Obesity of children

INTRODUCTION
HOOK : increasing obesity of children in the world
BACKGROUND: because obesity in children is caused by several factors including genetic,
diet, lack of physical activity and other causes of the body
THESIS STATEMENT : by accumulating fat in the child's body, over time will cause obesity,
and obesity will cause some negative effects for children, for example, bullying, difficulty
moving and the emergence of various diseases for children
BODY 1
TOPIC SENTENCE : children with obesity will get the bullying from another children
SUPPORTING DETAIL:
 Obese children are usually in intimidation, because they sweat excessively and issue
a smell that annoys other children around
 obese children are usually in bully like king-kong because big body like king-kong
BODY 2:
TOPIC SENTENCE : obes in children causes trouble moving
SUPPORTING DETAIL:
 children difficulty moving becase if children has more weight it will be trouble
moving or activity
 example children will experience fatigue more quickly, to walk alone children feel
overwhelmed
BODY 3:
TOPIC SENTENCE : another negative effect of obese the emergence of various diseases for
children
SUPPORTING DETAIL:
 obese brings an additional burden to the lungs, leading to the emergence of asthma,
children feel not confident ,sleep disturbances disorders, insulin resistance that causes
diabetes type 2.

CONCLUSION
RE-STATE: obesity in children is caused by several factors and the factors make obese has
negative impact for children, example, bullying, difficulty moving and the emergence of
various diseases for children
ADVISE: keep your child's weight in order to avoid negative hazards