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RA Exploratory Draft
19/7/2017
Fire is a double-edged sword. It could bring warmth to people, and help people to survive.
However, it could also destroy peoples home and lives. In Parable of the Sower, written by
Octavia Butler, fire appeared for so many times. At different times, people used fire to reach
different goals. Some used fire to damage others lives and to vent their emotions, and some used
fire to get comfort and survive. Fire is a thing that has great power. It will show different power
when it is held in different peoples hands. Parable of the Sower is the story about how Lauren
got new hope after the fire destroyed her life. Fire played an essential role in this book. It
destroyed Laurens house and forced her to leave the only safe neighborhood. But after that, fire
People are setting more fires to cover crimes. (Ch 13). Crimes happened everywhere,
such as robbery, rape, murder. Criminals set fire to destroy the evidences and bodies. Not only
did the criminals set fire, but also the other people who lived in the bottom of the society. For
people, fire became a method for them to vent their emotions. They burn whomever they dislike.
They can do nothing to make their lives better, so they set fire to destroy others houses and lives
in order to make others felt frustrated, angry and hopeless as they did (Ch 13). People there only
thought about themselves. They didnt have power to change their lives, and they didnt want to
get that power by put efforts. However, they could do something to make others live even worse
than theirs. Setting fire was the only thing they can do to show that they could still do something
to satisfy themselves. Fire became the symbol of declining of moral. People were no longer
trying to make their lives better. They became selfish and regard others who had better lives than
them as enemies. When fire appeared, it showed that things were getting worse in the world. Fire
pushed more people into the deeper hell. More people became unfortunate, more fire would be
set to make more unfortunate. Only when people realized that make others miserable would
However, fire could still be a symbol of hope. When people became homeless, fire could
help them to survive. But people who have no homes will build fires. Even people like us who
know what fire can do will build them. They give comfort, hot food, and a false sense of security.
(Ch 16) Fire brought warmth to both peoples bodies and hearts. Hot food brought energy to
peoples bodies, which would allow them to be able to attack and defense. Fire could keep many
dangers away from people in the night. Staying with fire made people felt safe. At this time, fire
was no longer the weapon that took happiness away. Fire was the crucial thing that would help
people to survive. Fire allowed people to defense cold and beasts in the night, and it allowed
people to recognize the direction in the night as well. Although people might be hurt by fire, they
still could not refuse the benefit that fire brought to them. If there was no fire, people could not
even spend the first night outside the neighborhood. For people who lost their home, fire was the
symbol of hope. With the help of fire, they would have chance to leave the nightmare and look of
better lives.
Fire could take happiness away, but it could also bring hope to people. Fire was the hand
that push Lauren to the hell, but also the hand that pull her from the hell. When fire was used by
Questions:
1. Did I claim my thesis statement clearly? Or did I choose a wrong direction to analysis?
2. How can I use secondary materials to support my essay? I didnt find the place that