Teachersman

5 Longman Academic
Writing Series
ESSAYS TO RESEARCH PAPERS
Teachers Manual
Alan Meyers
with contributions from Lindsey Rothschild
Educational Technology Consultant
Longman Academic Writing Series 5: Essays to Research Papers
Teachers Manual
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CONTENTS
Introduction ....................................................................................... iv
General Teaching Notes ...................................................................... 1
Chapter Teaching Notes...................................................................... 9

Chapter 1 Notes ............................................................................................... 10
Chapter 2 Notes ............................................................................................... 13
Chapter 3 Notes ............................................................................................... 16
Chapter 4 Notes ............................................................................................... 19
Chapter 5 Notes ............................................................................................... 22
Chapter 6 Notes ............................................................................................... 25
Chapter 7 Notes ............................................................................................... 28
Chapter 8 Notes ............................................................................................... 31
Chapter 9 Notes ............................................................................................... 34
Writing Assignment Scoring Rubrics ............................................... 38
Chapter Quizzes ................................................................................ 48
Chapter Quiz Answer Key ................................................................ 65
Student Book Answer Key ............................................................... 69
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Longman Academic Writing Series 5, Teachers Manual Contents iii

INTRODUCTION
Welcome to Level 5 in the Longman Academic Writing Series, a five-level series that prepares
English language learners for academic coursework. This book is intended for advanced students
in university, college, or secondary school programs who need to write longer essays and research
papers. It offers a carefully structured approach that focuses on writing as a process. It teaches
rhetoric and sentence structure in a straightforward manner, using a step-by-step approach,
high-interest models, and varied practice types. It also addresses the writing, research, and
documentation of papers in different academic areas. Each chapter explores a different rhetorical
genreclassification, process, cause / effect, definition, summary / response, argumentation, and
the research paperas it applies to academic writing across the curriculum.
As in the other titles in this series, this book integrates instruction in organization and sentence
structure with the writing process. It carefully guides students through the steps of the writing
process to produce the well-organized, clearly developed essays and term papers that are essential
to academic writing in English. You will find a wealth of realistic models to guide writers and
clear explanations supported by examples that will help your students through typical rough
spots. These explanations are followed by the extensive practice that learners need to assimilate
writing skills and write with accuracy and confidence. Interactive tasks, including pair work,
group work, and full-class discussions, engage students in the learning process and complement
the solitary work that writers must do. The tasks progress from recognition exercises to controlled
production, and culminate in the chapter Writing Assignments. The extensive appendices and a
thorough index make the text a valuable and easy-to-use reference tool.
Features
Instructors will find these essential features to enable students to move through the course with
confidence:
Theme-based chapters focus on a particular academic area and rhetorical genre.
Chapter objectives provide clear goals for instruction.
Realistic writing models with academic content present the type of writing students will learn
to produce in the end-of-chapter Writing Assignments.
Two vocabulary sections, Noticing Vocabulary and Applying Vocabulary, highlight useful
words and phrases from the writing models and allow students to practice the new vocabulary
and use it in their writing assignments.
Organization sections explore the structure of papers in a variety of organizational patterns.
Sections on Grammar and Sentence Structure provide practice with the structures that pose
the most difficulties for advanced students.
A Preparation for Writing section reinforces learning and develops the research and
documentation skills needed for the writing assignment.
Step-by-step Writing Assignments make the writing process clear and easy to follow.
Timed Writing practice develops students writing fluency.

Writing Guides for each rhetorical genre give students the tools they need to improve the flow
of ideas in their papers.
Citation guidelines on MLA and APA formats provide students with the documentation skills
needed to write papers for a variety of academic fields.
Longman Academic Writing Series 5, Teachers Manual Introduction iv

The Teachers Manual
This Teachers Manual includes information and suggestions to help you teach this course.
Itincludes these features:
General Teaching Notes explain how to use the Student Book effectively.
Chapter Teaching Notes provide step-by-step instructions on how to teach each section, as
well as variations and expansions for the practice activities.
Writing Assignment Scoring Rubrics facilitate fair and easy grading. They can be
photocopied and used for all students in the class.
Chapter Quizzes assess students writing and editing skills. They can be photocopied and used
for all students in the class. An answer key for the quizzes is also provided.
The Student Book Answer Key provides answers for all Student Book practice activities.
Longman Academic Writing Series 5, Teachers Manual Introduction v

GENERAL
TEACHING NOTES
1
GENERAL TEACHING NOTES
These notes describe the chapter organization in the Student Book and provide general
suggestions on how to approach each section. They also include information about the Writing
Assignment Scoring Rubrics and Chapter Quizzes in this manual, as well as suggestions on how
to integrate technology, a brief description of MyCompLab (www.mycomplab.com for additional
writing skill practice, composition practice, and assessments), and procedures for teachers
interested in having students keep portfolios of their work. Step-by-step teaching suggestions for
the Student Book are in the Chapter Teaching Notes that follow.
Student Book
The book contains nine chapters, each one organized as follows.
Chapter Opener
This page includes the chapter title, a photo, and a list of objectives. The chapter title and photo
provide an opportunity for students to express ideas about the chapter theme, exercise their
imaginations, and share their experiences. The photo is thematically related to the writing model
in the next section. The objectives preview the chapter writing skills and provide a roadmap for
teachers and students. You may want to spend 10 to 15 minutes on this page.
Introduction
The introduction includes a brief presentation of the elements of academic writing or the genre
that is the focus of the chapter. This section has the following additional components.
Writing Model
Each chapter presents one or two writing models. These provide appropriate models for the
chapters writing assignment. The models are followed by questions that help students notice the
important structure (including, for example, questions on thesis statements and topic sentences,
types of supporting information, the role of individual paragraphs, and transitional devices),
content (with comprehension, inference, and opinion questions), and language displayed in
the models. You may want to add your own questions and have students analyze the writing
modelsfurther.
!Noticing Vocabulary
This section highlights, explains, and provides practice with useful words and phrases from the
models. Types of vocabulary include negative prefixes with adjectives, collocations, irregular
plurals from Latin and Greek, phrasal verbs, synonyms, adverbial intensifiers, and antonyms.
Skill-Building: Organization
The organization section highlights increasingly more complicated rhetorical modes

(classification, process essay, cause / effect analysis, definition, problem / solution, summary/
response, and argument), culminating with the research paper. Each organization mode is
graphically represented and refers back to the models. Included are lists of key transitional words
and expressions, as well as a reference to the fill-in-the-blank guides found in Appendix A,
pages189194.
Longman Academic Writing Series 5, Teachers Manual General Teaching Notes 2

Skill Building: Grammar or Sentence Structure
The grammar and sentence structure sections focus on sentence structure, grammar, mechanics,
or a combination of these skills. Brief explanations and clear charts help students understand
and apply these skills. Carefully sequenced practice activities reinforce this information in a
controlled way, and Try It Out! activities provide opportunities to apply the skills in a more
creative way. A complete Answer Key for all practice activities is on pages 6980 of this manual.
Practice Activities for Organization and Sentence Structure

Practice activities in both the organization and the grammar and sentence structure sections
reinforce information that is presented. Activities progress from controlled to productive. Try It
Out! activities challenge students to apply what they have learned.
Going Over Explanations in the Skill-Building Sections: Options

1. Read the material aloud as students look at their books. Pause to restate or stress key
points, add examples, and/or ask questions to check comprehension.
2. Have students read the material first, either for homework or in class. Then call on students
to read the material aloud.
3. Have students close their books. Use a projector to display the page to the class so that all
eyes are on the same part of the text. Read the material aloud or have students do so.
Practice and Try It Out! Activities: Options

1. Have students complete activities alone to develop independent thinking.
2. Ask students to complete tasks with partners or in small groups to increase interaction and
promote communication and collaboration skills.
3. Have students complete tasks at home if tasks are time consuming and/or class time is
limited.
4. As students are working on the activities, walk around the classroom. Observe what
students are doing and offer help as needed.
Going Over Answers to Practice and Try It Out! Activities: Options

1. Go over the answers orally (e.g., call on individual students or read the answers aloud)
when a task has students choose from among options shown in the book. For activities
with a large amount of text (e.g., an entire paragraph), have students number the lines in
the paragraph so that they can easily discuss their answers.
2. Have a student or students write answers on the board and then go over the answers. Give
writers the chance to correct their own errors before eliciting corrections from the class.
Alternatively, select students to read and correct items on the board. In this way, more
students can be involved in the correction process.
3. Have students compare answers with a partner or members of a group and discuss any
questions or disagreements.
4. Have pairs or groups of students who worked together compare answers with another pair
or group.
5. Have students exchange books with a partner and check each others answers.
6. Display a practice exercise from the book using, for example, a document camera and
projector or an interactive whiteboard. Have the class tell you or a student how to complete
or correct the sentences.
7. Display the answers on a shared website. Have students check their work at home.
8. Collect students written work or view their online postings. Correct their work outside of
class.

Preparation for Writing
This section provides instruction and practice in skills that prepare students for each writing
assignment. Each chapter introduces skills that systematically prepare students to write the
research paper. They begin with prewriting practices and then continue through note taking,
formulating a thesis statement, supporting claims, summarizing, quoting, paraphrasing,
responding to counterarguments, conducting research with print material and Internet material,
documenting source material, synthesizing sources, and making citations.
!Applying Vocabulary
This section provides further instruction on and practice with the words and phrases from the
Noticing Vocabulary section. It prepares students to use the new terms in the writing assignment.
Writing Process and Writing Assignments

Each chapter in the book concludes with a writing assignment related to the chapter genre. The
writing process as presented in this book has seven steps, which are explained and illustrated
in Chapter 1 on pages 1218 of the Student Book. Each writing assignment clearly and
systematically leads students through the following steps, helping them internalize the process.
Read through the steps and decide which parts of the assignment you will have students do in
class and at home.
Step 1: Explore your topic, audience, and purpose. Students choose a topic that they know
and care about, selecting and narrowing it as necessary. In the process, they think about
addressing their audience based on what the audience knows and what the writer must tell
them. They also think about the purpose of their essaywhether their goal is to inform, to
persuade, or to entertain (or perhaps all three).
Step 2: Prewrite to get ideas. Students work (sometimes with a partner) in various ways. They
brainstorm, interview each other, and use other strategies to generate and organize ideas. These
interactions help explore and clarify ideas. They also raise student awareness of an audiences
needs.
Step 3: Organize your ideas. Students organize the ideas they have gathered in steps 1 and
2 by using strategies such as writing a preliminary thesis statement, outlining, choosing an
organizational structure, and selecting text to paraphrase or quote from other sources.
Step 4: Write the first draft. Students base the draft on their prewriting notes and organized
ideas, and they refer to the models in the Introduction. This step can be done in class or for
homework. In-class writing allows you to assist and observe students in a given length of time.
Homework assignments save class time, which can then be used to provide individual help for
students who need it.
Step 5: Revise the draft. Students work with a partner to do peer review. Reviewing
a partners paper will improve students revision skills and help students learn to give
constructive feedback in a collaborative way. Getting feedback from a partner will also help
students improve their writing. A Peer Review Worksheet for each assignment guides the
reviewers through the process. Students who write first drafts on a computer will need to bring
printouts to class for peer review. After peer review, students mark up their own papers with
changes to be made.
Step 6: Edit and proofread. Students use the Writers Self-Check for each chapter to review
their own papers and make additional changes. Students can do this step and Step 7 at home.
Step 7: Write a new draft. If possible, students should be given at least one day between
Step3 and Step 4 so they have time to see their writing differently then can revise and edit
more effectively. Students write a new (final) draft to turn in to you.

Collecting and Evaluating Writing Assignments: Options
1. Have students hand in or email their work to you. Another option is to have students
upload their assignments to a blog or a class website.
2. You may also want to collect students prewriting, marked-up first drafts, and writers self-
checks to understand their thinking and assess their progress.
3. For suggestions on how to evaluate student work and give feedback, see the Writing
Assignment Scoring Rubrics on pages 3847 of this manual. See page 7 of this manual
for more information about the rubrics. For correction symbols, see Appendix H on
pages221223 of the Student Book.
4. You may want to give students feedback before they submit their final drafts. For example,
some instructors do not give letter grades while providing students guidance and direction
on their second drafts. You can base this guidance on criteria from the Writing Assignment
Scoring Rubrics and by pointing out three or four points for individual improvement.
Organizing and Storing Assignments: Options

1. Have students keep their handwritten writing assignments, or printouts of paragraphs, in a
folder (portfolio) that they use for that purpose only.
2. Have students who work on computers set up a system of folders to store their drafts for
each Writing Assignment. Give them guidelines for naming their files and for renaming
them when they write a new draft.
Portfolio Assessment
Some teachers use student portfolios to assess students assignments over the course. A portfolio
is a paper or electronic folder that includes these parts: (1) two to four samples of final drafts
of student assignments along with the earlier drafts, and (2) an introduction in which students
explain what they have learned throughout the term. Advantages of portfolio assessment are:
It encourages students to note and appreciate their progress through the course.
It encourages students to determine their strengths and weaknesses as writers.
It involves students in the evaluation process.
Depending on the teachers approach, portfolio assessment may count as 30 to 50 percent of the
final grade.
Suggested Procedure
1. At the beginning of the course, explain the process and grading system to students. Tell
them to keep copies of final assignments in a paper or electronic folder.
2. At the end of the course, have students review their assignments and select the ones they
want to revise for inclusion in the portfolio. (You may stipulate which assignments they
may choose from.)
3. Have students prepare the introduction to the portfolio. The following questions should
help them assess their learning:
How have your writing practices changed?
How has your writing improved?
What are your strengths as a writer?
What are your weaknesses?

How do the papers you have included demonstrate your progress and strengths?
4. Provide a grade for students assignments and self-assessment.
5. Discuss the grades and self-evaluations with students if needed.

Self-Assessment
All chapters include self-assessment checklists. These give students the chance to review the
chapter objectives and reflect on what they have learned in the chapter. Students decide which
skills they can do well and which they need to practice more. You can go over this list with the
class to get a general sense of how students assess their progress. You can also have students
give you their self-evaluations. This feedback will help inform you of what kind of review or
additional practice your students need.
Options
1. On note cards, have students write what they can do well and what they need to practice
more. Then collect the note cards.
2. Have students email you about what they understand well and what they need to practice
more.
3. If your students keep journals, have them write about their progress and/or doubts about
the chapter.
4. Use the information from the self-assessments as the basis for one-on-one conferences
with students.
Expansions
This section includes two activities to help students further develop their writing ability. The first
is a timed writing; the second differs in each chapter.
Timed Writing
Timed writing tasks prepare students for situations in which they need to organize their ideas and
write quickly, such as essay questions on examinations. The Timed Writing prompt relates to the
chapter theme and essay structure. Feel free to replace the suggested prompts with topics that suit
your particular class.
Additional Writing
In this section, students have an opportunity to expand on the chapter theme and practice an
expanded list of academic writing skills, including completing a personal essay, writing a
scientific process essay, writing a definition, taking the opposite position, and researching and
responding.
Appendices
The appendices provide (1) valuable fill-in-the-blank writing guides to improve the flow of
ideas in different types of essays, (2) a list of connecting words and transition signals, (3) a list
of rules and exceptions for correct article usage, (4) a list of common phrasal verbs, (5) a list of
commonly confused words, (6) a list of commonly misspelled words, (7) MLA and APA rules for
citations and documentation, (8) a list of correction symbols, and (9) Peer Review and Writers
Self-Check worksheets.
The Online Teachers Manual

Features specific to the Teachers Manual that will help you teach this course include the
following items.

Writing Assignment Scoring Rubrics
The photocopiable Writing Assignment Scoring Rubrics on pages 3847 of this manual help you
grade completed assignments fairly and easily. They also help students understand the basis for
their grades. Each rubric reflects the chapter skills focus, the Writing Assignment directions, and
the Writers Self-Check worksheet criteria. You can adjust the point system for each criterion
to suit the needs and goals of your class. Below the rubric in the Comments section, you can
write specific comments and suggestions to the student, such as: Great details! Be careful about
spelling. The rubric can also be used for the additional writing activities at the end of each
Writing Assignment section in the Chapter Teaching Notes of this manual.
Suggested Procedure
1. Hand out copies of the rubric or post it to a class website so that students can refer to it
prior to and while completing the assignment.
2. After you collect the assignments, use the rubrics to score students work.
3. Return the rubrics with the marked-up assignments.
4. Follow up with teacher-student consultations as needed.
Chapter Quizzes
The photocopiable chapter quizzes on pages 4864 of this Teachers Manual will help you assess
your students proficiency with the material covered in the chapter. Each quiz has three parts with
easily gradable items worth 20 points. The quizzes cover such skills as organizational patterns,
development and support, research and documentation, sentence structure, and grammar. The
quizzes can be used in class or as take-home assignments.
Chapter Quiz Answer Key

Use the answer key on pages 6568 to score the quizzes yourself. Alternatively, photocopy the
answers, write them on the board, or post them to a class website. Have students correct their
own papers or exchange papers and correct a partners paper.
Student Book Answer Key

Answers to the practice exercises in the Student Book are on pages 6980 of this Teachers
Manual.
Integrating Technology
Using technology engages students, increases their motivation, and helps them develop skills
that are vital for full participation in higher education. Technology can also facilitate interaction
among students outside of class. Such interaction can promote a sense of community and foster
the supportive culture essential to a classroom of developing writers. Here are some things to
consider when integrating technology in an academic writing course.
Student Skill Levels

Many students with access to computers, tablets, and smart phones already have technology
skills. They use applications to communicate in writing (via email, text messaging, and social
networking sites) and to self-publish (on blogs and other websites). Students with little or no such
experience can acquire the skills they need with help from you and their classmates.

Learning Management Systems
Some schools provide a learning management system (LMS). You can also use free web-based
learning management systems. An LMS provides a password-protected community for you and
your students, and it gives you a place to keep course materials, such as information for students,
work written by students, and teacher records. An LMS also offers students a way to submit
assignments, post to a blog, communicate with you, and participate in online class discussions.
Students who are familiar with social networking sites will already have some skills needed to
use an LMS.
Free Online Tools

A variety of free online tools can help you set up systems for organizing or showcasing students
work. For example:
A class website gives you a place to post your syllabus, provide other course information, and
publish student work.
A wiki allows all class members to contribute writing, discuss ideas, and provide feedback.
Online presentations allow students to showcase their individual or collaborative work and are
easily embedded within an LMS, website, or wiki.
Blogs allow individual students to publish their writing easily.
MyCompLab
Outside of class, students can go to MyCompLab at www.mycomplab.com for additional writing
skill practice, composition practice, and assessments. This online program includes:
Automatically graded presentations, tutorials, and practice (writing, grammar, and research),
including customizable options
The facility for students to compose collaboratively, share drafts, and do peer reviews
The facility for instructors to select, create, and insert error comments and link to resource
librarytopics
Varied course management functions, including the ability to incorporate diagnostics and
writing assignments as well as manage student portfolios

CHAPTER
TEACHING NOTES
9
CHAPTER TEACHING NOTES
CHAPTER 1 Analyzing the Model (page2)
Expository Essays Have students read the writing model

silently and write answers to the questions.
(pages120)
Then have students discuss their answers,
perhaps first with a partner, and then
CHAPTER OPENER (page1) followed by a whole-class discussion.
Explain that the theme of this chapter Ask students to identify where the body
focuses on the beginning stages of the of the essay begins and ends. Ask why the
writing process and the general shape of the body is divided into paragraphs.
essay. It lays the foundation for the content
Return to the discussion of student writing
of all the later chapters.
practices. Ask: How many of you are
Have students look at the photo caption discoverers or planners? How many
and spend five minutes writing about their have used freewriting, brainstorming, or
own writing style. To help them get started, clustering? Who has done outlining?
ask: Do you normally write by hand, by
computer, or by a combination of the two?
How do you plan what to write? Do you
!Noticing Vocabulary (page5)
outline your work prior to writing? Do you Go over the introductory text.
try to write perfect first drafts? How many Variation: give examples of other prefixes
times do you revise your papers? so that the concept is clear to students (e.g.
Then lead a discussion about the topic, ex-, ad-, trans-, ab-). You might also note
beginning with a show of hands in response that some of the negative prefixes have
to the questions above. For example, ask: other meanings, such as in- and im-, which
How many of you write by hand only? can mean in or into in words such as
immigrate.
Read the objectives aloud, or ask students
to do so. Follow up with questions. For Have students suggest other words that
example, ask: What do you think the begin with negative prefixes.
elements of a well-structured essay are? Have students read the directions for
What do you think the steps in the writing Practice1, PartsA and B. Have students
process are? Write students responses complete the tasks with a partner. Then go
on the board. (Note:The discussion will over the answers.
probably lead to reorganizing the steps in
the writing process or adding to them.)
ORGANIZATION (pages68)
INTRODUCTION (pages25) Go over the introductory text.
Go over the introductory text, emphasizing
that students pay special attention to the A Clear Thesis Statement (page6)
highlighted words, which are key concepts Have students read the introductory text.
in understanding and discussing an essay. Emphasize that a thesis statement should
make a claim instead of merely announcing
Have students say what kind of information

might go into an expository essay (e.g., the topic. In other words, a claim is
facts and figures, explanations, descriptions, arguable: It needs backing to support it,
analysis of information). which is the reason for the body of the
essay.
Return to the model and have students
identify the words in the thesis statement
and topic sentence that indicate a claim.
Longman Academic Writing Series 5, Teachers Manual Chapter Teaching Notes 10

Have students read the directions for Emphasize the importance of knowing
Practice2. Have them complete the task your audience. Ask: What do you want
alone. Then go over the answers. your reader(s) to do with what you say?
Beyond that, emphasize that a writer should
Topic Sentences (page7) consider how much the audience already
knows about the topic (and therefore should
Have students read the introductory text. not be told again) or does not know. The
Discuss how the topic sentence performs two writer should also consider the audiences
roles: (1) it develops one aspect of the thesis attitude toward the subject matter,
statement and (2) it introduces a claim that especially when the purpose is to persuade.
the remainder of the paragraph supports.
Have students read the directions for
Have students read the directions for Practice7 and then work with a partner to
Practice3. Have them complete the task complete the task. Go over the answers.
alone. Then go over the answers. Discuss
why conclusions often echo an idea in the Go over the next set of explanatory text.
opening paragraph, but emphasize that Then have students read the directions for
short essays do not require summaries. Practice8 and then work with a partner to
complete the task. Go over the answers.
A Strong Conclusion (page8)
EXTENSION:
Have students read the introductory text
and the directions for Practice4. Have them Have students complete the first freewriting
complete the task with a partner. Then go in class and then read it aloud to a small
over the answers. group so that they become accustomed to
sharing their work and getting a reaction
to the writing. (This is also a good way
GRAMMAR (pages911) for students to get to know and feel
Go over the introductory text. comfortable with each other.)
Using Articles (page9) Variation: After trying all three prewriting

Explain that articles are one of the most activities, have students decide which
challenging issues for speakers of languages they like best and which they can use in
in which no articles are used, for there are particular circumstances.
many more nouns in sentences than any Go over the next set of explanatory text
other part of speech. (Note:Typically, nouns about brainstorming. Then have students
in many languages are inflected to indicate read the directions for Practice9 and work
whether a noun is general or specific. with a partner to complete the task. Go over
Moreover, there are many exceptions to the the answers.
rules for article use. Some expressions are
idiomatic; other expressions mean the same Go over the introductory text about
whether an article is used or omitted. But the clustering. Then have students read the
rules are helpful.) directions for Practice10 and work with a
partner to complete the task. Go over the
Go over the directions for Practice5. Have answers.
students complete the activity. Then go over
the answers. Do the same for Practice6. Go over the introductory text about
outlining ideas. Then have students do the

Try It Out! activity and have them hand in
THE WRITING PROCESS (pages1218) the outline.
Go over the introductory text. Emphasize
Go over the following explanatory text.
that the writing process is recursivethat
is, steps recur. For example, writers may be
writing entirely new paragraphs while they
are revising.

Step 5: Do this task in class. Have students
EXTENSION: read the instructions, and then lead a
To emphasize how predicting works and brief discussion about the benefits of peer
why organization must be clear, have review (the writer receives nonthreatening
students read the first sentence of any feedback from a classmate; the classmate
paragraph in this chapter and then stop to gets practiceediting and assessing someone
predict what follows. Then have them read elses writing; both the writer and the
the remainder of the paragraph to test their peer reviewer develop the ability to make
predictions. independent judgments about their work).
Go over the Peer Review worksheet for
Chapter1 on page225 of the Student Book.
!Applying Vocabulary (page18) Have students complete the task.
Go over the introductory text. Then have Step 6: Have students read the instructions
students read the directions for Practice11 and then go over the proofreading symbols
and complete the task alone. Go over the in Appendix H on pages221223 of the
answers. Student Book. Then go over the Chapter1
Writers Self-Check (page226). If possible,
Writing Assignment (pages1820) have students edit and proofread their first
drafts in class. Suggest that they do these
Read the introduction aloud. Have students
steps separately. (That is, they should
reread the writing model on pages24
make content changes first and proofread
silently.
afterward.) Remind students to use the
Step 1: Have students read the instructions Writers Self-Check on page226 of the
and then spend five to seven minutes Student Book. You may wish to collect
exploring their topic, audience, and students first drafts and self-checks to
purpose. Remind them not to censor their check their editing, proofreading, and self-
ideas. They should write anything that assessment skills.
comes to mind about the topic.
Step 7: Have students read the instructions
Variation: Do this step as a whole class and then do this step in class or at home.
activity, or have students brainstorm with a Collect the papers and use the Writing
partner. Assignment Scoring Rubric on page39 of
Step 2: Have students read the instructions this Teachers Manual to evaluate them.
and then have them freewrite or brainstorm Decide if you will give a letter grade.
a list of ideas. Collect the papers and check
to make sure students have understood SELF-ASSESSMENT (page20)
this step of the writing process. (Provide Go over the Self-Assessment with the class.
suggestions, but do not grade the papers at See options for using the Self-Assessment
this time.) on page6 of this manual. Point out that
Step 3: Have students read the instructions students will practiceall the skills listed
and then write a preliminary thesis again and again in this book.
statement. Then have them prepare an
outline. EXPANSION (page20)
and then write their first drafts in class Timed Writing (page20)
or at home. If desired, collect the papers Have students read the instructions.
and check to make sure students have (Note:Students may be uneasy about
understood this step of the writing process. writing with a time limit. Reassure them
(Again, provide suggestions, but do not that they will not be graded.) Encourage
grade this step.) them not to skip the prewriting step because
it will help them write a better paragraph.

Have students read the instructions. Indicate in categories according to height or age).
when they should begin writing. Signal them Ask students to suggest other examples. If
when the suggested time for each step is up. anyone suggests a classification involving
Collect the papers after 30 minutes. more than one criterion, point out that the
categories overlap.
Conduct a brief discussion about the timed
writing experience. Ask students how it felt.
Did they follow all the steps? Were they
INTRODUCTION (pages2225)
able to finish in time? What, if anything, Go over the introductory text and
will they do differently next time? discuss the need for classifications in the
social sciences, for example, how these
Decide how you will mark students papers.
classifications can be used in determining
It may be enough to check thesis statement,
public policies.
topic sentences, and conclusion. It is not
necessary to mark errors or give a grade. Variation: Ask students to predict how the
body paragraphs of classification essays are
Complete the Personal Essay typically organized.
(page20)
Have students read the instructions. Then Analyzing the Model (page22)
have them complete their essay at home. Have students read the writing model and
Decide who will read students essays and then work with a partner or in a small group
how readers should respond. For example, to answer the questions about the model.
if students write in their journals, the reader Go over the answers with the class.
will probably be you. Decide if you will
respond to the content of the journal entries, !Noticing Vocabulary (page25)
the writing, or both. If students post their
essays to a blog, you may want to have them Have students read the introductory text.
work with a partner and respond to each Elicit other collocations students know.
others essays online. Finally, if you have Read the directions for Practice1, PartsA
students post their essays to a class website, and B. Have students complete the activities
decide if you will also require students to with a partner. Then go over the answers.
respond to each others writing in some way.
EXTENSION:
Have students write sentences using the
CHAPTER 2 collocations.
Classification Essays
(pages2140) ORGANIZATION (pages2628)
Go over the introductory text. To reinforce
CHAPTER OPENER (page21) the concept that a thesis statement makes
Discuss the theme of this chapter a claim, have students return to the thesis
sociologyto determine what students of the writing model and locate the key
know about it. Encourage them to words (unique and self-contained). Then
investigate it more. have them review the body paragraphs
to determine where they support the key

Have students look at the photograph. Ask:
words. (Note:You may wish to emphasize
Do the people look different from those
that writers often revise their thesis in
you would expect to see in the United
the later stages of the writing process,
States?
after they have looked carefully at what
Have students read the objectives and they have said. Likewise, they may also
discuss any unfamiliar terms. Give an reshape their body paragraphs to align with
example of a classification (e.g., people thethesis.)

Introductory Paragraph (page26) students. Students whose first language
lacks articles must know the distinction
Have students read the introductory text.
between few, which expresses the absence
(Note:You may wish to explain that not
of something, and a few, which expresses
every introductory paragraph specifically
a small number of something. Write the
outlines the categories in the body, but that
following sentences on the board to help
the paragraph indicates that the body will
illustrate the point: Few people can survive
explain them.)
for long in extreme cold. A few people
got all of the answers correct on the test.
Body Paragraphs (page27) Emphasize that the same concept applies to
Go over the introductory text, and provide little and a little.
an example of overlapping categories (such Explain that one of the most common
as daily life and working life) a person minor errors made with noun determiners
does work in his or her daily life. is confusing a number (for count nouns)
and an amount (for noncount nouns). Refer
Concluding Paragraph (page28) students to Appendix E on pages208210
of the Student Book for a list of commonly
confused words. Write the following
Remind them that a concluding paragraph
sentences on the board to help illustrate the
never introduces a new topic idea.
point: A large number of people attended
the lecture. They learned a large amount of
ESTABLISHING UNITY AND information.
COHERENCE (pages2830)
Explain that establishing unity and Practice3, PartsA and B, and complete the
coherence requires constant practiceand task with a partner. Go over the answers.
reinforcement. Predicting, discussed in
Chapter1, is a useful tool in checking for
PREPARATION FOR WRITING
unity. Emphasize that it is useful to examine
(pages3337)
the first and last sentences of a paragraph
to see if they are related. Have students try Go over the introductory text.
both of these approaches when examining
the writing model. Stress that demonstrative Planning, Observing, and Note
pronouns should precede a noun to achieve Taking (page33)
the most clarity. (Note:Technically they are
demonstrative adjectives.) Have students read the introductory text and
the directions for Practice4, PartsA and B.
(Note:Have students place a sticky note on Then have them complete the tasks alone.
the pageslisting transition signals so that Go over the answers.
they can refer to the list later.)
Have students read the Writing Tip and Conducting Surveys and
the directions for Practice2. Have them Administering Questionnaires
complete the task. Then go over the (page34)
answers.
Have students read the introductory text and
the directions for Practice5, PartsA and B.
GRAMMAR (pages3133)
Then have them complete the tasks alone.

Have students read the introductory text. Go over the answers.
Go over the Writing Tip and the directions
Using Quantiers (page31) for Practice6. Have students complete the
Go over the introductory text. Explain task. Go over the answers. Do the same for
that the noun-determiner system can be the Try It Out! activity.
challenging, even for the most advanced

Variation: Refer students to the guides for Encourage students to read their papers
writing a classification thesis in Appendix aloud. This latter practiceis extremely
A on page189. (Note:These guides and useful in uncovering awkward phrasing
others keyed to Chapters 28 provide and hearing where sentences end and
excellent models for students to imitate or begin. Have students work with a partner in
adapt in their writing.) reading their papers aloud.
Step 6: Read the instructions aloud and
!Applying Vocabulary (page37) go over the Chapter2 Writers Self-Check
Have students read the introductory text (page228). Have students do this step in
and the directions for Practice7. Then have class or at home.
them complete the task with a partner. Go Step 7: Have students read the instructions
over the answers. and then complete this step in class or at
home. Collect the papers and use the Writing
WRITING ASSIGNMENT (pages3739) Assignment Scoring Rubric on page40 of
this Teachers Manual to evaluate them.
Have students read the introduction and Decide if you will give a letter grade.
possible topics.
Step 1: Have students read the instructions SELF-ASSESSMENT (page39)
and then spend five to seven minutes
exploring their topic, audience, and Go over the Self-Assessment with the class.
purpose. Remind them not to censor their See options for using the Self-Assessment
ideas. They should write anything that on page6 of this manual. Point out that
comes to mind about the topic. students will practiceall the skills listed
again and again in this book.
Variation: Do this step as a whole class, or
have students brainstorm with a partner.
EXPANSION (pages3940)
Step 2: Have students conduct their survey
and record the results. Collect the papers Timed Writing (page39)
and check to make sure students have Read the instructions aloud. Remind
understood this step of the writing process. students not to skip the prewriting step; it
(Provide suggestions, but do not grade the will help them write better paragraphs.
papers at this time.)
Have students begin writing. Signal them
Step 3: Have students read the instructions when the suggested time for each step is up.
and then write a preliminary thesis
statement. Then have them prepare an Collect the papers after 50 minutes.
outline. Decide how you will mark students papers.
Step 4: Have students read the instructions Check the papers for unity and coherence,
and then write their first drafts in class as well as other criteria you select.
or at home. If desired, collect the papers
and check to make sure students have EXTENSION:
understood this step of the writing process. Select all or parts of some paragraphs
(Again, provide suggestions, but do not and use them for a group evaluation and
grade this step.) correction activity. Include both excellent
Step 5: Do this activity in class. Have and weak writing samples. Students can use
students read the instructions and go over the Peer Review worksheet on page227 to
the Peer Review worksheet for Chapter2 guide their evaluations.
on page227 of the Student Book.
Emphasize that revision often goes far
beyond correcting small matters, for writers
often add supporting information or whole
new paragraphs, and shift materials around.

Observing Other People (page40) process or to instruct them on how to
perform the process. Provide examples
Have students read the instructions. Discuss
such as an explanation of a physical or
each students choice of topic prior to the
biological process such as the moons orbit
actual writing of the essay. (Note:It is
around the earth or a recipe in a cookbook.
important that students limit their time of
Ask students to provide other examples and
observation to 1520 minutes unless more
state whether the examples are descriptions
time is absolutely needed. Otherwise,
of the process or instructions on performing
they will gather too much information.)
the process.
Suggest that students tell the people they
are observing that they are doing so for a Choose one or two of the suggested topics
writing assignment. They may even ask for and write them on the board. Then have
permission. the class brainstorm a list of steps in the
process. Record these steps on the board.
Decide who will read students essays and
how readers should respond. For example,
if students write in their journals, the reader Analyzing the Model (page42)
will probably be you. Decide if you will Have students read the writing model and
respond to the content of the journal entries, then work with a partner or in a small group
the writing, or both. If students post their to answer the questions about the model.
essays to a blog, you may want to put them Go over the answers with the class.
with a partner and instruct them to respond
to each others essays online. Finally, if you
have students post their essays to a class
website, decide if you will also require Have students read the introductory text.
students to respond to each others writing Point out that some Latin nouns can take
in some way. either the Latin or English endings, for
example, memoranda / memorandums,
Variation: Have students submit their referenda / referendums, millennia /
outlines along with their first, or final, millenniums, and media / mediums. Another
drafts. Latin noun, stadium, commonly takes the
English plural, stadiums. Grammatically,
data, media, and bacteria are plural,
CHAPTER 3 although common usage tends to treat them
as singular.
Process Essays (pages4163) Go over the directions for Practice1,
PartsA and B, and have students do the
CHAPTER OPENER (page41) task with a partner. Go over the answers.
Discuss the theme of this chapterbiology
and the natural sciencesto determine ORGANIZATION (pages4649)
what students know about the theme. Ask: Have students read the introductory text.
What do you know about the scientific
method?
Introductory Paragraph (page46)
Have students look at the photograph and
identify the items they see. Have students read the introductory text.
Emphasize that a clear thesis statement
Have students read the objectives and is essential in a process essay, especially
briefly discuss any unfamiliar terms. when it indicates the structure of the body
paragraphs. Also point out the importance
INTRODUCTION (pages4245) of listing all materials or ingredients at the
Have students read the introductory text. beginning of an instructional process essay.
Emphasize the different goals of a process
essay: to have the readers understand a

Body Paragraphs (page47) occasionally, the colon. Commas never join
clauses. However, the single most effective
way to remedy run-on sentences, comma-
Point out that each step in the process
spliced sentences, and fragments is to read
generally requires a separate body
a passage aloud, slowly and in a natural
paragraph. A list of steps that need no
speaking voice. A rise in the voice indicates
explanation, however, may occupy a single
a comma, and a drop in the voice indicates
paragraph.
a period. An even better practiceis to read
the work aloud in front of another person,
Concluding Paragraph (page47) which heightens awareness of audience.
Have students read the introductory text. Have students read the directions for
Practice3, PartsA and B and complete the
Outlining (page48) task with a partner. Go over the answers
and the Writing Tip.
Stress the importance of outlining the
process so that all the steps are included. Choppy and Stringy Sentences
As mentioned later in the chapter, (page51)
brainstorming is a useful tool in generating Go over the introductory text. Emphasize
the outline. again that reading aloud is extremely useful
Go over the directions for Practice2. Have in identifying choppy sentences and stringy
students complete the task alone. Then go sentences. Point out that students may also
over the answers. circle repeated words (an indication that
ideas may be combined or some simply
Variation: To expedite the activity, have eliminated) to find choppy sentences.
students work in pairs or groups and assign Likewise, they may circle conjunctions to
only one or two paragraphs to each pair or identify stringy sentences.
group.
Practice4 and do the task with a partner.
SENTENCE STRUCTURE (pages4954) Then go over the answers.
Have students read the introductory text. Have students read the next set of
If necessary, review the meaning of the explanatory text and the directions for
terms clause, independent clause, and Practice5. Have them complete the activity
dependent clause. Also review the terms with a partner. Then go over the answers.
coordinate and subordinate as they relate
to clauses. Explain that co- means equal,
PREPARATION FOR WRITING
so a coordinating conjunction [con =
(pages5557)
with + join] links structures that are
grammatically equal and equally important. Have students read the introductory text and
Conversely, sub- means lesser or below, the directions for Practice6, PartsA andB.
so a subordinating conjunction precedes Have them complete the activity with a
the structure that is grammatically not a partner or in small groups. Then go over the
sentenceand less important in meaning answers.
than the independent clause.
Making Transitions between
Run-On and Comma-Spliced Steps in a Process (page56)

Sentences (page49) Go over the introductory text. Point out that
Go over the introductory text. Explain writing a process essay lends itself well
that a conjunction or relative pronoun to using first, second, and other counting
joins two clauses. Therefore, a word words. (Note:The guide in Appendix A
not punctuationjoins them. The only on page190 of the Student Book provides
exceptions are the semicolon and, more explicit ways to establish these
transitions gracefully.) Caution students Step 2: Have students prewrite to get ideas.
not to rely too heavily on counting words Collect the papers and check to make sure
as transitional devices. The logical students have understood this step of the
relationships between parts of an essay writing process. (Provide suggestions, but
may be complex and therefore require more do not grade the papers at this time.)
complex transitions. Step 3: Have students read the instructions
Have students read the directions for and then cut and paste from their
Practice7 and complete the activity with a freewriting, write a preliminary thesis
partner or in small groups. Then go over the statement, and prepare an outline.
answers. Step 4: Have students read the instructions
and then write their first drafts in class or
WRITING A SUMMARY AND AN at home. Once students have completed
ABSTRACT (pages5860) their first drafts, have them check over the
Have students read the introductory text. drafts for consistency of person (you or the
Emphasize that the summary will play an imperative) and number (singular or plural).
important role in writing assignments in If desired, collect the papers and check to
later chapters. make sure students have understood this
step of the writing process. (Again, provide
suggestions, but do not grade this step.)
Procedure for Summarizing an
Article (page58) Step 5: Do this task in class. Have students
read the instructions and go over the
Go over the introductory text and the Peer Review worksheet for Chapter3 on
Writing Tip. Point out that it is important page229 of the Student Book.
for students to learn to summarize
effectively, although this skill may take Step 6: Read the instructions aloud and
some time to master. go over the Chapter3 Writers Self-Check
(page230). Have students do this step in
Have students read the directions for class or at home.
Practice8. Then have them do the task
alone. Go over the answers. Do the same Step 7: Have students read the instructions
for the Try It Out! activity. and then do this step in class or at home.
Collect the papers and use the Writing
Assignment Scoring Rubric on page41 of
!Applying Vocabulary (page60) this Teachers Manual to evaluate them.
Have students read the introductory text Decide if you will give a letter grade.
and the directions for Practice9. Then have
them do the activity with a partner. Go over SELF-ASSESSMENT (page63)
the answers.
Go over the Self-Assessment with the class.
See options for using the Self-Assessment
WRITING ASSIGNMENT (pages6162) on page6 of this manual. Point out that
Have students read the introduction and students will practiceall the skills listed
possible topics. again and again in this book.
and then spend five to seven minutes EXPANSION (page63)
exploring their topic, audience, and

purpose. Remind them not to censor their Timed Writing (page63)
ideas. They should write anything that Read the instructions aloud. Remind students
comes to mind about the topic. not to skip the prewriting step because it will
Variation: Do this step as a whole class, or help them write a better paragraph.
have students brainstorm with a partner. Have students begin writing. Signal them
when the suggested time for each step is up.

Collect the papers after 35 minutes. INTRODUCTION (pages6571)
Decide how you will mark students papers. Go over the introductory text. Especially
Check the papers for unity and coherence, discuss the uses of cause / effect analysis in
as well as other criteria you select. academic writing. Ask students to provide
examples.
EXTENSION:
Select all or parts of some paragraphs Analyzing the Models (page65)
and use them for a group evaluation and Have students read the first writing model
correction activity. Include both excellent and then work with a partner or in a small
and weak writing samples. Students can use group to answer the questions about the
the Peer Review worksheet on page229 to model. Go over the answers with the class.
guide their evaluations. Do the same with the second writing model.
Write a Scientic Process Essay EXTENSION:

(page63) Have students compare the two models,
noting the signal words and phrases that
Have students read the instructions. Then
indicate causes and those that introduce
have them complete their essay at home.
effects.
if students write in their journals, the reader Point out that in the first modela chain
will probably be you. Decide if you will reaction of causes (to be discussed later in
respond to the content of the journal entries, the chapter)a cause leads to an effect,
the writing, or both. If students post their which then becomes a cause. Ask students
essays to a blog, you may want to put them if the final paragraph discusses a cause or
with a partner and instruct them to respond to an effect.
each others essays online. Finally, if you have
students post their essays to a class website, !Noticing Vocabulary (page70)
decide if you will also require students to
Go over the introductory text and the
respond to each others writing in some way.
directions for Practice1. Have students
complete the task with a partner. Then go
over the answers. (Note:Appendix D on
CHAPTER 4 page206 of the Student Book contains
Cause / Effect Essays a much longer list of phrasal verbs that
students can consult for reference.)
(pages6485)
EXTENSION:
CHAPTER OPENER (page64)
Have students use the phrasal verbs to write
Point out that history is the theme of this their own sentences. Then have them share
chapter and that historical essays tell a their sentences with a partner.
story, but they also often examine the
causes for and the results of events. Have
students look at the picture. Ask: What ORGANIZATION (pages7176)
story does this picture seem to tell?

Go over the introductory text. Answer any
Have students read the objectives and questions students may raise.
briefly discuss any unfamiliar terms. Ask
for examples of a cause and of an effect.

Chain Organization (page72) Using Parallelism (page77)
Go over the introductory text. Emphasize Go over the introductory text and the
that chain reaction organization combines directions for Practice6. Have students
causes and effects. complete the task with a partner. Then
go over the answers. Do the same for
Block Organization (page73) Practice7 and Practice8.
Go over the introductory text. Emphasize Point out that the Writing Tip is extremely
that block organization can apply to either useful since parallel structures are always
causes or effects, but it does not mix coordinatethat is, they are the same
the two. Remind students that a thesis grammatically. Indicate that but and or may
statement or a topic sentence makes a sometimes join parallel structures.
claim, and almost every claim needs to be
backed up or proven. (Note:If necessary, PREPARATION FOR WRITING
refer students to the discussion of the three (pages7980)
types of claims on page7 in Chapter1.)
Backing tends to differ in various academic
fields, however. Contrast the two models in
this chapter with the model in Chapter3. Conducting Research (page79)
The subject matter deals with science and Go over the explanatory text.
therefore relies heavily on numerical data.
Have students read the directions for the
Have students read the instructions for Try It Out! activity and then complete the
Practice2. Have them complete the task task alone.
with a partner. Then go over the answers.
Do the same for Practice3. EXTENSION:
Go over the next set of explanatory text, Have students compare their findings
about distinguishing between cause and in groups. Collect papers and provide
effect. Point out that a common logical feedback.
fallacy is to assume that if something
preceded something else, the two are
related causally. (The Student Book QUOTING MATERIAL FROM
mentions the examples of sunshine OUTSIDE SOURCES (pages8083)
and rain.) Then have students read the
directions for Practice4 and complete the Go over the introductory text.
activity alone. Go over the answers.
Punctuating Quotations (page80)
EXTENSION: Go over the explanatory text. Point out
Do a short review of the model in that many students struggle in handling
Chapter3, which also includes causes and quotations, and some common errors are
effects. (1) failing to quote exactly, (2) placing
quotation marks around the identification
of the speaker, and (3) placing punctuation
Go over the next set of explanatory text incorrectly. The most prevalent error is
about transition signals for introducing placing end punctuation after the quotation
causes and effects. Then have students read mark. (However, end punctuation rules differ
the directions for Practice5 and complete from this convention in British English.)
the activity alone. Go over the answers. Emphasize that students also need to work
with including quotations in paraphrases.
SENTENCE STRUCTURE (pages7779)

Point out that computers may introduce understood this step of the writing process.
other errors in quoting in paraphrasing. (Again, provide suggestions, but do not
For example, the computer may identify a grade this step.)
quoted question as a completed sentence. Step 5: Do this task in class. Have students
Thus, the identification of the speaker that read the instructions and go over the
follows will appear as a sentence fragment. Peer Review worksheet for Chapter4 on
Have students read the directions for page231 of the Student Book. Have them
Practice9. Then have them do the activity complete the task.
with a partner. Go over the answers. Step 6: Read the instructions aloud and
go over the Chapter4 Writers Self-Check
EXTENSION: (page232). Have students do this step in
Use any paragraph or group of paragraphs class or at home.
from any source to give students additional Step 7: Have students read the instructions
practicein quoting. and then do this step in class or at home.
Have students review the phrasal verbs Decide if you will give a letter grade.
from page70.
Have students read the directions for SELF-ASSESSMENT (page85)
Practice10 and do the activity alone. Then Go over the Self-Assessment with the class.
go over the answers. See options for using the Self-Assessment
on page6 of this manual. Point out that
WRITING ASSIGNMENT (pages8384) students will practiceall the skills listed
Have students read the introduction. again and again in this book.

and then explore their topic, audience, and
EXPANSION (page85)
purpose. Remind them not to censor their Timed Writing (page85)
ideas. They should write anything that
comes to mind about the topic. Read the instructions aloud. Remind
students not to skip the prewriting step
Variation: Do this step as a whole class, or because it will help them write a better
have students brainstorm with a partner. paragraph.
Step 2: Have students freewrite, Have students begin writing. Signal them
brainstorm, or create cluster diagrams to when the suggested time for each step is up.
explore and organize their ideas. Collect
the papers and check to make sure students Collect the papers after 30 minutes.
have understood this step of the writing Decide how you will mark students papers.
process. (Provide suggestions, but do not Check the papers for unity and coherence,
grade the papers at this time.) as well as other criteria you select.
Point out the Writing Tip.
EXTENSION:
and then write a preliminary thesis Select all or parts of some paragraphs
statement. Then have them prepare an and use them for a group evaluation and
outline. correction activity. Include both excellent
and weak writing samples. Students can use
the Peer Review worksheet on page231 to
and then write their first drafts in class or
guide their evaluations.
at home. If you wish, collect the papers
and check to make sure students have

Examining Alternatives (page85) INTRODUCTION (pages8790)
Before students write, conduct a class Go over the introductory text. Explain
discussion. Begin by reviewing each that extended definition is necessary
event in the Writing Model about the Irish to introduce and illustrate a concept.
Potato Famine. For each, ask whether the Emphasize that writing about science
government could have acted differently. often therefore employs definition. But it
Decide who will read students essays and often plays an important role in argument,
how readers should respond. For example, where a term may need to be redefined and
if students write in their journals, the reader examined carefully. This will be discussed
will probably be you. Decide if you will in Chapter8.
respond to the content of the journal entries,
the writing, or both. If students post their Analyzing the Model (page87)
essays to a blog, you may want to put them Before students read the model, ask: What
with a partner and instruct them to respond is language? Write the definition(s) on
to each others essays online. Finally, if you the board. After students read the article
have students post their essays to a class and answer the questions, compare their
website, decide if you will also require definitions with what they have learned.
students to respond to each others writing
in some way. Have students examine the first paragraph
carefully. Explain that it examines the
problems with a dictionary definition
and then provides a different definition.
CHAPTER 5 (Note:This problem / solution approach
Extended Definition is often used in writing, which will be the
topic of Chapter6.)
Essays (pages86108) Ask why the first paragraph ends with a
question. Suggest that students may wish to
CHAPTER OPENER (page86) use this device occasionally.
Explain that the theme of this chapter is Variation: Use some realia to demonstrate
language, with an emphasis on its relation the concept of symbols. For example, show
to brain function. Indicate that the photo is students a picture of a dog. Ask: What is
of Charles Darwin, whose book Origin of this? Most students will answer, Its a
Species (1859) introduced the concept of dog. Ask a student to pet the dog or feed
evolution. Ask: What do you know about it. Then you can emphasize how symbols
Charles Darwin? (Beware, however, that (and language) both represent things but
some students may raise objections to the are not the things themselves. We also need
theory of evolution, so handle this matter symbols to represent things we can see and
diplomaticallyindicating that no one is touch but also to represent abstract concepts
challenging their beliefs.) such as loyalty and freedom.
Have students read the objectives and Have students locate and discuss the use
briefly discuss any unfamiliar terms. of quotations in the model. Have them
identify the different types of quotations
and their punctuation. (Note:These include
a partially quoted text, a quotation within
a quotation, a long indented quotation,

and a quotation with bracketed material.
Either explain these different treatments of
quoted material or have students work with
a partner and try to explain them. Write the
responses on the board.)

Point out that the final paragraph returns to Have students read the directions for
the question in the opening paragraph. Practice2 and complete the task alone.
Have students read the writing model and Then go over the answers.
then work with a partner or in a small group
to answer the questions about the model. Adjective Clauses (page92)
Go over the answers with the class. Go over the explanatory text.
!Noticing Vocabulary (page90) Practice3 and complete the task with a
Have students read the explanatory text. partner. Then go over the answers.
Point out the definition of synonym and its
role in definition. ORGANIZATION (pages96101)
Have students read the directions for Go over the explanatory text. Then return
Practice1 and complete the task with a to the model and examine the topic
partner. Then go over the answers. sentences and types of support in the body
paragraphs.
Variation: Assign the first five words in
Practice1 to several groups and the last five
words to several others. Have each group Three Ways to Dene a Term
report its answers and write them on the (page97)
board. Discuss the variation in answers, Go over the explanatory text.
especially if some synonyms are incorrect
or are the wrong part of speech. Have students read the directions for
Practice4, PartsA and B, and complete the
task alone. Then go over the answers.
GRAMMAR (pages9195)
Have students read the next explanatory
Have students read the introductory text. text about using a formal statement of
definition. Then have them read the
Noun Clauses (page91) directions for Practice5 and complete the
Go over the explanatory text. Explain that task alone. Go over the answers.
the concept that clauses function as nouns Have students read the next groups of
or adjectives can be puzzling. Point out explanatory text about definition by
that the building blocks of sentences are negation and potential problems with
nouns (or pronouns), verbs, adjectives, definitions. Also point out the Writing Tip.
and adverbs. Each of these building blocks Then have them read the directions for
can be a single word, a phrase, or a clause the Try It Out! activity and complete the
(although a clause cannot be a verb). task with a partner or in a small group. Go
(Note:Refer students to the discussion of over the answers. (Note:If necessary, refer
subordination in Chapter3 if necessary.) students to the guides in Appendix A on
Explain that a common error occurs when page191.)
the relative pronoun is the object in the
clause. Students may repeat the object, as in Expanding on a Denition (page100)
these examples: Noam Chomsky is the man Go over the explanatory text. Then have
whom most people regard him as the father students read the directions for the Try It
of modern linguistics. A lesser-known Asian Out! activity and complete it with a partner
Language is Mongolian, which only people or in a small group. Go over the answers.
in Mongolia and northern China speak it.
Explain that the relative pronoun functions
grammatically to attach the relative clause
to the word it relates to, but it nevertheless
replaces the object pronoun that would
follow a verb or preposition.

PREPARATION FOR WRITING WRITING ASSIGNMENT (pages106107)
(pages101106) Have students read the introduction and
Have students read the introductory text. possible topics.
Paraphrasing Material from and then spend five to seven minutes
Sources (page101) exploring their topic, audience, and
purpose. Remind them not to censor their
Go over the explanatory text, including
the Writing Tip. Explain that paraphrasing
is a challenging skill for many students
to master, especially those with a limited Variation: Do this step as a whole class, or
English vocabulary. have students brainstorm with a partner.
Step 2: Have students freewrite,
EXTENSION: brainstorm, or create cluster diagrams.
Assign additional activities to give students Then have them decide how to define their
more practicewith paraphrasing. Give term. Collect the papers and check to make
students material to paraphrase or have sure students have understood this step of
them find original material and submit it the writing process. (Provide suggestions,
with their paraphrase. Have students work but do not grade the papers at this time.)
with a partner, stating a part of a paraphrase Step 3: Have students read the instructions
aloud, writing it down, and then continuing and then write an outline of the essay.
until they have completed the paraphrase. Then have them draft a preliminary thesis
statement.
Remind students that even if they think Step 4: Have students read the instructions
that something stated in their own words and then write their first drafts in class
does not need to acknowledge the source, or at home. If desired, collect the papers
just like a quotation, a paraphrase needs and check to make sure students have
adequate citation. understood this step of the writing process.
(Again, provide suggestions, but do not
grade this step.)
Practice6 and complete the task alone.
Then go over the answers. Step 5: Do this task in class. Have students
read the instructions and go over the
Peer Review worksheet for Chapter5 on
!Applying Vocabulary (page105) page233 of the Student Book. Have them
Have students read the explanatory material complete the task.
and the directions for Practice7. Have them
Step 6: Read the instructions aloud and
go over the Chapter5 Writers Self-Check
over the answers.
class or at home.
EXTENSION:
Have students blend paraphrases with and then do this step in class or at home.
quotations. They should begin with a Collect the papers and use the Writing
paraphrase and quote key phrases. They can Assignment Scoring Rubric on page43 of
do this with a partner or as homework. this Teachers Manual to evaluate them.

Decide if you will give a letter grade.

SELF-ASSESSMENT (page108) CHAPTER 6
Problem / Solution
students will practiceall the skills listed
Essays (pages109127)
again and again in this book. CHAPTER OPENER (page109)
Explain that the theme of this chapter is
EXPANSION (page108) education, with an emphasis on bullying.
Have students read the caption. Then ask
Timed Writing (page108) them to discuss cases of bullying they have
Read the instructions aloud. Remind observed or been victims of. (Note:This
students not to skip the prewriting step subject matter may be too sensitive in some
because it will help them write a better instances, so approach it carefully.)
paragraph. Have students read the objectives and
Have students begin writing. Signal them briefly discuss any unfamiliar terms.
when the suggested time for each step is up. (Note:You might also refer students to the
Collect the papers after 35 minutes. discussion of noun clauses and adjective
clauses in Chapter5.) Briefly discuss why a
Decide how you will mark students papers. person uses multiple sources in pursuit of a
Check the papers for unity and coherence, thesis.
as well as other criteria you select.
INTRODUCTION (pages110113)
EXTENSION:
Go over the introductory text. Re-emphasize
Select all or parts of some paragraphs the importance of carefully defining a
and use them for a group evaluation and problem before offering a solution.
correction activity. Include both excellent
the Peer Review worksheet on page233 to Analyzing the Model (page110)
guide their evaluations. Have students read the writing model and
then work with a partner or in a small
group to answer the questions about the
Writing a Denition (page108) model. Go over the answers with the class.
Discuss the topics with each student Emphasize the structure of the essay: the
prior to writing, offering suggestions or problem, the transition to the solution, and
alternatives. Have students discuss their the solution. Have students examine the
ideas among themselves. Then have them complexity of the solution.
complete the writing task.
Decide who will read students essays and !Noticing Vocabulary (page113)
how readers should respond. For example, Have students read the introductory text.
if students write in their journals, the reader Point out that the adverbial intensifiers
will probably be you. Decide if you will are collocations; some of the intensifiers
respond to the content of the journal entries, best accompany particular adjectives
the writing, or both. If students post their (e.g., utterly devastating). Others cannot
essays to a blog, you may want to put them accompany particular adjectives (e.g.,
with a partner and instruct them to respond strongly safe does not sound logical).
website, decide if you will also require
Then go over the answers.
in some way.

ORGANIZATION (pages114116) Eliminating Dangling Modiers
Remind students of the strategies discussed (page119)
in Chapter4 on cause / effect analysis, Go over the explanatory text. Point out that
and Chapter5 on definition. Point out, dangling modifiers are a persistent error
for example, that the writing model in in academic writing, especially as clauses
this chapter defines two types of bullying: collapse into modifying phrases.
physical and nonphysical. It also explains
that bullying differs from teasing because
Variation: Bring in realia (e.g., in letters
of solicitation or advertisements) to
of its intent and intensity. Later, the essay
demonstrate dangling modifiers. Often,
examines the causes of bullying so that it
these errors look like this: As a loyal
can target them in the solution.
customer, we are happy to offer you. . . .
Introductory Paragraph (page114) EXTENSION:

Have students read the explanatory text.
Have students complete sentences that
begin with phrases such as After completing
Body Paragraphs (page115) the assignment . . . or Walking across the
Go over the explanatory text. Stress the street . . .
importance of the transitional statement
(which sometimes is placed at the
beginning of the paragraph that follows the
explanation of the problem).
Then go over the answers.
Concluding Paragraph (page116) PREPARATION FOR WRITING

Have students read the explanatory text and (pages120125)
the directions for the Try It Out! activity.
Have them complete the task alone. Select
several of the paragraphs to discuss and
analyze in class. Point out their strengths as Researching a Topic in Multiple
well as ways they could be improved. Sources (page120)
GRAMMAR (pages116120) Explain that an additional technique for
Have students read the introductory text. expanding or narrowing a search is through
the use of Boolean terms. Point out that
students can use one of three keys terms:
Forming Adverbial Phrases or, and, not for these reasons: (1) to expand
(page116) a search, for example, instead of typing
Go over the explanatory text. Explain that schools, they may write public or private
a word can take on different grammatical schools; (2) to narrow the search, for
roles in English. Therefore, the example, write public not private schools;
subordinating conjunctions (when, while, or (3) to link two ideas in a search by writing,
etc.) need not begin a complete clause. for example, bullying and harassment.
Instead, they can be followed by a present Go over the directions for Practice4 and
participle (e.g., when finishing) or a past
have students complete the task in small

participle (e.g., when finished). groups. Go over the answers.
Have students read the directions for Have students read the directions for the Try
Practice2. Have them complete the task It Out! activity and complete the task alone.
with a partner. Then go over the answers. As a class, examine several introductory
paragraphs, pointing out strengths and
suggesting ways to improve the paragraphs.

Synthesizing Material from Step 2: Have students freeewrite,
Sources (page122) brainstorm, or do clustering to explore their
ideas. Collect the papers and check to make
Have students read the next set of
sure students have understood this step of
explanatory text, about synthesizing
the writing process. (Provide suggestions,
material from sources. Remind them
but do not grade the papers at this time.)
to examine the examples carefully, and
point out that two or more sources rarely Step 3: Have students read the instructions
say exactly the same thing, although and then write a preliminary thesis
their general conclusions may be almost statement. Then have them prepare an
the same. Therefore, emphasize that outline.
synthesizing usually indicates general Step 4: Have students read the instructions
agreement but also points out some and then write their first drafts in class
differences. or at home. If desired, collect the papers
Go over the next set of explanatory text, and check to make sure students have
about introducing sources. Emphasize understood this step of the writing process.
that students should follow this pattern: (Again, provide suggestions, but do not
a general statement of how the sources grade this step.)
agree or disagree and then ways in which Step 5: Do this task in class. Have students
the details differ. Be sure to point out the read the instructions and go over the
Writing Tip. Peer Review worksheet for Chapter6 on
Have students read the directions for page235 of the Student Book. Have them
Practice5 and complete the task with a complete the task.
partner. Then go over the answers. Do the Step 6: Read the instructions aloud and
same for the Try It Out! activity. go over the Chapter6 Writers Self-Check
EXTENSION: class or at home.
Have students check the verbs in the Step 7: Have students read the instructions
synthesis they wrote for the Try It and then do this step in class or at home.
Out! activity. Are they varied? Do they Collect the papers and use the Writing
accurately reflect the tone of the content? Assignment Scoring Rubric on page44 of
this Teachers Manual to evaluate them.
Decide if you will give a letter grade.
!Applying Vocabulary (page125)
Have students read the introductory text SELF-ASSESSMENT (page127)
them complete the task with a partner. Go
over the answers.
WRITING ASSIGNMENT (pages125126) again and again in this book.
Have students read the introduction and
possible topics.

Variation: Do this step as a whole class, or
have students brainstorm with a partner.

EXPANSION (page127) CHAPTER 7
Timed Writing (page127) Summary / Response

Read the instructions aloud. Remind
students not to skip the prewriting step
Essays (pages128145)
because it will help them write a better
paragraph. CHAPTER OPENER (page128)
Have students begin writing. Signal them Indicate that the theme of the chapter
when the suggested time for each step is up. is cultural adaptation and diversity.
Have students look at the photograph and
Collect the papers after 30 minutes. try to identify the different cultures or
Decide how you will mark students papers. nationalities represented.
Check the papers for unity and coherence, Have students read the objectives and
as well as other criteria you select. briefly discuss any unfamiliar terms.
Ask students if they can explain the
EXTENSION: difference between objective and subjective
Select all or parts of some paragraphs viewpoints, and active and passive voice.
and use them for a group evaluation and Do not try to explain these concepts yet.
and weak writing samples. Students can use INTRODUCTION (pages129131)
Go over the introductory text. If necessary
to reinforce the point of the introduction,
refer students back to the discussions of
Complete the Essay (page127) summary in Chapter3 and Chapter4.
Explain that summary plays an important
Have students read the instructions and role in essay writing of various types.
complete the task alone. Remind them
not to rely too much on a single source,
especially an encyclopedia. (Note:Students Analyzing the Model (page129)
may be tempted to plagiarize, most Have students read the writing model and
often out of ignorance. Therefore, view then work with a partner or in a small group
inadvertent plagiarism as a teaching to answer the questions about the model.
opportunity. However, when plagiarism is Go over the answers with the class.
blatant, take whatever punitive measures Ask students to examine the summary in
you [or your school] deem appropriate.) Paragraph 1, beginning with the sentence
Decide who will read students essays and This happened to Richard Rodriguez. Ask:
how readers should respond. For example, Is it objective? How does it relate to the
if students write in their journals, the reader beginning of the paragraph? Explain that
will probably be you. Decide if you will the opening paragraph therefore performs
respond to the content of the journal entries, two functions: (1) it provides a context for
the writing, or both. If students post their the summary (and the argument in the body
essays to a blog, you may want to put them of the paper), and (2) it summarizes the
with a partner and instruct them to respond material it will respond to. Emphasize that
to each others essays online. Finally, if you the summary must be accurate and clear so
have students post their essays to a class that readers know exactly what the body of
website, decide if you will also require the essay is responding to.
in some way.

Then direct students to Paragraph 2. GRAMMAR (pages135137)
Explain how it introduces the thesis of the
response and clearly indicates the shape
of the body of the essay. Point out that this
is the first writing model in this book that Using Passive and Active Voice
uses the conventional transitional words Appropriately (page135)
first, second, and third. Ask students why. Go over the explanatory text. Students may
In other words, how does the structure of confuse voice with tense, so remind them
the body support the thesis of the response? that the passive voice can occur in any
How does the thesis prepare readers for this tense. Point out that the verb to be indicates
structure? the tense.
Lead a discussion on the theme of the Have students read the directions for
essay; for example, ask if the suggestions Practice3 and complete the task alone.
the essay presents are realistic, and if not, Then go over the answers. Do the same
what suggestions students would make. for Practice4, checking to ensure each
rewritten sentence retains the correct verb
EXTENSION: tenses.
Point out the brackets in Paragraphs 1
and4 and the ellipsis marks in Paragraph4. PREPARATION FOR WRITING
Students should see that words may be (pages138143)
inserted in a quotation via brackets or Have students read the introductory text.
omitted via the three dots. You might also
ask students what a fourth dot signifiesa
period. Writing the Opening Summary
(page138)
Go over the explanatory text.
Have students read the introductory text Writing the Response (page139)
complete the task with a partner. Then go Go over the explanatory text and the
over the answers. Writing Tip. Refer students to the guides in
Appendix A on page193.
ORGANIZATION (pages132135) Have students read the directions for
Practice5 and do the task by themselves.
Go over the introductory text. Emphasize Then have them discuss and compare
the necessity of (1) an objective and their summaries with a partner. Are they
accurate summary, (2) a clear thesis accurate? Do they include too little or too
statement in the response, and (3) specific much information?
references, including quotations and
paraphrases, in the response. Point out that Have students read the directions for
the response makes an argument, so it states Practice6 and do the task alone. Then go
claims that must be supported or proven. over the answers. Do the same for the Try It
Out! activity.
The Summary (page133)
!Applying Vocabulary (page142)

and directions for Practice7, PartsA, B,
The Response (page133)
and C. Have them complete the tasks with a
Have students read the explanatory text partner. Then go over the answers.
them complete the task in a small group.
Go over the answers.

WRITING ASSIGNMENT (pages143144) EXPANSION (page145)
Have students read the introduction and
Timed Writing (page145)
possible topics.
Read the instructions aloud. Remind students
not to skip the prewriting step because it will
help them write a better response.
ideas. They should write anything that Have students begin writing. Signal them
comes to mind about the topic. when the suggested time for each step is up.
Variation: Do this step as a whole class, or Collect the papers after 45 minutes.
have students brainstorm with a partner. Decide how you will mark students papers.
Step 2: Have students freewrite, brainstorm, Check the papers for unity and coherence,
or cluster to uncover their ideas. Then have as well as other criteria you select.
them draft a preliminary thesis statement
for their response and brainstorm examples. EXTENSION:
Collect the papers and check to make sure Select all or parts of some paragraphs
students have understood this step of the and use them for a group evaluation and
writing process. (Provide suggestions, but do correction activity. Include both excellent
not grade the papers at this time.) and weak writing samples. Students can use
Step 3: Have students read the instructions the Peer Review worksheet on page237 to
and do the task. guide their evaluations.
and then write their first drafts in class Research and Respond (page145)
and check to make sure students have Go over the directions and have students
understood this step of the writing process. complete the task alone.
grade this step.) EXTENSION:
Step 5: Do this task in class. Have students Remind students about Boolean search
read the instructions and go over the words and have them use these words as
Peer Review worksheet for Chapter7 on they conduct their research.
page237 of the Student Book. Have them
complete the task.
Step 6: Read the instructions aloud and how readers should respond. For example,
go over the Chapter7 Writers Self-Check if students write in their journals, the reader
(page238). Have students do this step in will probably be you. Decide if you will
class or at home. respond to the content of the journal entries,
Step 7: Have students read the instructions the writing, or both. If students post their
and then do this step in class or at home. essays to a blog, you may want to put them
Collect the papers and use the Writing with a partner and instruct them to respond
Assignment Scoring Rubric on page45 of to each others essays online. Finally, if you
this Teachers Manual to evaluate them. have students post their essays to a class
Decide if you will give a letter grade. website, decide if you will also require

SELF-ASSESSMENT (page144) in some way.

again and again in this book.

CHAPTER 8 !Noticing Vocabulary (page150)
Argumentative Have students read the introductory text
Essays (pages146168) them complete the task with a partner. Go
over the answers.
CHAPTER OPENER (page146)
Have students look at the photograph. EXTENSION:
Ask how they feel about experiments on
Have students brainstorm additional
animals.
synonyms for the vocabulary words. Then
Have students read the objectives and discuss any subtle differences among the
briefly discuss any unfamiliar terms. Point synonyms.)
out the terminology to look for throughout
the chapter.
GRAMMAR (pages151154)
INTRODUCTION (pages147151) Modal Verbs (page151)
Have students read the introductory text. Go over the explanatory text.
Point out how the skills and organizational
structures from earlier chapters all Have students read the directions for
contribute to the writing of an argument. Practice2 and complete the task with a
Have students list the skills that apply. partner. Go over the answers.
Analyzing the Models (page147) Phrasal Modals (page153)

Have students read the first writing model Go over the explanatory text. Point out that
and then work with a partner or in a small students may be more familiar with the
group to answer the questions about the term helping verbs as it refers to phrasal
model. Go over the answers with the class. modals. Emphasize, however, that phrasal
modals do more than help another verb.
Explain the term counterargument, and They also express probability or obligation,
have students locate where Dr. Kline states and make suggestions, recommendations,
or responds to counterarguments. Point or even warnings.
out that the essay is largely structured as a
series of responses to counterarguments. Have students read the directions for
Practice3 and complete the task with a
Discuss students answers to question5. partner. Go over the answers.
Discuss why agreeing with some
counterarguments is usually a good
strategy. Subjunctive Mode (page154)
Have students read the second writing Go over the explanatory text. Point out that
model and then work with a partner or in a the verbs in subjunctive mode clauses take
small group to answer the questions about the base form (the infinitive without to).
the model. Go over the answers with the Provide some examples of subjunctive in
class. common idioms such as be that as it may,
come what may, truth be told, if need
Compare the opening paragraphs of the two be, and even God bless you.
models. Ask: How are they different? In

what ways, if any, are they similar?
EXTENSION:
Compare the tone (the authors attitude
To find more expressions, have students
toward the subject and audience) of the two
search on the Internet for examples of
essays. Ask: How are they different? Why
the subjunctive mode or formulaic
are they different?
subjunctive.

Have students read the directions for Concluding Paragraph (page160)
Practice4 and do the activity alone.
Go over the explanatory text.
ORGANIZATION (pages155160)
PLANNING YOUR ARGUMENT
Go over the explanatory text. (pages161163)
Block Organization (page156)
Go over the explanatory text. Knowing Your Audience (page161)
Emphasize that the first paragraph frames Go over the explanatory text. Emphasize
the issue. It describes what the controversy the concept of audience, providing
is and usually states both (or more) sides of examples of subject matter that most people
the issue. would agree with (e.g., lowering tuition), be
Emphasize that responding to neutral toward (e.g., rearranging the layout
counterarguments strengthens the writers of the room), and antagonistic toward (e.g.,
argument. Have students look at the religious and political issues).
examples. Have students read the directions for the
Try It Out! activity and complete the task.
Point-by-Point Organization Go over the answers.
(page157)
Go over the explanatory text. Responding to Counterarguments
(page162)
Emphasize that, as in block organization,
the first paragraph frames the issue. It Go over the explanatory text. Then have
describes what the controversy is and usually students work with a partner to identify the
states both (or more) sides of the issue. various responses to counterarguments in
the two models. Discuss the results.
The Introductory Paragraph(s) Have students read the directions for the
(page158) Try It Out! activity and complete the task
alone. Go over the answers.
Go over the explanatory text, including
the list of verbs used in framing an issue.
Discuss writers different attitudes toward PREPARATION FOR WRITING
the subject matter they express. (pages163165)
Have students read the directions for Have students read the introductory text.
Practice5, PartA and do the task alone.
Then have them read the directions for Finding Support for Your
Practice5, PartB and complete the activity Argument (page163)
with a partner. Go over the answers,
Go over the explanatory text. If necessary,
emphasizing how verbs reveal attitude.
review the discussions of research in
Refer students to the guides for framing an Chapters 4, 5, and 6. Go over the steps in
argument in Appendix A on pages193194. the process. Remind students of Boolean
search words.
Body Paragraphs (page159) Emphasize point 5: Keep an open mind.

Have students read the explanatory text and Students may change or modify their
the directions for Practice6. Have them opinions based on the evidence they
complete the task in a small group. Then go discover.
over the answers.

Research the Counterarguments Step 5: Do this task in class. Have students
(page164) read the instructions and go over the
Peer Review worksheet for Chapter8 on
Go over the explanatory text. Again,
page239 of the Student Book. Have them
emphasize the importance of keeping an
complete the task.
open mind. Explain that students can both
agree and disagree with an argument (i.e., Step 6: Read the instructions aloud and
they can accept parts of a counterargument go over the Chapter8 Writers Self-Check
while still pursuing their own claims). (page240). Have students do this step in
class or at home.
Have students read the directions for the
Try It Out! activity and complete the task Step 7: Have students read the instructions
with a partner. Then go over the answers. and then do this step in class or at home.
Have students read the introductory text Decide if you will give a letter grade.
SELF-ASSESSMENT (page167)
over the answers.
WRITING ASSIGNMENT (pages165167)
Have students read the introduction and students will practiceall the skills listed
possible topics. again and again in this book.
and then write a rough draft statement of EXPANSION (page168)
their position on the topic. Then have them
explore their topic, audience, and purpose. Timed Writing (page168)
Remind them not to censor their ideas. Read the instructions and the Writing Tip
They should write anything that comes to aloud. Remind students not to skip the
mind about the topic. prewriting step because it will help them
Variation: Do this step as a whole class, or write a better paper.
have students brainstorm with a partner. Read the prompt and have students begin
Step 2: Have students brainstorm. Go writing. Signal them when the suggested
over the Writing Tip. Collect the papers time for each step is up.
and check to make sure students have Collect the papers after 50 minutes.
understood this step of the writing process.
(Provide suggestions, but do not grade the Decide how you will mark students papers.
papers at this time.) Check the papers for unity and coherence,
as well as other criteria you select.
and then write a preliminary thesis
EXTENSION:
statement. Then have them prepare an
outline. Select all or parts of some paragraphs
and use them for a group evaluation and
and then write their first drafts in class

and check to make sure students have
grade this step.)

Taking the Opposite Position Analyzing the Model (page170)
(page168) Have students read the writing model and
Go over the directions and have students then work with a partner or in a small group
complete the task. to answer the questions about the model.
Go over the answers with the class. Look
specifically at the relationship between
citing sources in the body of the text and
if students write in their journals, the reader
in the list of works cited. Explain that,
essentially, the in-text citation lets readers
know the source, and the works cited
section provides the information necessary
essays to a blog, you may want to put them
to locate that source.
have students post their essays to a class !Noticing Vocabulary (page173)
website, decide if you will also require Go over the introductory text. Then have
students to respond to each others writing students read the directions for Practice1
in some way. and complete the task with a partner. Go
over the answers.
CHAPTER 9 EXTENSION:
Research Papers Have students use each antonym in a

sentence.
(pages169188)
CHAPTER OPENER (page169) ORGANIZATION (pages173176)

Point out that the theme of this chapter is Go over the introductory text.
the research paper. Then have students look
at the map and discuss what they know
Point-by-Point Organization
about accidents involving nuclear reactors.
(page174)
Have students read the objectives and
Go over the explanatory text. Explain
briefly discuss any unfamiliar terms. Ask
that point-by-point organization is more
students what they think point-by-point
commonly used than source-by-source
and source-by-source organizations mean.
organization. Explain that point-by-point
Ask them what they know about MLA and
organization tends to rely on transitional
APA formats. Do not try to explain these
expressions such as first, second, and so
ideasyet.
on. Emphasize, however, that a research
paper is a form of argument. Therefore, its
INTRODUCTION (pages170173) organization is more complex than simply
Go over the introductory text. Discuss listing main ideas. It must also respond to
the relationship of the earlier chapters to arguments.
the research paper; for example, discuss
summarizing, quoting, paraphrasing,
locating sources, writing arguments, and
synthesizing.

Source-by-Source Organization Have students brainstorm their own
(page174) questions to pursue in research. Work with
them to narrow or broaden the questions as
Go over the explanatory text. Explain that
necessary.
source-by-source organization tends to be
used when a source is analyzed in some Go over the next set of explanatory text
depth. Refer students to the discussion of about finding information from sources and
organization in Chapter5, page96. evaluating sources. Emphasize the criteria
for evaluating sources. If possible, provide
short examples of material that is out of
Practice2 and complete the task in a
date, not objective, emotional or angry in
small group. Have them discuss the genre
tone, or neutral in tone.
and also locate its thesis, topic sentences,
transitional devices, and use of citations. Variation: If possible examine some
Then go over the answers. headlines in newspapers, titles of articles,
or sample paragraphs that reveal particular
GRAMMAR (pages177178) biases.
Have students read the introductory text. Have students read the directions for
Practice6, PartsA and B. Have them
complete the tasks with a partner. Then
Sequence of Tenses (page177) have them do PartC in a small group. Go
Go over the explanatory text. Explain over the answers.
that the underlying principle behind the Go over the directions for the Try It Out!
sequence of tenses is that one event or activity. Have students complete the task at
action precedes another in time. Therefore, home.
the first action is stated in the present
tense and the second is in the future tense.
EXTENSION:
Likewise, a condition must be met before
another event or action is possible. So the Have students suggest other people in
condition is stated in the present tense, and history who might be described differently
the other event or action is stated in the depending on the source consulted.
future tense.
Have students read the directions for Developing an Effective Thesis
Practice3 and complete the task alone. Statement (page182)
Then go over the answers. Do the same for
Practice4. Have students read the explanatory text and
the directions for Practice7. Have them
complete the task in small groups. Then go
PREPARATION FOR WRITING over the answers.
(pages179185)
Go over the explanatory text. Review Documenting Research (page183)
basic research practices in Chapter4 on
page79 if necessary. Stress the importance Go over the explanatory text.
of pursuing the answer to a question in Have students read the directions for
students research. Go over the types of Practice8 and complete the task alone.
questions used in beginning research. Then go over the answers.
Go over the next set of explanatory text

Narrowing Your Focus (page179) about ways of citing sources. (Note:Refer
Go over the explanatory text. students to Appendix G on pages212220
for more information about MLA and APA
Have students read the directions for format.)
Practice5 and complete the activity in
small groups. Then go over the answers.

Variation: An excellent supplemental Step 5: Do this task in class. Have students
source for learning MLA or APA formatting read the instructions and go over the
is the Purdue Owl, which can be found Peer Review worksheet for Chapter9 on
online. page241 of the Student Book. Have them
complete the task.
EXTENSION: Step 6: Read the instructions aloud and
Have students do an Internet search for go over the Chapter9 Writers Self-Check
formatting engines to locate new or better (page242). Have students do this step in
ones. If possible, assign separate groups of class or at home.
students to try out each of the formatting Step 7: Have students read the instructions
engines. Also provide them with materials and then do this step in class or at home.
to plug into the formatting engines, such as Collect the papers and use the Writing
the front and second pageof newspapers Assignment Scoring Rubric on page47 of
and magazines, and the copyright pagein this Teachers Manual to evaluate them.
books or journals. Decide if you will give a letter grade.
Have students read the directions for the SELF-ASSESSMENT (page187)

Try It Out! activity. Have them complete Go over the Self-Assessment with the class.
the task alone. Collect students papers and See options for using the Self-Assessment
review them. on page6 of this manual. Point out that
!Applying Vocabulary (page185) again and again in this book.
and the directions for Practice9. Then have EXPANSION (page188)
them complete the task with a partner. Go
over the answers. Timed Writing (page188)
Read the instructions aloud. Remind
WRITING ASSIGNMENT (pages186187) students not to skip the prewriting step
because it will help them write better
Have students read the introduction. paragraphs.
Step 1: Have students read the instructions Have students begin writing. Signal them
and then explore their topic, audience, and when the suggested time for each step is up.
ideas. Collect the papers after 55 minutes.
Step 2: Have students read the instructions Decide how you will mark students papers.
and then prewrite. Collect the papers Check the papers for unity and coherence,
and check to make sure students have as well as other criteria you select.
(Provide suggestions, but do not grade the EXTENSION:
papers at this time.) Select all or parts of some paragraphs
Step 3: Have students read the instructions and use them for a group evaluation and
and then complete the task. correction activity. Include both excellent

and then write their first drafts in class
or at home. Go over the Writing Tip. If
desired, collect the papers and check to
make sure students have understood this
step of the writing process. (Again, provide
suggestions, but do not grade this step.)

Evaluating Sources (page188)
Go over the directions and have students
complete the task.
if students write in their journals, the reader
essays to a blog, you may want to put them
website, decide if you will also require
in some way.

WRITING
ASSIGNMENT
SCORING RUBRICS
38
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CHAPTER 1: EXPOSITORY ESSAYS
Writing Assignment Scoring Rubric
THE ESSAY . . . YOUR MAXIMUM

SCORE SCORE
1. . . . fits the assignment. It discusses your earlier 15

experiences with writing.
2. . . . is based on prewriting (freewriting or 5

brainstorming) and outlining.
3. . . . has been revised at least once. 5
4. . . . is at least five paragraphs. 10
5. . . . includes a clear thesis statement that makes a 10

supportable claim.
6. . . . includes a topic sentence that establishes the 10

controlling idea (the claim) of each body paragraph.
7. . . . develops and supports its claims. 10
8. . . . includes clear transitions and a strong 10

conclusion.
2014 by Pearson Education, Inc. Duplication for classroom use is permitted.

9. . . . correctly uses articles. 10
10. . . . uses correct spelling, grammar, and punctuation. 15
TOTAL 100
Comments:
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NAME: DATE:
CHAPTER 2: CLASSIFICATION ESSAYS

SCORE SCORE
1. . . . fits the assignment. It classifies a type of behavior 15

based on a survey.
2. . . . bases its classification on a single criterion. 10
3. . . . is at least five paragraphs, with an introduction, 10

body, and conclusion.

supportable claim.
5. . . . includes a topic sentence for each body 15

paragraph, which establishes the controlling idea (the
claim about each category).
6. . . . develops and supports its claims with details, 10

examples, or statistics.
7. . . . is arranged in logical order. 5
8. . . . establishes unity and coherence with clear 10

transitions.

9. . . . correctly uses quantifiers. 5
TOTAL 100
Comments:
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CHAPTER 3: PROCESS ESSAYS

SCORE SCORE
1. . . . fits the assignment. It explains the process 15

involved in an imaginary experiment and reports on
its results.
2. . . . includes all the materials needed and the steps 15

involved to complete the process.
3. . . . includes an introduction, body, and conclusion. 10

supportable claim.
5. . . . presents each step in a logical order and 10

introduces the steps with a topic sentence.
6. . . . develops the explanations with details, examples, 5

or data.
7. . . . contains no unnecessary details from the original 5

text.
8. . . . uses clear transitions between the steps of the 10

process.

9. . . . avoids run-on and comma-spliced sentences, 10
choppy sentences, and stringy sentences.
TOTAL 100
Comments:
NAME: DATE:
CHAPTER 4: CAUSE / EFFECT ESSAYS

SCORE SCORE
1. . . . fits the assignment. It explains the causes or 15

effects of a historical event that relates to you, your
family, or others.
2. . . . distinguishes between causes and effects. 10
3. . . . uses either block or chain organization. 10

supportable claim.

paragraph, which establishes the controlling idea or
claim.
6. . . . supports each claim with quotations, surveys, 15

examples, or explanations.
7. . . . uses appropriate sources. 5
8. . . . uses transitions for unity and coherence. 10

9. . . . correctly uses parallel structures to create 5
symmetry.
10. . . . uses correct spelling, grammar, and punctuation, 10

especially of quotations.
TOTAL 100
Comments:
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CHAPTER 5: EXTENDED DEFINITION ESSAYS

SCORE SCORE
1. . . . fits the assignment. It defines a term or concept. 15
2. . . . creates the definition using synonyms, negation, 10

and formal statements.
3. . . . is clearly organized. 10

supportable claim.

paragraph and clear transitions throughout.
6. . . . expands on and supports a definition with 15

quotations, surveys, examples, or explanations.
7. . . . uses paraphrases correctly. 5
8. . . . integrates quotations and paraphrases. 10

9. . . . correctly uses noun and adjective clauses. 5

TOTAL 100
Comments:
NAME: DATE:
CHAPTER 6: PROBLEM / SOLUTION ESSAYS

SCORE SCORE
1. . . . fits the assignment. It states a problem related to 15

education and proposes a solution.
2. . . . synthesizes information from different sources. 10
3. . . . correctly introduces different sources and uses 10

different verbs when talking about the sources.
4. . . . is clearly organized. 10

supportable claim.
6. . . . establishes a clear transition between the 10

presentation of the problem and the solution.

paragraph and additional clear transitions
throughout.
8. . . . develops the solution with details, explanations, 10

and examples.

9. . . . correctly uses adverbial clauses and phrases. 5

TOTAL 100
Comments:
NAME: DATE:
CHAPTER 7: SUMMARY / RESPONSE ESSAYS

SCORE SCORE
1. . . . fits the assignment. It is a summary and response 15

essay related to culture.
2. . . . summarizes the original material concisely and 15

presents an original, logical response.
3. . . . establishes the summary in the opening 10

paragraph.

supportable claim in the response.
5. . . . establishes a clear transition between the 5

summary and the response.

7. . . . supports its claims with details, data, examples, 10

and explanations.
8. . . . uses short quotations, paraphrases, and examples 10

from the original material as support.

9. . . . uses passive and active voices appropriately. 5

TOTAL 100
Comments:
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CHAPTER 8: ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAYS

SCORE SCORE
1. . . . fits the assignment. It constructs an argument on 15

a controversial topic.
2. . . . states its arguments clearly. 10
3. . . . states and rebuts the targeted audiences 10

counterarguments effectively.
4. . . . uses clear block or point-to-point organization. 10
5. . . . frames the issue in the opening paragraph and 10

includes a clear thesis statement of its position.

7. . . . supports its claims with information, data, 15

and quotations and paraphrases based largely on
research.
8. . . . is formatted correctly. 5

9. . . . uses modal verbs, phrasal modals, and the 10
subjunctive mode correctly.

TOTAL 100
Comments:
NAME: DATE:
CHAPTER 9: RESEARCH PAPERS
THE PAPER . . . YOUR MAXIMUM

SCORE SCORE
1. . . . fits the assignment. It presents a coherent 15

argument based on research.
2. . . . synthesizes material from varied and appropriate 15

sources.
3. . . . correctly uses either MLA or APA format to cite 10

sources.
4. . . . is formatted correctly and is at least five pages 5

long.
5. . . . uses clear point-by-point or source-by-source 10

organization.
6. . . . establishes its position in a clear thesis statement 10

and includes a topic sentence for each body
paragraph as well as clear transitions throughout.
7. . . . supports its claims with information, data, and 10

quotations and paraphrases based on research.
8. . . . includes a correctly formatted works cited page. 10

9. . . . uses the sequence of tenses correctly. 10
TOTAL 100
Comments:
CHAPTER QUIZZES
48
NAME: DATE:
CHAPTER 1 QUIZ
A. Fill in the blanks using words from the box.
brainstorming introduction freewriting body

thesis conclusion topic clustering
1. Three parts of the essay that are important for organization are:
, , and .
2. Three ways to discover and explore ideas include ,
, and .
3. An essays specific topic is introduced in a statement.
4. Each controlling idea of a paragraph is usually stated in a
sentence.
B. Write T if an item is true. Write F if it is false.

1. One of the most efficient ways to organize ideas is an outline.
2. You should not revise your first draft.
3. No two writers work in exactly the same way.
4. A strong conclusion should add new ideas and information.
5. Articles appear before verbs and pronouns.
C. Add the correct negative prefix (dis-, im-, in-, il-, ir-) to the adjectives.
1. logical
2. practical
3. relevant

4. possible
5. complete
6. agreeable
D. Write the correct article to complete each sentence.

1. There is bird singing outside my window.
2. How did you do on test we took yesterday?
3. Do you have pencil I can borrow?
4. I think Ill have apple for lunch.
5. conclusion to your essay was weak.
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CHAPTER 2 QUIZ
A. Fill in the blanks using words from the box.
body paragraphs coherence one unity

categories criterion survey
1. A classification places things, people, or ideas into .

2. A classification is based on a single .
3. One way to gather information about peoples behavior is to conduct a
.
4. When all the ideas in a paragraph support the topic sentence, the paragraph has
.
5. Transition signals help establish in a paragraph.
6. A classification essay, like all essays, includes an introductory paragraph,
, and a concluding paragraph.
7. All sentences in a paragraph must discuss just main idea.
B. Choose the best word to complete each sentence.

1. Most Amish live in only a few states. (Furthermore, / However,) some have moved to
other states to find cheaper farmland.
2. The Amish help each other in times of need. (Also, / For example,) they will help with
chores when someone becomes sick.
3. They are opposed to all forms of violence. (Specifically, / Therefore,) they will not fight in
a war.
4. Amish children do not attend high school (because of / in spite of) the parents concern

that they not be exposed to worldly influences.
5. Not (much / many) editing is needed.
6. Most of the sentences are clear, but ( few / a few) need some editing.
7. A large (amount / number) of errors were found in revision.
8. (A little / Little) good writing occurs in a noisy environment.
(continued on next page)

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CHAPTER 2 QUIZ (continued from previous page)
C. Correct five errors in collocations in the following sentences. Make corrections.
1. The life of the Amish is based off a strong community.
2. Their behavior revolves on shared values.
3. Many tourists pass by Amish communities to observe their way of life.
4. Amish believe on strong family bonds.
5. Most activities happen in place in the home.

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CHAPTER 3 QUIZ
A. Write T if an item is true. Write F if it is false.
1. Process essays explain how to do something.
2. It is not necessary to indicate the purpose of the process essay.
3. The steps in a process essay can be presented in any type of order, depending on
the purpose.
4. Typical transitions in a process essay include to begin, next, and finally.
5. Describing how to make cookies is a type of process essay.
6. The essay should list the parts or ingredients needed at or near the end so that
people will not forget them.
7. The conclusion in a process essay may indicate implications in a larger context.
B. Correct the run-on or comma-spliced sentences. One sentence is correct.

1. A scientific experiment includes many steps these must be repeated by other scientists.
2. To begin with, the experimenter must state a hypothesis, then it can be tested in the
experiment.
3. Every experiment must include two groups, a control group and an experimental group,
which contains a variable.
4. Regular exercise may help prevent a heart attack, however, many more factors contribute

to prevention.

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C. Rewrite the choppy and stringy sentences.

1. The scientific method consists of measurements and observations. They are repeatable by
other scientists.
2. Mice are used in laboratory experiments. Other animals are used in some cases.
3. (use although) Heart disease is the leading cause of death. Cancer is the second leading
cause. Both may be treatable in many cases.
4. Some people dont get enough exercise and overeat, and as a result they get heart disease,
so they should change their lifestyles.
D. Make each word plural.

1. criterion
2. parenthesis
3. curriculum
4. analysis
5. datum

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CHAPTER 4 QUIZ
A. Indicate whether each word introduces a cause or effect.

1. due to
2. originate
3. result in
4. reasons
5. consequence
6. lead to
B. Label the phrasal verbs as S (separable) or I (inseparable).

1. depend on
2. open up
3. come back
4. bring about
5. agree on
C. Underline the part of each sentence that is not parallel.
1. People come to the United States to seek political or religious freedom, pursue an
education, or because they want a job.
2. The cause of the disaster was inadequate preparation, they failed to maintain the
facilities and systems, and poor supervision.
3. The job was difficult, dangerous, and a challenge to everyone.
4. They went out to get food, stopped at the library, and seeing a movie.

5. He was worried about being able to use his computer and get enough food to eat once
he left the country.
D. Find 15 errors in capitalization and punctuation. Make corrections.
1. Abraham Lincoln said a house divided against itself cannot stand.
2. When a man assumes public trust wrote Thomas Jefferson he should consider himself
public property.
3. Benjamin Franklin wrote three may keep a secret if two of them are dead.
4. Keep your eyes wide open before marriage, half shut afterwards added Franklin.

NAME: DATE:
CHAPTER 5 QUIZ
A. Fill in the blanks with words from the box.
circular paraphrase statement of denition too vague

formal plagiarism synonyms
negation similar too broad
1. According to the chapter, three ways to define a term include

, , and .
2. A synonym has a meaning to the term being defined.
3. Avoid these potential problems with formulating definitions: do not make them
, , or .
4. occurs when a is too similar to the
original.
B. Combine the sentences using noun clauses or adjective clauses. In most cases,
replace a pronoun with a relative pronoun such as that, who, which, what, when, or
where. Use commas where required.
1. Language is a form of communication. It works through the use of symbols.
2. Most children begin to speak between the ages of one to two. Most also learn to walk.
3. Charles Darwin was born in 1809. He wrote The Origin of Species.
4. The book caused a great deal of controversy. It was published in 1859.

5. The ability to communicate is located in the cerebral cortex. The elements of language are
located there.
6. Most linguists believe something. We are born with the instinctive ability to learn any
language.

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C. Circle the best synonym for each word.

1. concept
a. theory b. opinion c. dream
2. capacity
a. shape b. weight c. ability
3. immutable
a. quiet b. unchangeable c. remarkable
4. evolution
a. differences b. change c. better
5. origin
a. ending b. middle c. beginning
6. acquire
a. find b. get c. lend

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D. Read the original passage. Then read the paraphrases and decide which one is
the best. Label it Best. Label the others as Too sim. (too similar), No cit. (no in-text
citation), or Inc. / Inacc. (incomplete or inaccurate information).
Original Passage
Unlike the language of animals, which can express only a limited number of things, human
language is open-ended. That is, human beings can express an infinite number of ideas in
virtually an infinite number of ways. Human language also differs from the languages of
animals in that it is governed by grammar. Typically, a grammar includes parts of speech
(nouns, verbs, adjectives, and adverbs), tense (past, present, future) or aspect (a continuing or
completed action), number (singular or plural), and gender (masculine, feminine, or neuter).
While our understanding of how animals communicate is still very limited, we doubt that any
species has as sophisticated a communication system as humans. (Meyers, A.)
1. According to A. Meyers, human language differs from the

language of animals in that it conveys an unlimited number of
ideas in virtually an infinite number of ways. Unlike the language
of animals, human language is also governed by grammar, which
includes parts of speech, tense, aspect, number, and gender.
Although we do not know a lot about how animals communicate,
we doubt that any species has as sophisticated a system of
communication as humans have.
2. Human language, which conveys an unlimited number of ideas,
clearly differs from the language of animals, whose ability to
communicate appears to be far less sophisticated. Furthermore,
humans can express these ideas in almost any way imaginable.
They are limited only by the rules of grammar, which, as far as we
know at present, animals do not seem to possess. (Meyers, A.)

3. A respected author claims that human language is very different
from the language of animals, although we do not know very
much about the latter. We do know that our languages allow us to
communicate any concept in virtually any way we wish, provided
that it follows the rules of grammar.
4. A. Meyers claims that humans are unique in that they can
communicate any idea any way they want through language.
Animals do not have grammar and so cannot really communicate.

NAME: DATE:
CHAPTER 6 QUIZ

1. A problem / solution essay begins by explaining why a problem is important.
2. In a problem / solution essay, the thesis statement does not occur in the first
paragraph, but instead begins the discussion of the solution.
3. An explicit transition should introduce the solution.
4. Everyone will agree that the topic discussed in the essay is a problem.
5. An adverb may be a phrase or an entire clause.
6. A dangling modifier attaches itself to the adverbial clause in a sentence.
B. Indicate whether the sources agree or disagree.
1. According to Prevent Bullying (stopbullying.gov), a schools first step in preventing

bullying is to conduct an assessment to determine the frequency and location of bullying,
who intervenes, and the effectiveness of intervention. Likewise, Bullying Prevention: Tips
for Teachers, Principals and Parents (edutopia.org) recommends beginning with a survey of
students, parents, teachers, and staff to assess the same information.
2. Stopbullying.gov emphasizes the importance of not labeling children. They should not be
called bullies or victims because these labels suggest that their behavior cannot change,
and they ignore other factors such as the climate of the school and the influence of peers. The
American Psychological Association labels, or at least defines, both bullies and victims, and
adds several other categories, including bully-victims, whose behavior tends to elicit negative
reactions from many in the classroom, and the teacher often dislikes them also. These labels,
however, seem to describe personality traits so that they can be addressed.

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C. Rewrite the sentences, changing the clause to a phrase. Use the word, phrase, or
word form in parentheses.
1. (upon) When people see an act of bullying, they must intervene to stop it.
2. (-ing) Before the problem gets out of control, it must be stopped in the early stages.
3. (if a victim) If a child is a victim of bullying, he may become a bully himself.
4. (lacking) Because bullies lack self-confidence, they try to build their esteem by verbally
abusing others.
D. Find the dangling modifier in each of the following sentences. Then rewrite the
sentence to eliminate the lack of clarity.
1. Recognizing the seriousness of the problem, steps must be taken by teachers to control it.
2. Talking to a student, it may be very helpful.
3. After reading the questions on the exam, answering them clearly is essential.

4. Upon seeing the menu items, they look very healthy.
5. The movie is a prime example of the comedy style seen in the 1950s by one of our
countrys greatest directors.
6. With years of experience in the field, you can expect solid investigative skills from this
group of journalists.

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CHAPTER 7 QUIZ

1. A summary may include your opinion of some details.
2. A summary must identify the author and the title of the original.
3. A summary should be limited to key points.
4. The transition to the response can appear at the end of the summary.
5. The response never includes the words I or me.
6. The response expresses your own opinions and arguments; therefore, it should not
cite examples or quotations from the material on which the summary is based.
B. Label the following statements O (objective) or S (subjective).

1. Richard Rodriguez is a famous author, journalist, and social commentator.
2. His parents foolishly did not speak to him in English when he was young.
3. According to the essay, Rodriguezs parents could have exposed him to both their
native and adoptive cultures.
4. Rodriguez was terrified by the language of Gringos.
C. Rewrite each sentence using the active voice.

1. Rodriguez was often praised by his teacher.
2. The work will be read by a committee.
3. Cheating is not tolerated at the university.
4. The rules have been changed by the administration.

5. Your homework should have been done by now.
D. Write the corresponding noun, verb, or adjective forms.

1. calculation (change to verb)
2. converse (change to noun )
3. application (change to verb )
4. devote (change to adjective)
5. acquisition (change to adjective)

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CHAPTER 8 QUIZ
antagonistic concede counterargument introduces rebuts
1. An argument contains both your viewpoint and a rebuttal of the

.
2. In block organization, the first group of body paragraphs introduces the opposing
arguments and them. The second group of body paragraphs
presents the writers argument.
3. In point-by-point organization, the first paragraph the issue,
explaining the controversy behind it.
4. In general, an audience may be supportive, neutral, or .
5. One way to respond to an argument is to a point but disagree
nonetheless.
B. Choose the best word to complete each sentence.

1. Despite other peoples desire to accept the studys conclusions, Dr. Smith
(states / maintains / indicates) that more research is needed.
2. Although he has no proof, Mr. Williams (implies / insists / indicates) that the food additive
is completely safe.
3. Of course, many people therefore (support / question / imply) the validity of
Mr.Williamss claim.
4. Whenever possible, scientists (could / should) avoid using animals in research.

5. The new research is promising and (could / can) possibly lead to new treatments
ofdisease.
6. There are a number of ways that the drug (should / can) be thoroughly tested and
provensafe.
7. In the next decade, a treatment for the disease (might / must) be proven effective, but none
is available now.
8. Exposure to highly radioactive material can be fatal. You (might / must) not go near the
site of the explosion.

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C. Complete each sentence with an appropriate and logical phrasal modal. Include the
word in parentheses.
1. (have) Dont worry about completing all the work. You not
finish it today.
2. (likely) The results have been good. We use this new product
soon.
3. (better) This device is very dangerous. You very careful.
D. Complete each sentence in the subjunctive.

1. We recommend that he hired for the position.
2. I insist that Mr. Wilson immediately.
3. I demand that she not late again!
4. Before the drug is approved for use, we recommend that it
further.

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CHAPTER 9 QUIZ
authors reputation currency humanities the sciences

block debatable point-by-point tone
1. Organization in which each body paragraph discusses several sources is called

organization.
2. Organization in which each body paragraph examines a single source is called
organization.
3. Three key criteria for evaluating sources are ,
, and .
4. An effective thesis statement should take a position.
5. The MLA format for documentation is used primarily for research done in the liberal
arts and , such as literature, philosophy, and art.
6. The APA format for documentation is used primarily for research done in
.
B. Label the following thesis statements E (effective) or I (ineffective).

1. This paper will discuss immigration in the twentieth century.
2. The use of chemical fertilizers on fruit and vegetables may be dangerous to our
health.
3. While the issue is still controversial, the evidence suggests that continued
hydraulic fracking for natural gas will greatly benefit the economies of the
United States and Canada.

C. Label whether each in-text citation method is correct (C) or incorrect (I).
1. Walter Isaacson (2003, Benjamin Franklin: An American Life) said, Franklin
was among the first to view British settlements in America not only as separate
colonies but also as part of a potentially unified nation
2. Simple logic says there can be no learning without innate mechanisms to do the
learning (Pinker 2002, 101).
3. Michael Pollan (2006) says, To one degree or another, the question of what to
have for dinner assails every omnivore, and always has (3).
4. As Melville wrote in Moby Dick, Never did those sweet words sound more
sweetly to me than then.

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D. Write the correct form of the verb in parentheses.

1. After the nuclear plant (be) declared safe, it
(resume) operation.
2. If a product (be) unpopular, the manufacturer
(stop) producing it.
3. Once the product (exceed) its expiration date, it
(remove) from the stores shelves.
4. Michael Pollan (describe) how the food industry impacts
ourchoices.
5. Assessing the current state of health in our country, scientists found that the availability
of too many fatty foods (cause) an obesity epidemic.
6. Throughout the years, researchers (develop) some key
strategies to help us stay healthier.
7. Scientists are continually (examine) the effects of human
society on the state of the world.

CHAPTER QUIZ
ANSWER KEY
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CHAPTER QUIZ ANSWER KEY
CHAPTER 1 QUIZ 2. To begin with, the experimenter must state
a hypothesis, and then it can be tested. OR
A. 1. introduction, body, conclusion (these items To begin with, the experimenter must state
can be in any order) a hypothesis, which then can be tested. OR
2. brainstorming, freewriting, clustering (these To begin with, the experimenter must state a
items can be in any order) hypothesis; then it can be tested.
3. thesis 3. correct
4. topic 4. Regular exercise may help prevent a heart
B. 1. T 2. F 3. T 4. F 5. F attack; however, many more factors contribute
to prevention. OR Regular exercise may help
C. 1. illogical
prevent a heart attack. However, many more
2. impractical
factors contribute to prevention.
3. irrelevant
4. impossible C. Answers will vary. Possible answers include:
5. incomplete 1. The scientific method consists of
6. disagreeable measurements and observations, which are
repeatable by other scientists.
D. 1. a 2. the 3. a 4. an 5. The
2. Mice are used in laboratory experiments, but
other animals are used in some cases.
3. Although heart disease is the leading cause of
CHAPTER 2 QUIZ death and cancer is the second leading cause,
A. 1. categories both may be treatable in many cases.
2. criterion 4. Some people dont get enough exercise
3. survey and overeat, and, as a result, they get heart
4. unity disease. Therefore, they should change their
5. coherence lifestyles.
6. body paragraphs
D. 1. criteria
7. one
2. parentheses
B. 1. However, 3. curricula
2. For example, 4. analyses
3. Therefore, 5. data
4. because of
5. much
6. a few CHAPTER 4 QUIZ
7. number
A. 1. cause 4. cause
8. Little
2. cause 5. effect
C. 1. based on 3. effect 6. cause
2. revolves around
3. pass through B. I 1. depend on
4. believe in
5. take place S 2. open up
I 3. come back
CHAPTER 3 QUIZ
I 4. bring about
A. 1. T 2. F 3. F 4. T 5. T 6. F 7. T
B. Answers will vary. Possible answers include: I 5. agree on

1. A scientific experiment includes many steps,
which must be repeated by other scientists. C. 1. People come to the United States to seek
OR A scientific experiment includes many political or religious freedom, pursue an
steps. These steps must be repeated by education, or because they want a job.
other scientists. OR A scientific experiment 2. The cause of the disaster was inadequate
includes many steps, and these must be preparation, they failed to maintain the
repeated by other scientists. facilities and systems, and poor supervision.
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3. The job was difficult, dangerous, and a CHAPTER 6 QUIZ
challenge to everyone.
4. They went out to get food, stopped at the A. 1. T 2. T 3. T 4. F 5. T 6. F
library, and seeing a movie. B. 1. agree 2. disagree
5. He was worried about being able to use his
C. Answers will vary. Possible answers include:
computer and get enough food to eat once he
1. Upon seeing an act of bullying, people must
left the country.
intervene to stop it.
A
D. 1. Abraham Lincoln said a house divided against 2. Before getting out of control, the problem
, must be stopped in the early stages.
itself cannot stand. 3. If a victim of bullying, a child may become a
2. When a man assumes public trustwrote
bully himself.
, 4. Lacking self-confidence, bullies try to build

Thomas Jeffersonhe should consider himself
, their esteem by verbally abusing others.
public property. D. Answers will vary. Possible answers include:
3.
Three
Benjamin Franklin wrote three may keep a
1. Recognizing the seriousness of the problem,
, teachers must take steps to control it.
secret if two of them are dead. 2. Talking to a student may be very helpful.
3. After reading the questions on the exam, you
4. Keep your eyes wide open before marriage,
must answer them clearly.

half shut afterwardsadded Franklin. 4. Upon seeing the menu items, she thinks they
,
look very healthy.
5. The movie, by one of our countrys greatest
CHAPTER 5 QUIZ directors, is a prime example of the comedy
A. 1. synonym, formal statement of definition, style seen in the 1950s.
negation (these terms can be in any order) 6. This group of journalists has years of
2. similar experience in the field, so you can expect that
3. too broad, too vague, circular (these terms they have solid investigative skills.
can be in any order)
4. Plagiarism, paraphrase
CHAPTER 7 QUIZ
B. Answers will vary. Possible answers include:
1. Language is a form of communication that A. 1. F 4. T
works through the use of symbols. 2. T 5. F
2. Most children begin to speak between the 3. T 6. F
ages of one to two, when most also learn B. 1. O 2. S 3. O 4. O
towalk.
3. Charles Darwin, who was born in 1809, wrote
1. Rodriguezs teacher often praised him.
The Origin of Species. OR Charles Darwin,
2. A committee will read the work.
who wrote The Origin of Species, was born
3. The university does not tolerate cheating.
in1809.
4. The administration has changed the rules.
4. The book, which was published in 1859,
5. You should have done your homework
caused a great deal of controversy.
bynow.
5. The ability to communicate is located in
the cerebral cortex, where the elements of D. 1. calculate
language are located. 2. conversation
6. Most linguists believe that we are born with 3. apply
the instinctive ability to learn any language. 4. devoted
5. acquisitive
C. 1. a 2. c 3. b 4. b 5. c 6. b
D. 1. Too sim.
2. Best CHAPTER 8 QUIZ
3. No cit.
A. 1. counterargument
4. Inc. / Innac.
2. rebuts
3. introduces
4. antagonistic
5. concede
B. 1. maintains
2. insists
3. question
4. should
5. could
6. can
7. might
8. must
1. You do not have to finish it today.
2. We are likely to use this new product soon.
3. You had better be very careful.
D. Answers will vary. Possible answers include:
1. be
2. stop
3. arrive
4. be tested
CHAPTER 9 QUIZ
A. 1. block
2. point-by-point
3. currency, tone, authors reputation (these
items can be in any order)
4. debatable
5. humanities
6. the sciences
B. 1. I 2. E 3. E
C. 1. I 2. C 3. C 4. I
D. 1. is, will resume
2. is, will stop
3. exceeds, will be removed
4. describes
5. has caused
6. have developed
7. examining
STUDENT BOOK
ANSWER KEY
69
STUDENT BOOK ANSWER KEY
CHAPTER 1 (pages120) PRACTICE 7: Narrowing a Topic
(page12)
Questions about the Model (page4) Answers will vary.
Answers will vary. Possible answers include:
1. The writer places the reader in the context PRACTICE 8: Writing Freely (page14)
of beginning to write a paper and provides Answers will vary.
examples of questions that someone writing a
paper might ask. PRACTICE 9: Brainstorming about
2. The final sentence in Paragraph 1 is the thesis Language (page15)
statement. Answers will vary.
3. Planners and discoverers
4. Four: freewriting, brainstorming, clustering, and PRACTICE 10: Creating a Cluster
outlining Diagram (page15)
5. The first sentence of each paragraph after Answers will vary.
Paragraph 1
6. To demonstrate that even professional writers
must experiment with and revise their work.
Try It Out! (page16)
Answers will vary.
7. To remind the reader of idea expressed in the
first sentence of the introduction. This question
gives the essay a sense of completion (or PRACTICE 11: Writing Sentences with
symmetry) as it returns to the beginning at the Negative Adjectives (page18)
end. Answers will vary.
PRACTICE 1: Forming Negative Complete the Personal Essay (page20)

Adjectives (page5) The following essay is an example of a reflective
introduction for a students portfolio. It may also
B 2. impossible 3. disorganized 4. incomplete serve as a model of a personal essay on a students
5. irrelevant 6. illogical 7. uncensored writing practices, the topic of the expansion in
Chapter 1.
PRACTICE 2: Narrowing Thesis What Ive Learned in This Class
Statements (page6) Heloisa Costa Ramos
Answers will vary. I have faced many challenges in writing this
semester, but I believe that I have also made great
PRACTICE 3: Generating Topic progress in meeting these challenges.
Sentences (page7) For example, the most difficult part of writing for
Answers will vary. me has always been getting started. I usually find
myself staring at a blank piece of paper for long
PRACTICE 4: Evaluating Conclusions periods of time, searching for ideas, before being
able to write anything at all. In the beginning, I have
(page8)
no idea what I want to say, but as I go over the ideas
2. b. 3. a. 4. a. 5. a. 6. b.
in my head, new thoughts will come into focus.
Something I learned this semester has helped
PRACTICE 5: Choosing the Correct me to overcome the delay in getting started. I now
Article (page10) realize that no first draft is ever a good draft and that
2. a 3. the 4. the 5. a, a 6. the, an its sometimes better to not think too hard or worry
7. the, a 8. the, the about it. The most important thing at this point in
the process is to develop the structure of the essay
PRACTICE 6: Adding Articles (page11) and write out all my ideas and opinions. Probably
1. The 2. 3. The 4. 5. 6. a the first draft will have many ideas that will prove
7. 8. an 9. The 10. a 11. The to be irrelevant in the final draft. Thats because I
12. The 13. 14. The have learned the importance of cutting out the excess
details. In my first essay, for example, I detailed the
Longman Academic Writing Series 5, Teachers Manual Student Book Answer Key 70
events well, but included more in the paper than was church in the 1600s and settled in Pennsylvania
necessary. around 1727.
On the other hand, I have also learned to make 3. Their society is based on small farms and a way
the paper more clear and specific at some points as of living that is virtually unchanged from 300
I revise. I have learned to develop and support my years ago.
claims with examples, details, and things I found 4. The foundation of these values is religion,
from research. In my second essay, for example, obedience, and discipline.
Irealized that even though I had many good 5. Government and community traditions based on
points, I did not provide enough evidence to prove shared values
them all and needed to supply more. During the 6. His attitude seems objective. The essay includes
in-class discussion on the topic, students all had the a lot of facts stated in the third person, and the
opportunity to express many different opinions, and writer does not use opinion adjectives in his
that seemed to have an effect on how I thought about descriptions.
the issue. Some of my views changed completely, 7. a. rural farming; b. religion, simplicity, and
and I had a much clearer idea of what I wanted to obedience; c. government and community
write in the essay. All I had to do was organize my traditions; d. focus on family values and
main ideas and support them. After that assignment, rejection of violence; e. equality of the work of
I realized that first of all you must be confident in men and women
your opinions on a subject and that you need to
explain them clearly and without digressions. PRACTICE 1: Finding and Completing
The hardest thing about this class for me had Collocations (page25)
been writing with proper English and grammar.
Ive been studying English for only two years, A 2. believe in
and the grammar is completely different from the 3. pass through
grammar of Portuguese, which is my first language. 4. horse-drawn buggies
I have to edit my papers more carefully in the later 5. revolve around
drafts. I am more critical of my sentence structure 6. pitch in
and grammar, and I see that by writing clearly 7. take place
and directly, I can make my essay more powerful. 8. drive up
I did my very best in trying not to make many 9. way of life
grammatical mistakes by revising my essays over 10. go to great lengths
and over again. I think I learned something new in B 1. believe in
every class this semester. I increased my vocabulary 2. pass through
and learned from my mistakes. 3. revolves around
To summarize, during this past semester I feel 4. pitched in
that I have learned a lot of the techniques required to 5. way of life
become a better writer and feel much more confident
in my writing abilities as well. I now have a better PRACTICE 2: Establishing Coherence
understanding of how to organize my ideas so that with Transitions (page30)
its not so difficult to start writing or to follow my 2. also 3. For example, However
ideas through to their logical conclusions. My major 4. On the other hand 5. However
is journalism, so writing is very important to me. I
look forward to continuing to learn how to become a
PRACTICE 3: Using Quantiers (page32)
better writer as I take more classes.
A 2. many of 3. fewer 4. little 5. a great
number 6. few 7. most 8. a few
CHAPTER 2 (pages2140) B Answers will vary.
Questions about the Model (page24) PRACTICE 4: Gathering and Reporting

Answers will vary. Possible answers include: on Information (page34)

1. To describe the practices and beliefs of the Old Answers will vary.
Order Amish
2. One of the best examples of a unique self-
contained community in the United States is the
PRACTICE 5: Working with a Survey
Old Order Amish, members of a religious group (page35)
that broke away from the Swiss Mennonite Answers will vary.
PRACTICE 6: Writing a Thesis PRACTICE 1: Singular and Plural
Statement (page35) Forms of Irregular Nouns (page45)
Answers will vary. 1. bacterium, bacteria 2. datum, data
1. analysis, analyses 2. hypothesis, hypotheses
Try It Out! (page36) 3. basis, bases
Answers will vary. 1. phenomenon, phenomena
1. genetics 2. statistics
PRACTICE 7: Writing Collocations
(page37) PRACTICE 2: Outlining the Model
Answers will vary. (page48)
Answers will vary.
CHAPTER 3 (pages4163) PRACTICE 3: Correcting Run-ons and

Comma Splices (page50)
Questions about the Model (page44) A 1. RO 2. CS 3. CS 4. CS 5. C 6. C
1. Nonscientists 7. CS 8. C
2. The last sentence of Paragraph 1: The scientific
method therefore creates a continual, self- B Answers will vary. Possible answers include:
correcting cycle of investigation and analysis 1. The scientific method involves six steps, and
involving six steps. each is important.
3. There are six steps. [Paragraph 2] The first 2. One group in an experiment includes a
step in the scientific method therefore poses a variable; the other is called the control group.
question that an experiment might answer. . . . 3. They must be alike in every other way.
Then, scientists can proceed to the second step Otherwise, the results of the experiment will
in the scientific method. [Paragraph 3] The third not be valid.
step requires setting up a controlled experiment 4. After establishing a timeline for the
to test the hypothesis using animals instead of experiment, the researchers gather data every
humans . . . [Paragraph 4] Having established week from each group.
the control and experimental groups, the 7. The results of the experiment are published,
researchers would now move on to the fourth and then other scientists can conduct further
step: conducting the experiment. [Paragraph5] experiments.
At the end of the specified time period, the
scientists could move on to fifth step, analyzing PRACTICE 4: Combining Choppy
the results. [Paragraph 6] The data would not Sentences (page52)
prove the original hypothesis, but once the Answers will vary. Possible answers include:
results had been written up and publishedthe 2. Many American children eat unhealthy food and
sixth step in the experimentthe findings would do not get enough exercise.
form the basis for repeating the experiment and 3. Many children wont eat healthy food because
conducting further experiments. they dont like the way it tastes.
4. It shows that the third step is completed. 4. People watch too much television, spend too
5. Experiments on the relationship between much time on computers and cells phones, and
weight loss and decrease in heart disease, and dont get enough exercise.
experiments on the decrease in heart disease 5. Too many Americans get diabetes and die of
resulting from combining weight loss and heart attacks related to poor diets or lack of
exercise. These would be conducted on mice, exercise.
then larger animals, and finally on humans to 6. People have stressful lives, tend to overeat,
ensure that no other conditions influence the smoke, dont get enough exercise, and
results. (Answers for this item may vary.) consequently develop heart disease.
6. No, because the reader would need much more
scientific training, the laboratory resources, and PRACTICE 5: Improve Stringy

a budget to pay for the experiment. (Answers for Sentences (page53)
this item may vary.) Answers will vary. Possible answers include:
2. The United States has the highest rate of obesity
in the world, and many children are becoming
obese from consuming too much sugar and
starch. As a result, they are developing diseases
such as diabetes.
3. Many people eat too much, watch too much Third Paragraph: The main cause of the buildup
television, and dont get enough exercise. of plaque is a substance called cholesterol, a waxy
Consequently, they tend to get fat. substance produced by the liver.
4. In many poor neighborhoods in the United
States, there arent a lot of supermarkets. Try It Out! (page60)
Therefore, food is expensive, so people tend Answers will vary.
to buy junk food and candy at the corner store,
which leads to their becoming obese. PRACTICE 9 Selecting Singular and
5. Exercise plays an important role in staying Plural Irregular Nouns (page60)
healthy. People should try to walk, run, or do 1. phenomena 2. hypothesis 3. basis 4. data
some physical activity for a least twenty minutes 5. analyses 6. criteria
daily or longer if possible.
6. Heart disease is the most deadly illness in the
United States. It results from a narrowing of the CHAPTER 4 (pages6485)
small blood vessels that connect to the heart,
which happens when a waxy material called
plaque builds up and sticks to their lining. This
Writing Model 1: Questions about
condition is also called hardening of the arteries. the Model (page68)
1. The final sentence of the paragraph: They came
because of their failed crops. . . .
PRACTICE 6: Generating and
2. Many poor Irish saw the United States as a land
Organizing Steps in Process Analysis of opportunity, came to this new land with little,
(page55) and realized their dreams.
Answers will vary. 3. Paragraph 5: The fungus destroyed the
potatoes, and people ate them before they
PRACTICE 7: Adding Transitions spoiled completely. Paragraph 6: The British
(page57) government imported corn. The corn sickened
Answers will vary. Possible answers include: people. The Irish sold or pawned their
Paragraph 1 possessions to buy food. The British created
To determine your resting pulse rate (the number public work projects, but people died before
of times your heart beats per minute), rest one arm being paid. Paragraph 7: Horrible living
on a flat surface. Next, place two fingertips from conditions and eating of the seed potatoes,
your other hand over the artery just below your which led to a much smaller crop in 1847, even
wrist. Then look at your watch for fifteen seconds though the potatoes were disease free. Then the
and count the number of beats you feel. Once you blight returned in 1848, worsening the situation.
have determined the number, multiply it by four to Paragraph 8: Landlords threw tenants out of
get the number of beats per minute. Finally, record it their homes, and many went to public poor
on a piece of paper. houses. The public works projects and poor
houses closed, leaving people homeless. Disease
Paragraph 2
broke out. Paragraph 9: Irish fled the country
To determine your pulse rate after activity, jog in
and went to Britain, Canada, and ultimately
place for five minutes if you are in good health and
the United States. Many died aboard the ships
record the number on a piece of paper. Afterward,
crossing the Atlantic. Paragraph 10: The Irish
retake your pulse rate and again record it on a
population of the United States doubled that of
piece of paper. Then in two-minute intervals, retake
Ireland. Kennedy is elected president.
your pulse rate until it returns to the resting rate,
4. Essentially, the phrases include references to
and record the total time elapsed. The shorter the
time. Paragraph 5 includes the year 1845, and
recovery time, the better your cardiac condition is.
says, It continued and grew worse virtually
every year until 1850. Paragraph 6, begins
PRACTICE 8: Preparing to Write an with, At first, and later says By December of
Abstract (page59) 1846, followed by At this point. Paragraph 7

Thesis statement: Everyone has heard the term includes the year 1846 and ties the content to the
heart attack, but what exactly is it, and how does it preceding paragraph with the opening words:
happen? The famine. It also includes the transitional
Topic sentences. (In middle of second paragraph) phrase, As a result, as well as the years 1847
The result is a myocardial infarction or coronary and 1848 with phrases introducing the years in
thrombosisin other words, a heart attack. which conditions worsened. Paragraph 8 begins
with By this time, even the landlords became
desperate. It includes the year 1847, and the Paragraph 6: descriptions of government actions and
phrase, Now with the tenants homeless and statistics
living in filth . . . . Paragraph 10 includes the Paragraph 7: quotation describing living condition
phrase Over the last nearly two centuries.
Paragraph 8: statistics and description of landlord
5. It failed because the corn made people ill, and
actions and consequences
most of the tenants had to sell or pawn their
possessions to pay for it. Paragraph 9: statistics and description of
6. The author implies that the absentee English and consequences of famine in the future
Irish landlords took advantage of their tenants
and treated the land as a source from which PRACTICE 3: Developing Paragraph
to extract as money as possible (Paragraph 3). Support (page74)
The tenants were so poor that they depended Examples will vary. Possible examples include:
entirely on the potato as their food source 2. The invention of electricity led to dramatic
because it was inexpensive and grew easily in changes in peoples lives.
bad soil (Paragraph 4). Examples: light at night, heating and cooking,
electrical appliances
Writing Model 2: Questions about 3. People immigrate to other countries for a
the Model (page70) number of reasons.
1. Overcrowding and rapid growth. Effect: Examples: political freedom, search for
Because of the extent of these problems, employment, escape from persecution, reunite
however, people eventually took steps to with families
improve living conditions.
2. Poor sewer and water facilities, inadequate fire PRACTICE 4: Identifying Causes or
protection, unpaved streets, lack of housing and Effects (page75)
thus overcrowding, then breakdown of family 2. The rate of obesity in the United States has
life and its consequences in mental distress, increased greatly in the past twenty years due to
crime, and juvenile delinquency. (There are six.)
a number of factors.
3. Eventually, however, practical forces operated to
bring about improvements. Gradually, the basic 3. The large increase in the number of Hispanics
facilities of urban living were improved. in the last twenty years has led to a number of
4. Planting trees, cleaning up litter, developing significant changes in U.S. culture and society.
recreation facilities, paving streets, lighting
4. The emigration of Eastern Europeans in the
cities, using streetcars, constructing high-rise
buildings. beginning of the twentieth century was both
5. They illustrate and advance the ideas of the an economic and a political necessity.
essay, and they also provide firsthand accounts. 5. The Civil War in the United States was the result
of a progressive series of events.
PRACTICE 1: Noticing Phrasal Verbs
6. Global life expectancy has greatly increased
(page71)
1. S 5. S 9. I thanks to improvements in sanitation and
2. I 6. I 10. S nutrition.
3. S 7. I 11. S
4. S 8. I 12. S PRACTICE 5: Adding Transitions
(page76)
PRACTICE 2: Analyzing Paragraph Answers will vary.
Support (page74)
Answers will vary according to the paragraphs PRACTICE 6: Identifying Parallel
selected: Structures (page77)
Paragraph 2: quotation, statistics, and survey on 2. Sanitation, fire protection, and the paving of
living conditions in Ireland streets were inadequate.
Paragraph 3: description of landlord-tenant 3. Substandard living quarters aggravated other
relationship evils such as the breakdown of family life,
along with mental distress, crime, and juvenile
Paragraph 4: statistics and description of the role of
delinquency.
the potato
4. Residents of the city resented the crowds,
Paragraph 5: description of what led to crisis smells, and pollution.
5. The city government began to build new PRACTICE 9: Punctuating and
housing, repair streets, and create public parks. Capitalizing Quotations (page82)
6. Streets were paved, first with stones and wood
blocks, and then with smoother, quieter asphalt. 2. During the Civil War, President Abraham
Gaslights were used to brighten the cities after
dark, which made law enforcement easier. I
Lincoln cautioned it is best not to swap horses
Streetcars were introduced which took people ,
quickly and inexpensively to work and back and while crossing the river
.
cut back on traffic.
3. A house divided against itself cannot stand

PRACTICE 7: Writing Parallel
,
Structures (page78) Lincoln also said
.
Answers will vary.

4. The ballot Lincoln addedis much stronger
, ,
PRACTICE 8: Correcting Errors in
Parallelism (page78) than the bullet
.
Controversy over immigrants and the language 5. Why should there not be a persistent confidence

in the ultimate judgment of the people?
they speak is not new. Millions of Germans moved
brought
to the United States in the 1800s and bringing said Lincoln in his First Inaugural Address.
I
their language with them. They not only held their is there any better or equal hope in this world?
religious services in German, but they also opened 6. Mark Twain, the famous American author, once
A T
wrote always do right. this will gratify some
private schools in which the teachers taught in ,
German, published German-language newspapers, people and astonish the rest
.
spoke
and speaking German at home, in stores, and also PRACTICE 10: Using Phrasal Verbs
(page82)
spoke it in taverns. Eventually all this changed. Answers will vary.
The first generation of immigrants spoke

CHAPTER 5 (pages86108)
German almost exclusively. The second generation
Questions about the Model (page90)
assimilated, speaking English at home, but also Answers will vary. Possible answers include:
speaking 1. It is too limited, it does not apply to all people
would speak German when they visited their parents. everywhere, it does not explain the system,
and it ignores elements of language other than
For the most part, the third generation knew German words.
2. The two questions at the beginning and at
only as that language that their grandparents used. the end of the first paragraph state the thesis
(although they do not explain it). Two main
Many other immigrants who came after the Germans ideas are introduced.
3. The quotation from Wade and Tavris. It
have followed the same pattern: the Japanese, the continues to elaborate the main points.
many more 4. Symbols, linguists, universal grammar, and
Italians, Eastern Europeans, and there are. cerebral cortex (in a limited sense) should all be
circled. The underlined phrases directly follow
Try It Out! (page80) the circled words.
Answers will vary. 5. To show that, as far as we know, the sounds
animals make cannot be defined as language
6. Chomsky believes that the human brain is PRACTICE 4: Dening with Synonyms
programmed with a universal grammar, while (page97)
Darwin and Pinker believe that the brain has
evolved through evolution to acquire language. A 2. instinctive 3. result 4. things that are
Pinker also believes that some parts of language shared 5. first language 6. sentence structure
are learned, not instinctive. The essay agrees B Answers will vary.
with all three.
PRACTICE 5: Completing a Formal
PRACTICE 1: Finding Synonyms Statement of Denition (page98)
(page90) Answers will vary. Possible answers include:
Answers will vary. Possible answers include: 2. Evidence is information that proves or supports
1. express a claim.
2. reduced or handicapped 3. A dialect is a form of communication that
3. idea, thought, or belief differs from standard forms in pronunciation,
4. uniquely word order, and word choice.
5. learn or develop 4. A sentence is a group of words that contains a
6. ability or capability complete independent clause.
7. unchangeable 5. Grammar is a set of rules that govern (or
8. basis or source describe) a language.
9. adjustment or modification 6. Instinct is a reaction that is not learned but
10. advancement, progression, or change innate.
7. A translator is a person who converts one
PRACTICE 2: Writing Noun Clauses language into another.
(page92)
Answers will vary. Try It Out! (page100)
Answers will vary.
PRACTICE 3: Combining Sentences to
Create Adjective Clauses (page94) Try It Out! (page100)
Answers will vary. Possible answers include: Answers will vary.
2. You may define a term with a synonym that has
approximately the same meaning. PRACTICE 6: Paraphrasing (page104)
3. Noam Chomsky, one of the foremost authorities Answers will vary.
on language, argues that all languages have a
universal grammar. PRACTICE 7: Using Synonyms (page105)
4. The world was shocked by the publication of Answers will vary.
The Origin of Species, which introduced the
theory of evolution.
5. Linguistics, the scientific study of human CHAPTER 6 (pages109127)
language, demonstrates many similarities among
languages.
6. French, Italian, and Spanish, which all come Questions about the Model
from Latin, have many similarities. OR French, (page113)
Italian, and Spanish, whose shared ancestor is 1. Bullying in U.S. schools. Its victims: students
Latin, have many similarities. who are bullied, those who do the bullying,
7. Spanish, which is the most common language, and those who see it happening and do nothing
is spoken throughout Central America, much of about it.
South America, the Caribbean, and, of course, 2. The final sentence of Paragraph 1: Although
Spain. bullying continues to be a serious problem,
8. Aside from the United States, Canada, and Great teachers and school administrators can take
Britain, India is the country where the largest a number of steps to prevent it or lessen its
number of people speak English as their first or impact.
second language. 3. Nonphysical and physical aggression. More
9. Humans communicative ability comes from specifically shoving, tripping, and taking
an area of the brain called the cerebral cortex, personal items, repeated and cruel teasing
where the elements of language are located. intended to embarrass, hurt, or isolate
someone, and rumors intended to destroy the
reputation of another.
4. The last sentence: A more difficult task is PRACTICE 3: Identifying and
identifying potential cyberbullies and their Correcting Dangling Modiers
victims and determining what to do once they (page119)
identify those students. Rewritten sentences will vary. Possible answers
5. Schools have been developing and requiring include:
anti-bullying policies and programs. 2. Though not easily prevented, the effects of
6. Keep an eye out for bullying and take it bullying can be lessened by teachers.
seriously, be an obvious presence, do everything 3. Acknowledging the seriousness of the problem,
possible to help potential bullies and potential teachers must constantly supervise the school
victims of bullies to develop genuine self- buildings.
confidence, incorporate formal or informal 4. Having been persistently teased or pushed, the
lessons to help students understand that all victim can be devastated.
forms of nonphysical and physical bullying 5. Driven by the need for power, bullies cause
are harmful and unacceptable, fully implement innocent victims to suffer.
prescribed anti-bullying programs, and follow 6. To help students develop self-confidence,
up with appropriate and fair treatment for both teachers must encourage and praise them.
the bully and victim of the bullying
7. Reminding readers of the importance of keeping
PRACTICE 4: Finding Sources (page120)
schools safe from bullying. It provides a
Answers will vary.
frame around the essay.
PRACTICE 1: Finding Adverbial Answers will vary
Intensiers (page113)
2. utterly devastating
PRACTICE 5: Synthesizing Materials
3. highly visible
4. extremely attentive (page124)
5. strongly supportive Books such as Aggression and Bullying (Guerin &
6. deeply harmful Hennesy, 2002) and Cyberbullying: Bullying in the
7. absolutely unacceptable Digital Age (Kowalski, Limber & Agatson, 2012)
shed light on the consequences of bullying for both
the aggressor and the victim.
Answers will vary.
Answers will vary.
PRACTICE 2: Shortening Clauses to
Phrases (page118)
PRACTICE 6: Writing Intensiers
Answers will vary. Possible answers include:
2. Unless reduced, bullying may cause great (page125)
psychological or physical harm to some Answers will vary. Possible answers include:
children. 1. absolutely 4. extremely (or highly)
3. Although frequently discussed, bullying is not 2. highly (or extremely) 5. deeply
always prevented in some schools. 3. relatively 6. utterly
4. If consistent and fair, rules should make most
children comfortable in a school environment.
5. After passing the Safe and Drug Free Schools CHAPTER 7 (pages128145)
Act, the government required most schools to
actively prevent bullying. Questions about the Model (page131)
6. While playing at recess, children may not push 1. Sentence 2 of Paragraph 1: Unfortunately, for
or shove each other. some children these benefits come at a cost.
7. When reporting on bullies, witnesses need to 2. The last sentence: Although there are no perfect
know their identities wont be revealed. answers to these questions, I believe that
8. Once established, clear policies may reduce the certain steps could have made the changes in
frequency of bullying. Rodriguezs life easier.
3. Assimilating himself within the dominant
English speaking culture.
4. Answers will vary.
5. Answers will vary.
PRACTICE 1: Finding Meaning from PRACTICE 5: Writing a Summary
Context (page131) (page140)
1. a 3. a 5. a 7. b Answers will vary, but the summary should
2. a 4. a 6. b 8. b distinguish between a material culture and a
nonmaterial culture and perhaps cite the examples of
PRACTICE 2: Identifying Key Points India and North Africa, respectively.
for a Summary (page134)
Answers will vary. Possible answers include: PRACTICE 6: Planning a Response
1. Almost every marriage in India is arranged. (page141)
2. The bride and groom do not know each other, Answers will vary.
but are introduced to each other by their parents.
3. The familys reputation is extremely important. Try It Out! (page141)
4. Parents do not compel their children to marry Answers will vary.
someone the children find objectionable.
5. Marriages take place only among the same PRACTICE 7: Forming Different Parts
castes and social classes, and the girls family of Speech (page142)
provides gifts to the groom and his family.
6. The marriage is considered a bond between the A 2. conficting
bride and groom and their families, and it is 3. reconciled
considered to be permanent. 4. assimilation
5. devotion
PRACTICE 3: Revising Passive Voice 6. perception
Sentences (page136) B 1. demonstrate 5. invite
2. I finished the book in a very short time. 2. integrate 6. converse
3. Our office has received the information. 3. educate 7. evolve
4. Rodriguezs father wore his clothes with great 4. define 8. resolve
pride. C 2. converse
5. Rodriguezs parents barely acknowledged his 3. acquisition
awards. 4. assimilated
6. Rodriguezs parents measured his public success 5. perception
with a great sense of loss. 6. conflicted
PRACTICE 4: Forming Passive and

Active Voice Sentences (page137) CHAPTER 8 (pages146168)
2. He was perceived to be a slow learner by them.
Rewritten: They perceived him as a slow learner. Model 1: Questions about the Model
3. His roots eventually were abandoned as he (page149)
assimilated. 1. He is presenting the counterargument of people
Rewritten: He eventually abandoned his roots as who oppose animal experimentation and,
he assimilated. according to him, think he is the enemy.
4. In many schools, bilingual education was 2. People who do not have strong opinions on the
required by the local school board. issue.
Rewritten: The local school board required 3. They address those of the animal rights
bilingual education in many schools. advocates. They disagree.
5. Richard was discouraged by his teachers at first. 4. He presents his argument without first stating
Rewritten: Richards teachers discouraged him the counterarguments.
at first. 5. He agrees that scientists should not be
6. Aspects of both the family and public cultures needlessly cruel in treating animals, and he
could have been addressed by Richards parents thanks the animal rights movement for making
in their home. scientists more aware. This is all in Paragraph 9.
Rewritten: Richards parents could have 6. The final sentence: The real question is whether
addressed aspects of both the family and public an apathetic majority can be aroused to protect
cultures in their home. its future against a vocal, but misdirected,
minority.
Model 2: Questions about the Model PRACTICE 6: Locating Arguments and
(page150) Responses (page160)
1. It introduces the counterargument that Porter Answers will vary. Possible answers include:
will argue against. Paragraph 2 begins the Paragraph 6:
response to the counterargument, although it Counterarguments: Political solutions might be made
does not refute that counterargument yet. to satisfy a vocal minority.
2. The last sentence, although one might also
Paragraph 7: Argument: Most of us enjoy good
identify the first sentence.
health, so are complacent about the benefits of
3. the long-term benefits to individuals, as well as to
animal research.
society at large, appear to far outweigh the costs
Counterarguments: If animal research is restricted, it
4. The counterarguments in Porters essay appear
will be the effective end of these studies.
in the first paragraph and are embeddedshe
concedes that people have legitimate concerns Paragraph 8: Argument: Death is out of sight for
about the cost of higher educationin sentences most of us, so people forget these tragedies.
that argue that the education is worth the cost. Counterarguments: He is angry at people who care
more about dogs and cats than people.
PRACTICE 1: Dening Terms from Try It Out! (page162)

Context (page151) Answers will vary.
2. j 4. f 6. b 8. h 10. a
3. d 5. c 7. g 9. e Try It Out! (page163)
Answers will vary.
PRACTICE 2: Writing Sentences with
Modals (page152) Try It Out! (page164)
Answers will vary. Answers will vary.
PRACTICE 3: Using Phrasal Modals PRACTICE 7: Using Correct

(page153) Grammatical Forms (page165)
Answers will vary. 2. therapeutic 5. alternate
3. defects 6. initiated
PRACTICE 4: Using the Subjunctive 4. impacts
(page154)
Answers will vary.
CHAPTER 9 (pages169188)
PRACTICE 5: Using Verbs for
Arguments or Counterarguments Questions about the Model (page172)
(page159) 1. Final sentence of Paragraph 1: The event has
had lasting effects on both the population and
A Answers will vary. Possible answers include:
the environment surrounding the facility.
1. contend, believe, maintain
2. [Paragraph 2] The event is called the Kyshtym
2. contends, claims, maintains, argues, insists,
disaster, and it happened at Mayak, a nuclear
believes
fuel reprocessing plant. [Paragraph 3] With
3. reject, disagree with, agree with, support,
so many defects in its construction and
favor, question
maintenance, it is no surprise that in 1957
4. indicates, suggests, implies
the cooling system of one of the tanks failed.
5. suggest, recommend, maintain, contend,
[Paragraph 4] The beauty of the scene masked
insist, believe
the terrible consequences for the people
6. suggest, contend, maintain, insist, recommend
in the area. [Paragraph 5] Officials finally
7. indicates, suggests
acknowledged the disaster and its effects only

8. advocates, contends, argues, believes;
thirty-five years later, in 1992. [Paragraph 6]
maintain, contend, insist, believe
The revelations about the previous spills and
B Answers will vary. explosions eventually followed. [Paragraph 7]
However, the level of radiation emitted is less
important than the governments treatment
of those near the two disasters. [Paragraph 8]
However, this is not the case.
3. She wants to show the magnitude of a disaster PRACTICE 8: Examining a Works Cited
that almost no one knew had happened. Page (page183)
4. They back up Laneys claims. They provide data 1. Because the entries are listed in alphabetical
and analysis from experts, eyewitnesses, and order, so the names of the other authors do not
victims. affect the listings
5. A combination of the two 2. Short works such as titles of articles are placed
6. Initially, she names the source in the body of the in quotation marks, but longer works such as
text. In subsequent references she places the last book or magazine titles are italicized.
name of the source in parentheses. 3. Periods follow each part of the entry, except (1)
7. So they can evaluate the reliability of the no period precedes the dates following a title,
sources or consult them and (2) a colon precedes a pagenumber.
4. As the last item in the entry, but before the word
PRACTICE 1: Finding Antonyms print when it is included
(page173) 5. Because the volume and issue number identify
Answers will vary. Possible answers include: when the article appears
2. unlike, incomparable 6. It means that some articles appear on the
3. slowly Internet and others appear in print.
4. disprove
5. assemble, build Try It Out! (page185)
6. substantial, sufficient Answers will vary.
7. unpolluted, pure
8. uninhabited, deserted, abandoned PRACTICE 9: Using Antonyms (page185)
9. incapable, unable, unqualified 1. uninhabited
10. infertile, barren 2. infertile
11. tiny, small, insignificant 3. sufficient
12. ancestors 4. unaware
5. incapable
PRACTICE 2: Recognizing
Organizational Patterns (page175)
Argument, point-by-point
PRACTICE 3: Writing Verbs in the

Correct Tense Sequence (page178)
Answers will vary.
PRACTICE 4: Writing Complex

Sentences (page178)
Answers will vary.
PRACTICE 5: Forming and Narrowing

Research Questions (page179)
Answers will vary.
PRACTICE 6: Evaluating a Source

(page181)
Answers will vary.

Answers will vary.
PRACTICE 7: Evaluating Thesis

Statements (page182)
Suggestions for narrowing the topics will vary.
1. G 2. TB 3. TB 4. TB 5. TB

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Expository Essays Have students read the writing model

Have students say what kind of information

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Using Articles (page9) Variation: After trying all three prewriting

outlining ideas. Then have students do the

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to determine where they support the key

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Then have them complete the tasks alone.

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Run-On and Comma-Spliced Steps in a Process (page56)

exploring their topic, audience, and

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Write a Scientic Process Essay EXTENSION:

story does this picture seem to tell?

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Step 1: Have students read the instructions

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a quotation, a long indented quotation,

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