LO1 FEEDBACK

Holly Scarborough LO1 Feedback. 13/10/17

Current Grade for LO1: Merit

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on this learning outcome is a Merit Grade, even
if you have achieved this, if there are any minor corrections or additions, can you please
ensure these are made.

Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.

Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words “Re-Submission”.

Overall:

Some excellent work here, Holly. Excellent detail overall. Keep this up and you should
achieve a good grade overall.

LO1 Part A. Advertising Types & Styles

A good start here, you have explained the main types of advertising and the persuasive
devices, well done.

Lo1 Part B. Regulation

This provides an excellent overview of the regulation of advertising. Well done.

LO1 part C. Analysis.

Some excellent work here. You have successfully explained the advertising campaign for
Dove, identifying how the brand utilises different forms of media to strengthen the
campaign message, well done.