Personal Narrative Title:________A Friend in the World: a Pratice of
Servitude________________________
Draft One
Date:______9/19/17___
What is your passion? My passion began probably
began a month or two ago. But, to me, it has felt like
ten years ago. I was coming home from work one
day like usual. But for some strange reason there
were two two questions that wouldnt let me go.
Who am I? and What have I done to make a
difference? I couldnt find real answers in my heart,
so I went to the only person I knew that had
answers: my dad.
That decision started a new chapter of my life. My
dad told me to start thinking about biblical servitude
(sacrifical servitude). That evening I gave my life to
being a servant. I have ,since then, worked to
encourage teachers, stood up for the bullied, and
have generally been an encouragement for anyone
who needed it.
This work hasnt always been a walk in the park.
But as I see the the smiles of teachers and the
bullied, I know this this is making a difference. I
believe in this service and i will continue to do it till
the Lord calls me home.
Draft Two
Date:_________
1.simile
2.repetition
3.adjective
4.explanation
What is your passion? My passion began probably
began a month or two ago. But, to me, it has felt like
ten years ago. I was coming home from work one
day like usual. But for some strange reason, there
were two two questions that wouldnt let me go
(Like a fish trapped in a net).Who am I? and
What have I done to make a difference? I couldnt
find real answers in my heart, so I went to the only
person I knew that had answers: my dad (who is
also my pastor).
That decision started a new chapter of my life. My
dad told me to start thinking about biblical servitude
(sacrifical servitude-which is the very thing i am
so passionate about) That evening I gave my life
to being a servant. I have ,since then, worked to
encourage teachers, stood up for the bullied, and
have generally been an encouragement for anyone
who needed it.
This work hasnt always been a walk in the
park.many times I felt degraded because it felt
like the weight of the world was on my
shoulders. But as I see the the smiles of teachers
and the bullied, I know this this is making a
difference. I believe in this service and will contiue
in this service(because I believe this is a service
that God has blessed and because i enjoy this
work with all my heart) till the Lord calls me home.
 Personal Narrative Title:________A Friend in the World: a Pratice of
Servitude________________________
1.simile
2.repetition
3.adjective
4.explanation
What is your passion? My passion began probably
began a month or two ago. But, to me, it has felt like
ten years ago. I was coming home from work one
day like usual. But for some strange reason, there
were two two questions that wouldnt let me go
(Like a fish trapped in a net).Who am I? and
What have I done to make a difference? I couldnt (Like a fish trapped in a net).Who am I? and
find real answers in my heart, so I went to the only
person I knew that had answers: my dad (who is
also my pastor).
That decision started a new chapter of my life. My
dad told me to start thinking about biblical servitude
(sacrifical servitude-which is the very thing i am
so passionate about) That evening I gave my life
to being a servant. I have ,since then, worked to
encourage teachers, stood up for the bullied, and
have generally been an encouragement for anyone
who needed it.
This work hasnt always been a walk in the
park.many times I felt degraded because it felt
like the weight of the world was on my
shoulders. But as I see the the smiles of teachers
and the bullied, I know this this is making a
difference. I believe in this service and will contiue
in this service(because I believe this is a service
that God has blessed and because i enjoy this
work with all my heart) till the Lord calls me home.
1.simile
2.repetition
3.adjective
4.explanation
What is your passion? My passion began probably
began a month or two ago. But, to me, it has felt like
ten years ago. I was coming home from work one
day like usual. But for some strange reason, there
were two two questions that wouldnt let me go
What have I done to make a difference? I couldnt
find real answers in my heart, so I went to the only
person I knew that had answers: my dad (who is
also my pastor).
That decision started a new chapter of my life. My
dad told me to start thinking about biblical servitude
(sacrifical servitude-which is the very thing i am
so passionate about) That evening I gave my life
to being a servant. I have ,since then, worked to
encourage teachers, stood up for the bullied, and
have generally been an encouragement for anyone
who needed it.
This work hasnt always been a walk in the
park.many times I felt degraded because it felt
like the weight of the world was on my
shoulders. But as I see the the smiles of teachers
and the bullied, I know this this is making a
difference. I believe in this service and will contiue
in this service(because I believe this is a service
that God has blessed and because i enjoy this
work with all my heart) till the Lord calls me home.
Personal Narrative Title:________A Friend in the World: a Pratice of
Servitude________________________

Draft Three Draft Four - FINAL DRAFT (summative grade)

Date:_________ Date:_________
 Personal Narrative Title:________A Friend in the World: a Pratice of
Servitude________________________

A Friend In The World: A Practice Of Servitude

What is your passion? My passion began probably began a month or two ago. But, to me, it has felt like ten
years ago. I was coming home from work one day like usual. But for some strange reason, there were two
two questions that wouldnt let me go (Like a fish trapped in a net).Who am I? and What have I done to
make a difference? I couldnt find real answers in my heart, so I went to the only person I knew that had
answers: my dad (who is also my pastor).

That decision started a new chapter of my life. My dad told me to start thinking about biblical servitude
(sacrifical servitude-which is the very thing i am so passionate about) That evening I gave my life to being a
servant. I have ,since then, worked to encourage teachers, stood up for the bullied, and have generally been
an encouragement for anyone who needed it.

This work hasnt always been a walk in the park.many times I felt degraded because it felt like the weight of
the world was on my shoulders. But as I see the the smiles of teachers and the bullied, I know this this is
making a difference. I believe in this service and will continue in this service(because I believe this is a
service that God has blessed and because i enjoy this work with all my heart) till the Lord calls me home.