all over their faces, lips bitten, looking
at eachother, not saying a thing but saying millions.
[Outro]
Trying to remember how it feels to have a heartbeat
Panel 58
H rushes out of the room, grabs the first thing he sees on the floor, put it on,
takes his keys and opens the door
Side notes: Same scene as at Panel 52 but he is grabbing a white tshirt from
the floor, Louis is still standing there in the middle of the room, watching him
Panel 59
I'm just trying to remember how it feels to have a heartbeat
Panel 60
Side notes: I like both the angles the pictures have been taken. Harry is
trying to put the shirt on
Panel 61
He gets out of the house fast, hes stumbling over the stairs, the door slams.
Side notes: The same scene as in Panel 4, but we can see an other person on
the stair,running
Panel 62
Side notes: The same as in Panel 4/59, Harry1 with his back at the camera,
we see only his shoulders and head and Harry2 is bumping his shoulder with
Harry1, he is frowning
Panel 63
Panel 64
The autumn wind welcomes H (we have a full view of the house and H
standing with his legs parted in front of it, holding the white shirt and the
keys, looking up)