Sentences with Errors Description of Explanation and Correction
Error/Correction Remarks Symbol A few years ago in 2011, sentence structure - lacking punctuation A few years ago, in 2011, Thailand elected its first punctuation, (comma) Thailand elected its first and only female prime confusing grammar, and only female prime minister. or word order minister problem While it may seem like word choice - not really While it may seem like there might be a gradual inaccurate word narrowing sounds there might be a gradual transition, the gender gap is choice or collocation awkward and is not transition, the gender gap is not really narrowing by the right way to say it not narrowing by much. much. In the last decade, there verb tense/wrong a huge amount of In the last decade, there has have been a huge amount tense progress = singular been a huge amount of of progress in the status of (have > has) progress in the status of women in the work place. women in the work place. The Gender Equality Act word choice - the definition of The Gender Equality Act was put in place by the late inaccurate word wellbeing doesnt was put in place by the late King Bhumibol Adulyadej choice or collocation fit well into this King Bhumibol Adulyadej in 2015, declaring any act sentence, since it is in 2015, declaring any act of gender discrimination about a workplace of gender discrimination unlawful, which was situation unlawful, which was instrumental to the instrumental to the wellbeing of working prosperity of working women. women. There have been cases of noun ending/singular women = plural There have been cases of women receiving lower or plural a man = singular women receiving lower wages than a man in the wages than men in the same position with the same position with the same amount of experience. same amount of experience.