Team 1 Progress Report #2

by Jan Chen

Submission date: 16-Oct-2017 07:26PM (UT C-0700)

Submission ID: 863945014
File name: T eam_1_Progress_Report_2.docx (5.43K)
Word count: 356
Character count: 1716
 Your Progress Report is very informative--
good. To improve future papers and/or if
you decide to revise this for your portfolio,
Be sure
use the comments below to as
saya what
guide.device
you're working on. add logo
Genre/Format

add dates of work

(from x to y)

OK summary, but try listing

work finished (Milestones)
and what's left.

Usually, the project manager emails

iFixit.

Excellent--you're making progress!

yes, name your device somewhere

in this report.

add conclusion ("If you have any questions .

. .," "We expect to finish on time")
Team 1 Progress Report #2
GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

88
PAGE 1
/100

Text Comment. Your Progress Report is very inf ormative--good. T o improve f uture
papers and/or if you decide to revise this f or your portf olio, use the comments below as a
guide.

Text Comment. Be sure to say what device you're working on.

Text Comment. add logo

QM Genre/Format
Each assignment requires a particular genre (e.g., memo, abstract, report). Your submission
does not f ollow the conventions of the assigned genre. Ref er to the prompt to discover the
required genre, then review the f ormatting conventions of that genre in Markel or online and
apply those conventions to your documents.

Text Comment. add dates of work (f rom x to y)

Text Comment. OK summary, but try listing work f inished (Milestones) and what's lef t.

Text Comment. Usually, the project manager emails iFixit.

Text Comment. Excellent--you're making progress!

Text Comment. yes, name your device somewhere in this report.

Text Comment. add conclusion ("If you have any questions . . .," "We expect to f inish on
time")
RUBRIC: IFIXIT PROGRESS REPORT RUBRIC

CRIT ERIA 1 Prof icient

Form & Organization

ABSENT/BELOW Sections organization is absent, illogical, or inconsistent; Headings may be absent or

BASIC do not describe content ef f ectively

DEVELOPING Sections organization isn't always clear or consistent; Headings may not describe
content ef f ectively

PROFICIENT Sections are usually organized logically and consistently; Headings describe content
adequately

ADVANCED Sections are organized logically and consistently; Headings describe content
concisely, specif ically, and accurately

CRIT ERION 2 Prof icient

Content & Persuasiveness

ABSENT/BELOW T he report f ails to describe the group's completed tasks, current work, and f uture
BASIC work; the group seems in danger of not f inishing the project on time.

DEVELOPING Descriptions of the group's completed tasks, current work, and f uture work may be
vague; evidence of the group's ability to complete the project on time isn't quite
convincing.

PROFICIENT Some specif ic details describe the group's completed tasks, current work, and f uture
work adequately; evidence of group's ability to complete the project on time is
convincing.

ADVANCED Specif ic details describe the group's completed tasks, current work, and f uture work
directly and aptly; evidence of group's ability to complete the project on time is
convincing.

CRIT ERION 3 Advanced

Appearance

ABSENT/BELOW White space, f onts, and design are not used to increase the reader-f riendliness of
BASIC the report.

DEVELOPING White space, f onts, and design may be distracting or inef f ective.

PROFICIENT White space, f onts, and design are ef f ective.

ADVANCED White space, f onts, and design are ef f ective and attractive

CRIT ERION 4 Prof icient

Language
ABSENT/BELOW Spelling, syntax, diction, or punctuation errors impede readability.
BASIC

DEVELOPING Spelling, syntax, diction, or punctuation errors impede readability or otherwise distract
f rom meaning.

PROFICIENT Spelling, syntax, diction, or punctuation errors are f ew and do not distract f rom
meaning.

ADVANCED Outstanding control of language, including ef f ective diction and sentence variety.
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