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As the title implies, the main purpose of this course is to develop your critical thinking and
communication skills– both in terms of your mental capacity for analyzing ideas, information
and arguments, and in terms of your ability to express those thoughts in writing. With the aim of
fostering independent thought and critical enquiry, this course will inevitably prove challenging.
You will be required to do research and assess the sources that you read critically. Your tutor
will be there to guide you, but he or she will not be ‘spoon-feeding’ you information. What you
get out of the course depends very much on what you put in. Tutorials only work well when
students have properly prepared for them.
In other words, by the end of the module, you have learned to:
apply critical thinking skills such as asking relevant and critical questions, evaluating
and constructing arguments, identifying problems, analysing causes and finding
solutions, thinking about your own reasoning;
present arguments and opinions in writing, give oral feedback and participate in class
discussions by using logic and sound reasoning;
read texts critically;
write clearly, concisely and critically;
give constructive criticism and feedback to peers;
work effectively in a team; and
reflect and self-correct.
These skills acquired can be further honed in your next few years at NUS, and in your working
life.
The educational approach used in this course is seminar/tutorial rather than a lecture style.
Because most of our discussions and other activities will be done in small groups, your active
participation is essential. In this “student-centred” teaching/learning environment, you will have
the opportunity to:
share your ideas with others, ask questions, provide peer feedback, debate issues and
orally present and defend during class;
practice critical thinking and problem-solving strategies, reflective learning and academic
writing as you consider the content topics and conduct research; and
collaborate actively with your classmates on classroom activities and course assignments,
via the IVLE and other internet-based platforms, meetings and oral peer reviews.
The IVLE contains all the information and tutorial notes on your course. The course materials
are organized according to tutorials. All assignments are to be uploaded into the IVLE workbins.
Google Drive will be used for Assignment 2 discussion, writing and editing. Discussion forums,
IVLE chats or any other internet-based communication channels chosen by your tutor will be
used to discuss ES1531/GEK1549 matters with you.
You are expected to download all the tutorial notes from the IVLE. You may bring hard copies
or soft copies in your laptop/tablet though not on your smartphones. This is because the tutorial
notes are not formatted for mobile viewing. You should make a point to annotate your readings,
write your answers before class or take notes during class.
There are no textbooks, but you are to review the suggested list of sources (which includes
videoclips) found in the tutorial notes, and complete the tasks before class as suggested in the
activities section of the handouts.
It is important to note that plagiarism is an academic offence that is taken very seriously by the
University, as stated in the NUS Code of Student Conduct (Clause 4) and the notice on
plagiarism on the NUS website:
The University takes a strict view of cheating in any form, deceptive fabrication,
plagiarism and violation of intellectual property and copyright laws. Any student who is
found to have engaged in such misconduct will be subject to disciplinary action by the
University.
Source: NUS Office of Student Affairs website (www.nus.edu.sg/osa/coc)
NUS students are expected to maintain and uphold the highest standards of integrity and
honesty at all times, as well as embrace community standards, diversity and mutual respect
for one another, both within the University and the wider Singapore community.
The Code of Student Conduct (published by the Office of Student Affairs) is intended to
guide students' conduct in both the academic and non-academic aspects of their University
life by providing an overview of the behavior generally expected of them as a member of
the University community.
One of the fundamental principles on which this Code is based is that of "Academic,
Professional, and Personal Integrity".
In this respect, it is important to note that all students share the responsibility for upholding
the academic standards and reputation of the University. Academic honesty is a
prerequisite condition in the pursuit and acquisition of knowledge.
Students should adopt this rule - You have the obligation to make clear to the assessor
which is your own work, and which is the work of others. Otherwise, your assessor is
entitled to assume that everything being presented for assessment is being presented as
entirely your own work. This is a minimum standard. In addition, the following guidelines
will provide some assistance.
When using the ideas, phrases, paragraphs and data of others in work presented for
assessment, such materials should be appropriately credited and acknowledged, so that
it is clear that the materials being presented is that of another person and not the
student's own.
The amount of detail required when referencing and acknowledging a source will vary
according to the type of work and norms of the discipline. For instance,
Supervised examinations will require less detail in referencing and
acknowledgement.
Papers written other than under examination conditions will require a full
citation of all the sources utilised. While a particular style of citation is not
prescribed, the citation should provide enough information for the reader to
locate the sources cited.
Research materials (including texts, graphics and data) obtained from the internet or
other electronic resources should be treated in the same way as research materials
obtained from traditional sources.
Any student found to have committed or aided and abetted the offence of plagiarism may
be subject to disciplinary action. In addition, the student may receive no grade for the
relevant academic assignment, project, or thesis; and he/she may fail or be denied a grade
for the relevant subject or module. Such a student caught plagiarizing would have to take
that module for grade and not be allowed to exercise the S/U option for that module.
A student may not knowingly intend to plagiarise, but that should not be used as an excuse
for plagiarism. Students should seek clarification from their instructors or supervisors if
they are unsure whether or not they are plagiarising the work of another person.
Source: NUS Registrar’s Office website
(http://www.nus.edu.sg/registrar/adminpolicy/acceptance.html)
You are required to view the e-module entitled NUS Academic Culture module and read the
articles listed below. You will then have to take a quiz on plagiarism by the end of Week 3.
Click on the following link and view at least the two sections on “Plagiarism” and “Penalties”:
http://emodule.nus.edu.sg/ac/launch.htm
Click on the links below and read the three articles on plagiarism.
2. “Avoiding Plagiarism”
http://sja.ucdavis.edu/files/plagiarism.pdf
Assessment
Evaluation in this course is based on continual assessment (70%) and a written final examination
(30%).
Assignments Tasks
Assignment 1 Read critically a given text and complete three sections:
(30%)
Individual Section A
(No marks awarded): Identify the main parts of the writer’s argument
Deconstructing (main claim, reasons, evidence) through a graphic representation.
argument:
paragraphs Section B (20 marks):
Write a 200-250 word summary of the writer's argument. Your summary
should identify the main claim, key arguments and assumptions. Use
your own words as far as possible.
You are required to upload a soft copy of your paper to the Submissions
Folder on IVLE and to submit a hard copy to your tutor on Tuesday, 17
February 2015 by 5 pm.
Assignment 2 Assignment 2 is designed to assess your ability to analyze your chosen
(30%) topic/issue based on the theme Sustainable Cities; present a sustained
Team good argument exploring the importance of the problem you have
identified (in relation to a country you have chosen as the theme is
Constructing broad) and the causes and context of the problem; use evidence from
argument: research; and make 2-3 feasible solutions (preferably from an
problem-solution engineering perspective) bearing in mind the implications and
position paper consequences should these solutions be implemented.
The proposed solutions can be your own original innovative idea, or
adapted/borrowed from another source, but they must be supported by
evidence that is acceptable, relevant, and credible.
Assignment 3 A critical thinker is not cynical and does not criticize for the sake of
(10%) criticizing. A critical thinker displays some of the following
Individual characteristics:
Alertness to opportunities to use critical thinking
Participating as a Diligence in seeking relevant information
critical thinker Clarity in stating the questions or concern
Reasonableness in selecting and applying criteria for
analysis/evaluation
Reflection/Self-regulation
Examination Your final examination is a two-hour paper that tests you on what you
(30%) have learned and put into practice for Assignments 1, 2 and 3. You will
be asked several questions based on a 1,000-1,200-word text. You need
to ask relevant questions, label, model and deconstruct the writer’s
argument. In addition, you have to construct an argument in response to
the same text.
Assignment 1 and 2 will be submitted not only in hard copies but also in soft copies to a
plagiarism checking software called Turnitin.com via the IVLE workbin. This will assist your
tutor in determining that your work is indeed your own. Your tutor will explain to you in greater
detail how the software works in Tutorial 8.
Information Literacy
NUS Librarians will guide you in searching for information from NUS Libraries databases. This
will aid you not only with research skills for GEK1549 Assignments 1 and 2, but also for
research in your other modules.
To support your learning, you are strongly encouraged to download and go through the library
materials in the IVLE Library Workbin. You are also strongly encouraged to
download/stream/attend one of the above Library Programs. Please watch out for IVLE
announcements to register for the Library Programs.
You are encouraged to take the Pre-Library Session Quiz in Week 3 to see if you know about
information searching and APA Referencing Style or how to select authoritative and credible
information sources for Assignments 1 and 2.
If you want to learn more about information searching, etc. for Assignments 1 and 2, watch the
recorded Library Lecture and Library WebEx in the IVLE and attend Library Hands-on Sessions.
Overview of Assignments
Objectives of Assignment 1
This assignment provides students with an opportunity to practice the following basic skills for
engineering education (Goldberg, 2009):
1. Asking questions through reading an opinion piece critically by asking relevant questions;
2. Labelling through identifying the main parts of a writer’s argument;
3. Modelling through establishing links or relationships among arguments;
4. Decomposition through breaking down of arguments into components/ interpreting and
evaluating a writer’s argument; identifying subset of a given problem and differentiating
one solution from another;
5. Gathering data through assessing and reviewing arguments based on given information
through data gathering;
6. Visualisation through exemplifying and illustrating critical discussion points to form a
coherent argument; and
7. Communication in the written form (summary and evaluation) through describing and
expressing ideas of others; summarising and paraphrasing information; defending a position
and substantiating assertions.
The basic skills covered for this assignment will be further reinforced for Assignment 2.
Assignment 1 Task
This assignment is designed to assess your ability to read critically by identifying the parts of an
argument, state its structure and provide a basic evaluation of the writer’s argument.
Section A Identify the main parts of the writer’s argument (main claim, reasons, evidence)
(No marks through a graphic representation.
awarded)
Section B Write a summary of the writer’s argument between 200 and 250 words.
(20 marks)
Section C Based on the graphic representation of the writer’s argument, paraphrase and
(80 marks) evaluate ONE key argument used by the writer to support his main claim.
You should identify the form of the argument, state a well-articulated thesis on
the quality of the argument and defend your evaluation with reasons. Your
evaluation should be between 500-550 words.
You should include at least TWO sources to support the reasons for your
evaluation and a Reference List at the end of your paper.
Your tutor will not discuss the assignment article with you or check your draft, but will
provide sufficient practices in tutorials to help prepare you to complete the task.
To complete Assignment 1, you should read articles on sustainable cities and understand the
definition and indicators of such cities.
Submission Requirements
You are required to upload a soft copy of your paper and Assignment 1 Reflection form to the
Submissions Folder on the IVLE and to submit a hard copy to your tutor's letter box.
Style Requirements
References
To help you with APA style of referencing and academic writing, refer to:
NUS Libraries. (2014, April 15). Library Guides to APA Style (6th ed.). Retrieved from
http://libguides.nus.edu.sg/APA6th
Assignment 1 Article
Read the following article and complete the task found on page 8.
We have all read the headlines about how we live much more sustainably when we choose to
live in a city. This is false, from a number of perspectives. It is true that the last mile of
carbon/resource consumption is lower on an individual level in cities; however, this does not
hold true from the perspective of the species.
Cities are not just glamorous places where the educated creative class goes to collaborate, extract
profit and congratulate themselves, but they are places where this creative class depends on a
vast network of imported goods and services from people working in those cities and throughout
the world. For every Bill Clinton in Manhattan, there are dozens of retail, food, waste,
healthcare, government administration, police, fire and assorted service personnel. This is to say
that if Bill, Hillary and Chelsea were subsistence farmers in Indiana, they would have 3 acres of
land that they would use, but in Manhattan, they support another 10-50 service workers and their
families, who each require all the same services in Manhattan or the other four surrounding
boroughs of New York City (NYC), bringing their total footprint into the hundreds of acres.
Well, you can make the argument that this is fine, because the world needs high performing
Clintons.
However, does it need the other 8.2 million people in NYC? It probably does not. Subtract the
individuals, their families and their service class extended families who are working on reform of
systemic Maslovian issues (water, safety, health, shelter, public spaces, civil rights,
communication, the arts, spirituality), and one probably has around 80% of the NYC people who
contribute nothing to the species, outside of the minuscule taxes they pay the city to clean up
after them. The 80% are very excited to live out their NYC dreams of banking, fashion, media
or advertising, and the accompanying luxury/experience lifestyle, which as the case is, implicitly
makes the human condition worse, say "The Story of Stuff", "Surviving Progress" and "Crash
Course".
Thus, urbanization is evil unless proven otherwise. A city can justify its existence insofar as it
can demonstrate that its centers of excellence (pertaining to the arts, research and Maslovian
endeavor) exceed the vast costs involved in being a city. To do this we simply subtract from that
city's combined ecological footprint, the footprint of people and their service class dependents
creating value for the species. If this number of hectares of resources is worth the benefit of the
production in arts, research and Maslovian endeavors, then it can continue to exist. Otherwise,
from the perspective of the species, these people need to leave and go back to the land.
As someone who has lived in Chicago, NYC, Los Angeles and San Francisco, I can assure you
that people in cities are not happy. They are caught in a "Fear of missing out (FOMO) and You
only live once" (YOLO) whirlpool consistently striving to get ahead to have more power,
prestige and money and spending their money on increasingly high rents and ridiculous leisure
activities. It is no coincidence that where nature declines psychotherapy thrives. When we
remove ourselves from other living things and hole ourselves up in sterile boxes, we lose touch
with more than nature, but our souls. Why is it that everyone has a plan to leave? There are a
few things that make us healthy physically––organic mostly plant-based diet, yoga, clean air and
water. There are a few things that make us happy––discovering our purpose, self-expression,
close ties with family and friends, contact with nature, being in service to others and communing
with art and God. 60-80 hour weeks working for organizations that have no concept of the
aforementioned good things, leave little time for the good things.
This is to say that for the few minutes of luxury and relaxation in an otherwise chaotic, stressful
and unhealthy existence, we are complicit in the wanton theft of our own time, of our own
human potential, as well as detrimentally making things worse for the future generations. We
wake up at 35 and realize our misery, the lack of the good things and the increasingly terrible
odds of meeting an adult with whom to fall in love and create a family. Cities are a bill of goods
propagated only by narrative that says cities are fun, creative, sustainable, full of progress and
new ideas, etc. Well, it is becoming increasingly obvious that we can have all of the benefits of
living in a city without the cost, hassle and sacrifice of living in a city.
We do not need cities as much as we think we do. Indeed much of what can be called real
progress for the species depends on gradually moving out of the cities and back into our natural
environment, on our own terms.
Number of words:945
Adapted from:
Brandon Peele is the co-founder of EVR1, a social enterprise which makes inspired accessories,
crafted using the most sustainable methods, and containing a tiny chip that holds the sum total of
human knowledge called the Human Story. Peele has an MBA from Columbia Business School,
has been a Graduate Instructor for the course "Creativity and Personal Mastery" at UC Berkeley,
and has contributed to numerous self-awareness journals, including Trans4mind and Self-growth.
On January 16, 2014 EVR1 announced it was proud to join British Petroleum as a Fossil Fuel
Friend, BP's new program designed to move "green" companies into the future.
Evaluation of Assignment 1
You are encouraged to read through and familiarise yourself with the marking criteria on the
next page to ensure that your work meets the quality standards set for this module.
ES1531/GEK1549 Marking Descriptors for Assignment 1 Part 2: Summary of Argument (20 Marks)
Skills Unacceptable Needs Improvement Good Outstanding
Criteria 0-2 3-4 5-7 8 - 10
Inquiry Does not detect or Recognises the issue Recognises the issue Understands the issue presented in
Labelling misinterprets the issue presented in the argument presented in the argument the argument and identifies the
Modelling presented in the writer’s but misinterprets the and the writer’s purpose. writer’s purpose and assumptions.
argument and purpose. writer’s purpose. Distinguishes between the Correctly identifies the writer’s
10 marks Misinterprets the writer’s Recognises the writer’s writer’s main claim and key main claim and key arguments
main claim and is unable to main claim but may not arguments/claims but may /claims and is able to establish the
identify the writer’s key correctly identify all the key not be able to establish the relationship between the main claim
arguments/claims; writes a arguments/claims present. relationship between the key and key arguments.
summary of the article arguments and main claim.
instead.
Visualization Poor organisation of ideas: Some problems with Good organization of Excellent organization of ideas: a
Communication the overall relational pattern organization of ideas: ideas: clear relational clear relational pattern between
between ideas is not several lapses in coherence, pattern between ideas, albeit ideas with no logical gaps and
10 marks apparent. causing confusion to the 1 or 2 logical gaps; demonstrates very effective use of
Poor language use: Uses reader. Poor use of demonstrates use of appropriate transition markers to
inappropriate tone. transition markers. transition markers but some link ideas.
Writes information in Some problems with may be inappropriate. Excellent language use: Writes a
incomplete sentences or language use: Uses a few Good language use in well formed paragraph with a
writes simple sentences. reporting verbs but these general: Uses appropriate clearly started main claim and key
Makes numerous errors in may not be appropriate. reporting verbs. arguments.
grammar which obscure Some confusion between the Uses an appropriate tone. Uses appropriate reporting verbs.
intended meaning. writer’s voice and own Distinguishes between the Uses an appropriate tone.
Shows very little attempt to voice. writer’s voice and own Clear distinction between the
paraphrase. Uses a variety of sentence voice. writer’s voice and own voice.
types but makes errors in Uses various sentence types Effectively uses various sentence
compound and complex to convey intended meaning types to convey the meaning of the
sentences when used. but not accurately at times. writer.
Always-mostly accurate grammar.
Makes many errors in Grammar is mostly accurate.
grammar and they There may be a few Paraphrases well.
occasionally obscure instances of grammar
intended meaning. inaccuracy but errors do not
Shows attempts to hinder intended meaning.
paraphrase but not Paraphrases well with
successful. occasional errors.
shows very little when used; makes demonstrates accuracy Paraphrases well.
attempt to paraphrase many errors in in grammar but may Uses appropriate reporting
Poor organisation of grammar but these do make several mistakes. verbs.
ideas: the overall obscure intended Paraphrases well with Uses an appropriate tone.
relational pattern meaning; shows occasional errors. Excellent organization of
between ideas is not attempt to paraphrase Uses appropriate ideas: ideas are coherent
apparent. but not successful. reporting verbs. throughout with a clear
Many ideas lack Uses a few reporting Uses an appropriate relational pattern and no
development and verbs but these may not tone. logical gaps: ideas and
support, causing great be appropriate. Good organization of arguments are fully developed
confusion to the reader. Some problems with ideas: Clear relational and well-supported with very
organization of ideas: pattern between ideas, effective use of appropriate
Several lapses in albeit 1 or 2 logical transition markers to show
coherence: ideas and gaps: ideas and clear relationships between
arguments are not fully arguments are ideas.
developed and developed and
supported in several supported with
instances, causing effective use of
confusion to the reader. appropriate transition
markers to show clear
relationships between
ideas.
Objectives of Assignment 2
This assignment provides students with an opportunity to practice the following basic skills for
engineering education (Goldberg, 2009):
The basic skills covered for Assignment 1 and this assignment will be tested in the examination.
This assignment is designed to assess your ability to analyze your chosen topic/issue based on
the theme Sustainable Cities; present a sustained good argument exploring the importance of the
problem you have identified (in relation to a country you have chosen as the theme is broad) and
the causes and context of the problem; use evidence from research; and make 2-3 feasible
solutions (preferably from an engineering perspective) bearing in mind the implications and
consequences should these solutions be implemented. The proposed solutions can be your own
original innovative ideas, or adapted/borrowed from another source, but they must be supported
by evidence that is acceptable, relevant, and credible.
Your paper is for an academic audience in 1,800-2,000 words, fully supported by relevant
sources, and attached with an APA (6th Ed.) Reference List and Annotated Bibliography (a
minimum of 6 sources, each member writing the Annotated Bibliography for 2 sources).
The word count excludes the Reference List, Annotated Bibliography and Appendices. You are
required to upload a soft copy of your paper to the Submissions Folder on IVLE and to submit a
hard copy to your tutor after your team’s Oral Defence. Only one member of the team needs to
submit the soft copy in the folder.
Each team comprises a minimum of two and a maximum of three members. There should be 6
teams per tutorial group. You may wish to form a team with students who may have diverse
perspectives due to their experience, interests, gender or cultural background.
Assignment 2 Task
Cities around the world are growing exponentially, with most of Earth’s population now living in
cities. The United Nations (2014) projects that by 2050, 7 in 10 people will dwell in cities,
compared with only 2 out of 10 people who lived in an urban setting a century ago. The world’s
cities are expected to balloon from 3.6 billion inhabitants today to more than 6 billion by mid-
century. The demographic transition from rural to urban, known as urbanization, is characterised
by the shift from an agricultural-based to an industrial, technology and service based economy;
in essence, the human population will always move to environments where they can secure
sources of food and employment, and the hope for a better future. A summary of some recent
facts and figures about modern cities from the UN is presented below.
The tremendous change to the conditions of our cities in the 21st century can be perceived as a
dire emergency or a glorious opportunity. Indeed, our cities can be the epitome of ‘the best of
times, the worst of times’, to quote the English writer, Charles Dickens. At their best, our
modern cities are hubs of human productivity, creativity, connection and social development.
Yet at the same time, they are plagued by the various problems associated with industrial
urbanization: pollution, crowding, urban slums, crime, poverty, social inequality, and
dehumanization. As fellow citizens of this world, we need to think of solutions to address these
challenges with the ultimate aim of creating sustainable cities. The future of our modern cities
and future generations lies in the way we envision what cities can be and how they can be
exemplars of how humanity can live without straining Earth’s resources.
Under the broad theme of Sustainable Cities, identify any problem associated with urbanization
in the context of a city in Asia. As part of critical thinking and problem-solving skills, the
problem identification will require you to analyze and narrow the problem, to define terms and
concepts if necessary, to establish the causes for the problem, to evaluate current measures, and
to argue for or justify the significance of the problem. The proposed solutions can be your own
original innovative ideas or adapted/borrowed ones from sources, but they have to be supported
by evidence that is credible and reasonable.
The end product, which is the problem-solution paper, should demonstrate your skills in
constructing and presenting an argument.
You can use the following questions from the e-book City 2.0: The Habitat of the Future and
How to Get There (TED, 2013) to help you generate ideas for your paper:
● How can we transform cities to be sustainable, efficient, beautiful and invigorating to the
human soul?
● How can city design propel us to realize our healthiest bodies, strongest communities,
and most creative minds?
● How can we bring together residents of diverse backgrounds, and create a living
environment that will uplift and empower the marginalized?
UN Habitat has also recently produced a series of videos called UN Habitat Global Urban
Lectures, which can be retrieved from the link below:
https://www.youtube.com/user/unhabitatglobal
For innovative and interesting ideas, you can watch the presentations tagged by the keywords
‘Cities’ and ‘Urban Planning’ on TED Talk.
To start you off, read the two articles on Sustainable Cities in the IVLE Workbin for Assignment
2:
Chapter 6 Sustainable Cities
Cohen, S.A (2011). Sustainability Management: lessons from and for New York City,
America, and the Planet. New York: Columbia University Press
References
UN Habitat. (2014, April 22). UN Habitat Global Urban Lectures. Retrieved from
https://www.youtube.com/user/unhabitatglobal
United Nations. (2014). Rio+20 The Future We Want. Sustainable Cities: Facts and Figures.
Retrieved from http://www.un.org/en/sustainablefuture/cities.shtml#overview
Online By Week 6, to complete Assignment 1, you will have read several articles on
discussion sustainable cities and the various definitions and indicators.
Tutorials in Week 6 are converted to e-discussion. There are three main
activities:
a) You are to read an article on Sustainable Cities (in the workbin) and answer
the questions on the online platform chosen by your tutor.
b) Each member of the team will post possible areas of focus for Assignment 2
in Google Drive, giving your reasons.
c) Fix a time (about 15 minutes) with your tutor in Week 6 or Week 7 (recess
week) to discuss online your topic from the list of possible topics.
Graphic Like the graphic representation that you produced when you deconstructed an
representation article, you have to present a graphic representation of your argument for the
Problem-Solution paper by making a clip using Movenote.
This clip should be uploaded at the end of the recess week, before Week 7
Tutorial 11.
In Tutorial 11, each student should bring his/her own laptop, view five clips,
excluding his or her team's clip and write comments.
After getting feedback from your peers and tutor, teams will make changes and
put their revised graphic representation in Google Drive by Tutorial 12.
Peer There is peer feedback in Tutorial 16. Your tutor will pair two teams. Exchange
Feedback laptops or print a copy of your paper. Read and write critical questions regarding
the main claim and key arguments on the paper. Review the questions and
clarify. Revise and edit your draft.
Submit your draft paper in the IVLE workbin by Friday 20 March, Week 9.
Conferencing You and your team will have a 45-minute session with your tutor to discuss your
paper. Your tutor will ask questions to help you think about your content,
improve your organization and explain how you can use language effectively.
You should also come prepared with questions to ask your tutor.
Your tutor will not return the draft.
The final copy and Assignment 2 reflection should be submitted a week after the
conferencing. Both hard and soft copies are required.
Oral defence After the submission of the final copy, email the other team your paper. You will
be informed on the paired teams. To prepare for the Oral Defence, you should
read the other team’s paper and prepare your critical questions for the other
team. Each team member must ask and answer at least TWO questions. Each
team member should call on a member of the other team to answer his/her
question. Your tutor will also ask you questions.
You may be asked questions on sections not written by you. You should be
prepared to answer any question. This is to ensure all team members are
responsible for the entire paper.
Submission Requirements
You are required to upload a soft copy of your paper and Assignment 2 Reflection Form to the
Submissions Folder on IVLE and to submit a hard copy to your tutor.
Style Requirements
References
To help you with APA style of referencing and academic writing, refer to:
NUS Libraries. (2014, April 15). Library Guides to APA Style (6th ed.). Retrieved from
http://libguides.nus.edu.sg/APA6th
Evaluation of Assignment 2
You are encouraged to read through and familiarise yourself with the marking criteria to ensure
that your work meets the quality standards set for this module.
Inquiry Does not identify and The identified problem is The identified problem is The identified problem is
Labelling establish the problem somewhat unclear or clear and significant. significant and well
Modelling correctly. insignificant. Labels several root and defined.
(20) Does not label causes of Labels causes but these related causes correctly. Labels root and related
the problem correctly. may not be the root causes Identifies current measures causes correctly.
Does not take into account of the problem. and establishes relationship Identifies the current
current measures. Does not establish the links between problem, and measures and establishes
Fails to show links from from problem to causes to current measures. the relationship between
problem to causes to current measures to Establishes the relationship problem and current
current measures to proposed solutions well. between solutions and measures.
proposed solutions. problem/causes/current
Establishes the
measures.
relationship between
solutions and
problem/causes/current
measures.
Decomposition Does not demonstrate Demonstrates some Demonstrates ability to Breaks down the problem
(20) understanding of the understanding of the show relationship between and shows the
relationship between main relationship between main main claim and key relationship between
claim and key arguments. claim and arguments. arguments. main claim and key
Arguments are non- Arguments are mainly Has several strong arguments.
existent or weak. weak/not well developed. arguments. Has many strong
Makes many unjustified Makes a number of Makes several unjustified arguments.
assumptions. unjustified assumptions. assumptions. Assumptions are justified.
Has no criteria for The criteria for evaluation Has a well-thought out Has a well-thought out
evaluation of current of current measures & criteria for evaluation of criteria for evaluation of
measures & proposed proposed solutions is not current measures & current measures &
solutions. stated clearly. proposed solutions, proposed solutions.
though some may not be
appropriate.
Gathering data Lacks research to support Has limited research to Demonstrates good use of Demonstrates excellent
(20) argument. support argument. research to help support and sufficient use of
Lacks evidence of thinking Incorporates sources argument but some sources sources to support
about the sources selected clumsily and abruptly, and may be questionable. argument.
as evident in the voices are unclear in Mostly effective in Incorporates sources
References and Annotated several sections. incorporating sources in successfully by
Bibliography. Shows some thinking in the writing but may have demonstrating ability to
Does not incorporate the selection of sources as lapses and some differentiate the various
sources successfully as seen in the References and indistinguishable voices. voices.
there is no differentiation Annotated Bibliography. Selects relevant and Selects relevant and
in the various voices. reliable sources as evident
reliable sources as evident
in the References but the
in the References and
information in the
Annotated Bibliography
Annotated Bibliography
may be incomplete. is complete.
Visualization Shows very little Shows some understanding Writes the thesis statement Writes the thesis statement
(20) understanding of what a of what a thesis statement and the topic sentence for and the topic sentence for
thesis statement and topic and topic sentences are. each paragraph clearly. each paragraph clearly.
sentences are. Shows some understanding Organises paragraphs Organises paragraphs
Does not understand how of how an academic paper coherently with a clear coherently throughout with
an academic paper and its and its paragraphs are relational pattern, albeit a clear relational pattern.
paragraphs are organized. organized. some lapses in coherence. Uses appropriate transition
Uses transition markers Uses only some correct Uses transition markers to markers to show clear
wrongly most of the time. transition markers to show show clear connections connection between ideas
Shows no understanding of clear connections between between ideas, although Accurately documents the
APA in-text and end-of- ideas. some may not be sources used in the APA
text referencing. Shows some understanding appropriate or are missing. style of referencing.
Has not taken into account of APA in-text and end-of- Accurately acknowledges Adheres to format
the format requirements for text referencing. and documents the sources requirements for
Assignment 2. Has taken into account used but may make some Assignment 2.
some format requirements mistakes for the
but is inconsistent. complicated ones.
Adheres to format
requirements.
Communication Uses inappropriate Uses inappropriate Adopts a formal, measured Adopts a formal, measured
(20) style/tone. style/tone in several and suitable style/tone for and highly suitable
Uses mainly simple instances. an academic audience but style/tone for an academic
sentences. Uses a variety of sentence may have lapses at times. audience.
Makes numerous errors in types but makes errors in Uses mainly objective Uses objective expressions,
grammar consistently compound and complex expressions, explanatory explanatory and evaluative
throughout the essay that sentences when used. and evaluative language. language.
obscures intended Makes many errors in Uses hedges/concessions Uses hedges/concessions
meaning. grammar consistently though not effectively at effectively.
Makes numerous throughout the essay but times. Uses various sentence
punctuation and spelling these do not obscure Uses various sentence types to achieve intended
errors. intended meaning. types to achieve intended meaning effectively and
Uses very limited Makes several punctuation meaning effectively most accurately.
vocabulary and and spelling errors. of the time. Demonstrates accuracy in
inappropriate idiomatic Uses limited vocabulary Demonstrates accuracy in grammar.
expressions, and meaning and idiomatic expressions grammar but may still Chooses appropriate and
is affected and cannot be accurately. make several mistakes. sophisticated vocabulary to
guessed from context. Chooses appropriate convey meaning.
vocabulary to convey
meaning.
Evaluation of Assignment 3
The following marking descriptors will be used by you to evaluate yourself (Assignment 3
Reflection form) and by your tutor to grade your work. It will be most useful for you to read
through and to familiarise yourself with the marking criteria to ensure that your work meets the
quality standards set for this module.
Clarity in stating Asks irrelevant Asks mainly Asks critical Asks clearly
the questions or questions. comprehension questions but may expressed critical
concern questions. need help in questions.
(Week 8 e-learning, phrasing them.
conferencing and
oral defence)
Reflection/Self- Does not show Reflects only when Reflects and shows Reflects and shows
regulation ability to self- asked to do so and willingness to make willingness and
(quality of three regulate. Hardly reflection is changes but steps develops a plan
reflections) any evidence of incomplete. for application may (based on skills
reflection. not be fully learned) to make
developed. changes based on
the reflection.
Facione, P.A. (1990). Critical Thinking: A statement of expert consensus for purpose of
educational assessment and instruction: Executive Summary. The Delphi Report.
Millbrae, CA: California Academic Press. Retrieved from
http://assessment.aas.duke.edu/documents/Delphi_Report.pdf
The University’s guideline on duration of lecture and tutorial classes is that for classes with duration of
two hours or more, students should be released 25 minutes before the end of the hour at the very latest.