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By :
MALANG
2018
A. THE MEANING OF PARAGRAPH
Paragraphs are hardly ever longer than one page, doublespaced and
usually are much shorter. Lengthy paragraphs usually indicate a lack of
structure. Identify the main ideas in the paragraph to see if they make more
sense as separate topics in separate paragraphs. Shorter paragraphs usually
indicate a lack of substance, you don’t have enough evidence or analysis to
prove your point. Develop your idea or integrate the idea into another
paragraph.
1. The Topic Sentence serves two functions: first, it functions as the thesis
of your paragraph; second, it pushes the thesis of your essay forward and
presents an arguable point. The topic sentence is usually the first or second
sentence of a paragraph. Occasionally, you may find it interesting or
necessary to place the topic sentence at the end of the paragraph, but don’t
make a habit of it!
2. Supporting Evidence/Analysis/Body makes your claim digestible. You
need to find a balance between evidence you provide (facts, quotations,
summary of events/plot, etc.) and analysis (interpretation of evidence). If
your paragraph is evidence-heavy, you haven’t presented an argument; if
it is analysis-heavy, you haven’t adequately supported your claim.
3. The Concluding Observation closes your paragraph with an observation
that is more than just summary of the contents of the paragraph. The
concluding observation provides a final idea that leads to the next step in
your argument. The observation is usually the last or second-to-last
sentence in the paragraph.
C. EXAMPLE ON A TEXT
The House For Contemporary Art
The volumetric boxes terminate towards the rear courtyard with floor
to ceiling, wall to wall openings of glazed panels accented by thin black
mullions. The boxes extend out past the glass with a beveled ends that
gives the profile a knife-edge thinness. Everything reinforces the motif set
in motion by the client, who truly got a house that feels like a museum.
(ArchDaily.com)
D. ANALYSING STRUCTURE OF PARAGRAPH
The topic – The main subject matter or idea covered in the paragraph.
The controlling idea – this idea focuses the topic by providing direction to
the composition.
Here is a list of the kinds of information you can add to your paragraph:
• Facts, details, reasons, examples
• Information from the readings or class discussions
• Paraphrases or short quotations
• Statistics, polls, percentages, data from research studies
• Personal experience, stories, anecdotes, examples from your life
Second, they often link the current paragraph to the following paragraph.
They may anticipate the topic sentence of the next paragraph by: •
Introducing a word/phrase or new concept which will then be picked up in
the topic sentence of the next paragraph. • Using words or phrases that
point ahead (e.g., the following, another, other).
Introduction
Topic Sentence Thesis statement
Major Support
Minor Support Topic Sentence
Minor Support Major Support
Minor Support
Concluding Sentence Concluding Sentence
Conclusion
Concluding Sentence
3. Steps to make a good paragraph, :
a. Decide the topic of your paragraph
b. Develop a topic sentence
c. Demonstrate your point
d. Give paragraph the meaning
e. Conclude the paragraph
f. Look over and proofread
J. SOURCE
1. Ashford University Writing Center, Online Journal
2. The Long Academic Writing Section, Introducing to Academic Writing by
Alice Ochima and Ann Hogue