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Personal Statement

Myself: My name is Noman Ahmad and I belong to a well-settled family that has clear focus on
the successful academic and professional career. My familys studious culture has always been a
great source of inspiration for me to excel in my life and become a successful human resource
(both academically and professionally). Since my primary education, I have always been an
energetic, passionate and enthusiastic student. My enthusiasm has won several times
appreciations by worthy teachers, friends and family.

Education & Professional Career: I have done My Intermediate (Higher Secondary School
Certification) with pre-engineering subjects including Mathematics, chemistry and physics with
good grades from Board of Intermediate and Secondary Education D.G Khan in 2015. Before
that I have done O level with scoring very good grades in major subjects like Physics (A),
chemistry (B), Mathematics (B) and Computer sciences (B). From learning computer science
and mathematics during my O levels a keen interest regarding information technology was
developed in me thats why I decided to excel in the same related field known to me. Ialso have
very good understanding of English language andmy overall IELTS score is 6.0.

Future Goal: My long term goal is to pursue career as Bachelor of Computer Science. The
Bachelor of Computer Science will equip me with the knowledge, understanding and skills
required to build a career as an expert of Computer technology, hardware & software, as well as
computer communication and network management. For this I have decided to study
Foundation Studies of Computer Sciences in Engineering Stream that will lead to Bachelor
of Computer Science atLa Trobe Melbourne University, Melbourne Australia.

Thorough Investigation of my Study Option in Pakistan: I have made thorough research


about BSC in computer science course in the reputed Universities of Pakistan, e.g. University of
the Punjab, COMSATS Institute of Information Technology, Fast University,National University of
Sciences and Technology (NUST), University of Engineering and Technology (UET) etc. No doubt
all of these are offering the above course but unfortunately none of them have an international
recognition. Secondly the Pakistani education system is still lacking behind in research and
Technology.

Professional Study From Australia: Before deciding to study in Australia, I made thorough
research (on internet with reliable resources like blogs, websites) about famous international
study destinations (e.g. USA, Canada, UK etc) and after satisfaction, selected Australia as the
most suitable study destination for me to further education. For this purpose, I also met with
many of my teachers and got their valued comments. They also encouraged me to study in
Australia as its education system is world-wide recognized for quality education, especially in
Computer Sciences & Information Technology. Australian Universities deliver practical and
career-orientated education so that graduates can perform outstanding skills in their respective
professional careers.
Apart from being a great place to get first class education, Australia is also a fantastic place to
live during study. There is no discrimination between genders and people from different ethnic
backgrounds. Australia provides a welcoming and multicultural society. Australian people have a
reputation for being friendly, and by looking at the different international reports I can say
Australian cities are safe and thats why it is an increasingly popular study destination for
international students from across the globe.

Why Study in Melbourne: In particular Melbourne, the capital and most populous city in the
Australian state of Victoria, and the second most populous city in Australia and Oceania.
Melbourne has average temperate and oceanic climate and is well known for its changeable
weather conditions.

According to Education point of view: Some of Australia's most prominent and well
known schools are based in Melbourne. Of the top twenty high schools in Australia,
according to the Better Education ranking, six are located in Melbourne. There has also
been a rapid increase in the number of International students studying in this city.
Furthermore, Melbourne was ranked the world's fourth top University City in 2008 after
London, Boston and Tokyo in a poll commissioned by the Royal Melbourne Institute of
Technology. Melbourne is the home of seven public universities: the University of
Melbourne, Monash University, Royal Melbourne Institute of Technology (RMIT
University), Deakin University, La Trobe University, Swinburne University of Technology
and Victoria University.

Economy: Melbourne has a highly diversified economy with particular strengths in


finance, manufacturing, research, IT, education, logistics, transportation and tourism.
Melbourne is headquarters for many of Australia's largest corporations, including five of
the ten largest in the country (based on revenue), and four of the largest six in the
country (based on market capitalization). Melbourne's suburbs also have the Head
Offices of Wesfarmers companies Coles (including Liquor land). The city is home to
Australia's largest and busiest seaport. Melbourne Airport provides an entry point for
national and international visitors, and is Australia's second busiest airport.

Why La Trobe Melbourne University: La Trobe Melbourne provides a pathway to an extensive


range of degree options. It is one of Australia's leading universities. Students get the complete
university experience in a better and supportive environment.

It offers a range of foundation and diploma courses which are equivalent to La Trobe
University's first year bachelor degree. Upon successful completion of foundation, we will enter
the First year of a bachelor degree.

What La Trobe Melbourne Promise: Fast-track degree pathway into one of Australia's best
universities.
Small class sizes mean you get more personal attention from lecturers.
Programs are moderated and assessed by the university faculty.
University has over 40 years of experience teaching English Language Intensive Courses
for overseas Students.
A rich university experience studying with Australian and International Students.

Course: My course consists of Foundation studies leading to Bachelor of Computer Sciences. At


stage one for Foundation of Computer Sciences; my course will be comprised of two Trimesters.
In these trimesters I will have a chance to study, Academic Communication, Advanced Math,
Physics, Essential Math, Independent learning. These courses will help me get the better
understanding of these modules.
Upon completion of this foundation course, I will move on to Bachelor of Computer Science at
La Trobe University Melbourne Campus. I will have the opportunity to study object-orientated
programming, Java and C++, computer systems and design. I will also study databases, artificial
intelligence, computer architecture, networks, multimedia systems and games technology. The
diversity of this foundation will open up to a world of career opportunities.

Facilities: The Melbourne campus offers a safe and friendly environment while study. It is a self-
contained student-oriented locality where everything i need is within easy walking distance. In
addition to the multi-story library and student bookshop, there are full banking facilities, a
medical Centre, shops and markets, copy and design Centre, hairdressing salon, childcare
facilities, a world-class art gallery, state-of-the-art gymnasium and fitness centre and many
active sports clubs and societies.There are at least 11 different eateries, including cafs, canteens
(which serve international foods) and a tavern that regularly stages live music.

Here at La Trobe Melbourne, university provide learning and teaching technologies, a fully
resourced Independent Learning Centre, as well as cultural events and activities. All La Trobe
Melbourne students are welcome to access a full range of University facilities, including library,
computer and study halls, sports centre, clubs and associations, and more.

Benefits: In my course, Ill learn how Computer Sciences for Business focuses on Computer and
Technology and applications in business contexts. I shall be exposed to a range of basic CS
concepts and principles, particularly as they apply to a business context. A variety of software
applications for business will also be explored. Work integrated learning is a core component of
this degree. This program aims to ensure me that I have multiple touch points with employers
of information systems graduates and information systems professionals during their degree to
help me to identify potential employers and understand the career outcomes available to them.

This course is accredited by the professional body, the Australian Computer Society, at the
Professional level. On successful completion of this course I shall be able to make my career in a
wide range of computer based fields like Analyst (Information Technology), Computer Engineer,
Information Technology Support Technician, Computer Administrator, Network & System
Administrator, Programmer, Systems Analyst, Systems Designer.
Business Scope: Today computers, networks and systems are the power engines behind all
industries, from finance; to medical; to telecommunications and retail. We rely on these systems
to do our jobs, shopping and banking amongst other things, so when things stop working it is
vital that we have somebody to turn to. A qualification in Computer Sciences will allow me to be
part of the support network that is so important to all businesses/industries to keep their
systems up and running.

~ A passion is necessary to achieve future goal ~

To prepare myself for the field of CS I have begun to read into topics related. Keeping up with
the business news through the Guardian and BBC news websites, my interest in the field grew.

The following are the key points for my application to be considered with positive
outcomes:

Strong and related educational background


Proposed Bachelor of Science in Computer course directly linked with career
Strong communication skills in English proven through IELTS 6.0
Strong financial background to meet study expenses
All pre-requisites met for proposed course

I am a genuine student, never involved in violation/violence of law and declare not to breach
immigration rules whilst studying in Australia. I have strong ties to Pakistan that will compel me
to come back within specified period of time. I have neither any political commitment in
Pakistan nor intention to overstay in Australia. I have no immigration history to consider that
may be beneficial or adverse to my application, therefore this aspect is not related to my
application. My circumstances in Pakistan are good. I have no attraction to economic
opportunities in Australia.

There are boundless opportunities to further development of my career in Pakistan. It is


essential for me to get into the ring as early as possible and keep side by side with the new
opportunities. I have made calculations that the costs involved in my course would definitely
give me high returns in the shape of reputable managerial level job in a multinational firm in the
field of computing Like Nestle Pakistan, Procter & gamble Pakistan and Toyota Motors etc.
According to my research and reviews of job ads in newspapers the multinational firms prefers
foreign qualified individual for jobs in the field of computing&informational technology because
of developed countrys research and update knowledge in the field of Information Technology.
I consider myself a suitable applicant for studying in Australia. I request your good self to
consider my student visa application with positive outcome and provide me opportunity to
enhance my career through quality professional education from Australia.

My parents are sponsoring me to study in Australia. My Father is doing job. He is working as


foreman (scaffolding/Rigging) in KapcoKotAddu Power Company limited. From his financial
resources of jod salary and Rental Properties; his monthly income is Rs 220,000. My mother has
also get rental income monthly Rs. 225,000 from the inherited property she got from her
parents. The total monthly income of my parents is Rs.445,000. They have deposited Rs 4.0
Million ($52,000) in my account at Soneri Bank; whereas my outstanding expenses are $ 29,219.

Studying Bachelor of Science in Computer course in Australia will have various positive
aspects on my life, including: increased future opportunities, professional growth and career
development. The benefits will also include: better employment opportunities more satisfaction
(enriching knowledge); Income generation and economic growth; Healthy competition; higher
quality education in different culture with modern research dynamics.

I am a forward thinking individual having ambition and ability to achieve my career goal. I feel
that foundation leading Bachelor of Computer Science course will fulfill my desires of having a
bright, successful professional career in Pakistan.

Yours Obediently,

Noman Ahmad

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