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Annotated Bibliography:

Does Coffee Have a Positive or Negative Effects on College


Commented [BW2]: Lorien,
Students? As far as the structure for an Annotated Bibliography goes,
it looks great to me. You followed all of the steps and
procedures that were required for this assignment.
Commented [BW3]: The MLA format for this document
Lorien Aragon seems to be in order and meets the requirements for each
of the documents.
Commented [BW4]: After reading through the entire
rough draft, I was able to gain a better understanding of
your topic and the sources that you chose for your
document. Good job.
Sherman, Stephanie M., et al. “Caffeine Enhances Memory Performance in Young
Adults during Their Non-Optimal Time of Day.” Frontiers in Psychology, vol 7, n.d.
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This Journal Article presents the results of an experiment that tested whether coffee
improved a college student’s performance on exams. The experiment involved a group of
participants who consumed coffee in the morning and performed specific tasks that involved
their memory. The study showed that caffeine had an improvement on explicit memory which
could benefit a student who takes a morning exam. Commented [AH5]: Elaborate more on how this will help
your argument. Also maybe give more information.
Commented [MM6]: I think your citations are formatted
beautifully! I think the bolded citations really help organize
McIlvain, Gary E., et al. "Caffeine Consumption Patterns and Beliefs of College them as a whole. The only suggestion I have is maybe
Freshmen." American Journal of Health Education, vol. 42, no. 4, Jul/Aug2011, pp. elaborate on how the articles will benefit your argument
235-244. EBSCOhost, rather than just talking about the article itself.
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This Journal Article examines a study that observes patterns of caffeine consumption,
with college freshman at Marshall University. The results conclude that about 80% of the
experiment group showed at least one symptom of caffeine in their system. Caffeine withdrawal
was one of the main symptoms.

Raquel, Quintal-Ortiz and Moo-Estrella Jesús. "Effect of the Volatile Coffee


Components on Memory in Sleep Deprived Students." ["Efecto de los componentes
volátiles del café sobre la memoria en universitarios privados de sueño"]. Revista
Mexicana De Neurociencia, vol. 17, no. 2, mar/abr2016, pp. 42-48. EBSCOhost,
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This Article explains how coffee can improve memory while a person is sleep deprived.
This was a study that showed coffee helped short term memory with sleep deprivation, but it did
not improve long term memory with sleep deprivation. Commented [AC7]: Your overall structure looks good.
The only suggestion I have would be to expand just a little
bit more when summarizing your citations, but other than
that it look great!
Samuelson, Trey. "Brain-Boosting Benefits of Coffee." Life Extension, 2017.
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This Academic Report discusses how coffee consumption can improve a persons health.
It can help prevent cancer, specific disorders, reduces cognitive disorders, and can reduce
chemical stress.
"Expert Reveals 10 Health Benefits of Coffee." Qatar Tribune (Doha, Qatar), 2017.
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This News Article explains how through the years more studies have proven that coffee
has many health benefits. This article explains the ten health benefits coffee can have on people.

"Could Coffee Addiction Be a Good Thing?." UWIRE Text, 2015. EBSCOhost,


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This News Article states that many people consume coffee to help them get though the
day especially college students you are sleepy but need to wake up. A college students coffee
addiction is really helping them because coffee improves a person health.

Commented [AH8]: I think this is formatted wonderfully.


I love the bolded citations. However, I would recommend
giving maybe one or two more sentences to each of the
summaries, just to "beef it up". Otherwise great job and
good luck on your paper!

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