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Thesis :

Most people of the world like to smoking. Day by day, smoking become a habit for some
people in developing countries as people become richer and can afford to buy it. Wherever they
go, they will bring their cigarette definitely. It happens because they can’t life without it. Around
6,5 trillion cigarettes are sold around the world each year. Current statistics show that 84 percent
of smokers live in developing countries include man, woman, and children. Cigarettes contains
tobacco, nicotine, carbon monoxide, and tar which harm for smokers. That’s why smoking become
an issue for most countries in the world.

Argument :

According 8000hours.org, Smoking is the leading cause of preventable deaths in the world.
Smoking harms almost every organ of the body. Globally, smoking related-diseases kills 1 in 10
adults. WHO also says that every 6.5 seconds someone dies from smoking. Smoking related
diseases include cancer, heart disease, and lung diseases such as emphysema and bronchitis. For
every person who dies from a smoking-related diseases and other people suffer with at least one
serious illness from smoking. Although cigarettes cause the country's financial growth to be so
large but if it has a bigger negative impact, it is not profitable. Is not health is the main thing for
humans?

Smoking doesn’t only make a direct disease from its chemicals. Smoking also cause the
air pollution that is a global issue too. The air pollution which caused by cigarettes is 10 times
greater than car diesel exhaust. In the fact, cigarettes is one of the most things in world that harming
the environment. As much as methane and carbon dioxide are not deadly to smokers, the gases do
add to the general atmospheric pollution and cause greenhouse effect.

Solutions :

So many negative impacts from smoking that related to human and inveronment. People
have to minimalize this issue if they don’t want to harm themselves and others. Government
already gave a warning in the pack of the cigarettes, but it isn’t enough. I think they have to raise
the tax of cigarette so that selling price of cigarettes is more expensive. It will makes smokers think
twice to buy it. WHO as an international organization say that tobacco in cigerrete is dangerous,
so they wish that people quit from that and give steps to quit. Firstly, they must to know that they
are a temple of God so they will appreciate themselves and take care of their body. The last one is
looking for a healty activity life such as running every morning, doing their hobbies and they will
haven’t time to smoking. WHO as an international organization say that tobacco in cigerrete is
dangerous, so they wish that people quit from that and

Walaupun rokok menyebabkan pertumbuhan keuangan negara begitu besar namun jika
memberikan dampak negatif yang lebih besar untuk apa? Bukankah kesehatan adalah hal yang
terutama bagi manusia?

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