"Education is the manifestation of the perfection already in man"-by Swami Vivekananda

The given statement has a feel of noble sense and I agree that with the author's point of view Commented [SP1]: RESTATE THE THESIS

that government should offer a free university education to students who are eligible but who can't

afford because of the following reasons. Commented [SP2]: PROVIDE AN OUTLINE OF THE RESONS.. I
HAVE TOLD THIS BEFORE ALSO

First of all children living in rural areas find it difficult to study because of the facilities provided and also
the surroundings they grow.If these facility is not provided by the government then the country would
loose a valuable asset.Because of their economic situation they prefer to go to odd and unconventional
jobs which would eventually deteriorate a successful career.Consider a real life example.My dad was
born in a poor family.His father expired when my dad was studying 3rd class . Despite of the troubles he
stood up in life by overcoming those hurdles with the scholarships he got from the government as he
was the district topper.So today, I feel great that my position is better than him because of all those
happenings.so ultimately it gives a better life style for the future generations who would actually
continue to strive hard by taking inspiration.

Additionally foreign companies invest in our country as per their requirement of natural resources

and human resources.So if government encourages this then we can have more companies to open
their brances and hire young people who are profound in the skills which they require.Consider multi

national companies like Google,Ge which are the pioneers in the corporate world.The company's grow
based on the people they recruit.So these top multi national companies obviously aspire for erudite
people which the government can provide if the required students are granted the money.

Also it will encourage the people who cannot afford to study well and get good scholarship which can
fund their higher studies.Consider the NTSE(National Talent Search Exam) which provides scholarships
to students who satify the constraints bound which is in an initiative of the Indian government.It is
mainly beneficial to those who can't afford it.The exam is applicable to those children whose parental
income is lessthan one lakh rupees per annum.

In order to conclude , I would strongly recommend that it would actually be very beneficial for students

while government is providing offer a free university education for those who cannot afford, it would

ultimately lead to the rise of literacy rate of the nation and our country fosters well in development. Commented [SP3]: DEVIATED AWAY FROM THE IDEA TOTALLY.
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Heres the sample Issue essay topic again:
We can learn more from conflicts than we can from agreements.
Use the info in brackets as a reminder of what your own Issue essay needs to include.

Although agreements have value, the juxtaposition of different ideas in a conflict

inevitably leads to more significant progress and evolution. [THESIS] What scientific
progress would we have, for example, if it werent for intellectual debate? None
intellectual debate leads to scientific progress. [EXAMPLE 1] The reformation of
outdated political ideas and concepts is also marked by struggle. [EXAMPLE 2] Finally, in
the words of Friedrich Nietzsche, What doesnt kill us makes us stronger. This
quotation captures the sentiment that personal growth arises from conflict. [EXAMPLE
3]
First, historically, scientific progress has been inspired by conflicts of ideas. [TOPIC
SENTENCE FOR EXAMPLE 1] In the sixteenth century, for example, a great debate arose
because Copernicus vehemently challenged the notion that the earth is the center of the
solar system. Although he paid a price both socially and politically for this
remonstration, Copernicus disabused a long-held belief, much to the chagrin of the
Catholic Church and other astronomers of his day. Because of this conflict, humankind
eventually gained a new understanding of astronomy. [THREE SENTENCES THAT DEVELOP
& SUPPORT EXAMPLE 1]
Second, sociohistorical evolution rarely comes about without turmoil and unrest. [TOPIC
SENTENCE FOR EXAMPLE 2] For example, prior to the 1860s in the United States, it was
legally acceptable to enslave other human beings and to view them as property with
few rights. This view led several states to secede from the Union, which, in turn, led to
the Civil War, a violent conflict that threatened to destroy the nation. After the war,
though, slavery was abolished, and the Fourteenth Amendment to the Constitution
essentially made discrimination on the basis of race illegal. As a result, the United States
grew stronger as a nation. To advance takes constant questioning of the status quo.
[FIVE SENTENCES THAT DEVELOP & SUPPORT EXAMPLE 2]
Third, conflict can lead to personal growth. [TOPIC SENTENCE FOR EXAMPLE 3] Adversity
helps make us stronger. People who have not known some type of conflict or difficulty
tend to be immature and spoiled. Americans so believe this sentiment about adversity
that they have institutionalized it as an oft-repeated saying: If at first you dont succeed,
try, try again. This saying emphasizes the way overcoming diff iculty helps us grow as
individuals: Each time we fail, we must pick ourselves up and try again. We shouldnt
expect life to be easy. Sometimes the value of struggle is in the struggle, meaning that
such conflicts, whether internal or external, give us perspective and insight. [SIX
SENTENCES THAT DEVELOP & SUPPORT EXAMPLE 3]
Clearly, conflict has been responsible for several upward surges of humankind in diverse
respects. In the areas of science, history, and individual character, progress requires
struggle. [RECAPS THESIS] Rather than avoiding conflict at all costs, we should accept
conflict as a necessaryand beneficialpart of the human condition, whether the
conflicts arise among scholars or states. [EXPANDS THE POSITION] Conflict permits true
transformation and growth.