Ways to Play Back Sound"

The first type analog.

Grammar>Fragments

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Your writing has too many short sentences, which makes it awkward. Since the
highlighted parts have the same subject, which is digital sound, you can choose to
combine them. Doing so will make your statement straightforward and strong.

Take a look at how the sentences below are combined:

"Digital sound does not sound real, but it has advantages."

Analog sound uses electric signals to make sounds. Sound is really just changes in
air pressure
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Your writing has too many short sentences, which makes it awkward. Since the
highlighted parts have the same subject, which is analog sound, you can choose to
combine them. Doing so will make your statement straightforward and strong.

Take a look at how the sentences below are combined:

"Analog is very good because it perfectly sounds like the original."

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in a device
This sentence about Analog is missing a predicate. A sentence must always have a
subject and a predicate so it can express a complete thought. The predicate is the
part of a sentence that expresses what is said about the subject. It usually starts
with a verb.

Here is an example of how you could rephrase this sentence:

"Analog is the first way to reproduce sound."

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"This sentence/clause about _ is not complete because it is missing a verb. A verb

is a word or compound word that expresses an action, events, or state of being.
Including a verb in a sentence/clause will help you express a complete thought.
Your sentence should be rewritten like this:

""The first type is analog sound."" "

Second, digital

Grammar>Fragments
"The highlighted part is missing a subject and a verb, which makes it hard to
understand. The subject of a sentence is what or whom the sentence is about while a
verb is a word or compound word that expresses an action, events, or state of
being. To correct this, you should complete the sentence by adding a subject and a
verb. This will help you make a sentence with a complete thought.
Your sentence should be rewritten like this:

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Some of your sentences are with the same structure and length. It can grow
monotonous for readers. Varying sentence style and structure can reduce repetition
and add emphasis. Adding sentence variety can give your writing life and rhythm.

Here is an example of how you can write this sentence:

"The other way to reproduce sound is digital."

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The word "single" is not correct in this sentence. This means one or alone. You
should have used the word "signal," because you are talking about a message, sound,
or image that is carried by waves of light or sound.

Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.

Here is how you could have written your sentence:

"Analog uses electric signals to make sounds."

to touch, pick up, or grab something by moving or stretching

someone or something that is equal to or as good as another person or thing

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Some of your sentences are with the same structure and length. It can grow
monotonous for readers. Varying sentence style and structure can reduce repetition
and add emphasis. Adding sentence variety can give your writing life and rhythm.

Here is an example of how you can write this sentence:

"The second way to reproduce sound is Digital."

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"The second type is digital sound."""

a state in which you are not aware of what is happening around you

moving someone or something from one place to another

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The word "trance" is not correct in this sentence. This refers to a state in which
you are not aware of what is happening around you. You should have used the word
"transfer," because you are talking about moving someone or something from one
place to another.

Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.

Here is how you could have written your sentence:

"Digital sound can be transferred into a computer."

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The word "laugh" is not correct in this sentence. This refers to an expression of
happiness. You should have used the word "large," because you are talking about the
size of the device.

Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.

Here is how you could have written your sentence:

"Analog sound more real, but it requires a large device."

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The word "pile" is not correct in this sentence. This refers to a group of things
put on top of one another. You should have used the word "file," because you are
talking about a collection of computer data.

Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.

Here is how you could have written your sentence:

"It can also be transferred like files on a computer."

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It can also be transferred like files on a computer

a collection of computer data that forms a single unit and that is given a
particular name

The word "convulsion" is not correct in this sentence. This refers to a sudden
violent shaking of the body. You should have used the word "convert," because you
are talking about changing something from one form or use to another.

Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.

Here is how you could have written your sentence:

"Digital sound converts sounds into numbers and saves it on a device."

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the process of doing and seeing things and of having things happen to you

cape vs. copy

Vocabulary>Incorrect Word
"cape : a piece of clothing that does not have sleeves and that fits closely at the
neck and hangs over the shoulders, arms, and back

copy : making a version of something that is exactly or almost exactly like the
original"
converse vs. convert

Vocabulary>Incorrect Word
conversed : to talk usually informally with someone

convert : changing something from one form or use to another."

Digital sound takes a sound wave and converts it to numbers

divide vs. device

Vocabulary>Incorrect Word
"divide : to separate something into two or more parts or pieces

device : an object, machine, or piece of equipment that has been made for some
special purpose."

reduction vs. reproduction Vocabulary>Incorrect Word "reduction : the act of making

something smaller in size, amount, number, etc.
reproduction : the act of copying something, such as a document, book, or sound"

"Bridge

The Three Types of Symbiosis"

spices vs. species

Vocabulary>Incorrect Word

The word "spices" is not correct in this sentence. This means a substance that is
used in cooking to add flavor to food and that comes from a dried plant and is
usually a powder or seed. You should have used the word "species," because you are
talking about a group of animals or plants that are similar and can produce young
animals or plants.

Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.

Here is how you could have written your sentence:

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"Symbiosis is the relationship between two different species."

flee vs. flea

The word "flee" is not correct in this sentence. This means to run away from
danger. You should have used the word "flea," because you are talking about a very
small insect that lives on animals and that has strong legs used for jumping.

Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.

"A flea is an example of a blood-sucking parasite."

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The word "bacteria" is not correct in this sentence. This refers to a kind of
microorganism. You should have used the word "symbiosis," because you are talking
about the relationship between two different kinds of living things.

Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.

"There are three types of symbiosis."

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The word "step" is not correct in this sentence. This means one of a series of
actions that are done to achieve something. You should have used the word "type,"
because you are talking about one member of a group of people or things that have
similar features or qualities.

Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.

"The third type of symbiosis is parasitism."

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The word "sores" is not correct in this sentence. This refers to painful spot on
the body. You should have used the word "sort," because you are talking about a
particular kind or type of person or thing.

Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.

Here is how you could have written your sentence:

"This sort of relationship is usually between a larger and a smaller animal."

Vocabulary>Incorrect Word

flee : to run away from danger

flea : a very small insect that lives on animals and that has strong legs used for
jumping

plea vs. flea

Vocabulary>Incorrect Word
plea : a serious and emotional request for something

flea : a very small insect that lives on animals and that has strong legs used for
jumping"

stage vs. type

Vocabulary>Incorrect Word
stage : a particular time or state that something reaches as it grows or develops

type : one member of a group of people or things that have similar features or
qualities"
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The Four Planets of the Inner Solar System"

plant vs. planet

Vocabulary>Incorrect Word
plant : a living thing that grows in the ground, usually has leaves or flowers, and
needs sun and water to survive

planet : a large, round object in space, such as the Earth, that travels around a
star, such as the sun"

Chopped/Short sentences

Mercury is nearby the sun. It has extreme temperature. It goes around the sun every
88 years."

Vocabulary>Awkward

Your writing has too many short sentences, which makes it awkward. Since the
highlighted parts have the same subject, which is Mercury, you can choose to
combine them. Doing so will make your statement straightforward and strong.

Take a look at how the sentences below are combined:

"Mercury is near the sun, has extreme temperature, and goes around the sun every 88
years."

Birdie
Transcontinental Railroad
Interstate Highway System

Your writing has too many short sentences, which makes it awkward. Since the
highlighted parts have the same subject, which is the Interstate Highway System,
you can choose to combine them. Doing so will make your statement straightforward
and strong.

Take a look at how the sentences below are combined:

"The Interstate Highway System was constructed after World War 2 and made the cars
more useful."
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Some of your sentences are with the same structure and length. It can grow
monotonous for readers. Varying sentence style and structure can reduce repetition
and add emphasis. Adding sentence variety can give your writing life and rhythm.

Here is an example of how you can write this sentence:

"The second is the Transcontinental Railroad, which answered the challenge of

connecting coasts."
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Some of your sentences are with the same structure and length. It can grow
monotonous for readers. Varying sentence style and structure can reduce repetition
and add emphasis. Adding sentence variety can give your writing life and rhythm.

Here is an example of how you can write this sentence:

"The last but equally important development is the Internet."

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The word "fore" is not correct in this sentence. This refers to the front part of a
boat, ship, or airplane. You should have used the word "four," because you
enumerating the different engineering projects in the U.S.

Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.

Here is how you could have written your sentence:

"There are four economic developments in the U.S."

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This sentence about the Erie Canal is missing a linking verb. Linking verbs do not
express action. Instead, they connect the subject of the verb to additional
information about the subject. For this sentence, use the linking verb "is" since
this sentence has a singular subject.

Here is an example of how you could rephrase this sentence:

"The first major undertaking is the Erie Canal."

"The second major undertaking is the Transcontinental Railroad."

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The word "reshaked" is not correct in this sentence. This means to move violently
back and forth or up and down with short, quick movements. You should have used the
word "reshaped," because you are talking about the influence of these four projects
to the development of U.S. economy.

Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.

Here is how you could have written your sentence:

"There are four projects that reshaped the U.S. economy."

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The word "know" is not correct in this sentence. This means to have some kind of
information in your mind. You should have used the word "now," because you are
talking about the present time.

Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.

Here is how you could have written your sentence:

"It was now possible to trade goods directly between the shipping centers of the
two coasts."

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The word "countries" is not correct in this sentence. This refers to an area of
land that is controlled by its own government. You should have used the word
"coast," because you are talking about the land along or near a sea or ocean.

Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.

Here is how you could have written your sentence:

"The Transcontinental Railroad connected the two coasts."

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The word "cost" is not correct in this sentence. This refers to the price of
something. You should have used the word "coast," because you are talking about the
land along or near a sea or ocean.

Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.

Here is how you could have written your sentence:

"It starts at Lake Erie and connects all the coasts of the United States."

"In the 19th century there were railways on both coasts."

"The Transcontinental Railroad connected the two coasts."

"Laying track between the two systems was an enormous feat of engineering."

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The Four Developments that Reshaped the U.S. Economy

aloud vs. allowed

Vocabulary>Incorrect Word
aloud : in a voice that can be heard

allow(ed) : to make it possible for someone or something to have or do something"

cost vs. coast

Vocabulary>Incorrect Word
cost : the price of something

coast : the land along or near a sea or ocean"

flout vs. float

Vocabulary>Incorrect Word
"flout : to break or ignore a law, rule, etc. without hiding what you are doing or
showing fear or shame
float : to be carried along by moving water or air"

road vs. rode

Vocabulary>Incorrect Word
road : a hard flat surface for vehicles, people, and animals to travel on

rode : to travel to a place as a passenger on or in something that is moving, such

as a bus, a train, or an elevator"

train vs. trade

Vocabulary>Incorrect Word
"train: to cause (someone or something) to develop an ability or skill

trade: the activity of buying, selling, or exchanging goods within a country or

between countries"

VOCAB

Incorrect word

You have incorrectly used the word "WORD1" in this sentence. This word means ___.
However, you seem to be talking about ___, and "WORD2" is the correct word for
that. So that you can help your readers concentrate on what you have to say, always
make sure that you use the appropriate words and phrases in communicating your
ideas. Here is how you could have written your sentence:

"Inappropriate
(colloquial)"

The word "_" is not appropriate. It is inappropriate to use colloquial words in

academic writing. Remember that you should always use terms that are accepted in
formal writing. Therefore, in order to maintain a formal tone in your essay, you
should replace the colloquial word ""kids"" with its proper form "children.

"

For example, "model"

"inappropriate
(slang)"

The word "-" is not appropriate. It is inappropriate to use colloquial words in

academic writing. Remember that you should always use terms that are accepted in
formal writing. Therefore, in order to maintain a formal tone in your essay, you
should replace the colloquial word "gonna" with its proper form "going to."
Here is how you could have written your sentence:

"I am going to write about the four types of ants."

awkward sentence/clause

This sentence has awkward wording. Therefore, the idea is hard to understand.
Always use proper words or phrases to help you express your ideas or opinions more
clearly. Here is an example of how you can write this sentence:

awkward (chopped sentences)

Your writing has too many short sentences, which makes it awkward. Since the
highlighted parts have the same subject, which is _, you can choose to combine
them. Doing so will make your statement straightforward and strong.

Take a look at how the sentences below are combined:

"_."

no use of synonyms

You used ________________ many times in your writing. However, you should not use
words or phrases over and over again because doing so makes your writing
repetitive. You can restate your ideas using different words to make your writing
more interesting and to develop your vocabulary skills.

For example, you could have written the phrase "PHRASE" this way:

same setence structure

Some of your sentences are with the same structure and length. It can grow
monotonous for readers. Varying sentence style and structure can reduce repetition
and add emphasis. Adding sentence variety can give your writing life and rhythm.

Here is an example of how you can write this sentence:

"The workmen are the last caste in India."

Grammar

missing subject
This sentence about ____ is missing a subject. The subject of a sentence is the
doer of the action or states what is being talked about. It is usually a noun or a
pronoun.

Here is an example of how you could rephrase this sentence:

In this sentence about____, you are missing a subject. The subject in a sentence
is the one performing the action stated by the verb or predicate. Remember that all
sentences must have a subject and a predicate, so they can express a complete
thought.

Here is an example of how you could rephrase this sentence:

 a message, sound, or image that is carried by waves of light or sound

missing verb
(predicate)

This sentence about ____ is missing a predicate. A sentence must always have a
subject and a predicate so it can express a complete thought. The predicate is the
part of a sentence that expresses what is said about the subject. It usually starts
with a verb. Here is an example of how you could rephrase this sentence:

missing linking verb (is,are)

This sentence is missing a linking verb. Linking verbs do not express action.
Instead, they connect the subject of the verb to additional information about the
subject. For this sentence, use the linking verb "is" since this sentence has a
singular subject. Here is an example of how you could rephrase this sentence:

missing object

This sentence about____ is missing an object. The object of a sentence is the

receiver of the action. The verb "_" is a transitive verb, so it should be followed
by an object. Transitive verbs are verbs that always take an object to express a
complete idea. For this sentence, you can use the pronoun "" as its object as it
refers to the noun "."

Here is an example of how you could rephrase this sentence: