ENTRY 1

Two paragraphs with topic sentence in two different locations

Paragraph 1

Topic Sentence: Secondly,parents should also educate their children on smart

consumerism.

Secondly,parents should also educate their children on smart consumerism. This helps
protect children from negative media influence,especially television
advertisements.Advertisements have in many ways ,promoted products that seemingly
assure healthy living.In reality.most products tat are advertised try to capture the market
pie with their wide range of consumer products.Children need to be taught how to
optimize the value of the money they spend.Parents should involve theier children

when shopping as this can tremendously reinforce smart shopping practices.

Source: Muet paper 4.Penerbit ilmu publisihing 2016

Paragraph 2

Topic sentence : Travel also teaches adaptability

Beside learning about the customs of other people and gaining a great deal of
knowledge, travel also teaches adaptability. Those who travel a great deal and are
willing to rough it out are not so fastidious about the ordinary comforts of life. They
make cheerful and pleasant companions. Travel also breaks through religious
fanaticism and encourages exchange of ideas.People who have succeeded in
developing an interest in birds and animalas,in rocks and minerals and in plants trees

find travel a rewarding experience.

Source: English composition. SS Mubaruk & Brothers pte.ltd

ENTRY 2

Twp paragraph with different strategies of supporting details

Paragraph 1

Strategies of supporting details : Statistics

Alam flora Sdn Bhd Chief Executive Officer Mohamed Siraj Abdul Razak, said that the
focus should be on the generation of wastes rather than their disposal, as the current
Malaysian lifestyle of “ throwaway and over-consumerist” culture does not help to
improve the situation.”Local authorities spend up to 60% of their annual budget on
waste management, which costs Malaysia between RM110 and RM130 to collect and
dispose one tonne of garbage,’he said. He further added.”That adds up to RM1.98 Mil
to RM 2.34 Mil per day or RM854 mil per year at the current generation of 18 000
tonnes of solid wastes per day.More than 30% of our garbage is recyclable and these

materials can be prevented from ending up in the landfills and incinerators.”

Source: MUET ( The complete text and guide).Arah pendidikan sdn bhd 2006

Paragraph 2

Strategies of supporting details : Authority

Viruses are always there. As the environment is disturbed ,people have become closer
to them and they become disease,’She said that there should be increased awareness
by governments and the medical community that these disease are not medical
problems to begin with.I n her view, nature keeps the viruses In check but when they
are in human then it is almost too late. A specialist in wildlife epidemiology at the
Institute of Zoology, Andrew Cunningham mentioned in the British Medical Journal
that as the human population continues to grow, human needs for space and resource
result in further encroachment into a diminishing natural world. In his opinion the
problem is not small and tackling it will not be easy, but recognizing a common

problem is as start

Source: MUET ( The complete text and guide).Arah pendidikan sdn bhd 2006

ENTRY 3

Two paragraph with different strategies of introduction

Paragraph 1

Strategy/Approach: Definiton/Explanation

What is bullying?Bullying is persistent unwelcome behavior,mostly using unwarranted

or invalid criticism, nit-picking,fault-finding alsexclusion,isolation,being single out and
treated differently being houted at, humiliated and much more.The purpose of bullying
is to hide inadequacy.Therefore,anyone who choose to bully is admitting his
inadequacy and the extent to which a person bullies is a measure of his inadequacy,
and the extent to which a person bullies is a measure of his inadequacy.There are
several types of bullying in the work place. Pressure bullying or unwitting bullying is
where the stress of the moment causes behavior to deteriorate; the person becomes
short-tempered,irritable and may shout or swear at others. Everybody does this from
time to time, but when the pressure is removed, behavior returns to normal Corporate
bullying is where the employer abuses employees with impunity knowing that the law
is weak and jobs are scarce.Employees may be threatened that if they do not work the

extra hours,they could lose their jobs.

Source: MUET ( The complete text and guide).Arah pendidikan sdn bhd 2006

Paragraph 2

Strategy/Approach: General to specific

The number of snatch thefts in the country is increasing and many innocent people
have lost cash,valuable and some even their lives.Victims are often emotionally
traumatized event months after the incidents.As innocent people, we must not sit back
and wait for these unscrupulous thieves to rob and injure us. It is important that as
concerned proactive individuals, we take the necessary steps to avoid becoming victims
ourselves by always being aware of our surrounding,always walking in the
groups,avoiding all lonely roads and darkalleys and not wearing expensive or flashy
jewellery when we are out alone.

Source: Muet paper 4.Penerbit ilmu publisihing 2016

ENTRY 4

Two paragraph

Paragrph 1

Strategy/Approach: Suggestion
Finally, take care of your colon and urogenital tract. They absorb nutrients and water
from everything you eat and drink and remove bad fats and waste.They also fight
colonies of disease- causing bacteria.Your answer to a clean colon and urogenital
tracts is fibre,fibre and more fibre. Eat oat,fruit,vegetables,whole grain breads,wild rice
and lentils.Bran cereals are also very good. And once again, that magic word-
exercise.Exercise stimulates your metabolic rate.And this helps regulate your bowel

movements.

Source: English sukses SPM,Penerbitan Pelangi 2012

Paragpgh 2

Strategy approach: Quatation

In conclusion, appearance can be deceiving.People may present themselves on one

way but they are really another.We need to make an effort to get to know them on a
deeper level in order to really know their true character. We should always look beyond
the outward appearances. As saying goes “judgemental prevents us from seeing the

good that lies beyond appearance”.

Source: English sukses SPM,Penerbitan Pelangi 2012