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Alejandra Corona

EDU 214 1002

9/6/2017

Fictional Story

Mr. Crueler

In a gloomy small town called Looker Ville, lived a hideous man named Mr. Crueler. He

lived in a dreadful one story home with wooden run down walls and mysteriously shaded

windows. His home gave a sense of fear which made people walk by just a little faster, and the

unbearable stench that surrounded the home reeked of blood. Mr. Crueler was a professor at a

nearby High school and was notoriously known for having students flee town midway into the

course. Other students who passed his class didnt understand why certain students would simply

move out of town; However, did they really move out of town?

Years ago among Mr. Cruelers new students was Tony. Tony was a little shaken by the

rumors heard about Mr. Crueler, and especially when seeing his petrifying image. Mr. Crueler

had bright, big, yellow, and round eyes. He also had a big, round, and dark animal-like nose. He

had purplish, blemished, bumpy textured skin, and his long white hair always stood up straight.

Then, his big tube like ears protruded on the side of his head. Mr. Crueler looked like no

ordinary man, and there was an uneasiness about the way he would carry himself.

On the first day of class, Mr. Crueler made it clear that passing his class was easy if

students did their work and turned it in on time. Homework assignments were to be turned in

online, and he had no tolerance for late assignments. He always looked a little deranged when

hed speak about the topic, and especially when talking about a former student who didnt turn in

his/her assignment on time. When class was over, Mr. Crueler would always raise his voice and
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say, DO NOT TURN IN YOUR ASSIGNMENTS LATE! while he smacked his favorite red

ruler on his hand.

Later on that week, Tony and his friend Matt went to play basketball at the park. Tony

ran back home because he knew he had homework to turn in, but Matt decided he wasnt going

to turn in the assignment and kept playing basketball. Once the sun set and Tony turned in his

assignment, he noticed he left his watch at the park and ran back to get it. As he approached the

park, he faintly saw Mr. Crueler and Matt in the distance. Matt looked frightened, and got down

on his knees as if pleading to Mr. Crueler. As Tony got closer he heard his instructor say, you

shouldve turned in your assignment, and struck his ruler right through the middle of Matts

brain. Tony yelled in disgust and ran home for help.

Mr. Crueler had left without a trace that same night. An investigation was done, and the

former students who were said to have moved were found buried in his lawn. He was a professor

who had no tolerance for excuses on late assignments. It is said he no longer lives, but that his

spirit still wanders through different classrooms. It is best to just do your work and turn in your

assignments on time!